Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 99

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

I didn't like the smurfy part.. other was really awesome

the way he was missing her and the way she was getting insecure of that secretary :)

you didnt like the smurfy part but why i added this for some comedy dont you like my humour

Originally posted by: Coolgal_muskan

Hey!! Awsum chapter!!! Thank u so much for wrinting this mast one...jus luved d helpless manik.😛😉he was so cute n ofcourse nandinis self talks...d most hilarious part was when nandini described manik with products😆😆. Jus luved ur writing.pls udate d nxt chapter asap...bye!!!

hehe tht product part i too love it dont knw frm where i got those stupid idea really ha but you are still like this emotional comedy ff just cnt believe this and i will update asap

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

you didnt like the smurfy part but why i added this for some comedy dont you like my humour

Originally posted by: yash7717

The jaw hardened some more like

birla white cement, his lips thinned

some more like Gillette rajor blade

and eyes narrowed like slits. He

was kind of miniature, tamed n

indian version of the incredible

hulk.

TO HELL WITH HER!

wait..he mentioned

You wanted to talk to her

Still

Stilll

still, HELL WITH HER!

He fumed in a anger

As if someone has

put MDH ki deghi mirch inside his

nose. urgghh.. Hahahahahahahathis was super awesome...



And I am back home after so many days...and at 12 midnight I am being scolded by my mom to laugh so loudly...


You are really awesome dear...
I love each and every word u write...

And Manik and Nandi I...hahahhahai love their way they fight...
Love you for this awesome vala update...


And hurray new thread...
Go on dear...we are on full support...




Loads f love
Gbu


And yea...update soon

hehehe aise jb haste hue koi datt deta hai na to or hasi ati hai and this dialogues i myself dont know frm where i got dis dialogues seriously ha or yes i m too exicted for new thread and thank you for your support

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

i like the humour but you had set the mood in the beginning of the update, I am not quite comfortable with instant mood shifts

mood shifts means like last update is emotional and this one funny right you wanted to say this actually i dont want to drag those things thts why i did this and humour is the part of my story its kinda emotional comedy but still i didnt get it what you want to say plz clear this if i m at falut thn i m will surely gonaa work on it

Originally posted by: Muskankhanpani

<font size="6">first of all a very happy birthday and may all ur wishes and dreams come true have a great year ahead and im hoping that this thread ends soon because cant wait for next chapter coming back to today's part was awesome both were dealing with their feelings andya smurfy part was just awesome the way he barked in devil malhotra i wad really laughing by reading that part of smurfy towel </font><font size="6">he washed his face for 45mins oh my god was a really a great fun learning that</font>

thank you so much for your wish ans you all make my birthday so special this was the best birthday of my life and about the smurfy part i too love our little malhotra he is my trum card for comedy or he is the only one who cn scare the devil and agn thnks fr the cmnt i hope ye thread jaldi khatam ho jaye

Originally posted by: sri_valli

first of alll happy b'day dear...and cmng to update...the funniest update I have ever read...ha ha ha...i read the full update 4-5 times and still not get over it...restless manik and jelous nandini are treat to read...the message - back space thing was very naturally writen...i liked that part...manik's self talks and fight btw his heart and mind are amazingly penned...waiting for ur next update dear...

thank u dear fr your wish and 4 5 times omg i myself read this only one time tht to.correction but i m glad you like my story i will update soon

Happy Belated Birthday!! Awesome update!! Very funny update!!

Originally posted by: HTA111

Happy birthday

Omg superb fantastic marvellous update

Manik was so restless for not seeing Nandu in front of him and he is missing her badly and he wants to apologise for his misunderstanding but smurfy ruined his chance as Nandu was also not feeling good today as she wants to know what manik will be doing

Manan attraction towards each other is increasing now and its soon when they will be making out

Continue soon and thanks for pm

thank you for your wish and about the make out usme thoda sa tym hai may be some more 10 updates but ussey jyda nh i wont drag those things but still there is a little time for romance and yes attraction is increasing now well no need to thank me for pm its my duty rest u will know in next updates

Originally posted by: DWJensenackles

Hey! I just started reading this FF today!

I love it!

This update was so funny!

Has has ke pet me dard ho raha hai!

Oh god! Save me!

Hahahahahahahaha

Continue soon!

Please PM me if its not a problem!

Love, Pari :)

sure i will i hope you are in my buddy list it seems like again i got a new reader i m happy atleast you are not my silent reader so thanks for your comments its means alot for me if u r not in my buddy list thn buddy me