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Posted: 10 years ago
omg.. uh r jss amazing jaaan.. jss amazing.. d way u potray everything.. nd bravo yr.. aapne itni info nikali h disneyland k baare... js osm yrr.. pls give us updated like dis sraly uh r bst!! infact ur new ff its love also is jsa osm.. i can bet one day u will b bht bdi vali writer.. jss osm yr.. in love vd ur lines.. words.. eveeything!! nd shit! mayank is back oh god.. pls no hospital scenes.. but i knw jo hoga acha joga... love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update!!!
Manan bonding is amazing!
Adorable!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
it's awsm yaar...
that Manan convo in Part A awsm..
Part B hehehe rollercoaster ride to much fun as well as to much scary hehehe aww nandu goom ho gyi thi koi ni... mill b gyi naa...
Part 3 haay nandu darr gyi iss baar haunted house hehehe amazing fun hehehe sculpture head hehehe... 😆
Part 4 Awww she tuck to his back n climb on him... thn than candy floss awww ... 😳
OMG Mayank is back???????
Janne k liye jude rhe camera woman shivani k saath... Mawra India forums pe hehe hehehe lol 😉
ty for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update manan kiss sexy yet passionate nandu's bad memories (emotional) first manik get scared on roller coaster nd thn nandu in haunted mansion both r so cute sorry for late comment update soon nd thnks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
I too wanna go to disney land.. Mujhe kaun leke jaayega??
Loved this. Felt like I watched a fairy tale movie.. Hero-Heroine in disney land and all.. Firstly Manik was scared bcoz of roller coaster and then Nandu scared of haunted mansion! It was bootiful!
And i luv dis childish Nandu.. She is enough matured with others. She only do her nakhras with manik which is the cutest!! Keep going its amazing
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 27 A


It was morning. Nandini lazily opened her eyes and saw Manik sleeping as usual hiding his face in her hair. She smiled and ruffled his hair. She gently pecked his forehead and he smiled in sleep feeling her touch. Nandini knew if she will get up then Manik's sleep will be disturbed which she didn't wanted. She slowly closed her eyes feeling him close to her.


"Nandini..!!" Manik called her panickly. She opened her eyes and look at him he was calling her in his sleep. "Nandini no..!! Please..!! No..!!" Manik again said panicking still in sleep. Nandini became worried.


"Manik..! Get up..!! I am here..!!" Nandini got up and shook Manik's shoulder to wake him up. Manik suddenly opened his eyes.

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Manik was in a very bad dream where he saw Mayank taking Nandini with him. He was helpless there. Then Nandini's voice brought him out of his dream. He opened his eyes and saw Nandini in front of him.

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"Manik? What happened?" Nandini asked cupping his cheeks. Manik got up and hugged Nandini. Nandini hugged him back and patted his back.


"Mani..!! What happened? Are you ok..!!" Nandini asked lovingly whispering in his ear.


"Nandini..!! You will not leave me ever right?" Manik asked worriedly and Nandini become surprised. It was always she who asked Manik this question and today he was asking this thing.


"Manik..!! Where will I go? Tumharay siwa kon hai mera..!!" Nandini assured him. He broke the hug and look at her.


"Promise?" Manik asked doubtly and Nandini nodded her head. Manik lay down again and placed his head in her lap.Nandini slowly kept running her fingers in his hair and Manik again closed his eyes


"Was it a very bad dream?" Nandini asked lovingly patting his head. Manik wrapped his arms around her waist and snuggled in her stomach.


"Very bad..!!" He whispered.


"You want to tell me?" Nandini asked ruffling his hair again. But Manik didn't replied and kept nuzzling his face in her stomach. Nandini didn't asked further. Soon she felt Manik again sleep. She carefully placed his head on the pillow and was about to got up when he held her hand. Nandini look at him he was looking at her.


"Don't go please..!!" Manik said lovingly pulling her towards him. Nandini lay down beside him and he hide his face in her hair. Now this was something different. Manik's behavior was little weird for Nandini.


"Manik? You are not ok na something is bothering you..!! What happened?"

