Manan SS: TumMile Thread2 Epilogue/Page58/14-8-2015

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Pragya

@pragyas1192

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

such awesome potrayl of d charctrs jz wowww👏👏

HAUNTED HOUSE journey rofl😆 i cudnt control laughing out loud...

emotion of Nandu...😭 u ve pened down sooo welll...👏

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muskan

@muskancute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Ohhh...!! WWOOWWW yrww...Awsome...Amazing...Mindblowing...I Have No Words To Say...U Are Late But Update Was Dhamall Loved it to The core...I am in with your Wrtting Skills lovely...keep writing...👏

Coming to Update...

26A...Awww MaNan Kiss Awsome...And Suddenly Nandini Start Crying...Awww Nandini Tell Manik About Her Kiddish Behaviour...Awsome...And Nandini Belive Manik Will Tolerate Her nakhras...Zid...Everything...Amazing...And Manik promise Nandini ke he will fulfill her wishes...Mindblowing...Nandini wanted to cry but she cant bcoz she knows Manik will start worring...The Way both know each other...just Amazing...Nandini is crying bcoz she missed her parents😭...And the way Manik handle her Awsome...And Manik Funda Of Life is superb...

26B...Manik is Hidding from Cartoons...😆...Finally Nandini is fine... And Nandini Wants to ride Roller Coaster And Manik was Afaird Of Roller Coaster...😆...hahahahaha...And Roller Coaster Ride Started...And Was Soo Afaird...And Nandini Was Enjoying...Awsome...And Finally Ride End And Manik Was not Feeling Well...Haww...Nandini Manik ke liye Pani lene gai thi or kho gai...😲 And She Start Crying...Finally They Both Find Each Other...Awsome...And Their Huggg...😳

26C...They Go For Haunted Mension...Now Its Time For Nandu's Afaird 😆...OMG...Manik is soo Exicted...😉 And The Hole Haunted Mansion Ride Was...Superb...Mindblowing...Amazing...

26D...Hawww😲 Nandini Is soo Scared...And Manik Kiss Nandini😳 To Come To her Sences...Amazing...😉...Awww Nandini Is Soo Cute Yrww...She Climed Manik's Back Like A babyy...😃...Amazing...And Their Canddies Talk Was Superb...

What?? Mayank Is Out Of Jail?? 😲 😕...but how?? I Know We Will Get Ans Soon...

But The Chapter Was...Amazing...

And I Always Commented Lambaaa...And Always Appericiate your work...dear👏...U Are Awsome Dear...😊

Thanks For PM...

Plzzz Cont Soonnn...I Am Waiting...😉

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Hajra

@0315

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Awesome and superb update,i am in love with this chotu si namdini and the way she behaves with manik its soo sweet,the haunted mansion thing was also very cool and now coming to mayank ahh he has to come but this time let make nandini strong enough to fight with him

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pooja rao

@pooja_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

fab update..
ahhwww..nandini is so swt..
she tried hrd to act brave..but cldn't..
nd loved manik gesture..
his love care for nandini...
loved the rollar coaster prt..
nd d bst is
haunted house.
that heads..manik said if they stare at u..u stare thm bck..
it was dam funny..
loved each & every prt..
u wrote so well...dam gd..
nd dis mayank thing will help us to get more manan moment.
so no worries for dat mayank return...
loved it..
update soon jldi se
ye wala bhut late tha..
nxt prt jldi..:-)

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Good work yaar. Keep it up.

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Mayank is free... that was unexpected... but loved the way you explained why she acts the way she does and the sweetness between them.,..wonderful job...

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Fab updates

Loved it

Very nicely written

Cont soon

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Nice part. First ride nandani was enjoying n manik was afraid n in second ride manik was enjoying n nnandini was afraid. BT mayank out of jail hope he doesn't cause any harm this time

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HTA111

@HTA111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Omg adventurous thrilling awesome update

So cute he was scared of rides and she of haunted house but he knows best how to calm her down in such situations so he did the same

Her childhood memories were not like usually kids have that's why she is compensating through him as his love and affection can cure the darkness in her life

Oh god mayank is back what chaos he will bring now in their life but how he manages to get out of jail

Continue soon and thanks for pm