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drnidsur

@drnidsur

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

i liked the concept , somthing really very diff from wat all i've read in this forum

i think i already know the show u tokd abt , soo i kinda got it sorted on that ...

i loved the way u've written her character , indeed however grand royal lives seem , not everything that glitters is gold right ?

n yes ! u mentioned dorota !..omg ...indeed a chairfan huh !😉

keep gng ..pls pm me as well for updates

n i loved the 3 chps ...n i wanna see manik pretty soon now ...😳

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pihu

@epshitatabassum

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

I'm leaving the comments box empty bcz ur story speceless so I cannot find word for it. I thought 1nly description awsme then what bt manik n manan

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr
It looks long update...but it feels short.. what can I say about that... I am just so curious about the story and so smitten by it.. that I can go on and on reading it.

I have mostly written the next three chapters, I will have to make some changes and I hope you like them. This is my first time writing a big story and that to in English, the last time I wrote PROPERLY was when I was at school and after that I did not have any need to write something in English

It takes time because I feel like I make to many spelling and grammar mistakes

I go back and delete and than make some drastic changes

The next chapter will be uploaded tomorrow and the chapter after that will have Manik

Chapter 6 will also be mostly Manik

I feel guilty that I could not introduce him earlier

And thank you for your kind words, it means a lot 😊

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: riddhima11
An interesting concept.. Please continue soon..

I will update tomorrow 😊 and thank you

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: iqra286
aww lol she saw her mom in another decades which is from past😆😆 n mukti alaiya n navya are her childhood friends😃😃😃 hmmm n manik the prince of france intresting man😉 ur story from d start draws me 2wrds it😊😊 plzzz update nxt chp soon as i really wanted to knw manan reaction😛 update it soon n it shuld b long yr plzzz😊😊😊 tc love ya😳😳😳

You will see Manik in chapter 5 and chapter 6 will also mostly be a Manik centered chapter, with his family

Thank you so much for liking my story, I hope it gets better with time, when our dear Manik will come 😊

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: star_struck
okay that was great as a set-up and building up chapter I loved the character of nandini...the way of her thinking is really good..and exciting..

The only thing I could ask for is write the dialogue of character with thier name's at first like-

Alya-oh, stop teasing her..

and the rest is good...waiting for manik and more his character sketch

continue soon :)

I have mostly written till chapter 6

However writing in dialoge form scares me a bit because the way I wrote is mostly the way I write in german, writing isn't something that comes easily for me, so I am afraid of changes but I might try that once, i dont know whether in this story or the next but will surely try it out 😊

Thank you 😊

Manik will come soon

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI
Amazing upate dear but plz update longer part if you r going to update after 4 or 5 days its a request. And i cant wait for chap5 for manik's entery i know he will like that cruel,arrogant and worrioristic kind of prince we see in movies but what's gone a happen when they will meet !!!!phew!!!!!.
Continue soon.
Eagrily waiting.

I will update tomorrow and I have mostly written till chapter 6 but I go back and make changes so it takes time

You will meet Manik very soon and there also will be a Manik filled chapter that will describe how he is

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: n3gn
Amazing update yaar pl try to update Daily and also pm me

I can't promise daily updates because writing takes a lot of times but I will try to update more often

And of course I will pm you

And thank you for liking my Story 😊

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: fireroad99
i am waiting for manik and their first meeting
why cant manik entry be in next chapter plz udpate

Sorry but you have to wait till chapter 5 because right now Nandini is in Scottland and Manik is in France so she has to go there first

But I promise you a Manik centered chapter 6

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: aavani
awesome...so aliya , mukti and navya ...nandu's childhood friends...wow
loved their conversation...first kiss...awww so sweet...
u penned so beautifully...
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

Thank you 😊

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