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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
awsm update
plzz want manan as a couple
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow amazing update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dear,
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
awsomeee read all parts in one go loved it
continuee soon plsss
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 7
Next morning in the clg
All r in canteen chitchatting abt
yesterday party n laughing
Kabir : wese kya thapad mara nandu
ne manik ko thnk god uski jgh me nh
tha
Manik n nandu give him a i will kill
you look
Kabir : arey yr ab tum dono look b
same same de rh ho
Nandu : shut up kabir
Kabir : nh nh nandu bta n tune traning
li h kya boxing ki jb dekho marti rhti h
sbko mukti yd h wo bechara ldka jisko
nandu ka famous punch mila tha
Manik : kya kya kn ldka
Kabir : arey ha wo n
Nandu : kabir no
Kabir : arey kya hua btane de n
Navya was confused : ha kabir btao na
muje b nh pta h
Kabir : ha to sb suno
Ek br kya hua n ek ldke ne canteen me
jan buj kr hmari nandu ko dhaka mara
tb isne bola cant you see dekh nh skte
ho tum tb wo guy kuc extra hi attitude
dikha ke bola arey tum gir oh poor grl
wese grls hoti hi poor h chlo koi bt nh
tumhe kahi lgi to nh na tb hmari nandu
ka gussa satve aasman pr phuch gya
or wo boli oh mr mind your tounge ok
or else i will
Or i will wht he said kya krogi marogi
n forwrd his cheek towards nandu n
jitne pyr se usne apna gaal aage kia
ye boltey ke kya krogi marogi maro
utne hi pyr hmari nandu ne apne apne
soft soft hato se usey aisa punch dia n
ke uske lips se bleeding hone lgi
Tb we all r in shock n tht guy was hell
angry n he came forwrd to hit hr bt agn
thud isne usey dusre gaal pr b jor se
punch mara poor guy to ye thi hmari
nandu nh nh hmari pyri mery com ke
famous punch ki story
All r burst into laughtr
Manik : wohhoo tbi me sochu tumhara
thapad itna jor se kese pda ab tk drd
ho rh h
Kabir : aftr all ye nandu ka 2.5 kilo ka
hath h jise parta h wo uthta nh uth jata
h
Nandu was hell angry nw kabir tuje ye
2.5 kilo ka hath khana h kya
Kabir : no no ye tu apne manik ke liye
bcha kr rkh
Manik : oii kya manik ke liye bcha kr
rkh or ye to jungli bili h agr iska hath
pdh gya n to mera handsome face khrb
ho jyega yr
Nandu : manik tum b fine i m going
N she walked out
Abhi : arey baby doll sunn na
Mukti : gyi wo ab mnao usey jkr
Kabir : arey yr ab wo manegi nh
Alya : guys me jkr bt krti hu
All : ok
Alya to herself : finally muje ussey bt
krne ka mouka mila
Alya came to nandu
Nandu : kya hua alya
Alya : nothng wo tum gussa ho gyi so
me tumhe lene ayi hu
Nandu : alya tum jao muje nh ana
Alya : hmm chlo koi bt nh me yehi beth
jati hu
Nandu : ok
Alya : nandini can i ask u smthng
Nandu : sure
Alya : u n manik r together
Nandu was shocked : no alya we r bst
frnds
Alya : oh thn uski koi gf hai ya nh.
Nandu : nh
Alya :bt how would you knw tumne
pucha usey
Nandu : nh bt i guess
Alya : oh comeon nandini tum apni
mrji se kese bol skti ho wo smart h
handsome h hot h i m sure bht si grls
ne use approach kia hoga
Nandu : pr aisa hota to wo muje btata
Alya : tum kl hi mile ho ho skta h
tumhari bt na hui ho is bare me
Nandu to herself ; ya shes right hmari
is bare me bt nh hui wht if agr uski koi
gf hui to
Alya : hey nandini whr you lost
Nandu : alya i dnt have any ideas abt
this
Alya : ok fine chlo chltey hai waps
Nandu : tum jao muje kuc km h library
me
Alya : ohk n leave
Nandu : shes ryt uski gf ho skti h pr
usne muje btya nh
Now a new conversation start between
her mind n heart
Heart : nandu wht r u thinking aisa nh
ho skta hai
Mind : arey y nt he is smart handsome
hot each n every grl cn fall for him thn
y not
Heart : bt nandu aisa hota to wo btata
tuje pr usne kuc nh btya aisa to
Mind : arey pr alya ne bola to is bare
me bt nh hui so btata kese
Heart : bt agr uski gf hui toh phr
Mind : arey bt hui b to y its bother to
you tum dono to bst frnd ho n you must
happy fr him
Heart : happy no way
Mind : bt y
Nw nandu is hell angry
Nandu : you both r jst shut up i have to
find it muje manik se bt krni pdegi

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So here's the next part do share ur views l
Note: I won't b able to post DEVILS BRIDE today due to some personal reasons sorry for that and keep loving my ff's take care
Edited by Aashna_chawla - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Lovely update dear
but why that Aliya is not getting Manik out from her head ?
Please update the nxt part soon and thnx for pm .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wooow awsome srssly cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
jus now i read all part in one go...its jus wow...amazing story..jus loved it..u penned it soo beautifully...ur such an awsm writer...the way u write is outstanding...i am totally in love with ur ff...plsss update soon eagerly waiting for next part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hi Meghna here,just read all d parts at a go awesome story loving it. Jab part 1 mein Manik said that he is Dhruv i was like what the...ise toh abhi padna parega.aur Nandini yaar ekdum pagal hai kuch bhi fat se kar deti hai...wen she slapped him i actually said "OUCH!!!" lyk out loud god who dus that..?koi nai this chapter was also really good I think u write really fast so yeah... update soon. Good bye and night.

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