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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...
beautifully penned...
read all parts in one go...
awesome...

Edited by arshuaar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi sweeties
thank u so much for ur love!!
and I m very happy to see that there are many new ppl who are liking my ff...
thank u dear...
and if u guys want pm pls sent me buddy requests ...
so in this update I will also add some manan romance, just for u guys... and ya manik will get hurt but that will lead to manan coming closer to each other n also manan 's love revelation is coming :)
CHAPTER 14-
cabir - thank u so much Nandini u r a blessing for us..

mukti -yes Nandini u are an angel

cabir - chalo aaj nandu ki khushi mai ek party rakhi jaye!!

dhruv - but -

nandu - it's ok! if cabir wants to party then we will..

cabir - dekha dhruv isse kahete hai dosti!!

manik who was hearing their talks from a distance became very happy seeing nandu with his beloved friends...

manik went there and said "bas cabir tu apna melodrama band kar aur chal "

mukti - aaj party mai organise karungi in the vampires club...ok??

manik - ya ya chal...

in car -
manik was driving the car sitting in the front with dhruv and at the back sat cabir, mukti and Nandini...

manik 's concentration was not on the road but at the beautiful girl sitting behind her, nandu...

he was constantly glancing at the rear view mirror.. just to have a look at the god's most perfect n beautiful creation ,nandu...

cabir was constantly noticing this with a smirk... and he started singing...
"pyaar hua ikraar hua hai... "

manik- oh shut up cabir.. tu distract kar raha hai...

cabir - distract mai kar rahi hai ki nandu..?
manik applied breaks suddenly n gave him dagger looks..

cabir - yaar agar tu aise driving karega toh hum bhagwaan ko pyaare ho jaenge...I know ki hum bhagwaan ko pyaare hai buy itne bhi pyaare nahi ki hum unke paas hi pahuch jae...!

manik - oh shut up cabir!

dhruv - but wat do u mean by Nandini distracting manik?

cabir - oh vo yeh na ki.. umm.. han ki nandu tum apne hair baandh lo ..actually vo itne lambe hai na ki hawa se urr kar manik ko irritate kar rahe..manik tu start kar car..

they soon reached the vampires and as the party was organized by mukti as she entered every one left their work to see who had organized the...

most of the guys eyed Nandini as she was looking stunning...

seeing this manik 's jealousy mode turned on and when he saw that ppl were eying her bare waist, he slipped his arm across her waist and covered it...

smiling back at the guys who eyed him with jealousy he brought nandu closer to him and said "let's go guys"

nandu felt a shiver down her spine as manik held her by her waist and brought closer to him.. earlier when she entered n saw guys staring at her she felt awkward and uncomfortable, memories of her recent encounter with guys flashed in her mind and she started shaking with fear but when she saw manik protecting her she forgot all her problems and her heart swelled with love for manik...

mukti held nandu 's arm and said "chal nandu let's do some fun "

manik left nandu but was keeping an eye on her..

the whole place was buzzing, alive with laughter and excitement. The pop of champagne corks and the clink of glasses mingled with the erratic clatter of the bouncing silver balls at the two roulette table set up at the centre of the table. Around them less noisy but engendering just as much interest were the smaller tables where croupiers in scarlet satin deftly dealt out the cards for blackjack and poker .

Clutching the small stack of chips which she had been presented upon arrival, Nandini watched with admiration as mukti good humouredly insulting everyone who approached her sold further bags for Rs 2,000 each. Anyone could buy as many as they liked. At midnight the player who had amassed the most number of chips won a date with mukti.
"Come on, u miserable old sod" Nandini heard mukti shout as a well known actor pulled a handful of notes from his wallet. "If Rohan can buy two hundred chips you can afford twice the amount "
And of course he did. Everyone was doing the same. When Nandini made her way to mukti 's table she flashed her a wicked grin and waved her the bucket full of money with glee. "dekh Nandini, we are doing so well... Maine socha that if by inviting two hundred of richest people I know we could easily earn enough amount to help the cancer sufferers...Maine socha that we should even do some noble work through this party "

