Manan FF - What is Love? #Updated Chapter 9 on pg25. 3/03/16 - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_kaur

Amazing chappy
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And really excited to know
More about cabni bond
Smthing mysterious abt the story
Which I love!!!!
Lovely part cabir was too gud
And manan was hilarious!!
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Post sooonn pls di!!


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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for the late superb concept liked it bt baht chhotu parts Updt soon n long plz
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Chapter 9

#school-dairies


The bell rang n the school was dispersed. Manik with a heavy heart went to his classroom to fetch his bag. Cabir followed him.

Yar ab kya karoon Main? Manik finally asked being stranded.

Kal tak a wait kar Cabir snapped.

What? Why so rude? Han? Manik asked exasperated.

Han Sahi hai, doing wrong n getting angry on others. Matlab others don't have any right of getting mad at you. Cabir mocked at him.

Fine! Mai khud hi kuch kar lunga, Ill do it, myself. I don't need you okay. Will figure out something myself! Manik shrieked n left huffing.

Mukti! Don't you think Manik is taking so much intrest in that girl? Alya exclaimed.

Yeah! I can see that but ismein burai kya hai. I mean it's okay na. She is a sweet girl. Mukti replied.

Huh! Whatever Alya bawled n left.

What's wrong with her? Why is she behaving like this? Mukti contemplated.

***

Nandini went home, n as usual went to have shower after wishing her parents.

After having shower she came back n sat near her window looking at the sky.

Hadd hai! How could he talk like this to me? She exclaimed. You know what I shouldn't have talked to him only. What does he thinks of himself? She was blabbering all this to herself when her Mom's voice disturbed her chain of jinxes.

Yes Mom? She asked

Are beta cabir has come. He wants to meet you! Her mom informed her.

Yeah mom, M coming. Nandini answered.

Are nai aunty use kyu bula rahi hain? I'll go n talk to her in room only. Cabir said with his suave smile.

Who can say No to him? Okay beta! Her Mom said.

N Cabir rushed to her room.

You? I was coming only. Nandini said as she saw him right in front of her room when she opened the door to leave.

Yeah... yeah! But I wanted to talk to you alone. Cabir countered.

Oh! What's the matter? Nandini inquired.

Nothing much! Just wanna talk about ... err... about. He faltered.

Umm ...Err... What? Nandini barked.

Are, nothing just ... err...I mean.. Manik...Cabir shillyshallied whilst speaking.

Cabir! I don't wanna talk about it right now! Nandini grimaced.

I ... I know but... I just..just Cabir

Fine! Go on! Nandini gave in.

Nandini you might think M supporting my friend, but Cabir started

Best Friend! Nandini bellowed.

Whatever? But you know what you mean to me, Right? Cabir said.

Hmm(ed) Nandini

Okay so in that case hatever m saying listen to me... without judging me! Cabir itemized.

Okay Nandini gave in.

Cabir continued Manik is a maniac, he's so dumb, stupid, silly...he went on blabbering by adding etc at last. But he didn't know that it would hurt you. What to do? Wo hai hi aisa! He is a carefree creature on the face of this god dam Earth.

So you wanna say M making a MOUNTAIN OUT OF MOLE? Nandini yelled stressing the mountain out of mole thing.

No baba! It's just I am saying he behaves like ths only with everyone, so he didn't know how to behave. Even m mad at him. How could he behave so insane with you? I to even punched him right in his stomach n that too so tight that he fell on his knees, shrieking in pain. A tensed look grew on her face as he said he punched him. But she remained quite n he continued. Haan! N he was like "Cabir pagal ho gaya hai kya ?" n I slapped him right on his face. You know what? Nandini nodded as NO, he's got a cut at the corner of his lips, and he can't eat cause of Pain. But he deserves this, don't he?

Nandini's anger flew with the wind. She remained quite but it was clearly visible that she was no more angry but worried. Cabir bit the corner of his lips in order to control his brooding smile.

Achacha Nandu, I'll leave now. Bas u take care haan, us Idiot ke bare me sochna bhi mat. Main to use...saying he tightened his fist showing his annoyance.

Are it's okay! Cabir you don't worry! I'll be fine.

Pakka? Cabir asked

Haan baba pakka! Nandini smiled at him.

Cabir waved and left.

