MaNan FF:Never Let You Go[Completed] part-35-50 from pg121-123up 20/10 - Page 56

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

super romantic manic


nandini lookin super hot

mukti s prank was awesome
but manik understanding nandini tries to help her




all frnds crashing manan s honeymoon



all wants nandini to join them on stage n sing a song

manik carrying her n walking

wow superb update


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzooarora

U wrote very beautiful update

the manan bonding so strong they can feel each other's untold words also

wow

Keep writing keep rocking 👏


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: assuuu

Superb dr...
Lvd it...
Filled wiyh fun nd rimance...
Njoyed...
Keep writing...
Cnt soon..
Yhanks fr d pm...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sreesri

amazing update..

Manan romance..
Mukthis surprise..
Fab 4 entry..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: assuuu

Superb dr...
Lvd it...
Filled wiyh fun nd rimance...
Njoyed...
Keep writing...
Cnt soon..
Yhanks fr d pm...


Thanks for ur precious comments
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part - 28/29
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Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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PART 28
As Manik entered the room, he made Nandini sit on the bed & Nandini shouted,
Nandini: Manik what the hell was that?? How could u be so insame 4 doing such a thing?? Firstly u behaved so rudely with ur frndzz & then made all this scene in the entire hotel...
Manik: Nandini i just-
Nandini: I Don't wanna hear anything from u & don't even try to talk to me now...
Manik: Nandini-
Nandini just got into the washroom & banged the door on Manik's face. Manik knocked a few times but nandini didn't agree to come out. Then Manik quitely sat down on the bed, half an hour latr Nandini came out, but manik could see her still fuming in anger.
Manik: Nandini... At least talk to me once.
Nandini: Manik plz..
Manik: I m sry Nandini...
Manik went closer & held her hand, Nandini tried to free herself but couldn't .
Nandini: Manik-
Manik kept his hand on her mouth, not letting her say anything. He pushed Nandini on the bed & immediately got over her.
Manik: Nandini ... I just got u away from them stop them from forcing u... But truth is that they were right. U seriously can win millions of hearts by ur voice & u hv already done it to an extent. We hv received 100's of mails & letters from ur fans. In almost all our interviews, we r asked about ur singing future. u seriously can kill it...
Nandini was calm by then so manik removed his hand from her mouth.
Nandini: Manik, u knw wid gr8 difficulty i hv been able to sing & i can't tell u how much happiness it gives me... But all these yrs i hv been loving my work, my pateints & I don't wanna leave this
Manik: I understand that & therefore, we aren't asking u to bcom a professional singer... Though ur fans want that but all we want is u to try once, to sing on a big level. We'll say that it was just a simple performance, on the request of ur fans. Plz Nandini, just once... For urself, for ur happiness..
Nandini: Manik, I-
Manik: Plz Nandini, for me...
Nandini: Do u think i can refuse anything u want me two do 4 u...
Manik heard her & his happiness had no bounds, he was damn happy, he kissed Nandini's entire face & hugged her.
Manik: Thank u... I can't tell u how much happy I m, I love u...!!
Nandini: But ... I hv a condition!!
Manik: Accepted, all conditions accepted.
Nandini: No Manik, this condition is not just 4 u, but 4 every1... I need 2 talk to them...
Manik: Whatever u wish, my lady...
Manik msged Dhruliya & Mukbhi to come to Cavya's room. Within 5 mins all were sitting there. Manik & Nandini entered the room & Kavya shouted,
Kavya: Nandini Chachi!!!
Kavya ran towards nandini, who picked her up in her arms.
Mukti: OMG, Manik is here & Kavya goes to Nandini... Its a miracle... Manik, now kavya too is on Nandini's side.
Manik made a puppy face towards kavya, Kavya kissed his cheek & said,
Kavya: I m always on my Chachu's side, bcoz Nandini chachi is always with him only na..
Everyone laughed at the innocent girl & manik-nandini got seated.
