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Now its getting more an more intresting ...

Amazing... SUPER AWESOME... loved it soo much... manik being all protective towards nandini... soo caring... and then cabir's morning call was a shocker for both manik and nandini... now detective cabir on duty... he will definitely find out what's going on between manik and nandini... then abhi's entry... manik getting all jealous seeing nandini and abhi sooo close but he is unaware of this feeling but on knowing that abhi is nandini's cousin he felt relieved... and now mukti and abhi seem to get along... and nandini kissing manik's cheek all of a sudden... and making getting surprised or rather shocked... hehehe... I loved the whole update... FABULOUS update... uh are a fantastic writer... great going... well done... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... keep up the great work... best wishes... :) :D

It's fabulous story
I read all the parts together it's amazing story wonderful concept
N Cabir is Cupid again I m enjoying it
All works in fashion house wow
Continue soon as possible n pm me your next chapter Plzz

It was amaging. ...plz make manik jealous in nxt prt. ...If u can

Originally posted by: anglechotti

Now its getting more an more intresting ...

Please continue soon ..

Waiting for the next update. ..

hahaa thankyou I'll continue soon and the fun is yet to come

Originally posted by: Ashmita18

Amazing... SUPER AWESOME... loved it soo much... manik being all protective towards nandini... soo caring... and then cabir's morning call was a shocker for both manik and nandini... now detective cabir on duty... he will definitely find out what's going on between manik and nandini... then abhi's entry... manik getting all jealous seeing nandini and abhi sooo close but he is unaware of this feeling but on knowing that abhi is nandini's cousin he felt relieved... and now mukti and abhi seem to get along... and nandini kissing manik's cheek all of a sudden... and making getting surprised or rather shocked... hehehe... I loved the whole update... FABULOUS update... uh are a fantastic writer... great going... well done... thank uh soo much for the pm... really appreciate it... keep up the great work... best wishes... :) :D

thankyou dear he cares for her but doesn't show it much and that phone call will be a big turning point in their life coz our detective on mission and he'll know it soon he was jealous but u knw I stopped there as the jealous part is yet to come her kiss was a surprise and this soothen his anger and thanks for such a big comment I was so happy reading this u have no idea and I'll continue soon as I too don't like to make my readers wait so much stay blessed

Originally posted by: khadupam

It's fabulous story
I read all the parts together it's amazing story wonderful concept
N Cabir is Cupid again I m enjoying it
All works in fashion house wow
Continue soon as possible n pm me your next chapter Plzz

I'm gald u liked the story that made u read it one go and our cabir's best job is cupid yes they work in fashion house but its owned by nandini and manik is her business partner like a major share holder in the company he runs the whole malhotra industries sideways but most of the time spends in fashion house and for pm u need to buddy me okay take care thankyo

plzzz
update soon plzzz
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guyzzz I wrote the whole big chapter as I promised but due to technical issues in site it didn't posted and I cant write the whole thing again as it was too big as I'm having exam tomorrow so now you all tell me is it okay if I update in small parts the whole chap today lemme know

Originally posted by: starflee

guyzzz I wrote the whole big chapter as I promised but due to technical issues in site it didn't posted and I cant write the whole thing again as it was too big as I'm having exam tomorrow so now you all tell me is it okay if I update in small parts the whole chap today lemme know

i think divide it into 2 or 3 parts and try to post it...