Manan short 'Because its U''Note page 11

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''BECAUSE ITS U''

PART 1 pg1
PART 2 pg 5
PART 3 pg 7-8
PART 4 Pg 10
PRECAP pg11

PART 5
PART 6















PART1

NANDINI...

Early morning like every day routine she woke up at 4 am without alarm joined her hands and prayed got up from bed open the window curtains of her room look outside as its still dark outside but she could spot a star in sky its venus right the prety planet she smiled .A gush of cold wind came and touch her face she feel the unseen touch and the small dream catcher move with twinkling sound of bells on it. She tied her hair and wash her face in bathroom and got freshn up.
Came out of her room closing the door went to terrace passing the passage and climbing staircase she went in middle facing east lay the mat and start yoga and as sun rays came out she did surynamskar.After her session she came downstairs close the main door of house and went to lawn max bark as he saw her and bark she signal him quite .shetook max for a walk outside .After 30minute of small round they came back but now she carry milk and bread packet and some fresh flowers max walk next to her with newspaper .they came inside she put the things in kitchen max lay on carpet n living hall she put flowers in vase replacing old one .Went to her room took bath and dressed in a white cudidaar suite with white duppata .Came downstair went to prayer room clean the place and lit a diya .kitchen was the next place she went preparing the breakfast she went to temple with her puja thaal

That the daily routine of Nandini something she used to do and something she start doing she to be engaged in her surrounding and live well as she pray to lord for good health of people around her and hope to live more ...
Nandini came back silently closing the door more silently gently put the thaal on table of living room and walk without making a sound as she climb the first stair someone clean her throat behind her ''trying to sneak not out but sneak in are we''came a voice
Nandin close her eyes as she knew she is caught she turn back as she face a lady dressed in nightgown with her hands crossed with a amused but firm look ...
''Aunty ...''
''Nandini''...Both laughed she went to the laddy and hugged her ''good morning '' she said
''good morning huh ...what good i told u to not do anything na their nothing left for me to do now see''she complain while nandini nod her head in agrement

They went to sofa as they'' i told u not to everything urself see all becaus of u i m being lazy ''
Nandini brought the thaal near her and gave her aarti broke the laddo in half and gave '' i wont spoile more so half only''they both smile and nandini sat on sofa and kept the plate .''i m concern for u beta and also u r just overdong it u should care for ur health to''

Nandini sat near her holdng her both ears and sorrywala face'' sorry ...but u know na i love doing it as i love u and ha u were tired to u came late right so we are equal ''

''With the face who would not mellt Aisha to was under the spell of cute face ''ok but still u ditch me we did'nt practise kathak today''

nandini stand and smliled and said ''i ddnt do so we will continue it tommorrow ok '' she ask
Aisha salute and said ''yes ma'am ''

Nandini hand newspaper to aisha and went inside with thaal kept it in puja room and prepared tea and coffee .As she came aisha ask ''By the was where is that son of mine''nandini pour the hot liquid for aisha and herself and sat down passing a cup to her

Nandini gave and understandng look and aisha know it and murmured'' wow usually parents are busy earnng but here my son is busy with Fab5 even its waste to show his face to his mom''Nandini smile ''he got a call last night and went in hurry u were busy in hospital so i didnt disturb u ''

''Not ur fault its a routine in mumbai its not a house but a guest house came and go as u wish''she said siping her tea look at nandini with softnessand said'' u came and it felt warm and homely not anymore silence and cold''
nandinii '' really so i m here either way i dont have a place to go to''she stand and collect the cup in tray aisha hold her hand and ask her to sat beside her''Nor i m letting u go anywere u r my daughter i never have so its your duty to be my side ''aisha said while keeping a hand on her head lovingly
Nandini smiled ''ok maate understand clearly... so now go and freshup i will lay the breafast...''
Nandini put the toast ,fresh juice , fruite bowl and youghhurt on table aisha came down in blue cotton saree and bag and some files .They sat together chatting talking about today schedule and things .
.Aisha handle the after chores while nandini went to her room to change as its her college time at 9 am with her Dance class first so she put the needed stuff in her bag got change in blue maxi skirt with a white net sleeve top with brown belt and brown medium sandle she pick her brown bag and scarf and turn to go she is not a person to look in mirror as she preserve herself much simple and keen to look only for her close one





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She went out but again came inside move to her side table pick her photo of her parents and grandmother and keep it back with a flying kiss and went out .

She came running as her payal jingle >Aisha ask her to slow down as they were ready .Nandini gave aisha her tiffin box and kept two in her bag one for herself and other for druv ...

Aisha usually drop nandini to space sometimes when druv is busy or out .they chatted in way .Aisha is a doctor by profession and work n Life Care hospital as Head surjeon and Psycitrist as she love to know people by heart and mind thats her profesion demand and her interset in her job too.

Druv is a music student in Space college with his best friends famous as Fab5 all together in thick or thin plus above family .He is silent usually as he is only child but not have any problem beside alergy to mostly of food items so usually is cauntios or would take meds before eating or drinking..

