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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 6 A


Next day it was 7 of the evening Manik was getting ready in his room when as usual Nayonika came in without knocking.


"Mom..!! At least you should knock..!!" Manik said making a baby face.


"And why would I?" Nayonika said naughtily and started picking up his discarded clothes. Manik put on his white blazer. He was wearing a blue shirt and pant. He was very much excited for today. "All the preparations are done..! Your friends will be there anytime soon Manik..!!" Nayonika said putting his clothes in basket.


"Mom..!! Hows am looking?" Manik said excitedly showing Nayonika his

dressing.


"Mera beta duniya ka sab say handsome larka hai..!!"Nayonika said pulling his cheeks.


"Mom..!! Come on be neutral na..!!" Manik said making an annoying face.


"To whom you want to impress with your dressing Manik?" Nayonika asked buttoning his blazer.


"Wo..!! Main Nandini ko acha lagoon ga na?" Manik asked a little hesitant and Nayonika laughed.


"Oh my cute baby..!! Of course she will like you..!! Like you kya she will love you..!!" Nayonika said and Manik hugged her excitedly she hugged him back.

...

Nandini was getting ready. She wore a simple white plane knee length top with blue embroidery and simple plane blue jeans. Don't know but Manik's behavior was giving her some signals which she didn't want to receive. She bought a white lily bouquet. Moreover she bought an elegant fragrance perfume as a gift for Manik. At last she reached Malhotra Mansion. At the entrance she saw Manik standing.

...

Fab4 were here but Nandini hadn't reached yet. Manik was standing on the entrance impatiently waiting for Nandini. For thousands of times Manik had asked Nayonkia if he was looking ok or not. At last he saw Nandini stepping in the Mansion. She was looking beautiful. He smiled at her and waved. She walked towards him.


"Hi..!!" Manik said excitedly.


"Hi..!! Ummm Happy Birthday..!! This is for you..!!" Nandini said in a low tone and handed over him the lilies and his gift.


"Wow..!! I love white lilies..!! How do you know?" Manik asked surprisingly.


"Umm just a guess..!!" Nandini said smilingly.


"Ohh God I am so duffer..!! Please come in..!!" Manik said and lead her in. Fab4, Nayonika and Manik's aunt who Nayonika's best friend greeted her.


"Thank God Nandini you came..!! Manik was impatiently waiting for you..!!" Cabir said laughingly and all joined him. Nandini's sixth sense was guessing it right. Manik was really interested in her. "Aiyapa No..!!" Nandini thought helplessly.


"So now Nandini is here..!! So we should cut the cake..!!" Nayonika said and all nodded. Nayonika along with Roshni aunty went in the kitchen to bring the cake.

...

"Nayo..!! This girl..!! Myny dekha hai isy kahen..!!" Roshni was in a fix.


"Haan? What? Where did you saw her..!!" Nyonika asked surprisingly.


"I don't remember exactly..!!" Roshni said thoughtfully.


"Then try to remember...! Rosh..!!" Nayonika said impatiently.


"Wait a second...!!" Roshni said and started thinking. "Aray haan yaad aya..!! I had saw her on a wedding in Manglore..!! She is Nandini Murthy..!! Wo Rishab Murthy hai na?" Roshni said and Nayonika nodded."Ary woi great business Tycoon..!! She is his sister..!!" Roshni aunty revealed and Nayonika's jaw dropped open in shock.


"What? Tu sach bool rahi hai Rosh?..!!" Nayonika asked worriedly.


"Haan..!! But she is not the same girl yaar..!! The Nandini I saw one year back was very different...!!" Roshi said shaking her head. "She was too much talkative..!! Very lively..!! She kept smiling all the time..! But this Nandini..!!

Naa..!! Ya wo tou ni lagti..!! She is so quiet..!! She don't smile..!!" Roshni said sadly shaking her head.


"Then what happened to her??" Nayonika asked surprisingly.


"I don't know..!!" Roshni said.


"You know Roshni..!! She said to Manik that she don't have a family..! She said that her bhaiya and Bhabhi died..!!" Nayonika said worriedly.


"No no..!! Rishab is alive yaar..!! It's impossible..!!"Roshni said.


