MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32)

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Niya

@N_Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

funny update haha Manik ladko ko b attract karrta hai!
continue soon.. gaana mat likha karo update me..

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rish_manan

@rish_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

hi guys... m back.. and this one is pakka a long long one :)
thank you
CHAPTER 6
cabir - aao lagti hai.. ab andar chale kya ki yaha hi khare rahekar apna college ka first day manana hai?
Nandini -arey nai nai chalo
cabir was showing Nandini the college when they met alya..
alya - tch tch tch.. dekho kaun aya hai.. wow Nandini welcome to space.. (cabir was receiving a call so he excused himself) so.. oh wait come here
she dragged Nandini to a corner..
alya - yes u dumbo.. stay away from fab 5 and specially my manik do you get that nahi toh meko 2 sec nahi lagenge tmhe fix karne mai.. did you get that.. now bring that chair from there.. my legs are paining
Nandini - wat? I am not your servant I wont
alya - (holding her arms tightly) what? listen no one has ever dared to say a no to me and you..? who are you to say a no? tum kuch nahi ho just a dumb girl jo manik and uski family ke sympathy se yaha ho nothing else!! do u get that? now bring that chair!!
Nandini tried to free herself but she couldn't
Nandini - leave me.. I wont bring that chair. u do it urself.. u know wat actually u dont deserve manik u deserve a monster not a human being .. tum dono ka character mai bahut difference hai.. u do anything am not gonna bring that chair..
alya rose her hand to slap Nandini..
seeing this Nandini closed her eyes..
for a long time she closed her eyes but after sensing something wrong she opened her eyes and saw something very strange
manik was standing there holding alya 's hand which was about to slap Nandini
manik -(shouting ) alya! I never dreamt that a sweet girl like you would behave like a monster! I am ashamed of you and how dare you slap Nandini.. listen carefully dont even dare to come near her do you get that.. that is a warning!
alya had tears in her eyes - manik! tum mujhe is bimbo ke liye daat rahe ho! manik dont forget m your gf and she? she is a mere servant.. -
manik- alya! dont u dare call her like that.. Nandini naam hai uska.. do u get that?!
manik was shouting so loud that a crowd gathered there
seeing a crowd there alya ran away crying and manik also went away in anger..
Nandini stood there alone.. with tears in her eyes
the crowd soon dispersed
but a girl was still standing there
she came to Nandini forwarded her hand and said - hi, mai navya..navya naveli.. mai apko yeh kahena chahati hu ki aap rote hue ache nahi lagte ho.. dont cry
saying this she wiped her tears
navya- arey ye alya na aisi hi hai.. sabpe raub jamati firti hai.. sab pe chillati hai.. aur kabhi iske kapre dekhe hai..? meko toh lagta hai paise bachane ke chakkar mai chote kapre pahenti hai, ya phir chuhe ne iske kapre kaat liye honge!
listening this nandu smiled a bit
navya- arey waah dekha humne bola tha na tum rote hue nahi haste hue ache lagti ho!! aisi hi hasti rahena..
Nandini - thank you navya for making me laugh
navya - hey mata rani.! fir angrezi..mujhe lagta hai yeh angrez log toh Bharat chor ke chale Gaye aur apna aulaad bhul Gaye
Nandini - (laughing) chalo chalte hai
navya - toh abse hum dost..
Nandini - haan dost :)
they enterd the canteen
nandini- tum kuch logi navya..
navya - hmm
Nandini - navya? oye kya hua..
nandu was waving hands in front of navya but navya's gaze was some where else..
precap - harshad's introduction..
manik - harshad confrontation
note - was this long? if no then tell
me I will make the next chapter longer

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tasnimanika7

@tasnimanika7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

It s nice i like your concept and i want more manan and yes plss give us longer update 😊

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SONIAGHOSH

@SONIAGHOSH

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

wow awesome update

love it

continue soon

this is not long chapter please next time update long

if you can please update today

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Noor

@CROCKOMICHI

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Sorry to say but its small plz make it little longer. And by the way Great job keep it up.

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baani9

@baani9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Nice update n do long update.

Continue soon

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ishika1991

@ishika1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

ohh its very short...plzzz long kro n

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

plzzz yaar update big part

anyways love to see manik's care for nandini n hate aliya

Edited by paarsa - 10 years ago

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Niya

@N_Niya

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

hey rish! so sweet of u buddy!
nice update.. bas ab jald se jald chudaiyl alya ka pack up ho jaye..
want a long long update soon!

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

That was awesome manik stood up for nandini..
I hate this alya inka break up jaldi karvao..
And that that one was long... but make it longer.. u know we r greedy when it comes to manan story...
Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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