Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Teaser for CHAPTER-4
Leave u idiot screamed manik at the top of his voice at a person
Ha do you think i kidnapped u to leave you huh?
Harshad is that u? Is it? Y have u kidnapped me huh?
To take revenge and nobody can save yoy nw ha ha ha told harshad and gave a wicked smile
You are wrong mister screamed a female voice
Who is it??
Me zara palat ke toh dekh mamu
Both manik and harshad turned behind and saw a female figure near the door
Missed me huh??

Lo tumhara torture 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Thanks for the likes and comments and srry for the late update

CHAPTER-4

Nandini uthooo!! Screamed navya at the top of her voice

Kya hua navya kyu subha subha loud speaker ki tarah chilla rahi ho aur koi kaam nahi he kya tumhe told nandini in a sleepy voice and dozed off again

Pata he kabhi-kabhi hume toh shakh hita he ki tum army me sachmuch thi kya

ARREee!! Idhar hum gala fad- fad kar chilla rahe he aur tum so rahi ho huh??? Screamed a frustrated navya

Navya khud bhi so jao aur mujhe bhi sone do vese bhi chahi toh 2 months tak wapis nahi aayigi na Mangalore se

Toh kya tum 2 mahine tak hybernation karne wali ho??

Kis ka nation ??

ARREee!! Hybernation jis animals bohat sara kh... Tum fir so gayi bas abhi uthooo!! screamed navya and started shaking her vigorously.

Accha baba uth gayi abh hilana band kar esa lag raha tha ki me train ki dickie me hu

Train me dickie nahi hoti

Thik he baba train ki seat pe ab khush !!

Ha abhi ja washroom me

Soon nandini came out of the washroom and changed in a sleeveless black spaghetti top with a belt and army shorts.She strapped her gun to her thigh and hide a dragger in her socks

Chal navya said nandini as she ame down the stairs wearing her Rolex watch

Oh!! Hello tum manik ko guard karne ja rahi ho usse mar dalne nahi samjhi

Kuch nahi chal woh toh wese hi ejk idiot he

And the sped off to college

SPACE COLLEGE

Nandini aaj tum hamare hatho se bachogi nahi itna speed koi gadi chalata he kya humari toh jan hi nikal di thi tumne screamed navya running behind a nandini hu was giggling

Par navya BMW toh fast hi chalate he na replied nandini giggling chup karo screamed navya at last catching up with her

OOHh! Black & white madhubala kyu itna shor mucha rahi ho asked cabir coming towards them with dhruv ,mukti and alya behind him

But nandinis eyes were searching someone else wwaise tumhare group j
Ka leader kaha he?? Asked nandini

Kyu re chotu humare manik ki yaad aa rahi he ??

Nahi esa kuch nahi he

Waise bhi woh college nahi aya he ? Aur phone bhi nahi utha raha he ??

Oh ! K me abhi ati hu navya bye

ARREee! Hume in rakshaso ke sath kaha chod bhage ja rahi ho !!

Pick up the phone dammit!! Screamed nandini coming near the storeroom

If find u with your tongue down any girls throat then u are dead manik malhotra thought .nandini to herself.

Suddenly she heard some whispers coming from the store room

SPACE STOREROOM

Leave u idiot screamed manik at the top of his voice at a person

Ha do you think i kidnapped u to leave you huh?

Harshad is that u? Is it? Y have u kidnapped me huh?

To take revenge and nobody can save yoy nw ha ha ha told harshad and gave a wicked smile

You are wrong mister screamed a female voice

Who is it??

Me zara palat ke toh dekh mamu

Both manik and harshad turned behind and saw a female figure near the door

Missed me huh?? Said the voice and came closer

So who ever are u girl go away or u will also be killed

Ha u will kill me told nandini in a dramatic voice and started giggling

What are u laughing for girl?? Asked harshad

Just think that how badly i am going to beat u
Replied nandini rudely

Oh!! yea... but before harsha could finish

WACK!!

And he was on the ground

But what manik saw gave him the shock of life

NANDINI!!

Are u fine ? Tumhe lagi toh nahi na?uss bewakoof ne kuch kiya tph nahi na ? Tum yaha kaise pohche ? Aur tumne fight kyu nahi kiya ?

Arre!! Shut up now aur mete rasi kholo yaha me bandha hua hu aur waha tum mujhe lecture de rahi ho !!

