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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Oh so manan know each other and wow what a calming effect nandu had on manik
they had their own corner
varun noticed good another manan fan
please do continue
i cant find right words to describe the feelings i am getting by reading this story
please do continue
specially loved the pics u upload as it create a surreal atmosphere in mind while helps a lot to create exact image to describe through words
WOW
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
woowe.. this onez very intersting... a vry diffrnt concept.. im in love with ur writing dear..
the way u write is jus superb..
i like this manan.. they are diffrnt n adorable..
nandiniz past is sad ... but shez lucky to hve such awsme ppl around.. manan are still a mystery..
plllzzx update soon.. its very addictive.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
awsomeee read all in ome go just lovd it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
amazing...
beautifully penned...
different concept...loving it
egarly waiting for the update


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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Read in one go! Nice ff! Plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Love the background of how they met... very cute... and Manik is so adorable... looking forward to more...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37


PART3


Nandin sat on floor after a dance session with Aisha.She undo her gungroo and thought of manik struck her she knew he came in her room last night not because of missing dairy but in the morning the feel in her room was there which relvealed his presence.

Think back to their meeting it was true she was starlted but not afraid she knew even he was vilent it didnt shake her that much only she knew why ...

because she have a feeling from the moment she saw him 1st time that he have heart of innosence too and a wonderful smile which she saw one day ...

Mumbai may term as busy city people pass by never to meet or someday to meet but they meet again .When she came in mumbai she was usally quite self no talk no voice nothng to cheer her up Aisha Aunty plan an outing for to of them after her doctor appointment as they were on their way they were struck in traffic .Mumbai traffic was harsh as always .Nandni was lookng out side .Just they a little boy of 9 came near the car with flowers to sale .Aisha buy some the little boy look at her and grin and gave her a rose and peck and ran ahead .She was suprised and look ahead as he run towards the other kids passing the lane and as he did so a car came russing towards him it was a clear accident.Aisha stop her from lookng that way and close the window she get down to get water

But Nandini look back and she saw the car moving away viewing the the kid safe and his friends around him with a guy kneelng beside him checkng him [He must have save the kid she tought which make her breath normally]who was now talking to them .

He said something and the kids begn to jump in joy he took their stuff and his driver took all and kept in his car .The kids were happy and kissed him .The little boy turn to her car and wave her with hm beside them smiling at kdds attics ..Aunty came back and broke her attention and gave her water but later she turn he was not their nor the kids...but she was happy and satisfied too..

They spend time on staircase after the first encounter .She was reading a book silently as she felt someone came on staircase no one come here but he came as he must need space so she continue her work.But she doesnt know where the courage came and she edt a note it was just a thing she will do for everyone without in return .But next day as she was there she found a blank note and someone on presence behind her ...Silent they were and continue to do their work ...and one day instead of note she left her dairy for him which was now their joint account of notes there for each other like

Manik...

Nandni...Tired

Manik...ha

Nandini .sleep

and next moment he sat beside her and was in slumber she lay his head on her shoulder and contnue her book reading,

print paradise #green #kurta at #fabindia


Nandini thoughts were full of him as she continue her routine .She was in temple with join hands .but still in his thoughts much like praying him [ There meet ...there intraction ...the silent staircase and notes ...just him]She snapped out and apolojise to lord and prayed again for alll.


She then took the water pot and water the tulsi plant moving in round

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''are u praticing pheras for your wedding huh ''came a voice which she know She look back and saw druv lining to pillar with hands in pocket neatly dressed in hoddie shirt and jeans...

...

Kaisi Yeh Yaariyan Cast and Characters

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With his always lazy smirk on face .Nandini turn back join her hands and took the plate

''u arent finshed yet i cant stand for another 1 hr my poor legs wll paralise''he said looking at his llegs with a pout

Nandini look at his bare legs he rember to took off his shoes she smile and walk closer to him ''lets goo''

Finally''he breathed and forward his hand for sweet like a kid

Nandini shake her head and gave him.''U here these early''as 8 am is still early morning for him

''who invented the thing that after bath only u can come here its rediculios man ''he commented which make her smile mre and more suprise .Just then they here a loud horn she look at him and druv face is horrified as something struck him..

Nandini look at him Druv scratch back pf his head and reply'' i forgot my friends''she laugh and he gave her a not-so- funny-look

Ayaz ahmed as a cabir in kyy

.They walk down stairs and spot Mukt alya Cabr in the jeep looking uncomfortable in surrounding as people pass by them .but cabir happily wave at them .They move closer to the trio

Alya look around and ask'' why are peole lookng at us ''

druv smile''because alya peope think u look ...

Nandini cut him and said''preety very preety ''alya beem ''really''nandini nod and look at druv who was dsapponted not able to tease her he was going to call her weird and gril her but nandini spoil it he look at nandini as u -are-bad -look .Nandini return with a smile of gladly.Nandini ''u guys here these early ''

Cabir''the think is that we are drained with energy so badly searching for yummy food u know what i mean ''

Mukti'' when are u not hungry cabir ''mukti said ''ya in sleep to u suck u r thumb''Cabir glare at her

Alya'' we came as we could know u better ur druv friend so urs too''

Druv'' i m hungry ''he took her plate and grab the sweets

All at him with what the look he just srug it.They sat in car and move home.THey told her they really loike her .Its quite rare to get fab5 attention but she is so awsome that they like her so they decided to hang with her .Nandni smile welcoming the idea.

