True love is inseperable (Part 23 updated on page 25 on 24/7 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Sorry 4 late reply
Nice update
And it's Manik I guess

Cont soon and try to give a longer update if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAYS GUYS
Here is next part hope u like it


Part:4

At shopping mall

Manik, Cabir and Mukthi reached there
Manik: Mukthi what is it yar, itna subah o bhi shopping ke liye
Mukthi: Manik we want to go for our new recording studio, so i want new one yar
Cabir: Manik leave her come we will do our shopping
Manik: tum jao mai to mukthi ke sath rahungi



Navya: Nandini I wan't a new dress for wedding
Nandini: For ur cousin wedding
Navya: Yes
Nandini: ok then lets go

nandini and navya selected some dress and went to trial room
Navya: Nandini tum idhar raho mai andhar jakar trial karlungi
Nandini:ok

after some time navya came out and nandini went inside to try the dress
here mukthi also selected and went to trial room

mukthi:Manik stay here and wait till i came and hold these dresses and give me when i will ask u
Manik:ok

Nandini: Navya give me dress which i gave u
but navya went somewhere from there suddenly manik moves some sidewards by talking in phone near to nandini's door , nandini opens the door and pulls the dress from manik's hand and took into room

Nandini checks the dress and thinks shit! it's not mine
Nandini: Listen! sorry as i took ur dress i am really sorry i thought my friend is outside
Manik (who is facing his back to her): not a problem
Nandini: Ur dress take it
Manik: ok

Nandini comes out from the room after change into her dress and sees for manik but she doesn't found him then she calls navya
Nandini: navya where are u
Navya: At cash point
Nandini: wait there am coming
Nandini and navya paid the bill and left the place

Mukthi : manik where is cabir
Manik:he left , he called me that he has some emergency
Manik and mukthi also came there and paid the cash and left from there

On road:
Navya: Shit! nandini i forgot to buy a dress for my cousin if she know it definitely she will kill me
Nandini: Don't worry take mine , I will buy another one
Navya: No nadini let's go back
Nandini: No navya
Navya: pls nandu
Nandini: ok

they came again to the mall and buy the dress which is red colour
Navya: Nandini see it very nice na
Nandini remembers the dress ( it is the dress which she took from manik)
Nandini: ha very nice
Navya: Ok let's buy it

They left to their hostel

In hostel:

Nandini: Navya i am feeling tired i will sleep for some time
Navya:ok


At 2:00 pm
Navya: nandu uth na lunch ka time ho gaya
Nandini: ok
Navya: nandu i will ask u one thing u don't mine na
Nandini: nahi navya
Navya: when u slept i called my cousin she told me that not to buy red dress but i forgot about it
Nandini: ab kya kare
Navya: If u don't mine...
Nandini: If i don't mine...
Navya: Can u exchange the ur dress with her
Nandini: itisi bath ke liye tum pareshaan kyu horaha huu, i will exchange it with mine




At evening

Cabir: Manik we should go to our new studio tomarrow for new album
Manik: I remembered but we have performance also at tomarrow evening
Cabir: then what will we do
Mukthi: Guys ida why don't we inform them that we will come late there
Dhruv: It's good idea
Manik: Ok i will inform the manager


PRECAP:

Manan's first meet
Manik to give his blazer to nandini and nandini slaps manik





as i am writting two ff's and even am going to college so manging all this is little difficult so, sorryy for late posting

keep on commenting
Edited by anusha3003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Ur both FF's r damn cute ...bt isme still manik nandini didn't met face to face waiting for their meeting ...continue soon..
Lots of love ...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Very cute update...
so by mistake nandini took the dress from manik..
but then realized it and gave it back...
now see the destiny that the same dress came back to her...
wow..
waiting fro next..
nice interesting..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Nice update waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
awesome update...loved trial room scene...
u penned so beautifully...eagerly waiting for manan meeting...
continue asap
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY...!!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome. Update plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
AWESOME
LOVED THE TRIAL ROOM SCENE
WAITING FOR NXT UPDATE
NANDU SLAPS MANIK
THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
superb update dea...
read all part in one go
continue sooonnn
do pm me plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Guys here is next part



