Manan FF - What is Love? #Updated Chapter 9 on pg25. 3/03/16

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What is Love ???
PROLOGUE:-
Index Pg-2

It's been a long tym ... 2 months of summer vacations. .bt now finally the wait os over . Skul is reopening.

Two grls of 16 sitting in a room. ... talking abt...


Nandani tjhe kya lagta h...??
Kya lagta...?? Nandani said...Abt Wat ??? Giving a blank expression.
Oho... to tu meri baat par dhyan hi nai de rahi thi ...she said agitated.

Nai Navya. .it's nt that..bas wo m is blog p ye story padh rahi thi..it's vry interesting. ..said Nandani. .eyes lit up. . See..she directed d lappy towards her.
Offo..tu aur tere ye stories...yu sara din ye padh k bore nai hoti...?? She said in d same agitation as b avyaa..tu jaanti h na.. I just love reading these stories she said smiling. ..
Achcha forget all this she said sensing her disinterest in her lappy n blog n stories . Tu bata Wat were u saying .
I was saying that Wat do u think abt LOVE. ..???
Scene Shifts...

Two guys were sitting in d feild. .I mean football ground. It seems as if the game has just got over. They both were sitting with thr bottles .
Tall musular..fit body...perfect body. .He appeared to b as a greek god. Sharp jawline. .n sweat running down his hairs. Another guy wid him who too had tall n muscular body . Bt he wasn't as tall as d othr one. Sweat running down his hairs .
Both of them wearing black colour shorts n Tee's no actually vests . On thr vests was written numbers.
M n 5 was written on One's vest n C n 7 was written on other's.

So broo...kal se skul ..back to work. Said C .

Han buddy it's been a long tym...Since he said wid a pause.. (M)
Yeah it's been a long time. ...since? He asked playfully.

Oh yeah le'me guess! !!! Putting his index finger on his forehead ... yeah!! It's been a since. ... n said playfully.

The guy wid M written on his vest said : Seriously? ?? N gave a deadly glare..


Whoa whoa.. chill yar broo. ..I don't know .it's been a long time since.. ???? He asked again playfully.

Scince ??? Eyebrows raised n now he was mad at his question C'mon uar brooo y r u getting so worked up...??? I know its bern a longgg stretching d word (long) tym since...ho rahe h... a guy said taking a sip...
Yeah buddy. It's been a long tym..since. ..he said without completing the sentence. ...

Cutting his sentence. ...he said : It's been a long tym since I haven't gone to skul. ..n yeah I haven't beaten u ..Cabirrr he said showin fake anger...

Whooa... raising his hands in fear..
M so scared...plz Mr Manik Malhotra don't kill me.. else...!! He said faking his fear. Achcha brooo Ok okk let's frgt it !!!!
Chal ab koi serious baat karte h ..Cabir said smiling.

Serious baat .. said Manik raising his eyebrows.

Haan bro. ..Achcha tell me what do u think abt LOVE? Asked Cabir.

Manik gave a confused look to Cabir .


Ye luk kya de raha h..aise anjaan ban gaya ye balak...he said playfully winking. . Chal bro ab bol bhi de it's just a simple question. Cabir pleaded Scene changes _ _

Navya. ..!! Love is Parth Samthaan! ! Said Nandani eyes glittering with a huge smile.

Nandani !!! Parth? ?? Seriously? ? Navya said in disbelief.
Oho Navya. . U know wat ? This is nt d right age to fall in love. .said Nandani with a smile.

Achcha to ab madam ye kehna chahti h k we fall in love in sum age ...lyk seriously? ? She replied incredulously No Navya I didn't mean that. It's just tht... she paused fr a second. ... it's just that in this age we lyk people we're attracted towards thm..it's just...just infatuation. ..Nandani delineated .


Oho. . Thik h.. lekin phir bhi kuch to socha hoga na ??? So m just asking What do u think abt LOVE? ? Said Navya excepting her defeat.

Love is.. love is trust. .!!! Nandani siad biting her lip.
Love is all abt Trust. .said Manik to Cabir. U need to to trust him..no matter wat said Nandani to Navya.

If u love her seriously thn u won't keep on asking her..u need to give her own space n trust her tht she won't betray u..said Manik.