They reach home chatting and talking .THey together had breakfast with Aisha and vikram .Manik left early as he was called for work.Later they all plan the day together as it was sunday and day off for all

.THey all watch movie and Aisha ask the kids to get things as grocery all were like blood drain but nandin accompany them and help them with stuff.THey prepare food laugh and spend quuality time together ,Later manik to join .

THe day end early as all depart while vikram has flight back and all have early classes.

THey wish bye and left .Later Nandini come to her room and found her dairy on its spot near her bed.She open it and smile She lay on bed keeping the dairy close to her heart and slept


Next Day

It was around 730 manik reach college for jam session as they plan earlier .Due to cultural fest the colege was n busy site.As he walk in corridor something struck him may be right or wrong he message his friends he would be there in 20 min .As he was abut to take the stairs he heard faimilar sound of gungroo coming from auditorium he was held right there and turn to audi...

There was classical dance in afternoon so there teacher ask them for a early practice .AS they took their position light of auditorium deam

Manik open the door as it was dark he was about to go but music start

O Re Piya Haye

O Re Piya Haye

O Re Piya Haye[Lightcome as the girls came forward and slip aside]

O Re Piya Haye... (3)
Udne Laga Kyon Man Baawla Re
Aaya Kahan Se Yeh Hosla Re
[Nandni move then all move along her too]

O Re Piya Haye... (2)
[They all tap there feet with melodious sound and move in positon]
Tanabana Tanabana Bunti Hawaa Haaye Bunti Hawa


Boondein Bhi To Aaye Nahi Baaz Yahan [Swing the hand in zig zag for wind and sewing]
Sagish Mein Shaamil Sara Jahan Hai[with hand for world in round]
Har Zare Zare Ki Yeh Iltiza Hai
O Re Piya
O Re Piya Haye... (2)
O Re Piya
Ni Re ,Re Re Ga
Ga Ga Ma
Ma Ma Pa
Pa Ma Ga Re Sa[Pat there foot and throwing hand ]
Sa Re Re Sa
Ga Ga Re
Ma Ma Ga
Pa Pa Ma[Turn a round]
Dha Dha Pa
Ni Ni Sa Sa Pa
Pa Sa Ma Pa Dha Ni Sa Ni
Re Ni Sa Sa Sa.. . . . ..

Nazrein Bolen Duniya Bole[pointing to eye and wordwith handmove ]
Dil Ki Zaban Haaye Dil Ki Zubaan[hand on heart]
Ishq Maange Ishq Chahe Koi Toofan

Chalna Aahiste Ishq Naya Hai
Pehla Yeh Vada Humne Kiya Hai [engalded two hands ]
O Re Piya Haaye... (2)
O Re Piya
Piyaaa...
Dushman Mera Hai
Haaye
O Re Piya Haye... (5)

ocean-of-nectar:

Nandini in


Plain, long kurta. Loved the little accessories.

It ended beautifully as they straightne up from the position .The light n but the viewer present were more awstruck as they were frozen on their seats.THe teacccher congrats them but except nandini all were taken aback as Fab5 was there nandini was a ittle aside drinking water so she didnt notice.

Manik was not able to blnk nor he want to miss her moves gesture and beauty as if he did it will be injustice his eyes were set on one person from begning to end ...he was still n middle of auditorium..

wow ''came a loud voice Nandini''some cabir shout and all fab4 who were sitting in front rush on stairs they hug her and tod they were blown with her performance...

Alya told that druv mention she have early practise so they decide to meet her but she was totaly wow Nandni was glad they like .Cabir commented ''i never thought classic dance will be so good''

Someone clear her troat and its Ms Meena her mam asking them reson for there presence

Druv started''vo nandini''but cabir intrrupt''what druv say fast no let me tell maam nandini humaari behaan hai we all were so emotional she grow up but to boast her for performance we al gather here or else she will be lost ''he said patting her heart''it will hurt us if she fall and ingured''he clean the imagnary tear from his eye

All were looking at him as he was insane and werid murti break the silence''behan [sister]

druv cover her muouth and said''sole sister ''as all were quite convience with cabir drama...Nandini eyes were struck to the tall figure fab4 to notice him they thought he came searching for them and were now so dead

Mam ask them to leave and all rush out .Nandini was surrounded by girls asking she knows the fab5 which she just nod they soon continuue with another session of practice...

Fab5 return to jam room with mank ahead and all back they keep quite but manik was more quite ''manik...

Manik lets start''

and they practise

DRESSNG Room

The girs dressed for there dance as it was classical dance first

Nandini was dressed in acqua blue dress all commented she look gorgeous and it suited her


Aqua Net and Shimmer Readymade Abaya Style Churidar kameez: KFT33

Later

Fab5 were in canteen chatting and joking .All notice something and were''wow''

Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Res
Unres...
Finally u updated...

Fab update...
The song selection was nice..

Omg cabir n Dhruv made her sister...
Lol what will Manik do now...

Itna mat tarpao...
Plz update soon...
Edited by aditi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
nyc update...
n plzzz update ur other story also
suspense is going to open
plzzz update that story plzzz...
rply if u r nt going to continue that story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hiii...read all part in one go...
Awsome...The concept was Amazing...
I love this nandini...Plzzz manik or nandini ke scene's ziada do...And there aatire and all images are awsome...
U are an awsome writter...
Plzzz cont soon

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