MaNan ff :Destined together (updated chap 18-page 32) - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for late comment actually i have network problem upar se muje eye infection bhi ho gaya hai
awesome update

love it

aur please manik ko aur bhi jealous feel kar wao

continue soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi guys
thank u so much for ur love and support .
love u all <3
CHAPTER 14-
manik - what the hell?! who are u and -
then his eyes went towards the man 's hand which was holding nandu 's bare waist... his blood started boiling and he quickly removed his hand ..nandu was about to fall again but manik held her in time and they had a sweet eyelock...

abhi - ahem ahem.. actually yeh apki gf phisal gayi thi so I just helped her nothing else waise u have awesome figure lady... ekdum hourglass figure...

manik who was still holding nandu by her waist made her stand properly but he didnt remove his hand from her waist and pulled her closer

manik (to abhi)- yes she is my gf and are u checking her out? warn u... I m manik malhotra and I can -

abhi - cool! cool yaar manik take a chill pill man... n I am abhimanyu sinha.. hi nice to meet u..
and he forwards his hand but manik with his eyes points to his hand which were wrapped around nandu 's waist, so he pulls back his hand

abhi - oh I c.. ur hands are not free but koi baat nai.., bye nice to meet u...
and he goes and boom!!
again a girl fell and he held her by her bare waist again!!
abhi 's pov -
god! wow! aaj kya din hai! ladkiya pe ladkiya gir rahi hai and mai pakad raha hu, wow vo bhi sab sexy, god!! kaise resist karu mai unhe..!!
end of pov
mukti - ahem!! can u leave me?
abhi - yes beautiful!!
mukti - tum dekhke nahi chal sakte kya? bhagwaan ne aankh toh diye hai na?
abhi- lagta hai iss hospital mai koi thik se baat karna bhi nahi janta..
mukti - leave it
abhi - arey suno,beautiful,smile ok? it looks good on u...
mukti didnt know y smiled on hearing this, a smile which wad involuntary, a smile which could make 100 boys fall, a smile which abhimanyu fell for..

meanwhile with manan -
manik pushed her towards the wall and himself on her...
he was furious, how could someone hold her like this and on top of that how can someone just slip so easily..
agar usko kuch ho jata toh.? his mind yelled
toh mai mar jata... his heart yelled
Indeed he was in love...

nandu - manik why did u say him that I am ur gf...
manik - dekha nahi kaise tumhe ghoor rahe tha vo.. aur waise b problem kya hai asli mai toh tum ho nahi toh chill karo na...
Nandini - asli mai nahi hu yehi toh problem hai...
manik -what? matlavb u want to be my gf...he smirked
nandu - no no umm.. she was in dilemma... nandu 's pov
aiyappa what to do? her mind asked
say yes... her heart said
no no ,he will not accept me as his gf... her mind said
pagal, have u ever seen that how much he loves u, how much he cares for u, he will...yelled her heart ..
end of pov...
manik came closer to her and whispered huskily near her ears..
manik - kya hua? boli nahi
nandu - umm.. I meant ki
manik moved closer to her lips and whispered... - hmm.. bolo.. and he moved more closer
their lips were inches apart and nandu closed her eyes as she was not able to see manik...

near alya 's room -

cabir - mukti m going to drink water ok? u wait here ...
and he goes to the drinking water place... and spots manan
cabir - oh shit ! m so sorry

manan straighten themselves while manik gives deathly glares to cabir..

cabir - wat? arey mai paani peene aaya tha... zamana dekho aajkal toh paani peene ki jagah bhi safe nahi hai ...vaise planning achi hai... side mai room bhi hai u can go there... aur hospital bhi hai, bacha paida karne mai bhi easy hoga..
manan were blushing and looking here and there...
manik to change the topic asked cabir - arey alya ka kya hua? 2 hours is complete ...
cabir -haan chal...

n cabir went near manik 's ear and whispered - nice try to change the topic but this is due, baad mai tu gaya...
nandu - kya baat kar rahe ho tum dono? chalo...!?

and the trio went to alya 's room ..

Nandini - doctor? alya hosh mai aa gayi? aap jakar baat kar sakte hai... but sirf 2 ppl are allowed

dhruv- buddy u n nandini go... we will stay here...

manan nodded and went inside...
there they saw alya lying on the bed n
looking towards the door..

on seeing manik she became very happy and all her worries went away but as soon as she saw Nandini with manik uske again became sad...

alya - I knew ki you would come manik, I love u so much

manik - I just wanted to say that it 's over between us.. I dont want to listen any justifications pls.. u know the reason alya.. I am ashamed of u... of me, my love... did I love u less or was my love not enough? then y did u doubt that I would leave u n go to nandu? u know wat a relationship stays on trust... if there is no trust in a relationship it cannot stay for long, what u did for Nandini is inhuman, u yourself being a woman did this... I mean how could u...? I never expected this never... good bye alya.

alya - but wat about me manik? I love u..I did this to protect this relationship, my love.. this dumbo was coming -

manik - dare u call her dumbo... or else I will even forget that u r a girl do u get that... u just remain as a fab 5 member, nothing else, let not ur cheap behavior affect our friendship, and mind u we decided that u will not remain our member but this girl (and he pointed towards nandu) forced us and made us promise that we will not break our friendship, the girl who u r calling dumbo is ur real saviour...get that? bye.. take rest..

alya nodded and said - sorry nandini...

nandini- it's ok alya...u dont have to be sorry.. I completely understand the situations...

manik -(shouted) no she has to be! nandu stop being so kind to her! stop it !now chalo ...

Nandini nodded and went outside..
fab 3 were standing there with worried expressions when nandu told everyone - it's all right guys... chill fab 5 will never break.. and she smiled at all of them... n fab 4 thinking that she was an angel, a blessing for them..
precap - manik hurt!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
precap seems to be confusing
why Manik is hurt?
Now everything settled perfect like alya accept Nandini nd all
let's wait for next update
update nxt chapter soon can't wait long

Lots of love,
SAMRUDDHI
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Abhimanun ki to sach mai lotery lag gai. And manik gosh how much he love nandini update asaps
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woow nice update
And the precap 😕 what will happend to manik
Cont soon👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
love it

please i want more jealous manik

continue soon

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the part!!

But am worried about the precap
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab update..
Nd abhi entry..
it was too good 😉 😉 😉
nd manan convo.. Nd our cabir is cabir..loved the lst prt
manik care for nandini... All thng r going in a good direction..
Bt precap is still confusing...
Update soon..
Waiting..waiting... 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved ur ff
Diferent but interesting
Cont soon
Pm ur updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was superb story ...
Do pm me also ...

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