Manan SS: TumMile Thread2 Epilogue/Page58/14-8-2015 - Page 15

These chapters r so very cute .

hello gal!
firstly congratulation for ur new thread!
ur story is so beautiful,every emotion,every scene is penned down so beautiful! ur one amazing writer!
tis Disney land trip is amazing! i feel like as if am ter on d trip,it seems so real!
i love the way u upload,such big updates!
ur amazing gal!
just love ur story!
but just one suggestion
it wud be better if nandu gets lil brave,the tigeress nandu!
just a suggestion ah no offence!


with lots of respect and love,
mars!

I feel lose of words everytime I read your update. I don't know which combination of 26 alphabets would be enough to adorn this ff. I am precisely in love with it. I love the way Manik calls Nandini his 'Jaan', I luv the way he calms her down. I luv the way Nandini behaves with Manik. So kiddish. Its true we act childish only in front of the person we luv & we know that the person is there to bear our kiddishness. I luv Nandini the way she is. Cause i luv when Manik composes her by calling her 'His Jaan'. ❤️ I don't know why but i feel special when he does so.

Coming back to the Trip!! The Roller Coaster ride.. Nandu had fun whereas Manik was afraid 😛 Ohh shitt! Poor Manik... haaww.. Nandu gum ho gayi.. Thank God mil b gayi.. 😛 And then comes the Haunted Mansion. Whoa! So scary. even I won't prefer going there unless someone like Manik is there with me.. 😛 Trip to haunted mansion was quite amazing.. Nandini is sooo scared. Ohh the cotton candies... luv it too.

Oh My God!!!!! Mayank is out of jail!!!! How but? Revenge Time?

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Anyways, I luved the update wholly. It was terrific. You have so much efforts to bring this trip into reality. I appreciate you for this. Keep writing girl!! Update sooon!! will be waiting..

in love with this Disney land updated...
I love nandu's childishness...
who eats two candyfloss at an instant. ...
it was acute wala update ... bichara manik he was so scared of the ride. 😆 ...
waiting for the next update. ...
..update soon. ..

Mawara u r doing a fab job
Ek to itni acchi updates
Itni longwala
N u write so well dear
Its very awesome
Loving every bit of the story
Cont soon dear
Thnx for the pm
Take care
Love u lotsss
Mehjaben...

wow i enjoyed whole chapters ...
meri Disneyland sair to yhi pe baithe baithe ho gayi
thanx to you !

And about the update kya khu i like qhat you write...

no complains no demands 😃
from my side ...

ok

i like childish nandu & protective manik ...

waiting for next

bye tc

Huhu ur superb gurl
Keep up the good work
So well written
I can imagine the scene
All d very best in ur life
B blessed 😊

You are amazing. I m madly in love with your writing. U r asking I like it or not so let me tell you I loved this update more And that is only because of Nandini and her childish behavior. U successfully forced me to remember my childhood. Nandini is so innocent and her heart is so pure.

Believe me I love this Nandini most, the innocent and childish one who considers Manik her everything.

And no one can say u never visited Disneyland as u described each thing so beautifully.

I m not losing interest infact I m gaining interest more and more

Thanks for pm and please update soon. And this time make that jerk mayank suffer like Hell

The parts was superb and you are an amazing writer dear👏👏
I love nandini's childish behavior and manik is very caring and supporting towards nandini
I really love them😳
Love your story
Pls ab next update jaldi se dena
Take care dear😊