Dark lovers manan ff (part8) updated at page 7

Nandini murthy: she used to be a very
bubbly sweet girl and must say she is
damn beautiful any guy can fall for
her sweetness...her father died in a
car accident n mother died frm cncer
she is joining d famous space
academy coz she loves music
...belongs to a rich family,..she is a
pure tamilian...
Shes is very kind heart n helpfull too
Manik Malhotra: a very charming and
handsome guy ...his looks r enough
to make a grl fall on her
knees...belongs to a rich family has
parents who loves him bt they died he
lives in us n coming to india for
studies in space ... .. love for him is
trust and is d most purest relationship
Kabir navya mukti alya n abhi r same
in the show bt they r frnds with
nandini
Dhurv vedant : best buddy of manik
lives in us bt came to india with manik
n join the space college he loves
music
Guys thts the charactr sketch of my
nw story how is it

Part 1
In the morning
A grl sleeping on her queen size bed n
lost in her dream n sudden wake up
with a jerk coz hr alarm buzz oh god
its 7 i have to nw n agn same dream of
manik manik tum kb aaoge i m waiting
fr you come soon na she got up frm
the bed n move towards the washroom
took a showr n getting fr the college
In college
Alya : yr ye nandini kha rh gyi ab tk
ayi kyu nh thodi dr me cls shuru ho
jyegi
Kabir : ati hogi khoi hogi apne manik
ke sapno
Nandini came there
Kabir : lo aa gyi madam kha thi ab tk
Nandini : arey wo muje uthne me late
ho gya
Mukti : ha we knw ke tu apne manik ke
sapno me khoi hogi
Nandini blushed
Kabir : oh jungli bili tu sharmati b h
kya
Nandini hit him playfully
Kabir : ouchh dekha agn jungli bili
mode on
Nandini : kabir shut up yr chle cls ke
liye late ho rh h
Aftr the cls
Mukti : yr is sadu ne to aj pka hi dala
Alya : ha mukti muje to ab chkr hi aa
rh h
Kabir : yr chlo canteen chltey h muje
bhuk lgi h
Mukti : tuje khane ke siwa kuc sujta hi
nh h kya
Kabir : nh ab chle lady bhim
They all mov towards canteen
In the canteen
Navya : wese nandini tumhara manik
hoga to bht handsome na mtlub jis trh
tum btati ho ussey lgta h
Nandini : ha bchpn me n wo bht cute
tha pta nh ab kesa hoga hum 8 sal se
nh mile
Kabir : yr tu b had krti h jiska tuje ata
pta hi b nh h uske sapne dekh rh h 8
sal se nh mili tu ussey phr b uska wait
kr rh h tuje kya lgta h wo ayega yha
itni dur tere liye ab tk to wo tuje bhul b
gya hoga
Nandini : kabir aisa nh hone wala h
muje aj b wo din yd h me jb india aa rh
thi usne mujse promiss kia tha ke wo
mere 19 th bdy pr india ayega wo kbi
apne promiss nh todta h n see the
braclet usne muje dia tha or same
uske ps b h i knw wo ayega mere 19 th
bdy me bs ek week bki h i knw ke wo
jrur ayega thts y i m still waiting fr
him
Kabir : ok ok chl ab teri ye sad
+intezar stry bnd kr hum chltey h nxt
cls ka tym ho rh h
All move towards the cls room
In the us
Manik is sitting wid his guitar n dhurv
came there
Dhurv : hey buddy kya ho rh h
Manik : nthng bs aise hi dhurv : i knw
tu nandini ke bare me soch rh h
Bt manik tuje pta h ke wo kha h kesi h
tu ussey kitne waqt se nh mila
Manik : wo mumbai me h space clg
me mene pta kia n hum b to wai ja rh
h n fr are studies
Dhurv : really studies ke liye ke
nandini ke liye chl thk h i m hapy fr
you n exicted too i want meet your
nandini
Manik : ya sure
You cn meet hr very soon pta h dhurv
mene usey promiss kia tha ke me
uske 19 th bdy pr usey milunga ek
week ke bd uska bdy h i m going to
fullfill my promiss see this braclet
aisa hi sme uske ps b h ye muje mere
promiss yd dilata h
Dhurv : bt buddy tuje kese pta ke wo
tera wait kr rh h i mean tum itne waqt
se nh mile ek dusre ko ho skta h ke wo
bhul gyi ho
Manik : aisa nh hoga dhurv i knw shes
waiting fr me n chl ab chltey h kl subh
early morning flyte h
Dhurv : ok buddy gn
Manik : gn
Manik to himself : i m coming i m
going to fullfill my promise very soon
Guys thts the frst prt of my story hope
you lyk n the story is written
by me should i continue or not... "