"I think something really bad happened with her..!!" Nayonika said sadly.


"I think so..!! Because that Nandini was so lovely girl..!!" Roshni said nodding her head.


"Mom..!! Be quick na..!!" Manik shouted from the lounge.


"Coming beta..!!"Nayonika shouted. "Rosh..!!You will not tell this to anyone ok?" Nayonika said to Roshni and she nodded.

...

At last Nayonika came with the cake. Manik's favorite cake vanilla cake with chocolate icing.Everyone gathered around the cake table. Nayonika lit up the candles.


"Come on Manik..!! Blow the candles..!! And make a wish..!!" Nayonika said excitedly.


"Hmmm..!! My wish is standing beside me..!!" Manik whispered in Nayonika's ear and look at Nandini who was standing beside Manik. Nandini look down. Nayonika smiled and Manik blow the candles. Everyone cheered a happy birthday for Manik and Manik along with Nayonika cut the cake. He fed the first bite to Nayonika. Then to Roshni aunty. After that he walked towards his friends and fed them.


"Manik..! Nandini ko bhi khilaoa cake..!!" Nayonik said smilingly and Manik look at Nandini. He walked towards her and she nervously tucked her hair behind her ears.


"Nandini..!! Cake..!!" Manik said and forward the piece to Nandini. She slowly opened her mouth and Manik fed her the cake. Both were looking in each others eyes lost in their own world. Everyone smiled.


"Chalo bachoon..!! Time for dinner..!!" Nayonik said and MaNan came out of their trance. Nayonika had arranged dinner on the counters. Everyone has to serve by themselves.


"Manik..!! Take care that Nandini eat properly..!!" Nayonika whispered in Manik's ear and he nodded. Nandini took a plate and dish out little rice for her. She sat on a table. As Nayonika and Roshni were sitting on the same table and Fab5 were sitting on the same table. So she was sitting lonely. Again she was least interested in taste of food. She was eating with an expressionless face.


"Manik..!! Nandini akeli hai tu ja us kay pass..!!" Cabir suggested and all nodded.

Manik came towards Nandini and sat beside her.


"Aray tum ny itna thora q dala hai..!! Come I'll dish out some more..!" Manik said and was about to held her plate but Nandini stopped him.


"Manik..!! I am not hungry..!! Mjhy bhook nahi hai sachi..!!" Nandini said in a low tone.


"Are you sure?" Manik asked with a doubt and she simple nodded.


"Bohat kam khana khati ho tum..!!" Manik complained and Nandini didn't answered to him. She quietly kept eating and Manik was constantly blabbering about himself and Nandini was just listening to him. Soon they finished their food.


"Come Nandini..!! I'll show you my house..!!"Manik said and Nandini nodded. Nayonika smiled at Manik and he smiled back.

Manik showed Nandini his house. Different rooms. Then he showed her the Swimming pool. And Suddenly Nandini become too much excited seeing the pool.


"Swimming pool..!!" She exclaimed. And Manik smiled on her excitement.


"You liked it?" Manik asked lovingly.


"Liked it? Oh my God Manik..!! I loved it..!!" Nandini exclaimed with joy for a moment she forget all her worries.


"Can I touch the water in it?" Nandini asked hesitantly and Manik nodded. She jumped with excitement and run towards the pool. Manik smilingly followed her. Nandini sat beside the pool and dipped her feet in it. Manik sat beside her crossing his legs.


"You know Manik..!! I love swimming pool..!! I used to had one at my house..!!" Nandini told Manik and he nodded. Manik gently held her hands in his. Nandini look at him little surprised. He was looking in Nandini's eyes. And Nandini felt like his gaze setting her on fire. Manik slowly brought her hands near his lips and gently kissed them. Nandini was shocked too much numb to react.

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Chapter 6 B

"Manik..!! What are you doing..!!" Nandini said and pull her hands from his soft grip. Although she was loving it but no..!! She can't do this..!!


"Nandini..!! I want to tell you something?" Manik said sliding a little more close to her. "Oh God I was right..!! No Manik please..!!" Nandini thought.


"Manik..!! I am getting late..!! I have to go..!!" Nandini said and got up. Manik immediately got up and held her hand.