If there's trust thn u'r relationship would b eternal..said Nandani.

So u mean.. love is all abt trust? ?? Asked Navya.

Nandani nodded inyes with sparkling eyes n bright smile.

Ok !!! Baba u n u'r novelist thoughts Chal ab kal se skul start hone wale. I've to prepare fr it. said Navya getting up frm d bed in order to leave.

Ok !!! I also hav to prepare fr tomorrow said Nandani blinking her eyes n smirking.


Yups !! She raised her ry8 hand fr a high five.
They gave high five .

Achcha Nandani u'll bring chips na ?? Navya inquired .

Nopes !! Chocolates yar obviously! ! Said Nandani blithely Ok then !! See ya..!! Said Navya hugging Nandani.
They both shared a hug.

Scene Shifts to Mabik n Cabir. ...

Whooa !! So u mean love is all abt trust..that's cool..yet vry deep!!!! Said Cabir impressed by Manik's answer.
Haan chal ab bohot ho ye baatein..frm tomorrow bavk to skul. .vacation over. .we need to work really hard. It's our 12th board this yr...remember? ? Said Manik

Oh yeah! !! How could I forget! !! A bit Stressed bt no worry. .we'll nail it bro daid Cabir coolly.

Yes we will .. Manik assured.

So broo wat abt Alya ?? asked Cabir.
Alya ?? Wat r u talking abt ??? Manik asked baffled.

Broo chill! !! She asked k r we gonna go wid her n Mukti ??? Siad Cabir.

Oh yeah!!! U know na I m nt going wid thm... I would rather go by skul bus. It would b better. ... taking a pause... N by the thanks fr enlightening me.. else I would hav forgotten n would be out with no excuse! ! Said Manik wid a smirk.

Ohhh Shittt!! Cabir yelled.

Abhi kya hua Dramebaaz...??? Manik asked.

Wat's the tym??? Jaldi bata...!!! Cabir yelled again.

Ohoo wait a sec broo ...he checked his watch. .n said. It's 5 minutes to 7 . Manik informed.

OMG...!!! Guess wat ??? Cabir exclaimed.

Wat ?? Manik asked. M late...!!!! Cabir screamed.

Late fr Wat ?? Manik enquired.

OMG! ! Broo Nandani! !!! Cabir exclaimed. . I had to go n meet Nandani n it just skipped out of my mind. ..
Wat a big deal broo??? Tu to humesha late hota h...n use mana leta h..!! Manik excused .

But buddy le'me tell u fr d whole last month I haven't met her. ..!! Cabir yelled.

Buddy she doesn't get angry.. n agar wo gussa ho ho b jaaye to use manana itna mushkil nai h...so chill naa ! Manik exclaimed.

Yeah broo , she's such a sweetheart. .. that is wat d reason is ght I luv her soo much...Cabir said with a slight smile on his face n glittering eyes.

Haan ye to h...she's such a sweetheart. .Manik mumbled.

U know wat bro?? Kabhi kabji m sovhta hu agar wo nai hoti to kya hota... in just one yr she's such an essential part of my life. . Cabir said with an intense look n a slight smile.

Haan bro...U'r ry8! Paused fr a sec Ye sab to thik h.. bt don't u think u should leave. ?? Else she won't spare u ??? He asked playfully in order to lighten d atmosphere No bro m just asking making his eyebrows cum together n a smirk .

Ohhh Yeah !! Ok bro giving a hug I should leave . See ya ...!!! Cabir exclaimed.

Ok Guys!!!! This ff is vry special fr me . So plz leave u'r lovely comments. It really encourages me a lot. love you all...
Myra.
Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago

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Are Nandini and Cabir gonna be a couple ? :O
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wowww awsome concept really nice waiting for the chapter
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Awesome start
But are CabiNi couples?? Or bro-sis???

Cont soon
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awesome...nice concept...
loving the bond between navni and manbir
its awesome...
update soon
thanks a lot for the pm
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Nice concept I really liked it plz continue and also pm me
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Thanks for the PM!!

