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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful chapters so far
Loved the manali trip ka complete plan

And yuvraj and fenil are so cute

Loved it

Thanks for the pms
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
waiting for the next update...please update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guys look m extremely sorry but I won't be able to update except Saturdays and Sundays as i have a bery busy schedule..
I have training to do at forensic sciences laboratory and the time is the 10am-6pm and i have to travel for that as it is away from college 45 mins and it's exhausting cause we have to stand all the time we work and deal with the organs and then writing is very difficult for me...
I hope you guys understand and don't get detached from my story..
Cause my story is going on full fledged and i get so drained off..
I really want to write but my body doesn't help me..
Please m sorry m holding my ears..
Please don't get detached from my bany update i love it so much..
I love you all...

M sorry my tosh baby and aayu baby please guys bear with this..
Love,
Kiara!
Sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
^^ i knew u wrote the same here😆
take your time and give an awesome update as soon as u can..
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Posted: 10 years ago
No gettin detached frm ur stories...meri jaan toh yahan hai toh main bhi yahin hu...yuvi;)..love u kiara baby...update wen u cn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Jaldii waiting... Thnxx han kiara fr updating on kyy's first anniversary..bye epi started:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
its ok dear!! perfectly understand ur circumstance.. take care nd take ur time..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Okay okay I know I am pretty late but I don't wanna start my apologizing stuffs again as you all know and even I know my all my sorry won't be enough to the delay but I am sure my chapter will definitely compensate.

Again this update has something which is requested by my Tosh baby as she is a diehard fan of Yuvraj Thakur and she goes all gaga reading his name and update...

Chapter 9:

So how does it feel when its morning and you find yourself in your love's arm? May be you feel content and complete or may be more than that but what increases your happiness to double is finding the lost buddies again in your life and having their cute faces in front of you in the morning after so long. Yes Manik was the only one to get up early this morning and he felt content being in HIS Nandini's arm and he even felt nostalgic having Yuvi and Fenil in front of him it made him remember his past when they used to be together in dorm and Fenil always used to sneak in the boys dorm as she was not able to sleep without cuddling Yuvi. And they all used to find it cute and today seeing them cuddling sleeping peacefully the same serenity on his face reminds him something...

*** Flashback ***

"Yuvi saale uth aur Fenil ko apne dorm bhejne ka intezam kar saale", shouted Manik and Cabir. "kya hai yaar kitne sukoon se soyi hai sone de na, Manik tu na bas jealous hai ke Alya nahi aati huh", replied Yuvi "abe nautanki tujhe pata hai I least care about Alya sleeping next to me cuddling cause you know the reason and dhongi agar tu nahi utha na to Miss. KAMINI se main tujhe definitely nahi bachaunga I swear", replied Manik when he saw Cabir handling kamini mam outside the dorm and listening to kamini mam's name Yuvi got up with a jerk enough to make Fenil fall on ground but to her luch she had friends like Manik and Dhruv who caught her before she fell. "W*F, Kamini mam like seriously tum log bhi na bata nahi sakte yar" but the moment he completed his sentence he received a tight slap on his face "saale tu pagal hai main gir jaati toh, upar ka floor khali hai kyat era? Manik aur Dhruv nai hote toh I would have fallen down breaking my spine akal hai ke nahi?" asked Fenil angrily. "oye moti teri galti hai kya zarurat this rat ko aane ki and upar se itne late uthne ki jaldi nahi uth sakti?" asked Yuvi to which Fenil replied, "saale meri galti hai toh q jagta hair oz mere aane ka wait karta hair oz bolna bol".

Manik and Dhruv face palmed each other and then Dhruv said, "buddy yeh dono firse shuru hogaye ab kya kare?" "Formula no. 101" replied Manik and as a reply from Yuvi and Fenil they received a what looks and Manik lifted Fenil and Dhruv went to the dorm's window and opened it. "Formula no. 101- jab dost ki GF and dost lade toh ek hi tarika hai bachne ka dost ki GF ko uthao and bahar phek do", replied Manik after dropping Fenil out of the dorm through the window.

