Enchanted - a manan ff link for new thread and part 14 in the indexl - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
Where r u and how is ur health?
Waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar when will b next part posted
Plzzz post jaldi
Plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
When are u going to update. .. its been really long ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yooo amu di!!!
That was an interesting prologue
And chappy 1

Dhruv ka debut in bollywood that was first thing cracked me really hard... Mtlb is chomu ko kisne kamm diya!!! Bollywood ka kya hoga!!
Chalo coming back to story...

Manik cares for her but is not in love with her... Chacha chachi cruel.. Hard to imagine thou... Nyonika so cool and kind... Even more harder to imagine!!! Lol

Nice start... Manik is bit heartless but caring at same time... Oky i am actually confused for his character and nature her!!!

So m hoping to next chappyyy!
Stay happy stay blessed
Mish shergill
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Posted: 10 years ago
Indeed he is a confused soul frustated on his own behaviour and finds nandini foolish fir confessing her love from him and himself being unknown to his own feeling!

Watch thing was cute gesture and manik did wear it as he started liking and nandini must be thinking its out of love maybe!

Ek min whats happening!!! First he is irriatted with naina then he himself flirts back!!!

Diii this i love u manik scene gave me ekta kapoor ke serial wali feel

Diii i m super confused...

Stay happy stay blessed
Mishshergill
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey i m new reader of ur story...
d concept is completely different ...
liked it ...
cont soon
Edited by manandeeplove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
the story ended?when will you continue?eagerly waiting...updattteee
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heya how are you feeling now? I m here dying to read next chapter of your story its so much ammazing i know i m sounding so mean but wat to do its your fault that u write so much lovely ff realy love this anyways if you are better now and able to write easily without any problem so please please continue your stor..
Dnt forget to pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz.pst nxt prt eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys am so sorry...I know am very late..but my health and my finals was keeping me very busy...I really do wanna give regular updates but kuch na kuch ho jatha hein. And I evn typed a whole part in between my exams but cuz of bad network d whole thing got deleted. So again a very big sorry to all my readers.
Part:

Seeing Nandini on hospital bed was not easy for manik. He was more confused with all the things happening within him and in the outside world. 'Someone shot Nandini. Why? She never did anything to anyone. Then who did that? And why?' His thoughts were growing wild like the vines. But he didn't have any answers. His thoughts were broken by a faint cough. "Nandini" he snapped his head to her side. She was trying to get up. "Stop" he literally screamed at her for even trying to move.

Manik slowly made her sit by keeping pillows on her back for support. "Pani" Nandini said in a feeble voice. She was pale and weak. Her weakened frame just added more misery to what manik was going through. He wasn't making an eye contact with her and she noticed it. "Mani" she called him softly. But he didn't look at her. He just passed the glass filled with water to her. She drank it in a go. She silently passed the glass to him while silently watching him.

She knew he was not the normal self. He wasn't scolding her for not being carefully.. Damn!!he wasn't even looking at her properly. Nandini gently placed her hand on his nd tugged him to sit beside her. He sat beside her looking at their intertwined fingers. "Please look at me" she pleaded. She could take an angry rude manik but not the guilty and vulnerable. It broke her more. "Am fine..look at me..see nothing happened. Am the same Nandini..yea but with some bullet holes I guess" she tried to joke and giggle but the wounds were still fresh. "Stop" he shouted. "This is not funny. Which part of this seems funny to you huh? Am going crazy and you are joking. Its not funny. You get that. NOT FUNNY." His outburst made Nandini realise it wasn't that easy to calm him.

She held his collar slowly. Manik didnt flinch. She held his face close to hers and took him in a slow, passionate, filled with love kiss. He didn't respond at first, he let her do whatever she wanted. In bottom of his heart he just wanted to crush her in his embrace to soothe his aching heart. She slowly licked his lips seeking his permission which he readily accepted. Her tongue glided and caressed his mouth making him groan softly. He broke the kiss first sensing her being breathless.. "You have become very careless" manik said in between his ragged breathe. Nandini kept her forehead on his and replied "I know you'll be there" and smiled.

Love is weird. Love is impulsive. Love is being g crazy mad and utterly idiotic in each others presence. Manik could be himselfinfront of Nandini and Nandini could be this bold girl infront of him. But will that stop the evil lurking around them from hurting this blooming love. Will manik and Nandini have a real love story or will it end before manik could realise?

Again sorry for the late update. Sorry if the update is short. I update from my phone. And there won't t be any pm for this update too.. Do like and leave ur comments.

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