MANAN SS : BE MY DATE completed pg14 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
Curiosity is gonna kill me nowww...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey their lovelies...im overwhelmed with the response and glad that u r still here to read to this ss...so here we go the most awaited part..
THE REAL DATE!!!!!
part-4
manik was driving his car while nandini kept annoying him..
N:manik where r we going??
M:nandini just relax..jab pouchenge tab dekhle na...
N:manik please tell me na...please!!!
M:nandini please...
N:manik pretty please!!
M:chalo pohachgaye...

manan got out of the car..they were standing infront of the phoenix mall
N:manik tum mujhe yaha pe laye ho hamare date k liye???like ek super mall k food court mein...
M:what?
N:seriously manik??yaha??tum to bare kanjus nikle...
M:who do u think i m?
N:well certainly mr.boring...wow my first date in a mall...its like 6th grade all over again!!
manik put his fingers on her lips and pecked on her nose
M:kitna bolti ho tum!!one more word and i can kiss a little lower you know...
a cute blush crept on nandinis face..
M:now shall we?
nandini bobbed her head...they went in..
manik took them to a shop..
M:go ahead pick a pair of jeans and t-shirt..
N:mmm
M:what?
N:mmm
M:nandini tum bol sakti ho!!
manik received a text
text:ill speak but promise u wont do anything stupid...
manik laughed..
M:dont worry i wont..
N:phheww!!!but main iss gown mein acchi nehi lag rahi?
M:u r looking gorgeous..
N:then y do u want me to change?
M:just do it for me..ok?
N:ok..ill be back in a minute
nandini went in the store...but nandini was stopped by manik..
N:what?
M:its not stupid u know..
N:i know...
with that nandini went in leaving a blushing manik behind...
nandini came out after a while wearing a red cute top and balck jeans..she recieved a text from manik..he was waiting outside for her...she went outside..manik was waiting there with his Harley Davidson...he looked dashing in a back jacekt over a red t-shirt and jeans
N:bike?
M:aha!!!hop on..
N:ok...
nandini hopped on the backsit...
M:vaise...we r on a date...so u can hold me..or r u shy?
Nandini smiled and hugged him from his back...manik smiled and passed her a helmet which had N engraved on it and he put on his
N:when did u get this?
M:tum bhul rahi ho...im manik malhotra..
N:ooops...sorry..shall we?
M:ur wish is my command...
manik started his bike...they went n for an hour... finally they reached...nandinis eyes opened in wonder...they standing in front of FANTASY ISLAND the most exotic theme park in the town..
N:u have got to be kidding me?
M:what?
N:hamari date yaha hain?
M:aha!!i saw those pictures of yours in your room...you really love those theme parks...
N:u stalker!!!
M:so u liked it?
N:i loved it...can we please go in??
M:sure..
nandini held maniks hand and pulled him inside...
as soon as they walked in nandinis eyes opened in wonder ...there was absolutely no one inside except for the ride operators..
N:manik why is this park so lonely?
M:because i booked it for us..
N:r u kidding me?
M:nop!!its our first date...it has to memorable!!
N:omg manik ur awesome!!!
M:tell me something i dont know!!so what do u wanna start with??
N: the carousal...
M:what??thats for the kids...lets g go to the roller coaster
N:no manik...i aalways wanted to ride those but couldnt..please!!!!!
M:nandini...
N:pretty please!!!
M:ok..."
they went on the carousal...but nandini couldnt find a single horse that could fit her..she became upset as she wouldnt be able to enjoy the ride
M:what happened?
N:i cant find a sit...come on lets get off
m:why?
N:we cant ride it..
M:u really wanna ride this..
N:ya..but not standing...i wanted to do this floating..
M:ok then...
N:what?
manik signalled the operator to start the ride...before nandini could say anything manik picked her up in his arms..
N:manik what r u doing?
M:making u float...
N:ooo...
M:ssshhh and enjoy the ride...
the ride was running but manan were lost in each others eyes...nandini forgot all about enjoying the ride and she just dived into his eyes..soon the ride was over..they came out of their trance...both felt awkward..
M:so do u want to go to the Ferris wheel..
N:sure would love to..
they went to the wheel...the ride started...when they went to the top...nandini held his hands..
N:manik the view is beautiful..
M:not more than u...
nandini blushed...they got down and then they went to all the rides and rode them gradually...

TO BE CONTINUED


sorry guys if that wasnt upto ur expectations...but i still hope that u love it...next part will be the last part..it will be updated depending on ur response...please give lamba lamba comments and help me write faster.as soon as i finish this one i will write another...the time for update is inversely proportional to number n size of comments.the bigger n more number of comments the faster u will get an update..u give me ur best shot and ill give u mine...for now a precap to keep u interested

Precap:ice cream...beach...soha... (:P dont worry )... the end of this epic date...the big kiss...a new beginning maybe?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Nice update😉
Manan data...ahaaa😆
Bike ride was gooddd...park booked...the ride😉😳
The lyn at last..not more than u...haaayeee😳😳
Lovely update
Always keep writing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Awww how cute
Awsome date
I want to see what the rest of date
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Nice update
I liked the story very much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Totally worth the wait

So cute :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Yaar dat was an awesome update...
loved it...
hehe "one more word n I 'll kiss a lil down"...hehe dat was cute...
N wen he asked her to say something she msged him...haha so cute...
wow...he booked d whole park for her...Aww...he is such a sweetheart...
uff manik tum Itne sweet kyu ho...hehe...

Plz do pm me wen u start a new story...would love to read...

Plz continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
nice update
hw cute manikhd planed the date
waiting for next update
wt r gng to be in ther date
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
nice update
loved the way manik planned everything

nandini s special ride awesome

so next beach ???//

waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesome update
Superb update
Loved it
Plz update the next part soon

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