MANAN SS : BE MY DATE completed pg14 - Page 9

that's amazing..love it...itsss beautiful..
vaise very nice ...n their so cool date iss sos so sweet...loved...
waiting for final...
eagerly...
thanks 4 this. .such a amazing writer u r..
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wow!!! what an amazing update
i jus loved it yr...u pennex it so well dea...must say that ur story is jus mindblowing...i jus cant describe it in words..hats off 2 u
ur such an amazing writer...
u knw wot u rocked it...m totally in love with ur SS.. SO plsss update it fast...cant wait more..
eagerly waiting for next update..
keep writing...TC

wow!!! what an amazing update
i jus loved it yr...u pennex it so well dea...must say that ur story is jus mindblowing...i jus cant describe it in words..hats off 2 u
ur such an amazing writer...
u knw wot u rocked it...m totally in love with ur SS.. SO plsss update it fast...cant wait more..
eagerly waiting for next update..
keep writing...TC 😊

awsm part ...chotu tha par it was awsm ...update soon n plz pm me

hey guys im sorry for bring late..i wanted to update earlier but the news broke my hear..i still cant accept it..i cant get manan out of my head...manik keeps coming back to mind...anyways here i am...the final part is here..hope u enjoy it...and yes will back with a new ss on Saturday..hope ur there to read it :) :) :)

Part 5

manan were done riding...nandini was quite tired...they were sitting on the childrens swing and talking about stuff...

M: so...
N:sooo
M:what r we going to do about it from tomorrow?
N:what about what?
M:about us
N:what about us?
M:well our friendship isnt a secret anymore
N:hmmm
M:so what will we do about this date...is there going to be a second date?
N:i think
M:i think
N:i think
M:that...
N:i want candy floss
M:candy floss?
N:yup
M:seriously?
N:yes...
M:ok lets go..
manan got up and started walking...manik held nandinis hand..nandini gave him a questioning look
M:what we r on a date..remember?
n:u r impossible...
M:i know..
they got on his bike..soon they went to the beach...manik found a vendor and bought a candyfloss ...they started walking on the beach
N:why didnt u buy one for u ?
M:no thanks...i dont like them
N:r u serious?
M:have u realized that u how many times u have used that line tonight?
N:oh dont change the topic..come on have some
N:come on..
M:no nandini
N:for me? u cant say no to me on our date..
M:ok but only if u feed me
N:manik...
M:u cant say no to me cause we r on a date..
nandini smiled she took a bit of the candyfloss and fed manik..manik didnt leave this chance..he pulled her to himself
N:manik kya kar rahe ho?
M:nothing
he removed a hair strand from her face
N:there r people over here manik
M:do u think i care?

bg voice:manik!
manik let go of nandini
M:soha!
s:hi..who is this lovely girl?
M:no one!!
N:hi im nandini!!!and u r...
S:hi im soha!!im maniks ex..
N:ooo...interesting..
S:oh wait am i interrupting u guys?
M:ummm noo...
S:oh manik!!u dont need to worry..im over that craziness of u
N:craziness?
S:ya well i was obsessed with manik for so long...i stalked him for so long after we broke up...but then i realized that i never loved him..i was pretending to myself
M:what??
S:i after i broke up with u..i was stalking u and one day i saw u n that shanaya girl..i realized that how much turned on i was by shanaya than u..
Manan:what????????????
S:ya..i realized that im not interested in boys at all..i like girls..
N:oh my god!!!that is incredible...
S:i know right..manik thank u so much for everything..u made me realize my own feelings..anyway i gotta go..shreya must be waiting for me...
N:oh no!!!u gotta spend a little more time
S:aww!!sweety!!i want to...lets make a date..manik has my number..guve me a bell!!
N:we would love to..
as soon as soha left nandini broke down into laughter...
M:its not funny
N:yes it is..oh my god manik!!!
M:what?
N:u did such a good job..after dating u she turned into a lesbian...great job manik!!
M:ok nandini im going to give u a minute..u have to stop laughing..
N:why??its not like im questioning ur masculinity or something...
M:ok thats it..
manik pulled her close..nandini stopped laughing..
N:what?
M:ssshhh...
manik went closer to her...she could feel his breath on ur her lips..shivers went down her spine..
M:so u arent laughing anymore?
N:ummm
Manik moved back and started laughing..
N:what happened?
M:nothing lets go..i know that u wont be questioning my stuff anymore...
nandini bobbed her head...manik pecked on her cheeks and moved out slowly as he locked his eyes onto hers..
M:u r really cute...
nandini blushed into crimson
M:i love ur blush..come on Cinderella time to go home...
N:ok..
manan got back on the bike and drove of to nandi=inis home where maniks car was waiting for him..they were standing in front her door...there was an awkward silence between them...nandini was twirling her leg...
M:sooo ummm...listen theres something i wanted to do earlier but had to wait till the end of the night
nandini suddenly got a flashback of the part of the night where manik had mentioned about kissing her...
he bowed her head down in embarrassment...then manik put a bag in front of her..
n:what?
M:ur dress..i figured u would want it
N:oh..yeah sure...thanks...
nandini took the bag from his hand...
M:wait a minute?what did u think?
N:nothing...
M:shhhiii!!!!!!
N:manik!!!
M:listen if u want it we can do it..lets put that away..
he kept the bag away from her hands..nandini closed her eyes..manik went near her ears and whispered
M:dont worry i wont do anything ur not comfortable with..
nandini opened her eyes..
M:good night..
nandini held his hands..manik gave her a questioning look.nandini pulled him close
M:what?
N:ssshhh
she took his arms and put it around her waist..she encircled her hands around his neck..she was about to lean in when manik stopped her
m:listen before this..i wanted to ask u something
N: go ahead..
M:how would u like it if i pick u up and we go to college and drive u back home later on..
N:but the people will think that we r together
M:well if they do..would u mind?
N:nop!
manik smiled...
M:me neither..and
N:ssshhh!!!enough of talking!!!
manik bobbed his head...
manik leaned in..both of them closed their eyes..manik slowly pressed his rough lips on her soft ones..they were a perfect match to each other...they moved in sync...manik slid his hands from her waist..one of his hand was smoothly caressing her back while other holding her tight...after a while they broke off...
N:manik..
M:hmm
N:u should go
M:do i have to?
N:otherwise how will u pick me up tomorrow..
M:u have a point..bye.. ill see u tomorrow
N:ok...
Manik pecked her lips one more time...
and then he left with a promise to return the next day..and he did...
they started a new relationship...well not new they were together but they could finally give a name to their bond...
happy beginning


so guys this is it...i hope u guys liked it..please guys tell me if u liked it or not...if u did then i would start a new ss...so please let me know how many of u want a new ss!!!and also if u liked this one or not..,cause right now all we have is these ss and ff which will keep mana alive..so let me know...also will update I FOUND PERFECTION WITH U tomorrow...so if u want a new ss comment and let me know

Lovely update
Loved their dreamy date
Soha part was really very funny
Loved the closure
MaNan kiss was the best
Thanks for pm
I want to read more stories on MaNan
Come soon

Awwwiee...manan a couple...amazingg😊😉

Ty for d pm...

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