Awesome start dea. ...

Beautifully written..😳
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Take care...

Part 2
In the morning
Manik : buddy jldi chl flyte nikl jyegi
Dhurv : ya manik i m coming
Both r left fr airport
Dhurv : bht jld hi hm india me hnge
Manik happily ya i m so excited
Manik to himself : i m coming nandini
wait fr me
In india nandini's house
Shes sleeping on hr bed n dreming abt
manik
Both r in terrace n manik is gazing to
the starts
Lil nandi : manik tumko stars itne kyu
psnd h
Lil manik : coz wo shine krte h
Lil nandi :arey shine to mere fireflies
b krte h to phr tumko stars hi kyu psnd
h
Lil manik : coz they r shine fr me n
winked at hr
Lil nandi : but manik muje stars nh
psnd h n make a cute angry pout
tumko unko mt dekho
Lil manik : thn phr mere liye shine kn
krega
Lil nandi : me hu n tum n hmesha
mere sth rho n i will i will shine fr you
hmesha
Lil manik : oh it means your my
shining star
Lil nandi : yes manik
Lil manik : n i love my shining star so
much
Lil nandi : i love you too manik n gave
him a kiss on his cheek
Sudden she wake up agn bcz of hr
alarm
Nandini : aiyaapa phr woi sapna manik
tum kb aaoge i m waitng fr you
Oh shitt i m agn late i have to go
In the clg
Kabir : yr shes agn late ye nandini kbi
nh sudhregi
Nandini reachd
Abhi : le aa gyi hy baby doll good
morning
N hug hr
Nandu : gm abhi
Kabir : you agn late
Nandu sry n make a cute pout
Kabir : arey sudden aj jungli bili ldki
kese bn gyi
Nandu give him a angry glare kabirrr
Kabir : acha acha thk h pr aj tu itna
glow kyu kr rh h kuc khs bt h
Nandu : ha aj me bht khush hu
Navya : kyu hme b to btao
Nandini : pta nh bs aj kuc acha hone
wala h
Alya : arey bina kisi wjh ke tum itna
glow kr rh ho kya bt h
Nandini : pta nh bs aj kuc to nw hoga
Kabir : ha new to hoga jb sir cls se
nikl denge to nw hi hua roj se to alg h
Nandu : oh ha hum late ho rh h chlo
In the airport
Dhurv : buddy we reachd
Manik : ha india aa gye bs ab clg jana
h
Dhurv : arey phle apartment to chle
phr clg jayenge
Manik : ok
Both left frm there
Aftr the cls
Nandini is going library bt she colied
withsome she ws abt to fall bt some
hold hr who was non othr thn manik
malhotra both look each othr n they
share there first eye lock they bck to
there senses whn dhurv call manik
Dhurv : buddy kya hua
Manik to nandu : cnt you see dekh kr
nh chl skti
Nandu in angry tone : smne itna bda
khamba khda hoto kese dikhega manik
: kya kha tumne
Nandu : jo suna tumne khmba
Manik : how dare you ha ek to mene
tumhe bchaya thnk you bolne ki jgh
tum muje attitude dikha rh ho
Nandu : oh hlo thnk you bole meri juti
glti tumhari thi evn tumhe muje sry
bolna chiye
Manik wht me sry bolu tumhe tum jnti
ho me kn hu
Nandu : nh itni b bdi hasti nh ho tum jo
me tumhe yd rkhu
Manik : youuu
Meanwhile dhurv came there n stop
him buddy chl yha se
Manik : ha chl muje shok nh h issey bt
krne ka both r leftfrm there
Navya : nandu chl jana h n both r mov
towrds the library
Aftr compliting all the formalities of
addmission dhurv n manik mov
towards the audi
Dhurv : yr nandini ko dhundge kese
Manik : alg alg hoke dhundtey h
puchtey h sbse
Dhurv : ok tu right ja me left jata hu
Both mov to there directions
Aftr some time dhurv n nandu met
Dhurv : kya ap nandini murthy ko jnti
ho
Nandu : ha pr ap kn
Dhurv : wo me manik malhotra usey
dhund rh the kya bta skti ho wo kha h
Nandini : u r manik oh manik i m so
happy to see you here n hug him
Dhurv : arey listen wo me manik
Manik saw thm n thinks meri jungli
bili abi tk nh bdli aj b ld rh h abi btata
hu
Manik came there
Manik : hy nandini i m dhurv vedant
manik's buddy
Dhurv : buddy ye kya
Precap : fight fight fight
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Originally posted by: Sakshi_maheta

