MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

Awesome update. Each and every word is so deep. The way you portrait Manik and Virat it's really commendable. For me it was very emotional. I love it most when Virat asked Manik if he can call him papa...it was awesome. Last part was very cute between MaNan
Thanks for pm
Please update soon

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Wow superb fantastic update dea. ..

Continue soonnn

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

Beautiful update

Loved it

Very nicely written

Cont soon

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

u penned so beautifully...
loved the song sequence...its lyrics was perfect for manan
then manan proposal was magical...
its a beautiful ring...loved that scene a lot
then...nandu and virat scene was so touching and loved the way she explained about manik...
the most touching and emotional part was manik and virat scenes...u penned this part so perfectly...its really comentable...!!!
brilliant work dear...
then the last manan part...nandini's bedroom scene...its awesome...
thanks a lot for the pm dear
continue soon
take care

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499
Nice update
Manik nd Virat r sharing such a beautiful relationship
the way portrayed it was commendable
keep writing
nd ring was so beautiful
Sorry card was too cute

Thank you so much dearie...

I wanted a ring that would symbolize them, glad you liked it...😊😊😊

Sorry msg was the best I could do with screenshot of the scene...😉😉😉

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: hetalloveparth
As usual awesome update
Continue soon

Thank you so much dearie for taking your time to read and comment😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Originally posted by: Asha_25
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Manik & Virat convo was awesome.
Continue soon.

Thank you dearie...

Glad you liked Manik-Virat convo, was one of my toughest piece to write😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Originally posted by: suv-kriyaansh
mindblowing update

loved manik and virat's bonding...😳

excited 4 manan's wedding...

cntinue sooonn

Thanks dearie...😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: Sidhaarthi
Hey don't be sorry for long update in face we would like to read long updates from you
You have penned the love between Virat and Manik very beautifully. The other side of Manik is very much wonderful to read be it his chemistry with Nandini his bonding with his friends or now the new found love of a dad son relationship you have written it very beautifully
Thanks for the pm cont your good work

Thank you sweetie... Glad you didn't mind the length 😉😉😉

I'm so happy that you enjoyed the shades of Manik that I tried to include in the story. I just hope I do justification to the characters 😊😊😊

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: Roshni8
Awesome
Amazing
Mind blowing
Have no more words to express
You have penned it so beautifully

Awesome prposal. The ring was beautiful
Nandini and Virat's talk was superb
Manik and Virat's bonding is awesome as well

Love this SS...
You are an amazing writer
Cont ASAP

Aww Roshni... I hope that's your name dearie 😉

You never fail to shower me with so much of compliments. Your words of encouragement are indeed an inspiration for me to write more...

Thanks hun🤗🤗🤗