Nandini again asked but Manik again kept quiet. He didn't wanted to tell Nandini that Mayank was back.


"Manik..!! Mjy shower laina hai..!! I'll be back na..!! Haan?" Nandini said lovingly kissing his cheeks and Manik let her go.Manik saw her going in the bathroom. It was Nandini's habbit she never ever locked her bathroom door. Manik was constantly thinking about Mayank. "God not this time..!! Nandini..!!". He got up from the bed and went towards the bathroom.

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Nandini brushed her teeth and washed her face. Then she came near the shower. She was about to remove her top when she heard the click of door she turned and saw Manik standing in the door. She was a little surprised because Manik never do this.


"Manik..!! What happened? I told you na I am coming then kya hua?" She asked lovingly and Manik walked towards her. Now both of them were standing exactly under the shower. Manik didn't said anything he gently entwined his fingers with hers. He pull Nandini closer and turned on the shower. Instantly water started drenching them both and Manik held Nandini closer. He cupped her cheeks and planted a kiss on her forehead.


"Tum theek ni ho na Manik..!! Something is bothering you right?" Nandini said worriedly holding his shirt's collars.


"Nandini..!! Aik wada karo ge?" Manik asked holding her hands again and Nandini nodded. "Promise me that you will never ever get away from my sight..!! Not even for a second..!!" Manik said possessively.


"I promise..!!" Nandini said and Manik without warning slammed his lips with hers. Nandini's hands fisted in his hair and she replied with equal favor. Manik didn't know why but he can't control himself he can't lose Nandini..!! His life's only asset..!! He was kissing her madly pouring his whole love in that one kiss. Unknowingly tears trickle down his cheeks. In spite of the water of shower Nandini could feel Manik was crying. She was unable to understand why he was getting so emotional. She knew that he will not tell her so soon. She shivered with desire. Manik broke the kiss and rested his forehead with hers. Both were looking in each other's eyes. Nandini could clearly see the desires in her husband's eyes.


"Nandini...!" Manik whispered he was about to say something when Nandini placed her finger on his lips.


"Shhh..!!" Nandini shushed him and kissed his cheeks to eat his tears. That was it for Manik he pinned Nandini with the shower wall. He started kissing her shoulders and biting her neck earning precious moans from her throat. Nandini wanted to held him but Manik didn't let her because he had pinned her hands above her head.


"Maaanniii..!!" Nandini hardly whispered but this time Manik was in no mood to do any kind of mercy on her. He almost tore her top to which Nandini gasped at this sudden act. Now this was something different for Nandini. She knew that he was desperate but he was always very gentle in his touch. He always used to take care that Nandini didn't got hurt. Nandini sensed what was coming.


"Manik..!!" She for the first time ever tried to push him to calm him down. But Manik didn't listen to her he kept kissing and biting her. Nandini closed her eyes ready to gave in.


Manik didn't knew what was gotten into him. He was going crazy with his wild desires. He almost ripped Nandini's top and bite her harshly. He wanted to make each and every inch of her of him. He wanted to drench her body with his eternal love. He showered her with his love, filling the bathroom with her moans.

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Chapter 27 B


After a long time Manik walked out of the bathroom with Nandini in his arms. He was wearing a black track with black vest. And Nandini was wrapped in a big white towel. She was lying all exhausted in Manik's arms, head rested on his chest and eyes closed. Manik placed her on the bed.


"What have I done? Oh God..!!" Manik saw red marks very dark then the previous ones he was hell embarrassed now he wanted to say sorry. He was sitting on the bed and Nandini was sitting beside him head still on his chest.


"Manik ab sorry mat bolna..!!" Nandini said tightening her grip around him. Manik smiled faintly how much she know me.


"Tum theek ho na..!!" Manik asked politely.


"More than ever..!!" She said smilingly raising her head a little to look in his eyes.


"Main bohat bura hoon na..!! Monster right?" Manik said playing with her fingers and kissing her red marks.

"Yes you are very bad..!! But not for me..!! For me you are my angel..!! My savior..!! My lover..!! My owner..!! Manik why are you feeling guilty?" Nandini asked lovingly.


