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Ragingleo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Bahut Bahut Bahut aacha likha hai.. very beautiful... All the emotions , all the feelings are very very beautifully portrayed ...

Awesome work.. Keep up the good work...

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Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#722

Simply awsm update... post nxt prt soon nd ur anthr ff tooo

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cutypie04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Wow superb fantastic update dea. ..

Beautifully written

Loved it

Continue soonnn

Tnx for the pm

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parul.pandey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#724

har part me rula jaror dete ho

aur bechara yash agar manik ko pata chala ki wo nandini ko propose

karne wala tha wo to gaya band baj uski

manvi little baby din hi kharab school me late ghar me mama papa ki fight usko rota dekh kar mere aansu nahi ruk rahe the

apni ladai me bacche ko bhool gai

kya kahoon

nice

and bada wala thankyou for lovely part

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AMAR_LOVE

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Posted: 10 years ago

#725

Love the update...

specially Manik and Manvi part

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neeharika__

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Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Super awosme

Keep updating lamba lamba n jaldi jaldi

Coz d wait kills

Plzzz update soon n pm for bth ur stories n update d other one too :)

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anshika garg

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Posted: 10 years ago

#727

It was awesome
Update soon
U ryt really very good
And yeh manani moment were awesome
Update soon

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Naj91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#728

Ur stories r my all-time favorite Mawara
U r an awesome writer
But I love this story more than any other story
It was awesome
There is love there is guilty there is care there is possessiveness their is anger their is everything
It was a complete update
I just loved it
Manik Manvi scene was super cute
MaNan scene was so adorable
Last part was so beautiful
MaNan romance was lovely
The last scene of Manik Nandini Manvi was just awesome
Sleeping scene of the trio is my favorite
Thanks for pm
Please update soon
I will be eagerly waiting for the next part
Also waiting for It's Love
Continue soon

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siddhimatr

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Posted: 10 years ago

#729

Aww😊 what a lovely family moments. ..I liked possessive Manik and how he was guilty of not picking up Manvi on time 😔. Thanku for lamba waala update..Update soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#730

Res;)
Unres...

Cabir was about to say something when Manik put his palm on his mouth. All again started laughing.

( har ek friend kamina hota hai)

He knew that he love her..!! She love him..!! But why? Arrgghh..!! Main pagal ho jaoan ga..!!

( confused soul or insecuritiesss!!!!;)

"I think the good luck is because of Manvi...!!" Alya said smilingly and all nodded.( indeed she is... Alya chachi;)

"Ohh My God guys...!! It's 2:30..!! I had to pick up Manvi at 1..!! No..!! I am very late..!! God..!! She must be crying..!! I have to go..!!" Manik freaked out worriedly and run out. Fab4 smiled.

( mujhe laga tha much kidnaaping scene ya fir manvi will be lost or something ayega... Thankgod you disappointed me)

Manik felt his heart stopped beating seeing his love crying so badly.

"Manvi..!!" He shouted her name. Hearing her name Manvi looked at Manik and she run towards him. Manik too run towards her and soon he picked her up in his arms. And again she started sobbing hard.

"Shhh..!! Bus Papa ki jaan..!!"Manik tried to shush her.

"Papa..!! Ap mjhy bhool gye..!!"

(Awww!!! I want to quote all chapter ...but can't ...yeh comment nhi chapter ban jaye ga)

Hayes!!! Manvi icecream mein man gaye...mein to that sir par utha Lena tha cheek cheek kar... Ki mujhe kasie loi bhool sakta hai...I was waiting for whole 2 hours... Hehehehehe

Manvi..! Aisy chilaty hain? Dar gya tha me..!!" Manik scolded her and she smiled sheepishly.

"Papa sholly(sorry) please balloons...!! I want balloon..!!" Manvi said cutely wrapping her arms around Manik's neck.

( hehehe... Ase hi puri hoti hai demand... Aww!!!! Junior malhotra is shoo demanding)

Hello..!!" Manik and Manvi said in unison.

"Hello my sweeties..!!" Hearing them Nandini too exclaimed from other side.

(Cute moment family walla)

"He is Manik Malhotra...!!" Yash said in a shocked tone seeing THE MANIK MALHOTRA..!! "IS he your husband?"

"Yes...!! He is my husband..!! Ok bye Prof.Yash..!!" Nandini said smilingly and run towards Manik's car.

( what a proud moment...

Nandini rocks professor shockss)

Nandini..!! Can't you see Manvi is sleeping..!! So please just shut up..!!" Manik said angrily and Nandini felt that she heard something wrong. She look at Manik in disbelief.

( possessive manik apna gussa nandini par nikal raha hai... )

No..!! I will not leave you alone..!! Tell me what the hell happened? Why are so much furious?" This time Nandini too shouted.

"Because I saw you in that bas***d's arms..!!" Manik shouted and kicked the glass table of the lounge it shattered in pieces. Nandini was numb on h

( kuch bhi manik... You need to grow up)

Song and there painful moments were wonderful...

Hello Nandini I am sor..!!"He was about to said sorry when Manvi cut his words.

"Papa..!! Mama apny loom(room) ka dool(door) nahi khool lahi(rahi)..!! Ap please wapas aa jao..!!" Manvi said and she was crying. Manik felt his heart sank.

"Baby ap preshan nahi ho..!! Papa is coming..!! Stay with me on the phone...!! Rona nahi..!! Mama ka door knock karo..!!" Manik said and tried to calm himself. "It's all my fault..!!"Manik thought.

( chalo he realized his mistake...bad it shouldn't be too late...

Aww!!! Manvi is looking so adorable...loving and caring manvi)

Nandinis recovery manan talk...manik's song ...everything was exoctic... So nice...

Manik laid down on the bed with his loves. Nandini was on Manik's left side and her head was on his shoulder and Manvi was completely lying over Manik hugging him tightly. With one hand Manik stroked Manvi's hair and with other he stroked Nandini's hair. Soon he noticed them fast asleep. He gently kissed their hair and he too drifted to sleep.

( happy ending moment ...was bliss)

Superb update overall...

Mao!!!! Joo rock...;)

Update sonish...

Love u dhaarsaara...

Misha shergilll

Edited by mishshergill - 10 years ago