For Nandini its been 4months after the accident she lost her memory its all blank who she is where all blank but its been 3 month she came to Mumbai .Dr Aisha her Grandmother ex student and their old neighbour daugter as she know her all years.
She brought her here .As it was very suffocating with people glance of pity same questions and much more it krept her more close and suffocating as she could not rembered a thing.They said she was 16 yr when her parents died in and accident and she moved to manglore but now she is 19 yr and an accident led her at memory loss it was good out of misery but still a misery as she got a phobia of accidents and voilence it choke her as she see one

.Her grandma is classical dancer and singer in manglore she is the only child.so she choose classical music and dance to study in space .DR Aisha for her better health offer to take her in Mumbai for recovery plus new enviorment and mumbai the city of dream could offer her new way or life tooo..So she is here to lost in mumbai wings plus Dr Aisha no Mrs A.M is her legal gaurdian too ...

They have a good time reaching blam it on traffc but they reach on time nandini got down with her bag and flowers its a routine as on traffic stop kids came with flower she encourage them by giving books and buying there flowers she gave a bunch to aisha for her desk and took another one for herself to keep in the dance room .
She enter the college area after waving bye to aisha and also noteing the tips layed for her and druv to follow

All were busy in there own world but some did gave her look and gush in themself she just pass them and passing corridor and floor she move to classical area .Space was divided as Auditorium Area on First floor for western And classical on 2nd floor she has to pass the corridor as she prefer stairs rather than lift .She walk in the jam room of the block as its fab5 area still its quite early for them to come so she left his luch box and snacks and juice seprately on side table with a note for druv and reminder to eat with that she went to her way.
ITs her routine or part of routine no one arrive soon or other nor dare to came in so she left as it ...
.Nandini reach her class on time as always She came in the room as girls were their in white suite with red duppata .Nandini put the flower in vase with water .She to change in salwar and tied the gugrooo .Teacher Miss Rajni came they did the greeting namskar mandlan and the class begin with the jingle of anklets and couts of steps


Pakistani FashionBeauty personified !! Actress Jacqueline Fernandez looks brilliant in this salwar suit.

Fab5 enter the college at their daily basis as they partied late for mukti again breakup while to celebrate and boost .But they came early as now they had to make good music too.
They enter the college offcourse they own it Fab5 Manik ,druv ,mukti,cabir ,alya usaually they are their will lord but sometimes after so much fun they do music for solance too.
Directly they went to jam room.and lay on chairs .Druv and manik uncover their guitar while cabir move to get drumsticks and notice box with smiles and reminder for druv he whistle a blow''Druv u got a girlfriend to diliver or dilivery boy ko hi grlfrnd bana liya kya''

all look at him with frown excpression''druv ''what''

Cabir''nahi itna lovely message''eat at time pls meds lena and ya call mom''how sweet who is these mystery person''

Mukti joined to ''yaar right cabir''eyeing druv ''what druv so caring loving who is she huh ''
Cabir''right ma ka kahana plus love of someone equal to healthy druv''

Druv rose from his seat and went to cabir took the box''guys kuch bhi huh if their someone special i will tell u but for now lets eat ''all move closer and relish the yummy food .
Alya commented''aunty have magic n hands so tasty and healty too''she munch the fruit salad
Cabir''doctor haina but nowdays its more tasty too right''he took another piece of sandwich
mukti''ya right something is different to''she eat a bite again

Druv phone buzzed with message manik eye him druv close it after typing back
its aunty right''alya ask

''reminder for food''druv said as he join them taking juice from the bottle manik was sipping
ITs been there daily chore to eat together healty and tasty food inufe pack regulary for them.

Their peace was short as harshad bash in caling them cheater as they crack the album he was going to debut .They try to talk but he keep abusing and trowing things and which led to the table and food fall and druv to as he was near and it push him side way .Manik loose the cool and punch in to they held each other collar,

Nandini finish her class as she was remove her gungroo and wore her anklets they are old but she like themStylish Silver Oxidized Anklets. IndianAnkletIT'S PG'LICIOUS #anklets http://www.pinterest.com/pgsanap/traditional-jewellery-of-india/

As she grab her bag for dress she saw druv meds .It struck her that he should take his meds and she check the time its almost time to have it she message druv about it that she is coming and he meet her outside jam room he replied ok
.She without changing along with her bag rush out in hurryas she dont want it more late skipping and avoiding people she took the stairs as not much use stairs .Her hairs were open and locks were falling ahead but she stop when she stood in the corridor just 2 rooms ahead she caught breath and move organising herself.
THe door flung open as some one was thrown out its a guy who stubble and another came and pin him to the wall.Nandini saw it and it just choak in her troather bag fall she clutch on her chest and stubble hold the wall and close her eyes trying to breath.