*** Flashback ends ***

As soon as Manik finished the memory train he started laughing which made Nandini open her eyes and she felt as if her heart stopped beating because his smile was making wonders. He was smiling and he seemed carefree and his smile woke everyone else over there and all of them so adored him as it seemed like a decade he smiled so selflessly and they dint wanted to interrupt the sight in front of them. His friends life resides in his smile yesterday they went inside leaving MaNan alone but then in the interval of time everyone came one by one as they dint feel it safe of the two being left alone and hence they all slept outside with them. They really wanted to know the reason behind that bewitching smile and when he stopped laughing they asked the reason and on telling the memory they all burst out in laughter. NavNi and Abhi were just happy seeing the HEAVENLY SEVEN out of this world. They can see the pain in that laughter the pain of not being together since past 5 years.

"we missed you both yar", said Manik and took everyone in a bear hug and looked at Nandini and a smile crept on his face.

Somewhere again Nandini was a reason to get them together, firstly she planned Manali and they Bhoota Parvat and now his stubborn of sleeping with him made them have some talks near born-fire and they drifted in sleep in the open sky which made all his friends think they are not safe and they should accompany them and then the sight and memory. He wanted to kiss that smile but he knew he was not alone he smiled back assuring he is more than happy. They roam the localities in Manali and it was evening when they planned to fill their empty stomach and then have fun.

9pm:

They had their dinner and sat in the lawn of the hotel as they have come down of the altitude and decided to rest in a hotel for the day.

"Guys let's have some fun", said Cabir with an evil grin to which everyone agreed. "But the things to do will be written in a chit and that chit is in the bowl over the table okay", said Nandini and everyone nodded in a yes. "Okay so the game is so simple a music will be playing and we would be passing the pillow and when the music stop pick up your dare and perform it", said Mukti and again everyone nodded in yes. The music started playing and it stopped on Mukti and her dare was to kiss a boy present in the room. She went to Abhi and Abhi was on cloud9 but little did he know she is Mukti Vardhan she went near Abhi and whispered in his ears, "in your dreams Abhimanyu Thakkar" and kissed her brother cum friend Manik on his cheeks who was sitting adjacent to Abhi which made Abhi frown and at the same time he felt hope. The pillow was passed again and this time it was Cabir, and everyone hooted his name but their hopes went in vain when Cabir got a dare of his forte that was teasing someone and he irritated Navya a lot. The game continued and everyone performed the dare and now only YuvNil and MaNan were left and soon pillow stopped on Yuvi and his dare was to do 25 pushups with his love sitting on his back and he was like OMG now m gone but he completed his dare and the next was Fenil and reading her dare it seemed her eyes would leave the orbits and come out.

"What is your dare Fenil?", asked Manik but seeing her not replying Nandini snatched the paper and started laughing and then read out the dare, "perform a seductive dance with your partner", now this time it was Yuvi whose lips turned in an O' but he was eagerly waiting for her sizzling moves and after a lot of hoots the light went off and the room was turned into purple lights and then came Fenil in a sexy purple and black mini dress enough to make Yuvi go mad and boys teased Yuvi...

Fenil started singing getting really close to Yuvi...

Oh come to me

na na na na..

I came to see

Na na na na..

She traced Yuvi's lips and kissed at the corner of his lips..

Her act made everyone surprised... but Yuvi was more than surprised..

She moved her lips to his cheeks and bite his cheeks cheekily...

Honthon pe beimaaniyan

Karle karle, thodi nadaaniyan

Honthon pe manmaaniyaan

Karle karle, thodi nadaaniyan

She snaked her arms in his neck and made him hold her tight with one hand to her waist and second hand on the bare leg that was moving on the right side of Yuvi's body which was charging him and making him lose it..

Mujhe aadhi raat ko sataane lage

Mujhe apne saath tadpaane lage

Tu aaja paas, ye bulaane lage

Tujhe chhoona chaahe

Mere ye, mere ye, mere

She did the signature step and seductively traced her lips...

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pal-pal tujh ko karte miss

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

I know you want my baby lips

Na na na na..

She again went close to him lifted his face by chin and mimicked the lyrics that she knows his lips wants hers and again she kissed the corner of his lips..

Yuvi continued to dance with him singing few lines...

