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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome proposal... just the right song which says how exactly Manikk feels for Nandhini..
What about Roshni and Manik confrontation?? I think she should know that her Bhai and best friend are getting married... Also I hope it will be lot of fun when Manik knows his sister and Sid are in relationship...😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome update specially proposal in our manik style ..
Amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART- 88

Whole way nandani pretended she was angry on him.. Manik was thinking he can never understand her..one min lov one min angry.. He drop her home.. nd leave from there little disappointed..!!
Nandani- enter in her home.. nd her jaw drop open.. Everyone watching tv..nd she nd manik were live on news.. Headline are,rockstar manik sang song for his. Gf
Sid was changed channel..
Next channel breaking news - rockstar manik proposes his gf infront of whole world.. A video clip was also showing in which manik was sitting on car holding her hand proposing her.. She was thinking how to face everyone.. Sid turn around nd look at her..
Sid- Nandani!!
Everyone turn around nd look at her.. They were luking shocked... including her badepapa!!
Ishita- what was that nandani.. ?
Nandani- was now lost for words she was luking at floor!! Embarrass!!
Namrata- tum logo ko khandan ki izzat ka koi khyal nhi!!
Nandani- was in tears) sorry mom wo manik!!
Chacha- pura pagl hai what he just said he is in madly in luv with u..
Nandani- dumbstruckly look at him...
All brust into laughter!!
Nandani- embarrass.. she was abt to ran from there..
Sanjana -hold her) bta na how much he luvs u.. ?
Nandani- embarrass) dii ap bhi na leave my hand mujhe ni pta..
She ran from there..
Sid hold her - wo kaunsa song tha which he was singing for u..?
Nandani- luk down I don't knw..
She ran from there..Badepapa hold her..
Badepapa- koi nandani ko tease ni karega samjhe sb!! (all together yes) then he luk at nandani.. Acha Nandani tell mee which song he was singing for u..
Nandani- look at him in disbelief) badepapa app bhi.. She ran into her room.. Nd lock it.. took a sigh nd turn around to her shock alvira nd roshni standing over bed.. Roshni had a guitar in her hands..
Roshni start playing guitar..
Alvira start singing tum he ho ab tum he ho mere ashique ab tum he ho..
Nandani- angry+embarrass) tum dono andr kaise aye niklo bahr..
Alvira- put her hand around her neck tumhe ho ab tum he ho
Nandani- roll her eyes) fine im going..
She open her door..roshni alvira block her way..
Roshni- hum tere bin ab reh nhi sakte.. Veer sid also join tere bina kya wajood mera.. They al made circle around her nd start singing.. Nandani roll her eyes nd push roshni on sid.(. They both had an eyelock..) nd ran from there.. Downstairs where everyone was waiting for her.. As they saw her coming down they al teasing her by asking same question..which song he sang for her..
Nandani took her car keys nd ran out of house..
Chachi - shouts where ar u going??
Nandani- kisika khoon krne..
Rohit- poor manik!!
Vishal- same pinch!! Poor manik..he is gone today. . They all start laughing again!!
Nandani drive straight to there apartment..she had an spare key of appartment.. unlock it nd went inside
. Manik was in kitchen.. He was cooking lunch..for himself.. Nandani took knife from fruit basket.. Put it behind her back.. Nd went inside kitchen.. Manik was cutting salad he lic
Lifted his head nd saw her..
Manik- wow amazing u too can't live without mee for a sec.. He walk toward her.. Nd hold her waist..nandani was quite..
Manik kiss her cheek ur looking disturb.. Kya hua..
Nandani- pull out knife nd put it on his neck) tumhari wajh say mera dimag khrab ho gya hai!! She push him on kitchen slab.. nd lean upon him..
Manik- what?? Mere wajh say maine kya kiya??
Nandani- u didn't tell mee ur such a big star.. huh this is ur fault!!
Manik push her a lil nd stand from kitchen slab..!!
Manik- its not my if u don't nw.. If u don't remember let mee remind u madam..remember for the first tym I came to ur house for dinner.. Maine tbi btaya tha mere music company hai nd we do concert.!
Nandani- but u didn't tell ur such a big rockstar!! .. That media just go gaga over u..!!
Manik- haha to ismai problem kya hai??
Nandani -problem..-! She hold his hand nd drag him out of kitchen!! Nd switch on tv..nd show him breaking news.!!
Manik- mouth left open) what??
Nandani- made a puppy face!
Manik- actually nandani!! (He stand behind a sofa.. ) Maine he bola tha kuch news channel ko isko cover krne ko.!!
Nandani- what?? Manik uu?? I kill u.. she ran behind him with a knife in her hands..
Nandani- why u do that (still running around sofa)
Manik- u said na u want,mee to propose u infront of entire world isliye!!
Nandani- I was joking.. Nd tum isko aise live telecast krwaoge.. u knw ghr pr sbne dekha nd everyone was teasing mee.. She took cushion nd throw at him.. Manik hold it..