Harshad and manik held each other collar with furious eyes both equally in rage harshad was against the wall as manik through him out and held him on wall .Cabir and druv came out and rushed to seprate them . druv was on other side as he was trying to apart them he saw someone familiar against wall a few feet away it struck him .'Nandini''druv shouted he ran to her alya and mukti who were at door saw that and were confused.
.Druv ran to her held her tap her on cheeks she was having hard time breathing .He kneel her down ''what happen ''he ask and it struck him he look at harshad and manik he kept his palm on her ears''guys stop she is suffering ''he shouted both guys look at as concern and scene was shifted''alya get that bag'' he said as alya was beside him a few steps back she pick the laying bag druv ask her to alya get abottle of medicine from the bag ''white bottle two pills '' he said he continue to rub her back alya gave him pills he straight nandini her hairs were blocking her face he ask her to open her mouth she did and he put pills and then hug her to swallow it .

All present there were shock at sudden turn of action to fear and now these druv sudden worry as he know the girl.Druv pull from embarance as nandini calm down ''u ok '' he ask as he remove her hairs which clearly show her face she was new face preety but exauted
too.
Harshad went away as his frnd said principle is coming

Druv straigh her up on her foot mukti help from other side .Nandini get her hand forwrd to druv and and slowly said''meds'' druv was confused ''what meds''
''your medicine ''she said and hand him his pillswhich were in her hand ''crazy girl''he murmured she gave her a smile and he looked unhappy she slowly said ''sorry ''she said holding her left hand on ear
''Lets get u in room to rest ''druv said he support her to walk as they move little ahead her phone rang it was in bag which alya has but all were shock and were like statue

''aunty ''nandini said looking at druv druv ask alya to pass phone but alya was only looking druv move side to take the bag .Nandini hold her head and lost concious and fall but someone rush and hold her in mean time...

All were suprise again ''lets take her to clinic room''Manik said he signal to pick the phone while he carry nandini properly it jingle as she was in his arms he took her to sick room .
Druv answered the call its his mom he informed her truly it was needed''ma nandini lost concious ...srry ...u came carefully ...no she is ok just tired ok ...bye .He ended the call and rush in the way they went.



OUTSIDE ROOM

Doctor examine her and ask about her history

Druv replied calmly''She just in shock as she have phobia for voilence it make her breath heart and maigrane .I gave her the medincine so she is calm but fainted''

Doctor''she is exauted it was maybe from old trauma or pressure''

Druv''no she lost her memories in accident few month back she rember nothing ''

Doctor ''maybe but after effect left let her rest be calm and caring around her ''He said and left
Druv turn his friends gave him look which clearly question about her and how he know her well.
DRuv signal them to come out all move manik was last one he saw her frowing and hairs on her head he remove them she smile at his touch .He too move outside closing door softly

''Guys she is nandini''Druv started ''She is from Manglore u know my moms guru ma she is her grand daughter u listen about her condtion earlier ''

''but why didnt u tell about her earlier''cabir ask as he was leaning against wall alya was sitted on chair mukti beside her all were looking at druv except manik he sat front of alya and was leaning against wall closing eyes but much their...
''Mom ask not to''he inform all look at him in usion
''what why ''mukti ask ''we are fab5 we can help her''
Druv''right we are fab5 but we can't help her like u seen she have phobia to voilence it offstruck her and one think or said only thing i rember about her is she hate bullying ''

Manik''so what''

Druv'' so mom ask to be away from her as she have different classes and schedule she s quite focus to it was not tough for her to adjust but she could not rember a thing and immunse pressure on head is trigger to her ill health .
even in college i m not allowed to talk to her''
Alya'' we never even notice her when she came here ''

Druv''3 months back she came to mumbai it took time to adjust 2 months back she enrolled here .She usualy envolve in classical music and dance and free time she spent in room reading she is her own person slilent but sweet''
Cabir''u like her no love her''he blurrted out of blue

Druv''ya right...who does'nt if u know her she is damn good''all look at him ''and guys i like her as sister and she is legally my sister too ok so no dirty thought''
all smile and they had a group hug

''druv ''came aisha voice ''
mom ''druv look as she rush to him looking worried as hell she inquired about nandini and rush in as she was told she was inside .Nurse inform she got concious all went in too meet the new person















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So i think m d frst to comment...all i can say dat its amazing story...looking forward to read some beautiful parts...
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I love it i really love it
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Its lovely dear... Do continue soon... Waiting fr it
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Wow i really love this update. Continue soon and also pm ok
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A very beautiful n different concept... Plz continue soon
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Awesome start..
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ahaan nice story something really fresh wd nandini character i am liking it
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I love this, so detailed and well written... and the pix make such a difference... the anklets are beauuutiful! Loving the difference in the characters and looking forward to seeing how you rewrite their story...
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Hii there...
Just came across Ur ff... I'm very excited to read further... I love the concept. Manik already attracted to her... N caring brother in dhruv...
N most importantly choice of the red white salwar n the payals ( well consequences of being a designer :p)
Plz update soon...

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