Hello-hello bolke

Baby lips kholke

Harqataan kare naughtiyan

Missing tenu whole day

Love you menu bol de

Adaavan teri hegi naughtiyan

She went to her and held his collar and bend herself down and his hands supported her from waist and she came forward smacking with his chest.

Meri khwahishon ko talab hai teri

Aa qareeb aa, ab kar na deri

Meri khwahishon ko talab hai teri

Aa kareeb aa, ab kar na deri

Tere faasle muje jalaane lage

Raftaar saanson ki badhaane lage

Tu aaja paas ye bulaane lage

Teri baat maane

Mere ye, Mere ye, Mere..

She again did the signature step..

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pal-pal tujh ko karte miss

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

I know you want my baby lips

Na na na na..

Oh come to me

na na na na..

I came to see

Na na na na..

Suddenly the water started pouring on them indicating it's raining but Fenil was in no mood to leave cute Yuvi she held his hand and pulled him close and hugged him passionately and due to the wetness they were getting hot...

But they parted away as she knew they were not alone and it was just a dare..

Dil baarishon mein tarasne lagaa

Teri pyaas mein ye dhadakne lagaa

Dil baarishon mein tarasne lagaa

Teri pyaas me ye dhadakne lagaa

She gave her hand in his and suddenly they felt goosebumps..

Tere haath mein haath jo aane lage

Mere soye armaan jagaane lage

Tu aaja pas ye bulaane lage

Tere hona chaahe

Mere ye, Mere ye, Mere..

She did the signature step and aroused him a bit more

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pal-pal tujhko karte miss

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

Pink lips, pink lips, pink lips

I know you want my baby lips

Hello-hello bolke baby lips kholke

Missing tenu whole day

Love you menu bol de

Now it was Yuvi who was out of control and everyone knew what was coming next hence they closed their eyes and YuvNil kissed...

"ehem ehem guys don't forget still the winner is not announced and so let's start it between the best couple MaNan", announced Cabir breaking the trance and the game started again and Manik was about to get caught but he winked at Nandini and she lost her sense and she was caught instead of Manik. "but Manik ne cheating ki" she said "acha Nandini kya kiya maine", she knew Manik knows she won't be able to describe the act hence she lifted the chit from the bowl and she read it in mind. It says, propose your love again' and a smile crept on her face cause she exactly wanted to say Manik what all she felt for him...

She clapped twice and the lights were off and then there was a small round stage small enough to make two people stand on it. Suddenly there was dim white and red light and they were so pleasing and suddenly there came a girl on the stage but due to dim lights only her shadow was seen but it dint took a sec for Manik to recognize who see was and then she spoke the world's best words for his guy, "From the egg to the kiss, an unbelievable, incredulous, improbable yet beautifully witnessed journey of our relationship, my Love She chuckles on her own sentence reminiscing their journey. From Meethi Boliyan to Zehnaseeb an incredible music journey of ours. Music that connects us, music that bring us together, music that binds us together, music that loves us, she reminisces their duet performance and so does he. From your stars to my fireflies, both of them never failed to shine for us and they always made it possible that we don't fall apart. From I will always shine for you' to I love you' a worth travelling journey. From the punch to the kiss a love-hate relationship, that is unique in its own way. Manik was teary now he wanted to go next to her and hug her tightly but he knew she wanted to say much. From your anger to my stubbornness both had it advantages and disadvantages cause your anger made you hurt yourself and my stubborn made me hurt you but I don't regret any of that moment cause all that made us fall for each other even more. From our sacrifice to our selfishness, sacrifice cause we love each other so much that you thought Dhruv is better for me and I thought we are toxic so I should sacrifice and selfish cause for the first time you only cared about us and me too. She wanted to speak so much but the tears were not helping her they were flowing down her cheeks Manik even seeing her shadow was able to see the tears rolling down her cheeks he wanted to wipe it but was stopped by his Love. Suddenly the shadow went on her knees and now she had the spotlight and the mesmerizing Nandini in white lace dress head down as if surrendering herself to him. Manik you gave me everything I ever needed more than I deserve. You loved me like no one in the world would, you accepted me with my flaws. You accepted my family ignoring the fact that we don't match your standards acha baba I am sorry I know you don't like such facts. Manik you never failed me you were always there for me to protect me to guide me to be with me. You taught me to love myself because of you we are MaNan we are called MaNan. Manik I want to be with you entire my life, I want to tie the knot with you, make love to you, I wanna cute little babies that will call me Maa and you Daddy. I want to die in your arms because they are the safest place and they assure me that I will be safe there. Manik you are everything I ever want. tumse pyaar itna mila hai ke jee karta hai yuhi rahu humesha jhukaye mera sar sajde main tere'. She bowed her head and everyone was crying there Manik ran to her and hugged her tightly and was about to say when Nandini kept her hand on his mouth and gestured a NO. Manik please kuych bhi mat bola, yeh mera chance hai and I have said the things that everyone knows is a fact and isme embarrassed nahi hun main maine sacchai boli hai and I can't take all the credit of this relation na?