Oh srry chalo yaha se saying this she caught maniks hand and dragged him out

Thanks manik told

Welcome replied nandini with a smile

Her smile is just so beautiful thought manik to himself

By the way kya tum aise hi kapde pehenti ho

Kaise

U know the way u have worn now and pointed towards her attire

Yup koi problem he kya??

No no

Bye nandini


Bye
Hash khatam hogaya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Chalo promo ke sath kush raho actually a cliffhanger 😆

Manik kaha leke ja rahe ho ?
Tum bas chalo yaha aur Q mat pucho bohot puchti ho
Kya ? how could u tell like that?? Aise kisi ke muh pe nahi bolte? You know what sare mard na ais... but before she could cont she felt someone seal her lips over hers
Hers lips are so soft like petals thought manik as he nibbled them
But nandini eyes were wide in shock
Manik tried to part her lips with his tougne
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
CHAPTER 4

Nandini in full speed ran towards canteen screaming at the top if her voice SRRY NA!

srry kya aru tumhare srry ka masala banau na nandu screamed navya

arre mujhe kya malum tha ki woh tumhari aisi halat kar denge told nandu as she climbed on a table where to boys were eating snacks

are rakshaso ke pas chodkar ati ho aur bol rahi ho ki mujhe nanmalum hu??

Aree tum washroom ja kar change bhi toh kar sakti ho na plss abhi ke liye chod d... nandu left hersentence incomplete as soon as she saw fab-5 enter

manik smirked as he saw nandini oogling at him

but his chai of thoughts were broken when suddenly one boy who was siting on the table was on ground in a second

WT* u bas**** how dare u touch my leg huh?? what u think i am agli baar as paas dikha naa toh maar daldungi samjha

toh mene bhi toh itne sexy legs nahi dekhe the na

u jerk saying this nandini picked by the collar and slapped and punched him and threw him on other table

agar nandini fab-5 se nahi darti he toh tu toh chomu he re aya bada huh

told nandini and walked of to a table with navya and sat there

toh miss nandini murthy ko humse dar nahi lagta he huh? asked manik evily

zyada chapad-chapad mat karo warna firse storeroom me uss manic ke pass chod kar aa jaungi samjhe na khud ko toh sambhal nahi sakte chale ragging karne saying this she saw her mobile

u miss murthy tumhari murthi bana dungi samjhi na told alya angrily

ohh hello barbie doll zyada mat bolo tumhe todne me zyada time nahi lagega mujhe samjhi na replied nandini back in a sarcastic tone

manik was like what the hell !! this girl na

nandini come with me i want to show u something

and it will be so nice that u won't be able to fight it back

Manik kaha leke ja rahe ho ?

Tum bas chalo yaha aur Q mat pucho bohot puchti ho

Kya ? how could u tell like that?? Aise kisi ke muh pe nahi bolte? You know what sare mard na ais... but before she could cont she felt someone seal her lips over hers

Hers lips are so soft like petals thought manik as he nibbled them

But nandini eyes were wide in shock

Manik tried to part her lips with his tougne

but before manik coyld succeed he to was on the ground in fraction of seconds

u idiot urrfghh!! screamed nandini and tried to wipe her lips with hands

what have u done u moron

u will pay a heavy price for what u did manik malhotra a very heavy one

saying this she ran off but fell after colliding with someone

but just got up and walked of

manik to got and was about to walk off when he saw a picture lying on the ground

guesss now whos pic is it??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome...
Read all in a go...

Continue soon...

Pm me if possible...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Interesting story..read all the chapters..loving this fighter nandini..please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
As my birthday is coming soon guys so as i will give the next chapter but u will have to guess my age for it

And if u will guess it correctly i will give 2 maha updates on the same day 😆

So start guessing and plss can someone tell me how to change the title of the story if i want to pls guys 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelanadar087

As my birthday is coming soon guys so as i will give the next chapter but u will have to guess my age for it

And if u will guess it correctly i will give 2 maha updates on the same day 😆

So start guessing and plss can someone tell me how to change the title of the story if i want to pls guys 😊


Ur birthday is coming..!!! wohooo..!!
hey u can change title by editing ur 1st post..!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
let me guess ur birthday..!!! but u have to give some hint na..!! 😳
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: angelanadar087

As my birthday is coming soon guys so as i will give the next chapter but u will have to guess my age for it

And if u will guess it correctly i will give 2 maha updates on the same day 😆

So start guessing and plss can someone tell me how to change the title of the story if i want to pls guys 😊




wow..ur birthday ...thts awesome...give some hints...will try to guess ur age...😉
for changing the title...edit ur first post...!!! 😊

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago

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