MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: rish_manan

Guys I am having unit tests from Monday and I have not touched the book even so I wont be able to update long chaps but will try that.. And once this test finishes will pakka promise give my longest update full of manan..
Any way to cheer u guys up after this sad news an update is coming soon..

Itzz okk rish!!!
U give us daily updates thats enough for us!!!
N about long updates that u can give us after some days also!!!
N all the best for Your test!!!
Bco I know how mch hectic r these monday test!!!
Good luck!!!
Keep writing!!!
M very mch enjoying your story!!!

Regaurds,
Garima!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
Uff..hot update..nandini kissed his cheek and he directly love bite..monster just can't be away from her but scary hearing about the aunt who want to take her..guessing she is doing this for the land..hope everything goes fine ..am sure manik will not let her go anywhere once he realises his feelings for her..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Uff..hot update..nandini kissed his cheek and he directly love bite..monster just can't be away from her but scary hearing about the aunt who want to take her..guessing she is doing this for the land..hope everything goes fine ..am sure manik will not let her go anywhere once he realises his feelings for her..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)


No no no.. This aunt is our own ky2 Chachi.. I can handle only one villain at a time.. That's our pretty alya :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Hey nice update. And all the best for your tests.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Omg! The kiss was so not expected hehe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
hi guys
thanks for loving my ff so much
CHAPTER 9
manik woke up at 6 a.m.. and called cabir
manik - cabir be ready am coming to pick u up in one hour
cabir - aap jis number par dial kar rahe hai vo abhi vyast hai
manik - cabir!
cabir - arey yaar sone bhi nahi deta ache se tu toh terese achi nandu hai.. thik hai mai ready ho raha hu aur agar yeh sab koi prank hai na toh dekh liyo..aaj tera katal mere haatho hoga.
manik - tu jaldi ready ho mai 1 hour mai aa raha hu and then he hanged the phone

manik 's pov
nandu ko uthayu.nahi bichari ka neend kyu kharab karu ek note likh ke chor deta hu
and he wrote in a pink note
'' tumhe driver le jaega college... will meet u there :)"
he wrote it on a pink note as he knew she loves pink notes ;)
then he slowly tiptoed in her room so that she doesn't get up... seeing her sleeping so
peacefully made his day...the sunlight was disturbing her beautiful sleep so he drew the curtains and kept the pink note under her phone... while keeping it he noticed her neck as she was sleeping sideways and saw the love bite... and he remembered the last night... a smile appeared on his lips which faded away as soon as he heard his phone ring... alya was calling him..

he quickly ran out of the room and received the call
manik - wat the hell alya itne subha subha why are u calling me..it's only 6:30!!
alya - baby! I wanted to spend some special time with u.. so can u come at my place or shall I come at ur --
manik - oh don't m busy sorry we will spend our special time tomorrow pakka...
alya- oh now I get it where u r busy..u r busy with that dumbo right???
manik - alya one last warning... either call her by her name or dont call her only... do u get that..? now bye..
alya was in tears
alya 's pov
because of this dumbo my manik is going away from me... I will snatch her life from her.. just wait and watch Nandini... (with an evil smirk)
manik.- god this alya sometimes is so irritating.. damn it it's 6:45 ..I have only 15 mins... I need to get ready...
manik got ready and went to pick cabir..
manik - CABIR!CABIR.!
cabir's mom - arey manik tum... cabir toh so raha hai...
manik - wat?! cabir so raha hai??

and he rushed to cabir's room
manik (kicking cabir) -saaale uthne ko bola tha na..tu toh kumbhkaran se bhi jyada sota haicabir - aur tu ravan se bhi jyada darawna..
manik - do u know funny people can easily be killed
cabir - dhamki matt dey yaar... I m coming in 10 tu ja..
manik - nahi mai yehi rahunga..tu ready hokar aa

saying this he pushed him into the bathroom...
after 30 mins.. cabir was still in the bathroom..
manik - W*F..!did u sleep..,? cabir uth..
cabir - arey haan bas ho gaya
and he finally came out of the bath room

they both went to the car..