Manik- ohhh to ye matter hai everyone was teasing u..this is not fair!!
Nandani- yes!
Manik- to tease u iss only my copy right..
Nandani- Manik u.. Idiot..she again took cushion nd throw at him..
Manik hold her. hand nd twist her around. now her back was leaning upon him..he lock her arms around her chest with his arms..
Manik- why ur so angry on mee.. Hmm tell mee..
Nandani- bcz I don't want to marry a rockstar huh..
Manik- what??( He again twist her..make her look at him.. ) you don't want,to marry a rockstar.. ?? Madam..ur already married to a rockstar..
Nandani- whatever!! I want to divorce u then huh
Manik- bcm angry) what u just said divorce?? He tightly hold her arms digging his fingers in her skin..
Nandani- was shocked seeing him lyk that..
Manik-angry) he yelled at her) how can u even think abt divorce!!
Nandani- Manik relax I was joking..
Manik- I don't lyk such jokes!! Don't ever say it again!! In your jokes or in your dreams.. Bcz whatever may happen between us.. In future.. I will never divorce u.. understood. He push her away nd walk inside bedroom..
Nandani- walk behind him.. Thought how to manofy him..she saw him sitting on the edge of bed.. All serious.. She sat beside him..on her knee.. Put her hand around his neck..lil lean upon him..
Nandani- im sorry na jaan
Manik eyes pop out listening that word..
Nandani- plz na sorry..i won't say ever again.. Even I don't want divorce.. Chahe kuch bhi ho I will ask u for divorce.. Plz na babu sorry..
Manik- was trying to cntrl his laugh..he put his one hand behind his back.. Nd pull her in his lap with a jerk..
Manik- what u just said??
Nandani- I will not divorce u!!
Manik- nhi usse pehle..
Nandani- I said sorry.
Manik- no u said jaan.!!
Say it again!!
Nandani- blush nd look other syd..
Manik hold her chin nd made her look at his face..
Manik- plz say it again..?
Nandani- move her head in no..
Manik-,fine.. he put her down on bed nd get up from bed..was about to go..
Nandani - hold his hand) angry..
Manik no response!!
Nandani- pull him nd make him fall on bed.. Then roll over him..
Nandani- I. Love you jaan!!
Nd blush..
Manik look at her.. nd pull her more close to himself..
He roll over bed now he was top of her..
He start playing with her hairs..
Manik- u just know,how to cntrl my anger don't u??
Nandani- yeah bcz I knw im ur weakness..
Manik- but mrs malhotra. Everytym u just can't take advantage of my weakness..u need to try sumthing diffrent.. Lyk u just did it knw..
Nandani-put her hand around his neck..) ohh really!!
Manik- yeah but y don't want to.marry rockstar..
Nandani- bcz I hate glamour word.. Press media I don't lyk it all.. U knw many tym I went with sidharth in award functions he used to hide mee from media.. Bcz he knw how much I hate all this lime light..nd moreover his girls got jealous of..mee..they thought I'm his girlfriend..!!
Manik- what!!
Nandani- yes.!! They thought lyk this!! But they don't knw he is already in relationship secretly.!! She laughs.
Manik- god seriously he had a girlfriend??
Nandani- yeah.. but the point is.. Frst bcz of my best friend every single girl use to hate mee..nd now bcz of.. Your fan girls will hate mee!!
Manik- what mere fan girls?? Tumko kaise pta..
Nandani-yes I saw no no I listen one of ur fan girl wss telling to another girl how much she is jealous of mee..
Manik- laughs.. nd kiss on her cheek ur so cute..
Nandani- nd ur so naughty.. Achha listen.. I want to say u sumthing!!
Manik- (was playing with her finger. He get off from her.. Now nandani head was on his chest.. ) bolo im listening to u..
Nandani- I was thinking tumko kuch din raat ko mere ghr ni ana chahiye!!
Manik- what?? No way?? Why?? He sat on bed. Taking support of bed..
Nandani-tii sat on bed )u don't remember kal humara roka hai nd everyone is busy in prepration. preprations
Manik- I remember so??
Nandani- ok everyone is already teasing us for today incident...i don't want u come to my room..nd any one caught u red handed.. nd tease us more.nd alvira already knw abt us that u still came to my room through balcony.. So plz just for next few days don't come..
Manik- hold on hogya tumhara? They don't tease us they only tease u..
Nandani- all thanks to u.!!
Manik- fine!! Whatever.. I'll come..u knw I can't sleep without u. Then how can u even think abt it??
Nandani- irritated) manik I just said for few couple of days!! Can't u plz don't adjust??
Manik- no way..
Nandani-whole night I'll talk to u then?
Manik- pakka u'll talk to mee whole night??
Nandani- yes!!
Manik- ok..i'll agree but only on one condition!!
Nandani- what condition??
Manik- daily after ur office.. U'll come here too spent,some tym with mee.
Nandani- fine!! Now im going home..
Manik- ohh hello how,can u just go so easily!
Nandani- now what??
Manik- just give mee what I want then u can go..!!
Nandani- angrily stare at him!! Seriously some tyms u behave lyk a kid!
Manik- I know!! He pull her Down nd remove her duppata through it away.