Part:5

Next day
In office

Mr. Sabbarwal: Nandini as FAB 5 have their performance at evening, so u should go there and take the signatures of them
Nandini: Sir, but they will come here after the performance
Mr.Sabbarwal: But we should send these papers to pune today only
so, after taking their signs courier it to pune and this is the address
Nadini: ok sir we will go there



At evening

Nandini: Abhi keep this papers safe we have to take the signatures of FAB 5
Abhi: OK then lets go there, if we will start late then the courier office will close
Nandini: Ok

Nandini and abhi reached at the place where FAB 5 performance is going, before they went there the performance was began
Nandini: I think we should wait here for sometime
Abhi: U wait here i will go and see
Nandini: Try to see the faces of FAB 5 but because of crowd she couldn't able to see their faces

After sometime the performance was completed all the FAB 5 went to green room
Abhi: Hi guys Iam abhimanyu, am the manager of ur new album
Fab 5: Hi
Abhi: I need ur signatures in these papers as it is urgent we send it to pune
Fab 5: ok

After signing those papers they left from there

Abhi calls nandini
Abhi: Nandini i have taken signatures from them I am reaching out stay at entrance
Nandini: Ok come fast

As fab 5 start to go from there all the crowd went near them to take autograph , even nandini is at the entrance because of crowd she pushed by some people and lost her balance and about to fall but someone holds her

It was manik who holds her because of crowd she came near FAB 5 and about to fall on manik but he holds her
They both lost in each other eyes but because of noise made by crowd they move apart

Nandini: Thank You
Manik: It's ok
As crowd came near them Fab 5 left the place as sonn as they left Abhi came near to nandini

Abhi: Are u ok nandu
Nandini: Ya am fine lets go


Next Day

Fab 5 reached at Mr. Sabbarwal's office

Mr.Sabbarwal: Welcome Guys
He is Abhimanyu & She is Nandini, they are ur managers till u finish ur album
Manik: Ha we met them yesterday
Mr.Sabbarwal: Ok then u guys can stay in mine guest house and u can practice there if u want
Manik: ok Mr. Sabbarwal

Mr.Sabbarwal left from there
Manik: Ok we will leave now and we just want check the music instruments
Abhi: Ok , I will show ur practice room come with me

Abhi gets a call so, he told to nandini to show them a room
Nandini : lets go guys
At Jam room
Nandini: Hi guys, myself Nandini
Cabir: Hi Nandini and ourselvs me cabir, he is manik our lead singer, Dhruv Guitarist , Alya keyboard player and Mukthi female singer and guitarist
Nandini: nd u
Cabir: me drums
Nandini: Ok guys as me and abhi are ur mangers if u have any problem then tell us
Cabir: Sure nandini
Nandini: Ok guys u can see the instruments and check it if u want anything inform me I will be back in 15 mins
Mukti: Ok

Nandini left from there
FAB 5 Are seeing the instruments and checking it as they are fine aren't
Manik: Guys the strings of guitar is broken
Mukthi: Ya mine too
Manik: ok wait I will go and bring new one

Outside the jam room
Boy: Sir do u want anything
Manik: Ya, I need guitar strings
Boy: Sir it will be there at that room
Manik: Ok I will go and take it

After 15 mins
Nandini: Hi guys
Mukti: Hi
Nandini: Where is manik
Dhruv: He went to get guitar strings
Nandini: But where?
Cabir: We don't know
Nandini: Then call him
Mukti: He left his phone here
Nandini: Ok I will bring strings

Nandini left from there and went to the room where all the parts of instruments are kept
Nandini opens the door and gets shocked
Nandini: Manik...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Precap:
Nandini to scold manik a lot
Manik to give his blazer to nandini and nandini slaps manik

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