Beautifully written..😳
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Take care...

thank u dear part2 posted😊

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Part 3
Nandini agn hug manik (dhurv)
Nandini : oh manik i miss you so
much how cn i tell u ke mene tumhe
kitna miss kia n broke the hug
Kabir : so finally you met your sapno
ka rajkumar ha real manik smiles
heard this frm kabir
Alya mukti kabir abhi navya all say hy
to dhurv n manik
Kabir : guys ab chlna b h ya nh
canteen chltey h bhuk lgi h muje
Mukti : koi nyi bt kr yr ye to roj ka h
Kabir : bht bhuk lgi h muje le kr li nyi
bt
Chlo ab
All r mov towrds the canteen
Real dhurv : muje kuc km h guys tum
jao hum ate h buddy come wid me all
nodded there head in yes n left frm
there
Manik : kya hua dhurv
Dhurv : buddy ye kya kia tune mtlub
muje manik kyu btya in front of
everyone
Manik : arey chill tu bs pretend manik
bn ja or dekh me kya krta hu n
smriked devishly
In the canteen
Dhurv n manik reach there
Kabir : aa gye sb chlo ab kuc khtey h
All : ok
Aftr some time nandini look at real
manik both r looking each othr
Manik : kabir wese tumhari frnd h to
jungli bili ate hi mujse jgd rh thi
Nandu glare him angry
N said acha tum kya kr rh the glti
tumhari thi tumne jgda kia
Real manik : tumne kia
Nandu : tumne
M : tumne
Kabir : guys stop it u r behaving lyk
childs sb log dekh rh h
Alya : wese dhurv (manik) hme apne
bare me kuc btao na i mean tum itne
smart or handsome ho tumhari koi gf h
Real manik : no alya i m singl wo kya
h n sb ldkiyan mujpr marti h pr dnt lyk
thm isliye or koi khs mili nh tumhari
trh beautifull or bki ldkiyon ko to me
dekhta tk nh hu n gave a devil look to
nandu
Nandu : sara tym to tum ldkiyon ko
ghurtey rhte ho
Manik : oh hlo me bht shareef admi hu
Nandu : admi oh to u r a man
Manik : yes i m man jo bht shareef hai
Nandini : thn fr me you r khadus uncle
Manik : whatt
Nandini : arey tumne kha ke tum man
ho to boy to nh ho n i m young it
means bde hue tum mujse to hue n
uncle n khadus to tum shkl se hi ho to
phr hue n khadus uncle n give him a
devil look
Manik : wht kind of logic is this
Nandini : its nandini murthy's logic
khadus uncle
Kabir : khadus uncle nyc name nandu
Manik : tb its nt logic its a pure bkwas
jo tum hmesha krti ho
Nandu : how dare you
Manik : wht sahi to kha mene tum or
tumhari bkwas bnd kro
Manik to himself : oh god ye ldki
bchpn me monstr bulati thi ab khadus
uncle bula rh h i mean wht kind of
logic is this mere parents ne itna acha
nam dia hai manik manik means
diamond or ye ldki muje khadus uncle
chiii me chodunga nh isey
Nandini waves hr hnd in front of hr oh
hlo kha kho gye khadus uncle
Manik : agr or ek br tumne ye bola n to
me b tumhe btaunga
Nandu : kya btaoge ha
Manik : you chipkali
Nandu : how dare you call me chipkali
Manik : thn how dare you call me tht
khadus uncle
Nandu : urrrghh i m nt going to leave n
