MANAN FF::JO TU MERA HUMDARD HAI!!! chapter-23(PG-85) - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey when will u update?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anjaliii84

Wow do dil mil rahe hai magar chup k chup k..hehe maine song ga di..but topology goods..N thanks for pm me..N all the best for exam





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Posted: 10 years ago
when u will update. ...

I really miss it .

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: music_manan

Hi , it's nice to see your update again😳. It's awesome n so emotional. Nandini 's care towards manik make me so good . How she treat each wound so softly. He can't remember anything bcoz of wound. But he is happy inside bcoz of nandini's attention. 🤪There closeness creates magic between them. Then manik's izzat bachao line , so hilarious🤣. He is in a pain but still managed to be good with Nandini. Nice thought n beautifully penned. But after this much closeness, again she jerked his hand. Tht I can't understand n feel little bit bad for him. Now u gav tension. I thought now everything is going to be ok. But Nandini's behavior make me little sad. Poor manik at least now he deserves little bit love n care.😭 Please please make them little closer now. U r a fab writer. Stay blessed n take care




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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter-14

Nandini ran upto the kitchen mentally abusing her sub-concious mind for making her land in this situation.."what happened to me all of a sudden??why I acted so foolish??it is not the first time I saw Manik like this??then what happened to me??did Cabir said right??do I love Manik??no no Nandu are you crazy??how can you even think so??don't forget he is responsible for everything and you love Harshad and only Harshad.."the name of Harshad only brought frowns in her face.."kya cabir kal jo bol raha tha woh sach hai??is Harshad behind all this??but why will he do so??he loves me a lot..he can never do this..but Cabir why will he tell a lie??and Mani has been badly hurt..Aiyyappa whats all happening??why everything is so perplexed??i need to figure it out.."

In the meantime someone was floating on the umpteenth sky..who could it be other than our cute monstu..yes it was Manik..he was reminiscing every letter uttered by Nandini for him..for her Mani..he tried hard to travel his hand towards his tattoo which Nandini caressed a couple of minutes ago..on his hands touching the wings of the angel of his tattoo he jumped to the memory lane memorizing the day he got the tattoo drilled against his skin...

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"Mani tum bologe tum mujhe kahan leke ja rahe ho??"Nandini uttered this words just as uttering the beads of a rosary for a millionth time.."Nandu how many times will I say that more five minutes dear..and you yourself will get to know and bas hum pahaunch gaye.."Nandini quickly got out of the car and read the name of the shop"THE TATOO MAKERS"written in italics.."Mani hum yahan kya kar rahe he??" "Nandu tum sach me topper thi na??stupid..tatoo shop me aaen hain toh tattoo hi banwaunga na.." "kya tattoo??tum pagal ho kya Mani??tum tattoo banwaoge??tumhe pata he kitna pain hota hai??no no you can't do a tattoo" "c'mon Nandu don't be a spoilsport..tattoo is the latest trend yaar..my first album is due in a couple of months and I will be a rockstar..its compulsory you know na..and it looks so cool" "koi cool vool nahi lagta..tum wese bhi bahot handsome ho..koi tattoo ki zarurat nahi hai"screamed Nandini..the two besties fought over this..and Manik finding it impossible to make Nandini understand lifted Nandini in his arms and carried her to the shop

"Nandu tumhe isme se kon sa design sabse acha lag raha he??"asked Manik flipping over the catalogue "mujhe nahi pata..nahi mujhe dekhna hai"Nandini crossed her arms across her chest"ok let me see..ummhh I think this would be the best..this angel.ya..because you are my angel so this angel wala tattoo only for you my angel"Manik lied on the couch and the maker was setting the machine when Nandu asked"Mani tum sure ho na??" "Nandu seriously you are a medical student toh??how will you operate your patients??its just a tattoo dear..you start"Manik instructed the tattoo maker..the maker got its tool ready..he was just about to drill when Nandini screamed"bhaiya dhire..please..aise karna ke usse lage hi na..dekhke..Mani bohot pain hoga..you are sure na??" "Nandu you are there na with me so can you even think that I will feel the pain..you are the remedy to my every wound Nandu..kaha toh maine that you are my angel"this words were just like ice soothing the pain..she was a bit relieved..she clutched Manik's hand and squeezed her doe eyes in as if it would decrease Manik's pain and it resulted in Manik's chuckles..he thought how innocent was she..a smile appeared on his face despite the pain he endured..he started blabbering continuously to make Nandu busy.."Over" said the maker and this is when they realized that the tattoo was drilled..Nandini sighed a relief.."woow its so pretty"exclaimed Nandu caressing it throughout"but dekho kitna swell ho gaya" "offo Nandu firstly how can a tattoo be pretty...say it hot or sexy"said Manik all dramatically the last two words.."hunh! koii hot shot nahi hai..and listen koi zarurat nahi he to go shirtless and move around showing your tattoo to those stupid girls..samjhe tum??"Nandini crossed her arms across her chest..


updte dne..but i dnt thnk u wnt any updte...i m in 11th standrd..writin nw its nt a cakewalk..undrstnd yaar..atleast praise toh kiya karo..only 3 pages commnts???u dnt kno d amnt of efforts i tke..i ve 2 study also so mom doesnt stop me 4m writin..n sum writers demselves dnt commnt bt xpct cmmnt in der post only wow...y shal i pm??5 pages cmmnts n 100 lyks varna no updte...atlst appreciate yaar...it hurts
Edited by bidisha10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha so cute!
I wish they can together again like earlier :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update dea..
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was good nandu ko uski feeling realize kar wado
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Posted: 10 years ago
like the update...plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
offo Nandu firstly how can a tattoo be pretty...say it hot or sexy"😆

naught manik.i like it

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