Manik: Guys, Nandini is ready to sing...
Hearing this every1 got excited & mukti hugged nandini.
Manik: But she has a condition!!
Aliya: What??
Manik: I don't knw ask her.
All of them turned towards Nandini.
Nandini:Guys thank u all 4 this... Bcoz of u all, i hv got my Music back & now all this.. But i hv always beleived Fab5 is unbreakable & uneditable... I hv always said that no 1 can come between Fab5, & I definately don't wish to be that one. I wasn't agreeing to sing because this is a Fab5 concert & I don't feel that I hv that ability to sing in it.
Mukti: But Nandini-
Nandini: Mukti plz lemme complete... See in these 2 months, i hv learned how media manipulates things, u'll say that this was just a performance on fan's demand & they'll call it the launching of Fab5's new member... And I really don't want that... But u all knw how gud Manik is in convincing me, thats y just once I m agreeing 4 this... And I need a promise from all of u that in future, none amongst u will force me 4 such a thing again... And Manik especially ur emotional drama shouldn't be there... And even if I think about singing latr, it will definately by much away from Fab5.
As she completed Mukti, Aliya, Cabir & Dhruv just got up & gave her a hug...
Nandini: But my promise??
All of them laughed at it & Mukti said,
Mukti: U knw what... If Manik is an expert in convincing u, then u r better than him in convincing all 7 of us...
Nandini smiled at her & turned towards Manik who simply stood there admiring her.
Soon all of them left for the organiser's office, leaving Navya to take care of the kids.
Fab5 decided to practise first, as Nandini & Abhi sat in the adjacent room. After about 1 & a half hr, Nandini got up from her place & went to their practise room & said,
Nandini: Enough now take a break & hv lunch, u all must be hungry.
Manik: Nandini, a few mins more, we are almost done...
Nandini: Manik, if u want then practise alone coz i m taking the others with me... they need some food in their stomach's to practise.
And with this all moved 4 lunch. After lunch Manik got up but Mukti said,
Mukti: No yr Manik... I m very tired, i can't practise.
Saying so Mukti rested over Abhi.
Cabir: Ya Manik, same with me... Do one thing till then u promise with Nandini... U guys hvn't even selected ur song.
Manik: Ohk fine!!
Nandini: But u all hv to stay here, i need u all.
Aliya: Cool...
Manik & Nandini got up & then Manik asked.
Manik: So which song do u wanna sing my lady??
Nandini: Manik i hvn't thought anything about it, plz guys help me na!
Cabir: What about ur own creation?
Nandini: My creation??
Cabir: Yup!
Manik: Cabir, we don't hv so much time to compose a new song.
Aliya: Forget about composition... What about the lyrics?
Cabir: What if I say that the song is already written n composed
Cabir smiled & moved towards Manik & Nandini.
Manik: Bro be clear yr!!
Cabir: Ohk, so only u, me & Nandini knw that 8 yrs ago, Nandini had written a brilliant song & u both had composed it together for Fab5... When we had that Q-label album & she was our manager.
Nadnini & manik turned towards each other with smiles... Mukti noticed it & asked,
Mukti: Wait... What do u mean by Nandini composed for Fab5.
Cabir: Mukti, u rememeber the first song of that album, "Jaise tera mein", which Manik said that he composed... That song was actually written by nandini for Manik which he got accidently...
Mukti: OMG!! Nandini u composed such an awesome peice & we don't even knw about it...
Cabir: And bcoz of that Soha incident, that song was never released, so i guess this is the best time for it
Dhruv: Absolutely!!
Aliya: So its decided, nandini will sing her own song.
Nandini: But i don't remember the lyrics properly... And neither do i hv it written anywhere
Manik: I hv it!!
All turned towards him & Nandini asked,
Nandini: How??
Manik: It got recorded in the SPACE camera room, so after u left... I got it with our other vedios & i viewed them often all these yrs!!
Nandini simply looked at him awestuck as he searched the vedio on his phone. He played it & gave it to the others. Nandini & Manik were seen singing the same song in the Fab5 Music room in SPACE. By the time, the vedio finished, Nandini had tears in her eyes. Manik noticed it & went towards her. He cupped her face in his hands & wiped her tears.