while driving

cabir - tu kaha leke jaa raha hai mujhe
manik - wait mujhe tujhse baar karni hai
cabir - alya ke baare mai?
manik - how do u know...?
b4 cabir could ans manik said
manik - we have reached
cabir saw that they were standing near a lake... there was a bench for people to sit
cabir - tu mujhe yaha kyu laya hai
manik - arey bola na baat karne
cabir -But YAHA kyu?
manik- I like this place.. it's so peaceful.
cabir - violent insaano ke muh se peace word acha nahi lagta
manik - cabir!
cabir - acha bol kya bolna hai?

they both sat on a bench

manik - pata nahi yaar alya ko kya ho gaya hai... har samay nandu ko lekar kuch na kuch bolti raheti hai -
cabir - I know u dont love her but for fab 5's sake u r in relationship with her
manik with shocked face looked at him...
no one knew about this other than manik n alya
he was wondering that how come cabir got to know about it
cabir understood what he was thinking and said
cabir - I heard ur and alya 's talk.. I was just waiting for u to talk about this... manik u dont have to sacrifice everything for us man. u have a life u should start to live it. Please dont be so mahaan...teko bachpan se jaanta hu... Teri aakhon mai ache se dikhta hai ki u dont love alya n ur doing this for the sake of fab 5 ... please talk to her and have a break up... u will feel better... vaise Maine socha nahi tha ki alya churel nikli gi
manik - ok I will try and talk to her..
cabir - ok chal
manik stopped a little bit thinking about nandu then listening cabir's voice he thought it's better not to talk about her now so he shooed her thoughts and drove off to the college..

meanwhile in malhotra mansion
nandu woke up at 9 a.m
nandu - aiyappa! itna late ho gaya aaj toh mai gayi pakka...

she found a chit under her fone and saw that it was a pink chit

a sudden smile lit up her face as she knew who had written it... she read it and said
''aiyappa he cares so much for me''
and then she ran to the bathroom and got ready in 5 mins.. did breakfast and reached college by 9:30
she forgot about the love bite which was clearly visible to everyone as she was. wearing a noodle strapped kurti..

cabir n manik saw her.. and cabir rushed to her..
cabir - hi nan-------
he stopped as he saw a some teeth marks on her neck..
cabir (pointing towards her neck) -nandu wat is this...?
nandu looked at his direction and realized that he was pointing towards the love bite given by manik... her expression changed... a blush rose in her cheeks and cabir being our great love guru smirked understanding every thing...
manik turned other side and saw dhruv, alya and mukti coming so to save himself from more embarrassment he pulled cabir towards them...

cabir - arey kaha leke jaa raha hai..,?
then looking towards nandu... will talk to u later.. bye
nandu - bye... and she sighed in relief... she quickly hid the bite under her hair and blushed remembering about yesterday night

at that time harshad n navya came along with another boy

navya - kya baat aaj subha subha itna sharma kyu rahi ho...
nandu - kuch nahi tum bolo kya hua..
navya - oh acha ab Hume ye madam se baat karne ke liye kuch reason sochna hoga
harshad - m sorry for yester..--
nandu - it's ok.
harshad- are u serious tumne itna jaldi mujhe maaf bhi kar dia?
nandu - hmmm
harshad - thank you ...so friends
nandu - ya friends
harshad - meet shahid..shahid meet nandu..
nandu - hi
shahid - hi
harshad - guys I was thinking about making a team.. a music band.. wat do u say?
navya - wow!! hum aa rahe hai
shahid - m in
nandu- if navya is coming then m in too

harshad smirked seeing his plan working so smoothly n easily..

harshad - so navya u will play the piano, shahid the drum, me the guitar, n nandu u will be the lead female singer
navni and shahid in unison - ok
harshad - so we are the nh3
navya - wah kya naam choose kiya hai apne harshad ji
nandu. - ya nice name

manik was watching all of this from far and seeing harshad with his beloved nandu his blood started boiling...

precap - manan romance and teasing by cabir...
harshad and alya 's evil plans

note - guys I guess this update was long...
and sorry for no manan in this update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Alya and Harshad argh!!!
Manbir are always amazing:)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice update n thanks for pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Lovely update...except for the aliya part..I don't know why manik is just warning her when she is talking nonsense about nandini and not breaking up with her already...well glad the aunt is our dear chachi thanks for clarifying n ya agree one villain is enough n that's aliya right now and harshad later...loved manbir convo..the precap is interesting...waiting for the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm
Edited by Kuushi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
nice update! 😭 but missed MaNan a lot.. pls ek aur..

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