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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW i loved the story
ADULT but fun
please do continue
add me in the PM list
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: starflee

I'm gald u liked the story that made u read it one go and our cabir's best job is cupid yes they work in fashion house but its owned by nandini and manik is her business partner like a major share holder in the company he runs the whole malhotra industries sideways but most of the time spends in fashion house and for pm u need to buddy me okay take care thankyo


Ohh thank for the info
When will u upload next part ??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Holla!! guyzz I'm back I'm sooo happy with the response if I get such responses na il update daily and haa ow don't disappear everyone again okay I want same number of comments and I think my punishment worked for you guyzz so I don't think you all want such punishment again so keep commenting
enjoy reading

A special update for my friend Alisha_ash

CHAPTER 13

"THANKYOU" nandini said and moved away but manik hekd her wrist and stopped her

"for what?" he asked all confused

"uhmm.. for understanding me yesterday" she smiled and said "need to go bye" and left from there leaving a complete baffled manik

"shes crazy" he said and smiled and ruffled his hairs

All these were watched by a pair of eyes none other than our detective cabir

"hmm I was right as I have never seen manik blushing but this holding hand wont give me the way to confront them I need to catch them in some other way " he said with a smirk

Nandini after that went to check on abhi but the scene infront of him completely left her shocked mukti was in abhi's arms and abhi was holding her protectively both were lost in each other forgetting about the world nandini went to them but still they didn't noticed her standing beside them

"ahem ahem.." this brought them out of their trance and the looked here and there

"i think I came on wrong time I'm leaving" nandini said and was about to move

"noo" they both said in unison and looked at each other

"so whats happening guyzz did I miss out something?" nandini said rasing her eyebrow

"nothing happening" they again said in unison

"so like that only she was in your arms" she said tryind hard to stop her laughter looking at their faces

"iwohh its just she tripped and I saved her"abhi replied controlling his blush

"yeahh" mukti seconded him

"okay but don't you think tooo looong she was in your arms what u were saving her from?" nandini said and looked at abhi

"nothing like u are thinking" mukti said this time

"really so what am I thinking" nandini replied with a smirk

"don't you think you speak too much nandu" abhi said giving angry glare to her

"ohh drama queen shutup don't change the topic" nandini replied "anyways mukti I think now you only look after his outfits and everything" she said with a mischevious tone and winked at abhi

"uhmm wohh nandini me but.." mukti tried to say but was cut in middle

"come on mukti you know this will make your bond strongeerrr" nandini said stretching the last words

"I'm having some work bye" both said in unison and blushed and left in a hurry

"listen..." she laughed looking at both of their conditions

"nandini mam" stephie called her from behind

"yes stephie" nandini was back in her professional zone

"the outfits are ready for your trial " she said

"okay keep in the changing room I'm coming in a sec" nandini said

Stephie kept her dress in changing room and went meantime nandini also came there and locked the door she changed into the dress it was a lehenga choli which had a golden shimmery strapless blouse which was supported by strings at the back only it was covering only her upper part her wsist was bare and the blouse was giving a clear view to her back and a peachish pink lehenga she was looking ethereal but she got stuck in her blouse as her strings got entangled with each other 'shitt now what shoud I do its stuck I cant even remove them now I should call stephie yaa' she thought and opened the door and peeped out and called for her when she heard footsteps she turned back and opened the door she heard the door getting locked

"stephie help me see my string got tangled with each other plzz I untangle them I need to remove the blouse"

She said without looking at the person she felt a familiar touch on her back she looked in the mirror and was shocked to see manik there she turned away and manik looked at her

"manik what are you doing here?" she asked her

" I heard you calling stephie for help she wasn't there so I came in" he said innocently

"manik are you mad if anyone will see us we will be in a big problem so plzz go and call stephie" she said

"nandini its lunch time so no one around let me help you" he replied softly

"but I'm changing so you close your eyes" she said absentmindedly

"ohh really as if I have never seen u changing and I have seen much more that this" he said with a smirk she mentally slapped her for this answer

"wohh.." she tried saying but he cut her in between by putting his fingers on her lips

"shh.. you speak to much lemme do my work" he said and turned her around

He put her hairs on one side of the shoulder and slowly he moved his fingers on her strings to untangle it his fingers slightly brushed her back and she filled jitters inside her she closed her eyes it was something new for her he had touched her thousand times but she never felt this was he slowly bent down and kissed her back he had almost untangled the string he slided his hands on her waist and pulled her by a jerk and her back crashed on his chest she held his hnd on her waist he rested his chin on her shoulder and nuzzled his ear lobe he planted a soft kiss on her neck to shoulders almost sucking them she shivered by his kisses he turned her around and caressed her cheeks by his thumb her eyes were still closed this time his eyes were not filled with physical desire but a different feeling he moved closer and blow on her lips lightly she clutched his coat tightly as she was feeling week in her knees he the placed his lips on her softly he sucked her lower lip softly and she responded with equal favour it was slow but yet a passionate one or you must say filled with love he entered inside her mouth and tasted evry bit of it he then leftbher lips due to lack of oxygen and both were breathing heavily his hands wee roaming all over her bare back the blouse was hanging on her body with only one string which can fall anytime he then sucked her neck was about to go down but stopped due to knock on door both looked at each other panting heavily nandini held her blouse as it was about to fall

"mam do you need any help you called for me?" stephie said from other end

"no stephie you can go I'm done " nandini replied looking at manik

"manik even you should go" she said and nodded and left

Nandini closed the door and stood leaving the door 'whats this feeling its so new whenever hes around I feel jitters inside me what is this? what is happeneing to me?' she thought and changed herself and came out that time her phone beeped she saw a call from private number