Is Nandu and Cabir gonna be a couple?? Cant wait to see to see whats going to happen next!!
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What is Love ?
PROLOGUE :- Page1.
Chapter 1 :- Page 2.
Chapter 2 :- Page 3.
Chapter 3 :- Page 4.
Chapter 4 :- Page 6.
Chapter 5 :- Page 8.
Chapter 6 :- Page 11.
Chapter 7 :- Page 15.
Chapter 8:- Page 22.

Edited by Myra_parthholic - 9 years ago
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Chapter 1.
TOMORROW IS SKUL'S 1ST DAY .

Cabir went to meet Nandani . He rang the doorbell.

Nandani's Mom opened the door.

Cabir !! She smiled n welcomed him.. aaao na ! Cum !

Namaste aunty! ! He greeted her.

Haan Namaste beta..so how are u ?? N how were u'r vacations? ? She asked with a smile.

M gud aunty! My vacations were gud. Cabir replied. Itne tym baad...u came after a month? Wat were u doing ?? She questioned.

Wo aunty I was just stuck. . .with my football practices .. he replied.

Nandani was waiting fr u...n she told me tht u'll cum to meet her today. .. she complained.

Haan wo aunty aaj final match tha..bas abhi free hua hu..he vindicated.

Ohh ok! U go now she must b waiting fr u..she said.

Oh yes !! Yeah sure...Thanks aunty.. Saying so he took a sigh of relief.

N NOW TAKING A DEEP BREATH. .. he moved towards Nandani's room.

He knocked d door n Nandani asked to cum in.
He went inside d room n side hugged Nandani.

Hiii!!! Nandani. ..Wat's up ?? Cabir initiated to talk.

Nandani saw Cabir n was aflutter .
Her mind said. .. Nandani u hav to b angry at him n her heart said... OMG I met him aftr a longgg tym... after a 1 whole month. ... While her mind n heart were battling as in to reply or nt . She brushed up all her thoughts n at once hugged him with a jerk.

Oh !! To tumhe yaad aa gayi meri. ..? She she mocked n continued. .
To itne din se tum kya kar rahe the? ?? She exasperated .

Wo actually. ..only this much Cabir could hav said he was cut in between his sentence.

Actually wat ?? Wait a sec ...!! I know. ..tum busy hoge ??? Haan tum busy hoge..!.. she said in disbelief This is wat Cabir was looking for..aftr all he was late..n on top of all this he haven't met her since 1 month.

Wo actually. ..!! Wo..he stammered whe speaking.

Wo actually. .wo she mimicked. Kya ???

Are wo football practice k liye gaya tha !!! He answered in one go.

Oh yeah! ! How could I forget ??? U went for football practice. ..! She reminisce about it. Apne frnd Manik k sath ry8? ? She interrogated n made a pout in anger. Cabir smiled at her question n her antics !!
Tumhe hasi aa rahi h ???she grumbled. U know wat .? I don't wanna talk to u ..she rebuked.
Frst of u'r late n it doesn't matter to u.. n u r laughing lyk an ape. U live in same colony n thn too u didn't bother to come n meet me fr d last 1 month ... n now u'r laughing ...!! She ranted in anger n stood facing the other side.


Ok baba !!! Bas meri Jhansi ki Rani !!! Bas ! I know m late n I m soo Sorryyy !!! Holding his ears... I won't reprat this again pakka he Ate an humble pie n apologised genuinely. Are baba at least look at me plzzz he pleaded.

Nandani was lukin at him wid d corner of her eyes n smiled at his gestures. N thn she finally turned her face towards him.

Achcha thik h.. It's ok !! Bt u know na... she was abt to say sumthin signalling sumthin by raising her eyebrows.

Before she could complete her sentence. ...Cabir cut her in middle n said : Haan haan I know very well !!! Ye lo...she forwarded his hand full of chocolates towards her... she tuk all of them at once..

How could I forget this haan ??? He said frorically. Lukin at Nandani's ebullient face . She looked so happy her eyes were sparkling . He could see how happy she was. He was just lukin at her cheerful face when all of a sudden she flung her arms around him n hugged him. Cabir responded.

Thank you soo much she said cumin out of the hug.

U'r welcome Mam..!! My pleasure he said bowing down his head . I love u sooo much she said wid a jubilant smile.