"oh mukti"nandu flung her arms around her "u r awesome ,think when we will donate money to them they would be so happy " and nandu gave a hundred dollar smile to mukti and to manik who was admiring her...

manik 's pov
her smile, her innocence, her blush, her purity..everything was perfect in her...
god does she even know how irresistible is she... that smile, eyes. those curves... man they are damn awesome!!
am I in love? asked his mind
yes u are.. said his heart
but how do u know? asked his mind...
if one loves every inch of a person without any reason, doesn't find any mistake in her.. he is surely in love.. replied his heart...
yes I m in love... yes I do love her.. I love u Nandini murthy..! shouted his mind
and he let out a sigh lazily...
end of pov.

manik - if going to some cancer hospital makes her happy I would surely buy her a whole hospital...

cabir - Ya dats an awesome idea but dont u think vo kuch jyada ho jaega..?

completely shocked manik asked - tu kab aaya...

cabir - bas abhi thore tym pahele when u were muttering "I love u Nandini murthy " under ur breath...

manik - oh shit u heard it

cabir - ya I did, btw -

mukti - manik!

cabir - yaar jab hum baat karte tabhi kyu koi musibat aati hai?

manik - where is nandu!?

mukti - I dont know... gayab ho gayi voh!!

manik - find her! jaldi..

he started finding her in almost every place leaving the girls washroom..
it was empty but manik didnt go there.
but when manik was passing by it he heard some voices of men... out of curiosity he opened the door and punched one of the men trying to open Nandini 's bra...

he continuosly punched him while the other man came and hit him with a metal rod on his back..

he winced with pain and Nandini shouted "manik !"

Nandini - pls leave him... u can take me but leave him pls... I am ready to go wherever u want to take him but leave him..

manik - no!! u wont nandu -

guy - ok if the girl is herself willing so much we will fulfil her wish..

and he grabbed her arm but as soon as he did it he received a punch by our dhruv and cabir took the fire extinguisher and hit the other men...

manik was there lying and unable to get up ...his leg severely injured, chest bleeding, back paining, head hurting and arms cut he was too worse to move..

Nandini - manik! and she hugged him... not caring of her semi nude state she was madly kissing manik 's face madly...

nandu - manik! oh manik! did u know wat would happen if something happened to u... I would die!

manik - shh! dont! dont say anything nandu! mere rahete vo kabhi nahi hoga! never...!!

cabir and dhruv were smilingly looking at them.. when nandu shouted "wat are u seeing? chalo!! lets go back? aur kuch baaki rahe gaya hai "

cabir - umm nandu hum bahar wait kar rahe hai u come

nandu - but -

and then she realised she was just wearing a bra and her jeans... she stood up and wore her top and looked at manik.. tears already falling from her cheeks... what a bad day it had been...her life's second most bad day, the first bring when her mom died... she helped manik get up and he winced in pain.. nandu felt as if someone had pierced her heart with a dagger... she quickly took his hand in hers and kissed her forehead, cheeks, eyes and gave a peck on his lips...

manik was very surprised at her sudden encounter... nodding to nandu he said "if u were not there my life would be useless, u r the soul of my life, u r the reason why m living and I will make sure no one will take ur place and he reached the door and called fab 3 for his help..

nandu eyes were full of tears and she sank down there saying "yes I love u manik, I love u so much" and she smiled :)

precap - nandu caring for manik, romance... alya back... abhimanyu - mukti...

note - I hope u guys liked it :) sorry for not updating yesterday as I was not done with writing.. also I wanted to say - crockmochi my dear get well soon :) and ya read the ff -s after getting well only :) take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi sweeties
thank u so much for ur love!!
and I m very happy to see that there are many new ppl who are liking my ff...
thank u dear...
and if u guys want pm pls sent me buddy requests ...
so in this update I will also add some manan romance, just for u guys... and ya manik will get hurt but that will lead to manan coming closer to each other n also manan 's love revelation is coming :)
CHAPTER 15-
cabir - thank u so much Nandini u r a blessing for us..

