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yams_ini

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Posted: 10 years ago

#971

that was lovely
cont soon dear
tanq fr Pm

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shweta...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#972

It was really awesome

I always like manik and manvi duo

And manik always feel guilty whenever manvi asks him that whether he will not leave them alone again or whether they r going to stay together forever

But its not neither manik's fault nor nandini's nor manvi's

It's the situation's fault

The period from which nandini went through when neunika forced nandini to leave and then manvi spending 5 years of her life without his Papa and manik who always tried to find the reason that why nandini left him

Manvi didn't get in her childhood what she deserved to get being manik malhotra's daughter and she is still insecure that her father night leave them all alone jabki she trust him a lot but still the situation she went through makes her ask those questions from manik

And the end was terrifying how could neunika be so cruel to little girl that she just pushed her away what if she fell and got hurt it would be the last day for neunika coz manik would have just killed her

I just hope that manik neunika se sab hisab kitab barabar kar de and throw her out of the house just like she did with nandini and snatch all her property so that she can realise what a big mistake she did by throwing nandini manik malhotra along with their baby out of the house

So this was a long long comment as I couldn't stop myself from expressing my feelings

Update soon waiting eagerly know that how is manik going to take revenge from neunika

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dimplegoyal23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#973

Heyy!! Am a silent reader fo d 1st tym am cmmentin...uh juzz obligated me..plzz dnt end ur ff..i juzz luv it plzz..its nt cnfrm weather dey r cumin up wid season 2 or nt bt if nt den it d ff only by whch we cn cherish manan plzz uh dnt fo tjis wid us..plzz keep on writin manan ff dnt stp...uh r amazin writer...plzzz cont,... 😭

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Aditi Agarwal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#974

Neyonika ki achcha waali dhulai hone waali h...

From Papa and Princess...🤣

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Rits3016

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Posted: 10 years ago

#975

DEAR MAWARA

FIRST OF ALL KUDOS TO YOU FOR BRINGING IN THE CHARACTER OF MANVI. I NEED NOT SAY THIS BUT SHE IS THE CUTEST IN YOUR STORY AND I ACTUALLY VISUALISE HER WHILE READING THE STORY .THE WAY SHE SPEAKS...OMG...I JUST WANNA TAKE HER OUT AND GIVE HER A CUTE SI KISSI...WISH I COULD DO THAT.

EACH AND EVERYTHING IN THE STORY IS SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN.I AM ACTUALLY OUT OF WORDS AS TO WHAT SHOULD I WRITE. NANDINI ' S CHARACTER IS SO PURE AND MANIK AS USUAL A LOVING AND CARING HUBBY AND DAD.I LOVE THE WAY SHE CALLS HIM MANI AND NOT TO SAY BUT I ALSO LOVE THE WAY THEY CALL MANVI AS MANO.

OMG.HOW ON EARTH DO YOU GET SUCH BRILLIANT IDEAS!! KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK.

AM STILL NOT THROUGH THE ENTIRE STORY ...THODA SA SHORTAGE OF TIME, I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND BUT AM ON CHAPTER 7 AND WILL FINISH OFF VERY SOON.BUT I JUST COULDN'T STOP MYSELF FROM COMMENTING ON YOUR CREATIVITY.

KEEP WRITING AS YOU ARE AMONGST THE BEST WRITERS OF THE FORUM

LOTS OF LOVE !!

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Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: i-love-manan
DEAR MAWARA
FIRST OF ALL KUDOS TO YOU FOR BRINGING IN THE CHARACTER OF MANVI. I NEED NOT SAY THIS BUT SHE IS THE CUTEST IN YOUR STORY AND I ACTUALLY VISUALISE HER WHILE READING THE STORY .THE WAY SHE SPEAKS...OMG...I JUST WANNA TAKE HER OUT AND GIVE HER A CUTE SI KISSI...WISH I COULD DO THAT.

EACH AND EVERYTHING IN THE STORY IS SO PERFECTLY WRITTEN.I AM ACTUALLY OUT OF WORDS AS TO WHAT SHOULD I WRITE. NANDINI ' S CHARACTER IS SO PURE AND MANIK AS USUAL A LOVING AND CARING HUBBY AND DAD.I LOVE THE WAY SHE CALLS HIM MANI AND NOT TO SAY BUT I ALSO LOVE THE WAY THEY CALL MANVI AS MANO.

OMG.HOW ON EARTH DO YOU GET SUCH BRILLIANT IDEAS!! KEEP UP YOUR GOOD WORK.

AM STILL NOT THROUGH THE ENTIRE STORY ...THODA SA SHORTAGE OF TIME, I HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND BUT AM ON CHAPTER 7 AND WILL FINISH OFF VERY SOON.BUT I JUST COULDN'T STOP MYSELF FROM COMMENTING ON YOUR CREATIVITY.

KEEP WRITING AS YOU ARE AMONGST THE BEST WRITERS OF THE FORUM
LOTS OF LOVE !!

Thank you so much..!!

U know this appreciation means alot :)

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shweta...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#977

When r u going to update the next chapter

Plzzz update soon

Are

Waiting

Eagerly...

Plzz na give it fast fast

I want to know that know will manik show neyonika her right place...

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badkulanamika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#978

I m silent reader of ur story
its awesome dear
manvi is so cuteee
u write very well that I can imagine manvi and her action continue soon
waiting for the next