Nandini: Manik... Mein-
Manik kept his finger on her lips & stopped her from saying anything. He kissed her forehead & hugged her tight within his arms. All the others smiled at them & after a min Mukti said,
Mukti: Aww so cute... But plz don't forget we all r here too...
Manik: Ohk, so lets practise...
They all practised for sometime & then went back straight to the hotel as the next day they had the concert to perform on.
Precap: Manik & Nandini perform together & then all of them go to visit all around Paris... Cute Manan moments coming ahead.
Sorry for late part.. Next part will be posted soon
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PART 29
The next day it was the concert, in the mrng all of them practised & as the evening came closer Nandini was getting more n more nervous. The concert was about to start & nandini was sitting in the changing room, when Manik went there & hugged her from back.
Manik: Don't be nervous... I m with u!!
Nandini nodded at it & he made her sit & gave her a small gift
Nandini: What's this??
Manik: A gift for u but which will give pleasure to me...
Nandini opened it & saw a pair of beautiful diamond earings..
Nandini: These r beautiful, thank u!!
Manik picked them up & made her wear those & then said,
Manik: Now these r beautiful...
Nandini blushed and shifted her gaze downwards. Manik noticed it & kissed her red cheek saying,
Manik: If u will keep on blushing like this then i m surely gonna forget everything about this concert n all... Bcoz if u hv forgotten then let me remind u we r still on our Honeymoon!!
By then Nandini was sitting on the chair & Manik was standing behind her with his face on her neck.
Nandini smiled at it & looked at their reflection on the mirror.
Nandini: So Mr. Malhotra i know that u r not at all in a mood to think anything else... But u hv to realise that u hv a concert in just a few mins, so now u go n let me change.
Manik: But-
Nandini: No buts Manik, go ur frndzz must be waiting, i'll join u soon
And with this she pushed Manik out of the room. 10 mins latr, nandini came out of the dressing room & joined the others. She was wearing a nice royal blue full length dress. Her earings shining in between her black hair which were covering her bare back. Manik couldn't just get his eyes off her for a sec but then it was tym 4 Fab5 to start, so Nandini, Abhi & Navya along with the kids went to the VVIP seating area. The concert started & the love amongst d audience for them was magnificent. Nandini was attending their concert for the first tym and the happiness on her face was clearly visible.
After about an hour, Nandini got up to go to the backstage, soon Manik, Aliya & Dhruv came backstage. Manik had some water & looked towards Nandini as if to ask that is she ready or not. Nandini smiled towards him & nodded. Manik held her hand & took her towards the stage. Till then on the stage,
Cabir: So ppl, did u njoy it...
Crowd: Yeah!!
Mukti: Do u want more..
Crowd: Yes
Cabir: Sry, but now Fab5 is tired, we can't give u any more...
Crowd: AWW...
Cabir: But now, we hv a special performance 4 all of u...
Mukti: Only on Fan's demands, now we present...
Cabir & Mukti: Yours one & only Mr. & Mrs. Manik Malhotra.
The crowd gave a loud round of applause, as d flashlight came over manik & nandini...
And for the first tym instead of shouting "FAB-5", they burst out shouting, "MANIK-NANDINI!!! MANIK-NANDINI!!!"
Cabir & Mukti exited the stage & nandini started,
Uljhi si baatein dil
Mujhse bhi baantein
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)
Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
(Meher.. meher.. meherbaniya)
Manik: Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani
Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..
Nandini: Milte rahe jo aise hi dono
Lag na jaaye ishq ki nazar
Aye dil farebi, tham sa gaya kyun
Aisi waisi baat soch kar
Manik: Bas mein na mere ab ye raha hai
Tujh pe aake dil ye jo ruka hai
Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise Mera Tu..
Aye.. oo.. ee..
Na na.. yea..
(Mehar.. mehar.. meherbani ho)
Nandini: Fariyad karti phir yaad karti
Sochti hoon tumko baar baar
Na chahatein hain, par chaahte kyun
Tumko yunhi mere aas paas
Manik: Kuch bhi nahi hai
Kuch phir bhi hai