I love u too dr..he replied. Achcha listen now I hav to leave kal skul bhi to jaana h na ?? He said with the corners of the mouth turned up and the front teeth exposed. (Smiling)

Oh haan!! U go now ..kal k liye prepare bhi to karna hoga na?? She replied wid a grin. See ya in d morning.

Ok ..Bye! ! See ya..!He said waving his hand .


Nandani bade him goodbye !!! N moved back to her room.
CABIR REACHED HIS HOME...

As soon as he reached home he took a sigh of relief.

Thank God !! Wo maan gayi. I think I should call Manik. He took his phone out of his pocket n dialed Manik's Number.

Manik picked up his phone. ..

Hello !! Manik said as he picked up the phone.

Hello Manik!! Thank God u picked up my phone. He said. Arre tu to aise bol raha h jaise m kabhi tera phone receive hi nai karta . He rebuked.

Are maine aisa kab kaha...okk chill broo..he siad.

Hmmm bol..he asked fr a reply as in y had he called.
Haan m bas ye keh raha tha k m bas abhi Nandani se mil ke aaya hu he said playfully.

Haan !!! Kya hua ?? Bataa na ?? He asked curiously.

Kya hona tha ?? She was damm angry yar.. she blasted in me lyk Anything. .
She was lyk : Tum late ho..n last 1 month se lyu nai aye. .?? Kya kar rahe the? ??

Ha ha ha .. to tune kya bola Wat did u say ?? He asked laughing.

I said tht I was busy wid..n before I could say anything she said wid u'r football practices. .n I was lyk : Yeah bas abhi match over hua n I came as soon as match got over.
N guess Wat? ?

Wat ?? Manik asked curiously.

I smiled at her remark. ..n thn she got mad at me Cabir replied. Wat ?? Aisa kya keh diya usne..?? Wat did she say ?? Manik asked impatiently.

Batata hu batata hu...wait to kar..
She said : Oh yeah! ! How could I forget ??? U went for football practice. ..! She reminisce about it. Apne frnd Manik k sath ry8? ? She interrogated n made a pout in anger.

How did she know that u were wid me ??? Manik asked perplexed.

She knows me n u vry well Cabir replied.

Wat ?? Wat do u mean ?? Manik asked baffled. Chill broo! ! I mean k she knows tht we are best frnz.. n we always b together watever we do !!! Cabir delineated.

Oh lyk that...! Hmm phir ?? Manik asked.

Phir kya use chocolates di ,sorry bola tab jaake wo maani ... By the way tjhe kya laga ??? He asked in tricksy tone.

Mjhe kya laga ..mat ..matlab..Manik replied stammering. Mjhe kya lagna tha ??

Are chill !! It's ok ! Apan kal baat karenge skul m !! Ok?? Cabir said . Haan chal we'll talk tomorrow. Skul m milte h.

Chal bye !!! Gud ny8! ! Cabir said.

Hmm Night !! Bye! Manik replied.

N call ended.

At Manik's room ...
Manik was lying on his bead ruffling his hairs with his hand.

Manik's p.o.v.
Finally frm tomorrow skul is reopening. .it's been long tym I haven't seen her. Oh God !! Wat m I thinking? ? He slapped himself mentally. Seriously? Bt still he had a smile on his face. Ohhh Shittt! I forgot to tell Alya that m nt cumin wid her. He got up n grabbed his cell phone n called Alya.

Hello Alya !!

Yeah Manik! ! She replied.

I just wanted to inform u that m nt cumin wid u ... I'll go by skul bus..

Wat ?? Bt y? ? She replied n disappointment was clearly visible in her tone.

Wo actually mere frnz ..all my frnz r cumin by bus so I'm joining thm. He replied. Its ok!! Will see ya in skul tomorrow she said.

K !! See ya thn !! Gud ny8! ! He said.

Ny8! ! Alya replied n cut the call.

So guys that's all.. Tomorrow will b d frst day of skul after d vacations. N u'll get to know about the characters n there nature as well. Hope u al like it. Do leave u'r lovely comments .
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Nice update dear
But still confused about CabiNi bond...
And Manik, he likes Nandini??

Waiting to know about School's first day after vacations
Cont soon
N thanks for the pm

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