takes a plate of noodles n throw on
him
Manik : wht the hell
N takes anothr plate n throw on hr
Nandu : aah me nh chodungi tumhe
Manik : me b nh
Both started fighting lyk tom n jerry
manik pulling hr hair
Kabir abhi dhurv stop manik n mukti
alya navya stop nandu
Mukti : guys kya kr rh ho sb log sirf
tumhe dekh rh h
Nandu : isey bolo dur rhe mujse
Manik : muje shok nh h tumhare ps
ane ka
Nandu : oh really tumne khadus pan
me bechlors ki degree li h kya
Manik : nh masters ki li h dikhau
tumhe
Nandu : nh tumhari shkl se tapak rha h
tumhara khadus pan koi b bta de you
khadus uncle
Manik you chipkali
Kabir : guys issey phle ye dono ek
dusre ka khoon kr de yha se le chltey
h inhe
Boys r drag to manik n grls r dragging
nandini to the clsroom
Mukti : nandu tu kya kr rh h is trh se
kyu lad rh h usey
Nandu : arey mene kya kia jo kia usne
kia
Alya : stop it yr nandu wo kitna smart
or handsome h aise ldke se tum ld
kese skti ho
Nandu : smart or hndsme my foot
bndar h wo ek no ka
Navya : arey chlo thk h ab gr chltey h
clg ka tym khtm ho gya h
All : ok
Anothr cls room
Dhurv : buddy kya krrh h tu ussey itna
jgda kyu kr rh h
Manik : arey mene kya kia wo jgd rh
thi mujse or dekha nh kese nam rkh rh
thi yukkk me chodunga nh usey
Abhi : arey hmari nandu itni cute or
innocent h tum usey aise kese jgda kr
skte ho
Manik : cute or innocent my foot
chipkali h wo bandariya kahi
Kabir : agr usne sun lia n to mar
dalegi tuje
Manik : me drta hu kya ussey ane do n
Dhurv : ok ok aj ke liye bht hua ab
chltey h
All : ok
Manik's house
Manik : ye ldki khud ko smjti kya h
kese nam rkh rh thi wese ye bilkul nh
bdli bchpan me b itni cute or innocent
thi aj b bilkul wesi h or jungli bili b pr
manik agr usey pta chla n ke tune
ussey jhuth bola h to sch me wo apne
panje se tujpe aisa war kregi n ke teri
shkl sch me monstr jesi ho jyegi ha pr
jo b ho usko pareshn krne me muje
bda mja aa rh or me itni jldi usey nh
btaunga
Nandini's house
Nandu : ye ldka khud ko smjta kya h
muje chipkali bula rh tha khud ki shkl dekhi h kbi bndr h pura mera manik dekho kitna sweet innocent h ek min pr manik sweet or innocent kb se ho gya or to or shy kbse ho gya bchpan me to wo pura monstr tha phr ab ky ho gya or uska wo frnd dhurv muje to aisa lga jese wo mera manik wo bilkul manik ki trh behave kr rh tha ek min Ohh shitt mene ye phle kyu nh notice kia manik ke face pr lips ke upr ek mole tha bchpan me jo abi manik ke face pr nh h pr dhurv ke face h pta nh kyu aisa lg rh h smthng is fishy bt wht ek min kahi manik dhurv or dhurv manik to nh iska mtlub manik ne khud dhurv ke or dhurv ne khud ko manik ke sth chng kr dia to manik bn gya dhurv or dhurv bn gya urrrghh its too confusing pr agr ye sch hua n to mr manik malhotra you have to pay fr thi i m nt going to leave you ab dekho me kya krti hu
Precap : big big drama

Ohhh haha this is gonna be so much fun :P