Devil's Bride Manan ff thread 2 link on page 150 - Page 7

Originally posted by: zooni.shah

Do I need to tell uh about how much I love this ? Well yes I need to say that cuz u deserve it aashu amazing as always see one day ur hardwork will really payoff, hilarious , interesting and devilish I loved it so much keep writing n continue soon

THE AMAZING READERS OF MY DEAREST FRIEND PLEASE SHOWER ALL UR LOVE U CAN GIVE TO A WRITER SHE REALLY PUTS ALOT OF HARDWORK WELL I KNOW HOW MUCH SHE DOES TO GIVE UH PEOPLE THE UPDATE EVERY DAY KEEP LIKING N COMMENTING

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

He always says get lost. I wonder how he will react when she will actually get lost one day

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Mind blowing update

Its full of comic incidences

Loved each and every bit

I mean first she was 30 seconds late, for which she got punishment of 2 hours

And then she was 30 seconds early

Then the sketch she made in which a devil was smiling showing his teeth

And when she wanted to throw the crumbled sketch of the devil in trash bin, it landed in front of the devil's feet due to gravity [ Newton's law]

She stares at the paper ball with HOPE that it burns & turns to ashes but it was instead laughing at her😆😆

Then the statue part

And later when the devil looks at the sketch he didn't recognize himself.🤣

And he always tells "Get Lost" (And u replied someone's comment that he's gonna regret saying this)

But You've succeeded in making this a damn funny part

Hats off👏👏👏

But why did he get angry when he heard Dhruv's name???

Cont ASAP

Originally posted by: Shahnazzie101

What a story all I can say is Wowww keep it up

Originally posted by: Serendipity2015

Loved the update...too funny I was laughing throughout at Nandani's antics, the way u potrayed her is damn cute!

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