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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter-1
At Manik's home
Manik(hapily)- Muma! I m vry happy Ive got admission in VUM I'm gong to study music there
Padma(manik's mom)- Thats great beta congractulations..

Manik's father listening their convrsation frm d corner of d room enters suddenly

Ravin(manik's father)- I'm nt going to waste a single rupee on ur damn music u hv to join politics
Manik- I'm going to mumbai tomorrow nd i 'll definately join VUM

Manik left d room angrily..
Manik's P.O.V
how cn h thnks i'll join politics..it is rediculous nd break d flower wass
pov ended

At Nandini's home
Nandini on skype wid her parents

Nandini- Mom i got admission at VUM
Jyoti( Nandini's mom)- Congraks swthrt I'm vry happy fr u bt u know na our problems I know my daughter can manage d thngs better
Nandini's P.O.V.
i know mom u never hav tym fr me as usual.
pov ended

Nandini- ya mom i know
Jyoti- ok darling gtg now love u.
Nandini-bye mom


i hope u all like it nd plzz do cments nd like which encourage me to write..nd if u hv any suggestion about my stry so plz cmnt ..
nd fr pm add me...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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good start dear...
do continue soon...n pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start
Continue it
Pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AT MUMBAI... Chapter-2
All We3 (manik, mukti,cabir) reached mumbai and decided to live together in Manik's bunglow so that they all have a company and donot feel alone.After that all went to their rooms nd rested some time
Here at Nandini's place nandini was buzy wid her books nd njoying peaceful music in her ipot. Then suddenly Navya (nandini's bff) arrives

Navya- Nandini i hv a good news, Arjun (navya's czin nd nandu's frnd) is also cming wid us to Versatile university of Mumbai (VUM)

Nandini(surprisingly)- OMG (almost shouting) Arjun is also cming wid us ..woww thts d grt news

Navya-nd he is arriving today
Nandini- and

Navya- We r going to pick him frm d airpot nd then we r goig smwere to do party

Nandini-ok but where?

Navya- We will decide after wards
They both went to get ready

At manik's place ..we3 also plans to hangout..

At airport
Nandini nd navya recive Arjun ,all d three were so.happy nd xcited ..nd They decided to go to pizza hut
On d otther hand We3 ..also decide to go to pizza hut.

guys i'll try my best to make it fantastic.hope u all like it



Edited by princessgoldy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely updates
thanks for PM
continue it
post nxt part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
its very nice 👏 keep going 😃 thanks for pm 😉 update soon
Hope thr will be more twist and turns in the story 😊 keep writing and if u need any help and suggestions ask me without any hesitation 😆 waiting for next part 😛
Edited by bainu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Chap 3
Mukti- Guys i'm feelng hungry need to eat smthng ASAP

Cabir- Yup! I.m wid u mukti.lets find smthng

Manik- guys look there ..pizza hut

Cabir- Lets go..then.(excited)
dude lots of birds to watch cabir murmurs to manik
cabir nd manik staring here nd there nd.saw nanfini nd navya nd their eyes stuck to nandini

Navya Nandini nd Arjun were buzy in gossiping nd eating
thn Nandini went at counter to bring cofee navya too joined her nd arjun was buzy on a phone call meanwhile Manik also went to bring smthng ,nandini turns and accidntly bump into manik and...
Nandini- Sorry😲
Manik(becomes angry as all coffee fell on his t-shrt)- W*F dont u see that.
Nandini(politly)- I see but u suddenly comes so wht can i do

Then Navya joined Nandini
Navya- Its ok yr coffee h to hai nd she is saying sorry na so y r u being so rude!

Manik (burst at navya)- who d hell r u to tell me wht to do , u just mind ur own buisness

Cabir(calmly) - Relax manik, she is right calm down
Manik(furiously) R u taking her side cabir??
Cabir- No manik
Mukti cuts d argumnt and say
Mukti- Leave manik y we r wasting our time on that people who r not realising their mistakes
Nandini- Hey i said sorry
Arjun got d noise nd saw nandu nd navya r arguing wid V3
Manik- Sory is nt enough u hv to pay fr it
Navya - Ok.say how much it cost..

Mukti- Oh hello whom u r showing d money he is MANIK Manik malhotra
Manik- u hv to pay fr ur attitude u hv to pay..nd suddnly arjun came
Arjun - Lets go guys we need to go now

Manik Cabir nd Mukti together- Oh so d masiha man is also here ..
precap- Arjun's flash back

forgive me guys i'm late due to some prsnal issues...bt now i M back..wid new suspense..so plz if u like do comments which encourage me to write nxt chap😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chap -4
Arjun's fllashback.

V3 were chitchating nd planned to.prank someone nd guess wht that sm1 was arjun's frnd dhruv.When V3 made arrangemnts for dhruv ,Arjun spoil it nd frm tht day onwards Arjun becomes Masihaman for V3 as he alwz spoil their plan.U know guys V3 Nd arjun hv chhatiss ka aakda
flashback ends

Arjun took Navya nd Nandini wid him .at home..V3 too left frm.there

VUM 1st Day
(guys let me remembrr u V3 is in music stream.as well as arjun too nd navya nd nandu in science stream.Diferrnt stream hv diffrent building bt d library canteen auditorium r d same.).

As d classes over Nandini wants some books of biology so she went to d library .here manik wants a noveo fr tympas so he too went on d way to libraryroom. There is a corridor frm 1side Nandu was cming nd frm other Manik they both dashed together,Nandini's leg slept nd she fall on d floor .Manik burst into laughter nd enter d library door by taunting her "TIT FOR TAT"
but nandini was in a pain.as her heels was broken nd her leg was in a bad ache.she was not able to astand. But Manik cameout frm d library nd passed frm there without minding her but he saw tht she ws still on d floor hen he realize that perhaps.he hurt her as he could support her while she was falling but he couldn't .Manik went to her nd gives him his hand but she refused to take it nd tried to stand by herself but fail

Manik(attitudely):- Look there is no 1 To stand u up do u want to stay whole day nd night here.

Nandini:- My frnd will come i dnt need ur hlp nd she again tries to stand herself nd fail (nandu know that her frnds r gone but then too she didnt take manik'd hlp as it is d questn of her prestige)
Manik was stnding there nd watching her trials but as she denied him he strt walking towrds d exit nd nandu call her

Nandini(by showing him d list):- Can u take these book frm d library .!
Manik;- request??
Nandini(polietly but little attitudely):- manik can u plzz take dis books frm d library

Manik ;- wht i didnt listen??
Nandini(sweetly):- Manik can u plzz take dis book frm d library plzz wink
Manik:- Thats good
manik take d list frm her hand nd moves towrds library
As he return he sawnandini was in so much pain nd her leg swelled.He forcefully lift her nd take her to d hospital
Doctor:- dont wrry i'll give u d spray it will be get well soon jst apply it 5-4 times in a day
Nandini:- thanks doctor nd manik too

Manik replied nd again take her in his arms nd droped her home
Edited by princessgoldy - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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forgive me guys fr late update nd plzz avoid gramatical mistakes nd plzz plzz do pm nd comnts if u really like it otherwise i 'll not able to continue dis ff
thnku 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
It was awesm
Manik's tit for tat 😃 was so funny
Love manik's caring nature
it was so good pls do continue it's really nicee 😛
Thanks for d pm
Update sooon

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