"Nandini..!! It's important..!!" Manik said lovingly.


"Manik please..!! Hum phir kabhi baat kar lain gay na..!!" Nandini pleaded. She knew if Manik will say "that" it will be very difficult for her to walk away.


"No Nandini..!! I want to tell you that I..!!" Manik was about to say it but Nandini interrupted him.


"Manik..!! Bye..!!" Nandini freed her hand and started running when Manik's words make her froze on her place.


"I love you Nandini..!!" Manik shouted and Nandini felt dizzy. This was the least thing she wanted to happen. Manik walked towards her and held her hands again.

"Manik..!!" Nandini was speechless.


"Yes Nandini..!! I do love you..!! And I know you love me too..!!" Manik said lovingly. And Nandini closed her eyes. "You have to do this Nandini..!! You have to push him away..!!" She composed herself. Suddenly she jerked Manik's hands away.


"Have you gone nuts Manik Malhotra?" Nandini shouted and Manik was taken aback a little.


"Why would I love you?" She said mockingly.


"Come on Nandini..!! You love me..!! Stop joking ok I am serious..!!" Manik said almost pleadingly.


"I am too serious Manik..!! I DON'T LOVE YOU..!!" Nandini said and turned her face to hide her emotions. Manik shook his head in disbelief.


"No..!! You are lieing..!! You are a liar..!!" Manik shouted. "This can't be wrong no..!! I know you love me..!! Please say it that it's a joke..!!" Manik pleaded and held her arms. Nandini turned her face to control her tears.


"It's true..!!" She said in a low voice.


"Liar..!!" Manik shouted and Nandini closed her eyes. "If you don't love me..!! Then say it looking in my eyes..!!" Manik demanded and Nandini again froze on her place. She can't look in Manik's eyes he can read her easily.


"Stop it Manik..!! Leave me..!!" Nandini shouted.


"I won't..!! Until you accept it that you love me..!!" Manik too shouted.


"I don't love you Manik..!! I..!! I..!! Love someone else..!!" And the biggest lie to Nandini's life."I am sorry Manik..!!" Her heart shouted. Hearing this Manik's grip loosened. He felt unreal.

"You..!! You love..!! You love someone else..!!"Manik talked to himself. And Nandini tried her best not to cry.


"Yes..!! I love someone else..!!" Nandini said. "I am going now..!! Bye..!!"Saying that she started running. Tears started rolling down her cheeks. In her way to out everyone tried to stop her but she didn't stopped and kept running. Suddenly it started raining. She was running aimlessly on the roads.


"I am sorry Manik..!!" She was constantly shouting that. She don't know how she reached her apartment. She fell on her bed and started crying.

...

"What happened to Nandini..!!"Nayonika said worriedly.


"Where is Manik?" All shouted in unison.

...

As soon as Nandini left. Manik fell on his knees it started raining.


"I love someone else..!" Nandini's voice echoed in his ears.


"No...!!" He yelled. "If she loved someone else then what was that which I saw in her eyes..!!" Manik shouted. Meanwhile Nayonika and others came there running. They saw Manik sitting on his knees shouting. Nayonika stopped everyone and she herself walked towards him.

"Manik..!!"She called him lovingly and Manik look at her with eyes blood red due to crying.


"What happened beta? Nandini bhi rotay huay gai..!! Tum bhi ro rahy ho..!!" Nayonika asked worriedly.


"Mom..!! She love someone else..!! No..!! I won't let her do this to me..!! No..!!" Manik said determinedly and got up. "I need to talk to her..!!" Manik said and run out.


"Manik stop..!!" Nayonika tried to stop him but he was gone.


"Aunty main jata hoon is kay peechy..!!" Cabir said and was about to run behind him when Nayonika held his hand.


"Let him go..!! Jab tak wo Nandini ko mana nahi lay ga chain say nahi bethy ga..!!"Nayonika said in a low tone.

...


Manik drove his car as fast as he could and reached Nandini's apartment with in no time. He pressed the doorbell and knocked the door. After sometime Nandini opened the door and she stunned to see Manik in front of her. She didn't changed her clothes and she was too drenched like Manik. Her eyes too were blood red due to crying.