Tumse milke dil ko ye laga hai
Aise tera main.. jaise mera tu
Aise tera main.. Jaise mera tu
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Jaise mera tu (jaise mera tu..)
Hoo hoo.. (jaise mera tu)
Nandini: Meher.. meher.. meherbaniyan
Nandini & Manik:Jaise mera tu..
Jaise mera tu!
The crowd njoyed the performance to its fullest & as it finished the crowd shouted, "MaNan!! MaNan!!"
Manik & Nandini looked at each other in a confused expression when the host came up on the stage saying,
Host: So I guess d ppl loved this performance, so badly... That they couldn't stop themselves giving a new name to the fantastic couple. So, here we hv Manik-nandini aka MaNan...
Manik & nandini immediately got wide smiles listening to this. Soon the concert got over & they returned back to the hotel.
All of them moved to their respective rooms to freshen up & decided to meet in Manik's room after 30 mins. Nandini reached the room before Manik as he waited at the reception for some work. She got into the washroom & changed into her casual pyjamas. She came out of the washroom & was standing in front of the mirror when two known hands grabed her waist frm the back.
Nandini: Manik!!!
She slowly whispered & rested her back on his chest.
Manik kept on looking at her for a long time & then slowly asked,
Manik: R u happy??
Nandini: NO... I m not happy, i m very happy!! Thank u Manik if u wouldn't hv been stubborn to make me sing then i couldn't hv ever got this happiness that i got today...
Manik: Hmnn !! But at the first place if i wouldn't hv been stubborn then till now u would hv been sitting there in ur boring office there in Australia... Busy in ur simple & boring routine still thinking about me & then kissing this bracelet of urs every now n then. Right???
Nandini banged his shoulder slightly & said,
Nandini: Manik plz na its been 3 months now that we hv met & still u r on that same topic!!
Manik: Ohk f9.. I wont say anything but still i hope u knw that i m right
Nandini smiled at him & hugged him. She rested her head on his shoulder & closed her eyes. They stood in the same way for the next few mins & then she slowly said,
Nandini: Manik... What did u like the most today??
Manik noticed her face & then slowly kissed her hair,
Manik: First u tell me what did u like the most?
Nandini looked at him & then slowly said,
Nandini: I liked MaNan the most!!
Manik smiled at her & cupped her face,
Manik: But i liked u the most... The glow on ur face when u sing is so awesome that any damn person can fall for u!!
Nandini: Manik u noticed the glow on my face but u didn't noticed that, the glow was not just during the performance it was all the time & it was not bcoz i was singing rather it was bcoz i was with u... U r the reason for the glow on my face & nothing else!!
And the moment she finished saying it Manik smashed his lips onto hers. His sudden move shocked Nandini in the beggining but then she gave in. They kept on kissing for a long time, a few mins latr nandini felt weak at her knees & thus she wrapped her hands tightly around his neck, giving all her weight onto him. Manik felt that she wanted to break the kiss, but before he could move away he fould Nandini taking the lead this time. He smiled in between the kiss & happily let her lead. They broke the kiss some tym latr gasping for some oxygen, Manik got a grip over his breath & then said,
Manik: Wow so u hv finally started being a true Malhotra!!
Nandini: What should I do these days I m in a constant company of these kind of ppl only na thats why u knw as its said, "Sangat ka Asar"..
Manik: Ohh Really!!
Nandini: Yes...
Manik smiled at her moved closer towards her. Nandini moved further backwards & both of them fell on the bed. Nandini blushed harder as she knew that now she was traped, Manik caresed her face slowly & moved closer to kiss her. His lips were inches away from hers, when suddenly the door flung open n dhruv entered first followed by the others. Dhruv saw both of them n turned to leave saying,
Dhruv: Sorry sorry, actually the door was open so we came in.
Manik n Nandini sat straight immediately as they saw them, dhruv was gonna go out along with the others when Cabir held his hand & stopped him saying,
Cabir: Arey Dhruv why r u saying sorry, galti toh Manik ki h na!!! He should hv closed the door first na.