"Because I was harsh with you Nandini I am sorry..!!" Manik said sadly and a lone tear escaped his eye.


"Manik..!! Don't you dare to cry because of some stupid thing..!!" Nandini suddenly become angry seeing his tear. "You are my strength Manik..!! You know why I am happy? Because you are with me..!! Without your love na Manik I am nothing..!! You think you were harsh? No Manik trust me I always feel blessed when YOU touch me..!! You can never hurt me Manik I know..!! Please get yourself out of this guilty thing please..!!" Nandini explained emotionally.


"Why do you love me so much?" Manik asked lovingly and Nandini chuckeld.


"Acha before I answer to your question first you tell me why do you love me so much?" She asked laughingly.


"I really don't know what made me love you so much..!!" Manik said tucking her hair behind her ear.


"If you don't know na then I also don't know..!!" Nandini said hugging him tightly.


"You are tired na?" Manik asked lovingly running his fingers in her hair.


"Not much..!!" Nandini said snuggling in his chest. Manik made her lay and covered her with the blanket.


"Tum yahen ho na..!!" Nandini said adjusting her head on the pillow.


"I am here kahen nahi ja raha main..!!" Manik said lovingly and sat beside her.He started running his fingers in her hair.


"Manik..!!" Nandini called him in a sleepy tone.


"Bolo Manik ki jaan..!!" Manik said looking at her.


"Sing me a lullaby...!!" She said innocently and placed her head in his lap.


"Nandini..!! I don't know any lullaby..!!" Manik said affectionately.


"No I wanna hear a lullaby I don't know bus..!!" Nandini said stubbornly and wrapped her arms around Manik's waist.


"Acha acha..!! Ok let me think..!! I remember one which Mama used to sing for me when I was little..!!" Manik said accepting his defeat and Nandini smiled excitedly.


Manik started the lullaby.


Lullaby, and goodnight,
You're your Manik's(in actual lyrics it's Mother's delight) delight,
Shining angels beside
My darling abide.

(Manik sang and Nandini blinked her eyes sleepily holding Manik's hand)


Soft and warm is your bed,
Close your eyes and rest your head.
Soft and warm is your bed,
Close your eyes and rest your head.

(Manik sang and closed her eyes with his palm. She smiled and closed her eyes)


Sleepyhead, close your eyes.
Your Manik's(Mother) right here beside you.
I'll protect you from harm,

You will wake in my arms.
(Manik sang tightening his grip around her)


Guardian angels are near,
So sleep on, with no fear.
Guardian angels are near,
So sleep on, with no fear.

(Manik sang and noticed Nandini sleeping already. She was smiling in her sleep)

Manik carefully adjusted her head on the pillow he gently pecked her forehead. He wanted to get up but Nandini was holding his hand and he didn't wanted to disturb her sleep. He rested his head with the bed board and closed his eyes.


"Mayank I swear to my God...!! This time if you tried to do anything wrong na..! I will not spare you..!! I will not let you harm my Nandini..!!" Manik thoughtand soon he too drifted to sleep in the same sitting position.



Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 27 C


Manik's sleep disturbed by the constant buzz of his phone. He opened his eyes and immediately look at Nandini she was still sleeping. He freed his hand from her and picked up his cell phone. It was Cabir. He rushed to the terrace.


"Yeah Cabir? Any news about Mayank..!!" Manik asked before Cabir could say anything.


"Not much Manik..!!" Cabir said sadly.


"How he came out of the jail..!!" Manik asked furiously.


"He run out of the jail Manik..!! Police is finding him..!!" Cabir told him seriously.


"Cabir just do something..!! I can't let anything happen to Nandini..!!" Manik said helplessly.

"Manik tu pareshan mat ho..!! Main hoon na..!! I promise nothing will happen to our Nandini..!! You just enjoy your trip..!! Tjhy pareshan daikh kar wo bhi pareshan ho jye ge..!!" Cabir said encourgingly.