"Manik..!!" She said in a low tone. Manik grabbed her arms after locking the door he dragged her inside.


"I am here to hear the truth Nandini..!!" Manik shouted. "Don't you dare lie to me..! I want to know why are you rejecting my proposal..!!"


"I don't wanna talk to you..!!" Saying that she run towards her bedroom and tried to lock the door. But Manik push the door.


"Don't you dare hide this time Nandini..!! Face me..!! Tell me the truth..!!" Manik yelled and came in her room.


"Get out of my house Manik Malhotra..!!" Nandini shouted helplessly.


"Shhh..!!" Manik said and started walking towards her. She moved backwards and soon she was trapped between Manik and the wall. Manik was about to say something when his eyes fell on the poster behind Nandini. His eyes widened with shock.


"My..!! My poster?" He asked still in shock. And Nandini was now helpless now she came to know that lie really don't have feet.


"None of yours business..!!" Nandini tired for the last time to defend herself.


"Oh shut up..!! You have a poster on mine in your room wall and still this is not my business..!!" Manik again shouted.


"Manik..!! Please don't make it difficult for me..!!" Nandini pleaded.


"Exactly Nandini..!! Don't make it difficult for both of us..!!" Manik said sadly and Nandini lowered her head. She was trapped. Manik was a person who can't be deal with lies. Manik cupped her cheeks and made her look in his eyes.


"Come on Nandini we both know that we love each other..!! Then why are you denying me?" Manik asked looking in her eyes and Nandini had nothing to say except tears. Manik leaned forward and Nandini closed her eyes. He gently placed his lips on her and Nandini felt like thousands of bombs explode in her mind she didn't responded back not because she didn't want to because she was too numb to react. Manik kept kissing her after some time he gently broke the kiss and saw Nandini she was breathing heavily with eyes closed.


"Nandini..!! Open your eyes..!!" Manik said and Nandini slowly opened her eyes and look into Manik. She was helpless. "Nandini am I not worthy for your love? Am I that bad?" Manik asked painfully and Nandini placed her palm on his lip shaking her head in a no.


"Manik please..!! You are not bad..!! It's not like that you are not worthy..!!" Nandini said sadly. Manik gently removed her hand from his mouth.


"Then what?" Manik said sadly.


"It's..!! The thing is..!!" Nandini said hesitantly. "I am not worthy for anyone's love Manik..!! Main tmhry pyaar kay kabil nahi hoon Manik..!!" Nandini said sadly and tears rolled down her cheeks.


"What do you mean?" Manik asked confusely.

...

Update..!! Hahahahaha..!! Ok it's pretty early isn't it? But dkho I managed to give you an early update...!! Ok Manik proposed Nandini but Nandini refused..!! Next update will be of MaNan..!! Nandini's past revelation..!! I felt like crying for MaNan. Please don't kill me for the sad part..!! But the story needs it...!! Most awaited Manik ny poster dkh liya wow..!! And Manik kissed Nandini hyeee..!! Finally right? Hahahaha..!! Ok tell me by your comments whether you like it or not..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones :)

Lots of love..

Mawara..


Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsummm !!! I just loved this part :)
So beautifully you have portrayed their emotions.
Waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome nai seriously it was amazing .
I loved it and manan kiss ahh I know it was not a passionate one but still it was beautiful...
I am happy that finally manik will come to know everything about nandini 's past and we are also very eager to know that y is nandini pushing manik away from her when she knows that she loves him and he also love him very much .
waiting eagerly for the suspense part.
Update soon...
And now plz update tum mile today coz during weekends we r only alive coz of ur faanfics so plzz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
SUPER AWESOME!!
u described the scenes perfectly!!
loved it
continue soon
it was an amazing update
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
U love 2 shocked me yaar .1st ur tum miley story
N now it
I'm again speceless
I have no word for u to describe
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely chapter
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I felt like crying too !! It was too painful :/
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey sweetie. .. ur both stories r awesome. .

but the most attracted me was your own comment about the update after your each update. ..

just find it too cute. ... really cute. ..

keep doing these cute things. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manya_189

I felt like crying too !! It was too painful :/

:( it was painful :(

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