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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

My favourite stores end up soon

Awsome
Fab
Best
Bcz my mood off😭😭


Sorry darling but what to do I have too much pressure of studies but I promise my new ff or OS will come soon and I will pm u for sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting fr the next part...so plz continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story...just found ur story n read in one go...
its ending so soon😭
can u please pm me when u write the next story...
n update this story...plz...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
[COLOR=green][/COLOR][SIZE=6][/SIZE][B][/B] where r youuui ?? Waitin for d nxt part.. Plsss post it sooon..
Edited by Lizbeth - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Update soon dr...waitg...& pm me pls...



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Posted: 10 years ago

DAMN AWESOME...!!!!!

SO HOT!!!!!... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
when u gonna update..
itss been a quite long time..
n I missed ur story very much..
plsss do fast ..n update..
plsss.. waiting..
I hope u do fast...plsss...




plsss do some mercy n update..
I'll miss it badly..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon
It was awesome continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
A/N -sorry guys. ..please Maaf kardo... I wanted to update but I forgot my password and few days back hi I changed it and u won't believe... I read so many stories that I forgot my own story and I had to re read it once... Sorry for the delay...
CHAPTER 18
Manik's beautiful sleep got disturbed due to nandu's lock which was creating a tickling sensation on his face...
He saw his phone and his eyes widened...
It was 9 a.m. And they both were still sleeping like logs...
Manik tried to move from nandu's strong grip but he failed to...
And nandu woke up...
She smiled on seeing manik's face but her eyes shifted from manik's face to the clock which was just behind him...
And manik got the shock of his life...
Nandu"whaaat? We have been sleeping for so long? Manik!! "
Manik shocked from her sudden shout"baba re!nandu do you want to kill me?"
Nandu's eyes softened at that time "baby... Voh... Um"
Manik "shh...Baby ha?nice... Yeh sab kabse? "
And he leaned closer...
But then...
KNOCK KNOCK...
Cabir"abey saale tereko college nahi jaana hai?kabse kumbhkaran Jaise so raha hai..."
And saying this he entered the room...
First he was shocked at the scene infrnt of him but he soon understood everythin and started singing "do dil mil rahe hai magar chupke chupke..."
cabir"Vaise manik...tune ladki pata li Vo bhi nandu ko and meko bola bhi nahi...Aisi dosti?"
And he started shedding fake tears...
Nandu being ever so innocent didnt understand his drama and said"Vo we were going to tell u today itself cabir but tum uske pahele hi aa gaye...we are sorry...u don't cry... "
Manbir went awww and cabir came... Made her sit and said "Arey Meri maa I was joking.. And Vaise bhi Iss monkey ko sorry bolna chahie not u"
Manik"shut up... And nandu u please go and get ready.. We are getting Late..."
nandini nodded and went...
Manik started pondering over his clothes and cabir sat on his bed e singing "luv love is a waste of time "
Manik "oh shut up "
Cabir "Arey... It's the truth... Don't get offended...Vaise...u toh have enough time to waste so it's best for U"
Manik"nandini is not for utilising my waste time... She is a part of me... "
Cabir"bass romeo thik hai...Tu ab ready ho jaa taki hum late na hoe"
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Meanwhile harshad was smiling a wicked smile...
Harshad " manik beta...hasle jitna hasna hai...Vaise bhi today us ur last day of life"
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Manik and cabir were going to manik's car when manik said "Arey where is nandini?this girl na...kitna late karti hai...acha u wait here and I will go and call her"
Cabir nodded and manik ran to call her...
Meanwhile...
A dog came and started peeing on manik's car...
Harshad who was hiding behind a near by bush said "oh no no... .if this dog pees like this it will trigger the bomb before needed..."
And he ran to shoo it...
But unfortunately the bomb got already triggered and
BOOM...
manan came running on hearing this voice...
Manik"what happened? Oh shit! Cabir are u ok? "
Cabir " I M but harshad and that dog aren't... Actually I pity that dog..."
Manik"huh?"
Cabir"manik...harshad had planted a sensitive bomb in your car... Sensitive bomb is one which explodes when there is some sensation... And that dog came and started peeing on ur car...this triggered the bomb but harshad thought it didn't and he came to shoo the dog but the bomb blasted..."
Before manik could say anything they heard nandu say"Aiyappa thik hua is harshad ke saath... Manik ko hurt karne chala tha... Thank u Aiyappa for saving him...and rest in peace dog and please let harshad's soul dance in the hell"
Mananbir awed her and they had a group hug
Cabir "and wat now of this shit...it was ur fav car na?"
Manik"so wat? We will buy it tomorrow again.. and security please call the police and explain everythin then extinguish the fire and ya no one should know about this except the police...tell them also not to tell anyone about this "
Cabir "and how will we tell this to fab3 "
Manik"we will figure it out later..."
Nandu "and Navya?"
Manik" bring her to fab5 room... We will explain it to her at the same time"
And they went to college...
Precap - dhrulya's date
Guys please comment and like...

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...finally u updated...tnqu soo much for such a lovely update
i jus loved it...
u penned it so well dea
ur such an awsm writer
plss update soon..
cant wait soo long
eagerly waiting for ur update

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