"Yeah ok..!" Manik sighed and after talking a little long Manik cut the call. He came back to the bedroom Nandini was still sleeping. It was getting dark so turned on the lamps because he knew if Nandini will wake in dark she will become afraid. He himself came to the kitchen and made a coffee for him. And came out on the terrace. Disneyland was in front of his eyes.He sipped the coffee smiling at the moments they spend there. Poor cartoon characters they must be waiting for them..!! Manik was thinking all this when he felt HER small hand crawled over his chest and she hugged him from back. Manik smiled brightly.


"So my jaan is up..!!" Manik said politely pulling her from his back. She was still in that towel and was still sleepy. She rested her head on his chest.


"Yes..! Because you again left the bed..!!" She complained. Manik laughed and put his one arm around her.


"Ok I am sorry..! Come sit..!!" Saying that Manik sit on the rocking chair and made Nandini sit on his lap.


"Mjhy bhi coffee pini hai..!!" Nandini said making a pout and Manik gave her his cup. She smiled and took it from his hands resting her head on his chest again she started sipping the coffee. Manik wrapped his arms around her.


"Mani..!!" Nandini called him.


"Hmmm..!!" Manik asked lost in his thoughts.


"You will not tell me na?" Nandini said sadly.


"Tell you what honey?" Manik said avoiding the question.


"That something is bothering you..!! Please Manik tell me..!!" Nandini said looking in his eyes.


"Nandu it's nothing..!!" Manik said lovingly playing with her hair.


"I don't wanna talk to you..!! I am asking you for the last time you are telling me or not?" Nandini threaten him childishly.Now Manik came in a mood to tease her.


"Acha if I'll not tell you then what will you do?" Manik asked naughtily.


"I..!! I..!! Main na..!!" Nandini was too much angry she wanted to say something very bad she knew if she will say anything like this Manik will got angry on her.


"Haan? You what?" Manik said tickling her.


"Manik tell me pleaseee...!!" Nandini said pleadingly.


"Nandini I don't want you to get tensed..!!" Manik became serious.


"I promise I'll not panic..!!" Nandini said shaking hand with him as if really doing the promise.


"Ok..!! Mayank is out of jail..!!" Manik said and waited for Nandini's reaction. He thought that Nandini will start shouting but to his surprise she started laughing.


"Oh God Manik..!! Bus itne si baat..!!" She said pulling his cheeks.


"Tmhy ya itne si baat lag rahi hai Nandini..!!" Manik asked surprisingly.


"Of course Manik..!!" She said poking his nose.


"I can't lose you Nandini..!!" Manik said emotionally and Nandini became serious.


"Manik..! Nothing will happen to me..!! As far as you are with me na..!! I am safe..!! So you na also don't take tension..!!" Nandini said hugging him tight and Manik felt relived hearing her words. Seeing her relax he felt himself relax. Nandini in her mind was screaming like maniac. She was too much afraid but didn't want to show it to Manik. She composed herself.


"Acha Manik..!! We have never seen the fireworks at disneyland...!!" She said looking at the disneyland.


"Hmm..!! You are right..!!" Manik nodded.


"Abhi chalain..!" Nandini said excitedly.


"Aren't you tired?" Manik asked doubtly.


"Uffooo Manik..!! No I am not tired..!! Chalo let's go..!! " Nandini said happily and jumped of Manik's lap. She run towards the room to get ready and Manik smilingly followed her.

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Ok g..!! Update is here..!! Chapter 27. Full of MaNan romance ahaaa..!! Take it as a weekend treat..!! Manik is too much afraid of losing Nandini..!! Nandini is becoming brave now..!! Next update will be of fireworks and some more fun..!! Thank you for the lovely comments on previous chapter..!I love you all so much.! And yeah time for some celebration because our very own Parth Samthaan is back yahooo..!! Hoping for some MaNan scene is reality till than ise pay guzara karo ray baba hehehehe..! Keep smiling..! Keep shining for your love one..!!

Lot of love..

Mawara

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesm!!Awesm!!Awesm!!!!!
full of manan romance...nd wild side of manik.
beautifully penned dr.
cont soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazinng update...
Cont soon...

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI..

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