mukti -yes Nandini u are an angel

cabir - chalo aaj nandu ki khushi mai ek party rakhi jaye!!

dhruv - but -

nandu - it's ok! if cabir wants to party then we will..

cabir - dekha dhruv isse kahete hai dosti!!

manik who was hearing their talks from a distance became very happy seeing nandu with his beloved friends...

manik went there and said "bas cabir tu apna melodrama band kar aur chal "

mukti - aaj party mai organise karungi in the vampires club...ok??

manik - ya ya chal...

in car -
manik was driving the car sitting in the front with dhruv and at the back sat cabir, mukti and Nandini...

manik 's concentration was not on the road but at the beautiful girl sitting behind her, nandu...

he was constantly glancing at the rear view mirror.. just to have a look at the god's most perfect n beautiful creation ,nandu...

cabir was constantly noticing this with a smirk... and he started singing...
"pyaar hua ikraar hua hai... "

manik- oh shut up cabir.. tu distract kar raha hai...

cabir - distract mai kar rahi hai ki nandu..?
manik applied breaks suddenly n gave him dagger looks..

cabir - yaar agar tu aise driving karega toh hum bhagwaan ko pyaare ho jaenge...I know ki hum bhagwaan ko pyaare hai buy itne bhi pyaare nahi ki hum unke paas hi pahuch jae...!

manik - oh shut up cabir!

dhruv - but wat do u mean by Nandini distracting manik?

cabir - oh vo yeh na ki.. umm.. han ki nandu tum apne hair baandh lo ..actually vo itne lambe hai na ki hawa se urr kar manik ko irritate kar rahe..manik tu start kar car..

they soon reached the vampires and as the party was organized by mukti as she entered every one left their work to see who had organized the...

most of the guys eyed Nandini as she was looking stunning...

seeing this manik 's jealousy mode turned on and when he saw that ppl were eying her bare waist, he slipped his arm across her waist and covered it...

smiling back at the guys who eyed him with jealousy he brought nandu closer to him and said "let's go guys"

nandu felt a shiver down her spine as manik held her by her waist and brought closer to him.. earlier when she entered n saw guys staring at her she felt awkward and uncomfortable, memories of her recent encounter with guys flashed in her mind and she started shaking with fear but when she saw manik protecting her she forgot all her problems and her heart swelled with love for manik...

mukti held nandu 's arm and said "chal nandu let's do some fun "

manik left nandu but was keeping an eye on her..

the whole place was buzzing, alive with laughter and excitement. The pop of champagne corks and the clink of glasses mingled with the erratic clatter of the bouncing silver balls at the two roulette table set up at the centre of the table. Around them less noisy but engendering just as much interest were the smaller tables where croupiers in scarlet satin deftly dealt out the cards for blackjack and poker .

Clutching the small stack of chips which she had been presented upon arrival, Nandini watched with admiration as mukti good humouredly insulting everyone who approached her sold further bags for Rs 2,000 each. Anyone could buy as many as they liked. At midnight the player who had amassed the most number of chips won a date with mukti.
"Come on, u miserable old sod" Nandini heard mukti shout as a well known actor pulled a handful of notes from his wallet. "If Rohan can buy two hundred chips you can afford twice the amount "
And of course he did. Everyone was doing the same. When Nandini made her way to mukti 's table she flashed her a wicked grin and waved her the bucket full of money with glee. "dekh Nandini, we are doing so well... Maine socha that if by inviting two hundred of richest people I know we could easily earn enough amount to help the cancer sufferers...Maine socha that we should even do some noble work through this party "

"oh mukti"nandu flung her arms around her "u r awesome ,think when we will donate money to them they would be so happy " and nandu gave a hundred dollar smile to mukti and to manik who was admiring her...