Manik gave him a glare while Nandini had her face turned down due to embrassment.
Cabir: Manik we knw that u don't think about anything else when nandini is in front of u but still u should atleast remember to close the door right.
Manik got up from the bed & punched him on his stomach.
Cabir: Ouch!! Achcha by the way tell me one thing this punch was for my teasing or bcoz we all came on the right tym!!
Manik: Kya yr... U n Mukti, Both of u always enterupt my romance...
Manik then noticed Nandini's face & said,
Manik: Nandini come on yr... Don't be shy in front of these idiots
Mukti: Yeah afterall we r ur family right??
Nandini smiled at them & soon all of them got seated. Mukti n Abhi got seated in a single seater sofa together. Aliya took the other one with Sameer sleeping on her lap. Navya took a chair & Cabir sat next to her on the floor along with dhruv. Nandini too sat on the floor with her back resting on the bed & Kavya in her laps. She was making Kavya sleep when Manik came out of the washroom after freshening up. He scanned for a place to sit near Nandini but didn't find any so he jumped on the bed & lied down on his stomach facing the others. Nandini smiled at it slowly as she knew that he went on the bed so that he can be closer to Nandini.
They all were talking when Cabir said,
Cabir: So after Cavya, Mukbhi & Dhruliya we hv another awesome gift from our fans... "MaNan"...
Aliya: Ya, its such a nice one... Look at Nandini's face, she has been blushing continously from so long!! U liked it a lot, right nandini...
Nandini smiled at it & bent lower to look at Kavya's face & found her sleeping.
Nandini: navya, Kavya has fallen asleep now u can take her.
Navya thanked her & keeped up Kavya from her lap. Finally seeing Nandini free Manik got a naughty smile on his face. Soon cabir ordered food for everyone. All were busy talking to each other when suddenly Nandini got concious as she felt Manik's warm breadth on her neck. Manik smiled seeing his effect on her & moved further close towards her & started nuzzling his face in between her hair & neck. Nandini made sure that no one was seeing them & then glared at Manik. Manik gave her a 'WHAT?' look & again continued. He gave feature like kisses on her neck & then again moved her face inside her hair. Nandini tried to act as normal as she could, but still Mukti noticed it & said,
Mukti: Ohh God Manik... At least now leave her, can't u stay away from her for a few moments!!
Manik heard her & looked towards all of them & said,
Manik: Yr why do u all feel so jealous seeing me... Tujhe jana h toh ja na abhi ke sath mene kab roka tujhe!!
All of them laughed at him & Mukti threw a pillow towards him. Just then the dinner came, all of them ate together & then went back to their rooms after deciding that they would go out to visit the real Paris the next day.
As all of them left the room Manik & Nandini got onto the bed & curdled together. After sometime Manik slowly whispered in her ears,
Manik: Slept??
Nandini moved in his arms & looked at his face,
Nandini: No...
Manik: Thank u Nandini, Thank u very much for coming into my life... Thank u for making me complete... Thank u for everything!!
Nandini: Manik... Plz dont thank me! U hv got what u deserved and u know what, i feel that i m special to hv u in my life.
Manik smiled at her & pecked her forehead. Both of them closed their eyes feeling each others warmth. It was the only heaven for them. After sometime Manik said,
Manik: nandini i never understand, wheather u compliment urself or u compliment me!!
Nandini: What do u think i just did??
Manik: I think that u complimented urself bcoz what i m today is what u hv made me... So if i m good enough to make u feel special then its u who hv made me that.
Nandini smiled broader & hugged him tighter. Soon both of them fell asleep in each others arms. "
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing part
loved it
waiting for next
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all thank u for such a big walaa update. I loved reading it. Totally enjoyed.
About update loved manan performing. Maniks PDA .
Also loved Nandini bonding with FAB5.
Continue soon

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