*****

Nandini went to Navya's house.

Hi Nandini!!!!!! Navya being overexcited on seeing her friend jumped and hugged her.

Nandini responed n said HI!

Tu ? yahan kaise? Navya asked joyfully.

Kyu? Main nai a sakti kya? Now I have to take appointment to meet you? Nandin whined m aking an angry pout.

No Baba, why you taing me wrong han? Wo I wasw just happy to see you here. That's why I asked Navya replied n again took her in a warm hug.

Okay then! Let's do something. Let's have some fun! Nandini suggested enthusiastically.

Cool! How about a walk? Navya suggested.

No yar! Its so boring. Wo to we always do! Nandini said.

So? Navya asked as they dropped the idea of walking.

Ride! Han how about a col ride? Nandini suggested with a jubilant smile.

Han! That's cool! I have my scooty too! Navya gave in quickly.

Superb! Than lets go for a RACE! Nandini said ever so happily.

Race? Navya said a bit worried.

Are how much will you think about it? Its just a race. C'mon don't be a spoilsport! Nandini stated folding her arms.

Okay! Lets go! But promise tu zyada tez nai chalegi? Navya said vigilantly.

Navya!!! Race hai! N you Chill! Kuch nai hoga baba! Nandini reassured her patting her shoulder.

Okay! Navya said n they moved out of their house.

As soon as they reached the park, from where they usually start the Race! Nandni saw Cabir, standing n talking to someone.

What is he doing here? She asked herself.

Anyways Lets go! She said.

ON YOUR MARKS!

GET SET!

GO!

Nandini yelled!

N the Race begun.

Yar I just wanna to say SORRY, bas! Manik requested pateintly to Cabir.

Okay! Waise I know ke she'll come he here! Cabir provided him with a piece of information.

What? Here? Why? Manik asked inquisitively.

Are baba! I told her that we had a fight. N that I punched you n you had got a cut near your lips cause of which you aint able to eat. So she might be worried n...Cabir narrated whatever he said to Nandini.

Seriously? Manik snapped at Cabir.

Yar wo! Cabir was about to speak when Manik interrupted him...

She knows? Manik asked curiously

Knows what? Cabir asked muddled.

Are that I live here? Manik asked nosily.

Offo this boy! Cabir said dramatically looking at the sky.

Are baba she don't know that you live here. Her best friend Navya lives here. Cabir stated his face turning pink!

Oh! Manik said blinking his eyes right when he saw two girls riding Scotties that too so fast.

Shit! Cabir yelled. As he saw them too. I should have known this.

Kya? What happened? Why so shocked? Manik asked.

Are wo Nandini! Cabir said

As soon as Manik turned he saw Nandini n Navya racing. He without thinking for another second got on his bike.

Chal jaldi! Manik scowled n Cabir jumped on the backseat. They followed them.

AS they were following them, Navya saw them in the rear mirror.

Are Nandini, see Manik n Cabir are following us! Navya informed her.

Nandini turned back to see him, n all of a sudden a dog came infront of her scooty, and because she was driving really very fast she couldn't control the vehicle and in an attempt to save dog she turned the handle of her scooty. And BOOM!!!!!!!


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Hey frnz,

I know m too late, but m tryuing my beswt to update but still its taking so much of my time. M really really sorry guys.Plz u can kill me for being late. I hope I updated a chappy Big enough!

Hope u all like it.

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Myra.😊😊

Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting story read it in a go continue soon will be waiting take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update

Loved it

Cabir kabhi nhi sudhrega
Kya story banayi hai wah

Nd girls racing wow

Omg

Nd ka accident

Waiting for the next update
Update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
than God u are back ...i have just missed ur story ...awesome update dear ...
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Superb... amazing... update ..dear...
Manik and his anger... hufff...
But ab Nandini ko manaye kaise...
Cabir and his nautanki...
Aww... Nandini yeh jankr ki...manik hurt hua kitna worried ho jati hai...
Wow... Racing...
But accident ho gaya...!!!😲
Now let see... what will happen...

Well written dear... too good...
I liked it...
Continue soonish...
Keep smiling...
Stay bless...
Lots of love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Cabir rocked.nandini's anger flew away. Manbir's part was well penned. Omg racing and nandini got hurt.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.this story is getting interesting.love to read more
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊

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