manik 's pov
her smile, her innocence, her blush, her purity..everything was perfect in her...
god does she even know how irresistible is she... that smile, eyes. those curves... man they are damn awesome!!
am I in love? asked his mind
yes u are.. said his heart
but how do u know? asked his mind...
if one loves every inch of a person without any reason, doesn't find any mistake in her.. he is surely in love.. replied his heart...
yes I m in love... yes I do love her.. I love u Nandini murthy..! shouted his mind
and he let out a sigh lazily...
end of pov.

manik - if going to some cancer hospital makes her happy I would surely buy her a whole hospital...

cabir - Ya dats an awesome idea but dont u think vo kuch jyada ho jaega..?

completely shocked manik asked - tu kab aaya...

cabir - bas abhi thore tym pahele when u were muttering "I love u Nandini murthy " under ur breath...

manik - oh shit u heard it

cabir - ya I did, btw -

mukti - manik!

cabir - yaar jab hum baat karte tabhi kyu koi musibat aati hai?

manik - where is nandu!?

mukti - I dont know... gayab ho gayi voh!!

manik - find her! jaldi..

he started finding her in almost every place leaving the girls washroom..
it was empty but manik didnt go there.
but when manik was passing by it he heard some voices of men... out of curiosity he opened the door and punched one of the men trying to open Nandini 's bra...

he continuosly punched him while the other man came and hit him with a metal rod on his back..

he winced with pain and Nandini shouted "manik !"

Nandini - pls leave him... u can take me but leave him pls... I am ready to go wherever u want to take him but leave him..

manik - no!! u wont nandu -

guy - ok if the girl is herself willing so much we will fulfil her wish..

and he grabbed her arm but as soon as he did it he received a punch by our dhruv and cabir took the fire extinguisher and hit the other men...

manik was there lying and unable to get up ...his leg severely injured, chest bleeding, back paining, head hurting and arms cut he was too worse to move..

Nandini - manik! and she hugged him... not caring of her semi nude state she was madly kissing manik 's face madly...

nandu - manik! oh manik! did u know wat would happen if something happened to u... I would die!

manik - shh! dont! dont say anything nandu! mere rahete vo kabhi nahi hoga! never...!!

cabir and dhruv were smilingly looking at them.. when nandu shouted "wat are u seeing? chalo!! lets go back? aur kuch baaki rahe gaya hai "

cabir - umm nandu hum bahar wait kar rahe hai u come

nandu - but -

and then she realised she was just wearing a bra and her jeans... she stood up and wore her top and looked at manik.. tears already falling from her cheeks... what a bad day it had been...her life's second most bad day, the first bring when her mom died... she helped manik get up and he winced in pain.. nandu felt as if someone had pierced her heart with a dagger... she quickly took his hand in hers and kissed her forehead, cheeks, eyes and gave a peck on his lips...

manik was very surprised at her sudden encounter... nodding to nandu he said "if u were not there my life would be useless, u r the soul of my life, u r the reason why m living and I will make sure no one will take ur place and he reached the door and called fab 3 for his help..

nandu eyes were full of tears and she sank down there saying "yes I love u manik, I love u so much" and she smiled :)

precap - nandu caring for manik, romance... alya back... abhimanyu - mukti...

note - I hope u guys liked it :) sorry for not updating yesterday as I was not done with writing.. also I wanted to say - crockmochi my dear get well soon :) and ya read the ff -s after getting well only :) take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Uff o y aliya back
But Awsome
Poor nandu
G8
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Feeling bad for nandu and manik
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one 😉
What a bad day to our nandu😭
Cont soon😃
And yeah we are waiting for romance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome yaar PLZZ update the next part soon yaar and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...it was nice story...please uploas next part quickly...can't wait for it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
don't you think it's too much.. people are trying to molest her.. previous chapters also and this chapter also..😭😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was awsome but i hope alya dosen't create problems anymore. And poor nandini its to bad to be molasted by some one.

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