MaNan Drabble: Tough Summers {Epilogue - Pg43}

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Thank You!!

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm
nicely written
cont soon

Thank You!!

Updating!

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Zoha Sadaqat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Let me tell you one thing, you yourself write beautifully. I have seen you along with others, dissect the episodes at the AT 😛 *bless the timely stalking I do 😆*

I am more glad to tell you that I can update fast enough!

More importantly I am glad that you were able to like this story and the characters.. you could relate to it..

Manik is in the phase of self-analyzing.. re-thinking and what not. But well he is still, kinda, obsessed.

Thanks to you! I am so glad that you could like this story! ^_^

LOL...stalking be the reason we all are surviving. 😆*chatte batte of same thalli and yada yada*😉

So you'll update soon...I'm happy.

And do join the AT sometime...it's fun.😃

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: Arshirox97
Beautiful update!!
Defines Nandini's emotions with perfection!
She must be hurt and broken!

Thanks I am glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: s45ve7
ur writing skill is amazing.i read all the parts in one go.u r doing great job. Update soon

Thanks! I am glad you could read it in one go! And more over I am really amazed you felt I have got the skills! 😆

Updating, anyway!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh
awesome update...
manik deserved that slap.. jerk 😡

feeling sad 4 nandu..poor girl she trusted him and he broke her trust...😒 nandu shouldn't frgve him easily..he should suffer and learn his misake

cntinue sooonnn

I know right? Such guys deserve every bit of it. Slap, Punch and what not/😆

Thank You!!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

LOL...stalking be the reason we all are surviving. 😆*chatte batte of same thalli and yada yada*😉

So you'll update soon...I'm happy.

And do join the AT sometime...it's fun.😃

I agree. Survival ka iklauta reason! 😆

I am updating, would have done it yet if the net connection wouldn't have ditched me 🥱

I will surely appear on the AT someday! And I know it's fun, there! 😃

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: vyshnavivaiga
Perfect slap.
dat was needed.
i wish he realise his mistake soon.
um eagerly waiting fo nxt part.

Thank you! That was indeed needed!

I wish so too 😆

Next coming up!!

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Haha, and so love you for writing this...🤗

Lol. So true. At least brains means girls think. Not act without thinking like most of them do...😆

Awesome update...The pain she is feeling, the broken trust and all, written so well... Can't wait for the next chapter, and see what the guy will do...

Thank you so much! I didn't know this would gain so much of love and appreciation, here!

I am glad that her state was well described and I was able to depict it through words!

Updating, you see what this gadha will do. 😆

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago

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Shahnaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

For some reason, I just want to keep thanking all you readers out there for being this supportive. Thanks, really!

Hope the chapter is good enough! Do leave your thoughts below! I love reading them, over and over again! 😆

Chapter Six.

He could see her emoting her pain through the dance. She moved furiously to the beat with the ghungroos shattering the beads all around her. Some stomped by her feet, making her bleed. But she seemed to care less about anything but her anger, her pain - something she had kept suppressing since long.

He jumped off the boundary landing onto the shed beneath and then landed safely onto the ground in her backyard. She was hurting herself and he wasn't going to sit and witness all of that. Making his way through her shocked cousins, he reached near her. His eyes bored at her, but she didn't seem to get affected. She still moved roughly onto the ground that had beads, most of it covered in her blood. He held her arms and shook her, bringing her back to reality. She was drenched in sweat. His heart pricked to see her the way she stood in his arms.

She for once looked at her cousin's; signalling them to leave and they did as asked to. Turning her fierce gaze at him, she shrugged his hold off her. She couldn't tolerate it. His hands reached up to her face, while she inched away. Her eyes shot with rage. She wasn't willing to see any of him after what had happened.

He didn't know where to start from. Though he didn't feel like letting her hurt herself. She was in a terrible state. Knowing that somewhere he was responsible, he had to stop her, bring her out of all the pain that he had delivered. With all those thoughts running into his mind he scooped her into his arms.

She protested, however, he didn't care to respond, in anyway. "Drop me down, Now!" She ordered, while he pretended to have heard nothing.

Gulping the anger down her throat, she tried to calm her senses before she again asked him to place her down. This time a bit calmly, to which he replied, "I can't, you are injured. It would rather hurt you."

"Nothing in comparison to what you cause me." She spat venom. He deserved it, he knew. "Now, drop me!" She yelled at him. He placed her onto the plush cushion on the wooden ply. Lowering down to check those injured feet, he pulled her skirt a little high, and placed her feet on his legs. She shivered with pain and so did he along with her, in her pain.

"Sorry" he murmured, he didn't have the courage to even apologize.

"The damage is something you can't even imagine about. Your apology is merely nothing." She spoke in the air.

It hurts even more when someone states facts, as harsh as these. "Nandini..." he cried into a whisper. With her eyes shut, clutching the sides of her skirt as he cried out her name, she tried hard to not notice the pinch of emotion in his voice, a layer of emotion farmed in his brown eyes. Neglecting all of it, not recognizing any of it - She just couldn't let him shatter her, yet again. She didn't have the courage to fight all those emotions and go through the vulnerable pain, worsen.

"Go away, Manik." She asked him to leave. He tried to justify his unjustified deeds, though she wasn't willing to, she just couldn't. There was no reason to.

And with a heavy heart, he left.

Next Chapter

Thoughts :)

Edited by -shenz- - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Res

Unres

Gadha kahin ka, if you can't see her pain then why do you even hurt her?

Yes he was responsible for her pain, but a mere sorry just can't be the remedy for her broken heart. The boy needs to introspect and be clear about his feelings and then woo his love back.

Nandini's fragile trust on him is broken and i can see what she is going through now!

Anyway, thanks for the wonderful update!😊

I know you'll update soon.😆

Edited by -Chandramukhi.. - 10 years ago