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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow beautiful update
Nicely written
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Res ...

I m first

Let's fight Papa..!!" Manvi exclaimed and Manik too picked up his fork and knife. And they started fighting. Nandini was just admiring the two

( best part... I too do that with my dad till now... He calls me crazy but still becomes my partner in crime...)

. "I am so ploud(proud) of you Papa..!! You ale(are) my lockstal(rockstar)..!!" She exclaimed happily and hopped in his arms. Manik was too much happy that his own daughter had proud of him.
( awww...)

Manan scenes were...muahhh!!!

Nice updates...
But jaldi kiya kar maoo!!!

Mishshergill


I love to write this Papa daughter bond...you know those child are very lucky jin kay pass Papa hoty hain..Mery pass ni hain Papa tou i felt myself crying..But it's OK he is heaven na watching over me all the time :)
aur jahan tk jaldi ki baat hai tou tu mjy mat sikha hahahaha me kal say regular ho jaoan ge :P


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa


next update tak res karegi or Hume lamba wait karwaigi:p)


Don't say anything to my mao!!!
De to diya bechari ne itnaaa lammmbaa update...
Jan loge bichari ki...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa


next update tak res karegi or Hume lamba wait karwaigi:p)

hahahahaha :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill


Don't say anything to my mao!!!
De to diya bechari ne itnaaa lammmbaa update...
Jan loge bichari ki...

Thank God kise nay tou support kiya meko :P
Love you mishu..!!😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Res

Unrest:)
Manvi was saying all that in innocence but Manik felt a pang of pain in his heart. His own daughter was deprived of the facilities which he dreamt to give her. Nandini instantly felt what Manik was thinking. She just pressed his hands and gave him an assuring smile. He look at her painfully and smiled weakly.

( shit year guilt must be killing him...where no one was at fault but still his daughter unknowingly suffered)

she started sucking her thumb once again as she was confused.
( shooowww cute)

Seeing them running crazily Manvi become afraid and hide behind Manik and held his pants tightly

( jungle log... Bache nhi bardasht kar sakte itna junglipan...hehehe)

They all rushed towards Manvi and Manvi's grip on Manik's leg became more tight. Manik felt it and he patted her head.
( had ho gai... Bacha darai ja rage hai... Who bhi soch rahi hogi kahan fas gai jokers me bich mein)

Manvi smiled hearing her "Tareef".
( hayee... Merpe gai hai...)

Cabir was so happy they she called her"Cabeel Chacho" made him feel an unknown proud.
( oye hoye... Cabir ki promotion ho gai... )

Aww...cabnvi was fab...
Cabir as usual fantastic...
Lizard was hillious...

"Call the hotel Manager..!!" Manik shouted angrily.

( typical manik)

But to manager's bad luck he himself came hearing the shouts. Fab4 and Nandini were feeling pity on the manager. Manik's anger rose to seventh sky seeing him and Manvi was now just resting her head on his shoulder.

( pagal manager... Khud ki cabar banvane ke liye Aa gaya)

Cabir sang and waved a lizard packed in packet. Manvi shrieked seeing it and clinged to Manik. Manik showed Cabir eyes)
( Jo marji ho jai... Cabir nhi audhera gaaa...)


Nice...see I kept my words... I too updated today...
Take care...
Loved it... As usual I loved the story line...
Take care...
Mishshergill


Thanks for such a lovely and big wala comment :)
And yeah Fab4 scared Mano..!! too bad hehehehe...
And Poor Manager chi chi..hehehe
And Cabir tou kbhi ni badal skta :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa

or ji meri Japan jati wait karte karte uska kya??


Aray aray Parsaa tum jog jog jiyo hehehehe :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa


zyada Hans mat mai offline Jane wali hoob next week


Tu ni jye ge pta hai mjy hehehehe🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa



its not a joke Sam we pooch


sachi? 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahaha.
.lizard scene was hilarious...hahahhah
And Manik being Manik... Got the hotel on his head...
U penned it so beautifully.
So cutelly...
I really loved it so very much
Thnx fo the update dear
Loads f love
Keep going

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