After an hour nandani came back home lil tired..everyone was present there but this tym no body tease her..they feared that if they tease her more she may start crying :P.. Nandani direct went to her room took a quick shower nd slept..
Next day - roka day..
Everyone was busy in preprations.. In both houses.. Nandani was still sleeping..
Manik call wake her up..
Nandani- in closed eyes pick up the call without checking..
Nandani- in sleepy voice) gud morning manik!!
Manik- gud morning my sleeping beauty now wake up!!
Nandani- hmm.. After 5 minutes.. Nd cut the call!!
Manik smiles over ph.. She said 5 min but she won't wake up after even 30 min nd put ph back in his pocket..!!
After 30 min.. alvira roshni came to her room saw she is still sleeping... They look at each other than at nandani..attack on her.. Nandani get up with a shock..
Nd look at them..
Nandani- u two scared mee!!
Alvira- roshni laugh on her..
Alvira- madam remember today is ur roka!! If u don't want tell mee hum jiju ko mana kr denge ur not intrested in roka nd all.(she pretended she was abt to call manik)
Nandani sat on bed.. No no don't call him. mai uth gyi hu na.!! She grab ph from his hand..nd sigh..
Alvira- amused) jiju ka itna khauff.. Haye!!
Nandani- khauff wauff kuch ni pagal hai wo...
Alvira -,laugh
Roshni- ok go now nd get ready!!
Nandani ran inside washroom.. And took shower..
She came out wearing her towel.. Alvira roshni help her in to wear her sari..
Roshni was arranging her sari plates...
Alvira- curled up her hairs nd make puff of her hairs... Did light makeup.. Roshni was helping her wearing her jewellery..!! She was wearing red colour bangles..meanwhile they got call from chachi..Manik has arrived.. With,fab,5.. If nandani is ready then bring her down..
Alvira nd roshni check Nandani for final tym.. Then bring her down..
She was climbing down from stairs when manik look at her...
She was wearing same sari which manik choose for her.. Nd was ready in exact way which he lyk he was mesmerized by her look.. Alvira make her sit next beside manik...
Manik- look here nd there saw nobody looking at them he keep his hand on hers..
Nd,tap his fingers on her hand..Nandani blush nd pull out her hand..
Manik gave her angry glare..
Nandani. - turn her face other syd..
Badimummy did manik tika.. Nd gave him his gft..navya ... Slides red colour chunri on nandani head.. Mukti bring thal.. Navya took out..diamond work bangles from it..was abt to slide it in nandani.arms...
Manik stop her..
Everyone luk at him.. Including nandani..
He took off chain from his neck..nd handover to navya..
Manik- this chain is gifted to mee by someone very close to mee when I frst tym won music competition in school
(actually that chain was,gifted to him by roshni when they were kids nd he won music competition. In school..roshni gifted him as gud luck charm he recalled)
This is my gud luk charm.. Today I want to give it to Nandani... I'll be really happy if roka cermony completed with this chain.. If u guys have no problem then!!
Badepapa- smiles nhi we don't have any problem we ar happy u luv her so much nd think abt her so much..
Mr kapoor- im satisfied i had given my daughter in right hands..
Nandani was happy with the thought her family start accepting manik!!
Navya,took chain nd slides it in nandani neck..
Navya- aajse nandani officially humari nandani bhabhi ho gyi..nd (smiles at her) Nandani blush

Precap- cooking competition!!

Author note- function over..im back guys.. do cmnt hwz it??



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaniktr

Awesome proposal... just the right song which says how exactly Manikk feels for Nandhini..

What about Roshni and Manik confrontation?? I think she should know that her Bhai and best friend are getting married... Also I hope it will be lot of fun when Manik knows his sister and Sid are in relationship...😆😆😆

soon u'll get confrontation update..soon nd thanku :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priota

y so late dear... bt update is 👏 awsome... plzz nxt update soon...

was busy in function ..from now u 'll get regular updates on tym
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 198765

wow!!
it was fab..outstanding...
hw swt manik was..the song nd purposel ...everything..
so much swt...
mje diabeties na ho jaaye..
loved it...
jst update swt swt prt...
nd d sng..jst too awsuummm...

hahaha :P thanku so much :*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unnatishukla241

Beautiful

U are awesome writer
I love the way manik propose nandini
Wow its awesome
Cont soon

thanku so much :D
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishyy

Awww I love the way he proposed...just imagining 😳 😳

I luv u 10 11 12 :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww
This was so Sweet!!
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jesse93

The cutest and the sweetest proposal I have ever come across .
Wow it was so beautiful and very well written .

thanku thanku thanku so so much :P

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