I wanna sing for you...

Naa kuch pucha, naa kuch manga,

Tune dil se diya jo diya,

Naa kuch bola, naa kuch tola,

Muskura ke diya jo diya,

Tu hi dhoop tu hi chayya,

Tuhi apna paraya,

Aur kuch na jaanu bas itna hi jaanuuu...

She knelt in front of her again and bowed..

TUJHME RAB DIKHTA HAI YAARAN MAIN KYA KARUN

TUJHME RAB DIKHTA HAI YAARAN MAIN KYA KARUN

SAJDE SIR JHUKTA HAI YAARAN MAIN KYA KARUN

TUJHME RAB DIKHTA HAI YAARAN MAIN KYA KARUN

They sealed their lips not caring about the world and were crying their heart out... and the rest of them surrounded them closing their eyes tears flowing down their cheeks...

Precap:

"shayad isliye bhagwan ne hume fir milaya cause main aur Fenil yeh witness kar sake, Cabir inko sambhalna ache logo ko nazar jaldi lagti hai and Manik is baar tuta toh nahi sambhal paayega", said Yuvi..


"Kabhi kabhi kuch log humare zindagi main sirf pyaar ka matlab samjhane aate hai... wo humesha shayad nahi reh sakte..

I will always be there!! I love you!!" - Kiara.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Just one word PERFECT!!👏
It had comedy , romance , seduction , emotions and love!!
I have fallen much more in love with this ff..
So starting , I forgot everything after the confession kya karun yaar!
Think think haan waking up Manik waking up yaad aa gaya!😆
So Manik thinking of the memory and to say the memory was hilarious is an insult , it was more than hilarious..
Girl-friend aur best-friend ki ladayi ho toh GF ko bahar phek do haha too good😉
Kamini Oh my scared of her hehe😃 yuvi calling fenil moti haha loved it..
Then all woke up hearing manik's laughter and adoring him aww how i could imagibe that scene !!😳 Heavenly 7 awesome!! Manik admiring nandini and she smiling back aww so cute yaar..😊
After that having fun hehe Mukti lured Abhi in man hehe and went to manik..
Cabir irritating Navya always!!
Yuvi and fenil oh oh ho hot!!😳
Dance sequence was perfectly described! then they kiss and all close eyes , i imagined that too..😳
Oh yay MaNan are left! Manik cheated haww😆 winked at her lovely👏
Nandini to propose Manik and what she did and said I can't explain how amazing and heart-touching was that..
This is ur best chapter till date! It had all that is needed in the perfect blend..
I loved MaNan kiss at the end and all surrounding them and all teary-eyed My God when does this happen in the show??
Can it get better??
I loved what Yuvi said in precap and the last words stole my heart away.!!
This would probably spoil the comment but I am first😆 AGAIN!!
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was fabulas
the only word that cn gt is perfect
the way u pinned was too aweseome yar i loved every part of story
the way of there flashback which was very precious in our life u pinned very beautifully
they gve most happiness the childish acts the naught thoughts was fab yar
the manik was too heartfully happy abt hs past
make every one happy to see very precious thing in there life😊😊😊
the bond between fenil n yuvi wastoo good
the waymukiti said to abhi was good
the cupid was every time wth navya to irrtate her more
the last nt the least the manan
the way nandu said each every one word was awesome 😊
having of water in eyes the way nandu said every word that she mean of her
i jst loved
continue soon

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