MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32)

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Amazing that means he has feelings for her..
Continue soon with long one...

Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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rish_manan

@rish_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

thank you guys for your comments
and it's 14 years leap not 6 years
ignore mistakes :)
CHAPTER 3
14 years leap
Nandini grew up to be a very beautiful lady.. with her big doe eyes, pouty lips and charm anyone would fall for her even manik ;)
malhotra mansion
nyonika -nandu beta khana kha lena..I am going to office bye. take care.. and manik aaj isse acche se college dikha dena..aaj I wl not be in college even (nyonika is the college trusty) take care both of u. bye
nandu n manik in unison -bye!
now an awkward silence filled in between them.. breaking this silence manik said
manik - be ready I am coming in 5
saying this he rushed to his room.. in hurry he dropped his phone.. Nandini saw this..
she picked it up and went to manik 's room to give it to him...
meanwhile manik was talking to himself standing infront of his mirror
manik -god! yeh meko kya ho raha hai.. aaj kaise mai nandu ko besharamo ke tarah dekh raha tha but she was looking so gorgeous! no! wait manik control yourself!!
manik was standing shirtless when Nandini entered without knocking
she stood near the door staring at the Greek god infront of her.. a slight blush rose in her cheeks and she stood there like a statue staring at manik and his body in awe
manik - nandini tum yaha?
listening this nandu came out of her trance and said.
nandu -umm manik actually u dropped ur phone so I came here to give it to u..
saying this she handed over the phone and turned around to go back but she slipped and she closed her eyes in fear but to her amazement two muscular hands held her tightly
nandu slowly opened her eyes to se that it was no other than manik who had saved her
her hands were on manik's shoulders and manik's hand was on her waist
they stood there for sometime in that position sharing a cute eyelock
it was not their first eyelock because sometimes in school or during supper they used to share cute eyelocks..
their eyelock was broken by the ring of manik's phone..
nandu hurriedly went outside ..blushing all the way :)
precap- nandu 's first day in college..
note -guys please buddy me for pm n for silent readers pls like the posts even so that I come to know whether u ppl are liking it ..thank you :)

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

lovely but chotu sa update
post big part yaar

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rish_manan

@rish_manan

Beginner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

guys I am back..
ur love has made me write more *blush*
by the way.. ignore mistakes and enjoy.
CHAPTER 4
Nandini n manik sat in the car..
during the drive no one spoke
Nandini was busy seeing outside and our manik was driving or I should say trying to focus on driving ;-)
he was thinking about nandu's cute antics when she was small
manik's pov..
god! nandu! she will drive me crazy
but how cute she is..
vo jab pout karti hai toh ek cute si puppy lagti hai..uske lips.. I just want to touch them once.. bas ek baar
and jab mom ke bday mai to surprise her she tried to make a cake and she ended up in making a mess.. god.. kitni cute hai vo.. koi itna cute kaise ho sakta hai..
bahut ho gaya I need to be her friend somehow I can't see her alone like this..
end of pov
while driving he was so lost in nandu that he took a wrong path and was driving in a deserted road..
nandu - (scared) manik hum kaha jaa rahe hai. manik! wat are you doing??
listening to her manik came out of his trance and realised that he had taken a wrong path..
by the time he realised this.. nandu was so scared that she started crying.
nandu's pov
aiyappa yeh kaha leke jaa raha hai mujhe
kahi ye meresath kuch
nahi nahi I trust manik he wont do anything to me..
but y he is not answering me?
end of pov
manik - nandu arey dont cry chill.. I am sorry Maine galat rasta le liya sorry dont cry
saying this he stopped the car and cupped nandu's face..
for the first time he was so close to her
but nandu she was not stopping only.. she was crying n crying n crying..
manik - arey..
saying this he pulled her for a hug
on seeing them hugging any one could say that two pieces of puzzle had been rejoined..
they felt so perfect in each other arms
manik pov
god! why is she crying so much.. galti meri hai Maine galat rasta le liya.. Dar gayi hogi bichari...
nandu 's pov.
I feel so comfortable in his arms..
manik what is happening to me?
end of pov..
after sometimes manik broke the hug when he felt she had stopped crying..
and he realized what he has just done
manik's pov
shit yeh Maine kya kar diya.. what must be nandu thinking..
shit! I should not have hugged her
but when I hugged her I felt so relaxed and comfortable
god! nandu what are you doing to me?
end of pov
and they drove off to SPACE college finally
precap -nandu 's first day and cabni friendship. guys I wanted to ask whether u ppl want 2 chaps a day or a big chap

Edited by rish_manan - 10 years ago

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Lovely update!!!

Loved it!!!

N yeah plzz post a big part!!!

Waiting to know what will happen when nandini enters d collage!!!
N very very exited for cabini frndship!!!

N plzz PM me if possible!!!

Continue soon!!!

Edited by KewlaniGarima - 10 years ago

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..paarsaa..

@..paarsaa..

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

I toh want 2 big chaps in a day:)
but anyways good one!!
update soon

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Archie Modi

@sweetarchie

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Loved it u write awesome

N abt ur question two updates a day would be good:)

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Thats nyc...
And ya a big one...
Short short parts nhi...
Continue soon...
Love to see cabini friendship...
Cabir cupid ko bhi toh apna kaam karna hai na...

Thanx for pm..

LOVE,
AAROHI...