On phone:
hello whos this?- she asked picking up the phone
hello forgot me already- the person replied
sorry I didn't recognize whos this?- she again asked
sweeety its me harshad- he replied
how dare you call me?- she said angrily
baby I'm so missing you- harshad replied
stop ur nonsense come to the point- she asked
that's what I like about you so when you coming here you know my house my room my bed wants you- he said
in your dreams you jerk- she replied with a smirk
sweety but if you wont come then how would you win I'm the only way and for that you need be here you no I'm so dying to have you under me- he said with a smirk
just shutup you jerk don't you dare talk to me like that and about winning nandini murthy never looses get that- she shouted
but for winning you need to take part and for that you need to satify me- he replied
Mr. harshad Saxena use this cheap tricks of yours on someone else as I said earlied I don't need you I have got a better model that you so you keep on with your nonsense to someone else- she said with a smirk
hows that possible?- he said angrily
nothing is impossible for nandini murthy- she said and cut the cal 'I need to do something of him hes getting on my nerves now' she self talked and left

harshad's p.o.v
how dare she talk to me like that and threw his phone saying no to me would be the biggest mistake of your life you have to pay for this girls are dying to sleep with me and shes showing attitude not so soon now my urge to have is more bigger and il have u on my bed very soon he said with a smirk
end p.o.v

The next hours and day passed in a blink of second as everyone was buzy in the last minute fittings and trials everyone was working hard as from last two years Silver Vane is winning and they need to keep the record this time also

(guyzz I'm not elaborating the fashion week completely il just focus where your surprise lies)

The most awaited day has been arrived THE NEWYORK FASHION WEEK its the most looking forward event of the year the area was filled with loads of hustle bustle with media reporters getting the glimpse of the show to celebrities present everyone was excited as it was finally going to start.
It has five days with different themes on each day and the 5th day theme was a surprise

First day theme was summer wears every design was unique on their own but only top ten fashion house were going to be selected silver vane ranked 2nd as the first design was really very good even nandini was baffled by their designs.
Second day was winter wear and this time silver vane was on top as it was loved by everyone
Third was casual and again this time they won due to their amazing outfits of girls.
Fourth day was bridal attire and they won as nandini ramped walk with them everyone complemented her beauty she was wearing the same dress she tried in presence of manik in changing room and their cozy moments even the judges complemented her the way she carried herself.

Final day the theme was the most different as no models were gonna ramp walked but designers of the respected fashion house will in couples this made everyone nervous as they have never thought of anything like that the judges wanted to see how they carry their own desigh with elegance three fashion house were in finale silver vane, blue swish and romade it was atough competition as they were the top designers.
Silver vane was gonna walk the last and it was only 15 minutes left they were all called on the back stage and it was finally their time

"so now lets call upon the fashion house which is leading all yess guyzz silver vane" the host announced

The first couple to be walked was Aliya and dhruv the time they stepped in all hooted for them Aliya was wearing a black gown which had cuts on her waist she was looking a angel and dhruv was waking with their arms entangled he was wearing a black tuxedo with violet neck line he was looking charming both were looking perfect with each other.

The second couple was Abhimanyu and mukti both walked in hand in hand mukti was wearing a red gouwn with lacy back she was looking like a princess in it and abhi was wearing a red wine red tuxedo with black square pockets they both were looking amazing together.

The last couple was none other than manik and nandini they entered with his hands around her waist and her aound her biceps she was wearing a white gown looking like an angel he perfect body curves and a single strap which crosses her neck and was backless with her hair in a side bun giving a perfect view she was more than beauty if she was looking like an angel then manik was not looking less than a greek god dressed in white and peach tuxedo hairs gelled up and his famous smirk on his lips both were complementing each others beauty everyone was baffled looking at them just like some gods arrived from heaven.

"so finally its time for the result it was difficult to choose one but still only one can be best this fashion week was the unique of all it set new means of fashion to world and the desighner which had won it is the two time winner of newyork fashion week yess guyzz Silver Vane" the judge announced and everyone jumped in happiness they came on stage for their crown and it was time for media to ask questions

"three time winners how does it feel?" reporter 1

"its the effort the whole crew has put in because of which we are here its possible because of everyone its the happiest moment" nandini answered manik was beside her

"SO ARE YOU AND MANIK MALHOTRA A COUPLE?'"


pheww!!! that's it for the day big enough na I wrote it twice so how was my surprise of manna ramp walk? everyone wanted this right tell me by comments and haa keep the level of response same haa no cheating take care thankyou.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hwhehwhw n u just knw what we want ...superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
2nd to comment..
But still needs to read the full update..
Mom is disturbing very much today..
Will be back soon with another comment on the update..:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg fantabulous totally awesome superb update

Cabbie is so after manan now... Manik just can't control himself around her as their equation is changing More care and concerned with love is happening but harshad is still after her I think she needs to tell manik about it asap before that jerk do something horrible

Finally asked by someone if manan is a couple

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
just waiting fr the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
This was amazing plz update sooner I know it's hard but try n give daily updates plz only if u can thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
GOD U R CRAZY THERE IS NO NEED TO MENTION MY NAME YARR I DID NOTHING ALL THIS U HAD DONE ... I M UR GRT FAN THATS ALL N AS COMING TO THE STORY DO U THINK I HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THE WAY U HAVE WRITTEN IT JUST EXCELLENT I SERIOUSLY CANT DESCRIBE UR WRITTINGS YARR ITS ALWAYS SPECIAL N AMAZINGG I JUST WANT TO THANK YOU COZ OF UR STORY N FF I M LIVING AS KYY IS GNG TO END SOO YAA BAKI BAATE PM MAI HEHE
U R AMAZING N I M UR GRT N BIG FAN KEEP WRITTING NVER STOP THIS...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Dressing room hot scene...
And then ramp walk and that harshad faisco..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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