Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
its awesome yr
cont soon
dont end it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow wat an owsm blossom part yaar ab kya hoga uss ladke ka aur kya hoga hmare manik ka ab Nandini ko aise dekh kr
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
manik woo
bechari nandu manik itni work kiya wotho gadbad kardiya
so soory for navya
bt nw hw will help that poor boys
continue soon
thnks pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update 👏👏
love it
nandini ko dekh ke 2 time behosh gaya
this is dam funny 🤣
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Srry very srry for the late update par me kya karu yeh Angela he na badi jaldi usne mujhe bataya ki uska ek story bhi chal raha he

Oh srry by the i am Claudine Nadar Angela's elder sister and now i will continue this story and yeah i am just oe minute elder hehehe..

Actually we both are twins our mom and dad had got divorced due to which we were seprated at the age of 5 and Angela was with mom while i with dad

And recently mom had passed away due to which Angela is depressed and she is now only studying so she has handed over me this account so guys i hope u all will love the story and need not worry angela is fine just stressed

And ha i am a free frolic girl so i am not sensitive like steffo( Angela's pet name) and yeah guys please call me by my pet name Frizz so i hope u all will love the story which now i will write

Love

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER 23

N: so guys lets get started with the plan ok

Mu: yeah aisa karte he pehle baccho ko bula lete he

M: yeah right so mukti with navya , alia with dhruv ,mein aur nandini ...

C: manik hume na kaam aaj hi khatam karna he ok so me tere aur nandini ke sath aunga

N: no need cabir tum canteen wale se iss bare me baat kar lo ok aur me bhi dekhti hu ki yeh kaise kaam nahi karta ( saying this nandini rubbed her hands together)

M: gu...guys...lets..move

And they all dispersed in all directions to execute the plan

Manik and nandini were walking away with the ropes and tins of buckets from the store room when they saw princi

N: god yeh princi yaha kya kar raha he issne hume dekh liya toh cid wale questions puchega

M: chalo iss khali class me

And they both hid in it

Nandini kept the paint tins on the table and saw around it was biology lab

N: sheesh yeh kya he bio lab yuck yaha pe toh sab mare hua padw rehte he na

M: nandu yeh dekh and showed her a book

N: yeh kya he? And took the book and saw its label ( the basics of s word)

M: yeh humare bohot kaam ayega whispered manik huskily in nandinis ears making her shiver

Nandini just pushed manik away and went a few steps ahead when she felt a tug at pallu she turned behind and saw manik pulling it with a mischievous smile

He came closer to her and pulled her closer by her waist and rammed his lips with her

Kissing her with full vegance making nandini moan and pinned her to the wall and kissed her licking her lips and entering her mouth and licking all the sweet corners of her mouth and biting her lips

Nandini also responded with full love making manik want for more but they parted away for air

Manik saw nandinis closed eyes and swollen lips he placed his forehead with hers and told nandini open your baby

But nandini didn't open her eyes manik smiled as he saw that and smiled and removed his tongue and started licking her swollen lips making nandini gasped and opened her eyes

Manik saw nandinis eyes and kissed her eyes and pulled her close by her waist and removed her hairs and started kissing her neck making nandini moan and she digged her hands in his hairs pulling him more toqards her

Manik started making love bites on her neck making nandini hiss in pain he immediately kissed there snd licked there to soothe the pain

Knock! knock!
They immediately parted away and saw each other manik went and opened the door and saw cabir there giving them a frown

C: toh hogaya tumhara toh chale ya aur kuch baki he?

M: princi se bachne ke liye yaha chupe the

C: ha princi jo 15 mins pehle yaha se chala gaya tha toh in 15 mins yaha kya ho raha ? Huh? Ab bol? Bol na? Chup kyu he abhi?

M: dekh late ho raha he chal tune red aur white feathers liye?

C: ha pure do sacks leke aya hu

And they all left towards canteen

C: (to nandini ) tumne usse part 2 ke bare me kuch bataya kya?

N: nahi pagal hogaye ho kya usse pata chal gaya toh woh toh plan hi cancel kar dega tph tumlog jao jake canteen me sari tayari ya karo me unhe leke aati hu

C: yup go ahead

N: manik me abhi ayi woh princi ko mujhse kuch kaam he

M: accha...ruko me bhi aata hu tumhare sath

N: nahi..koi zarurat nahi manik me aati hu tumlog canteen me sari tayariya karo ok bye

And nandini rushed off though manik felt a little suspicious but he ignored and went with cabir to canteen

Nandini reached the 3rd floor and saw nilesh,dev and mayank there

She went towards them and told

N: hey boys tum log kitne bored lag rahe ho chalo lets do some fun huh? Said nandini seductively and caressed thier face giving them naughty looks and walked ahead and and turned

N: follow me boyzss

CANTEEN

Mu: oucch ...oucch..oucch..baccho plss mere bal chodo tumhe ranbow wale chickens dekhne he na toh plss shant ho jao

Ch: nahi..hume dekhna he lambow wala shiken

A: ha bab( pulling the ropes) woh aa rahe he tum log shant ho jao

D: ha bacho shant hojao ( tying the ropes to the paint buckets ) accha chocolate kise khani he? ( signalling to pull the buckets up)

Ch: mujhe...mujhe khani he mujhe

C: pulling the ropes up and tying it from the door) baccho sab ko ek ek kar kar milega

M: yeh nandini kaha he? Woh abhi tak aayi kyu nahi? Princi ke office me hi toh gayi thi

Knock knock

Fab5 & Na: Nandini!

Cabir untied the rope and opened the door and she entered and told

N: they are coming get ready

Na: ha tum baccho ko sambhalo( and tied the rope to door again)

N: baccha party dekho abhi tumhe sabse anookha,sabse alag,sabse sundrr chicken dekhne ko milega toh sab shant ho jao

N: cabir camera on kar de

C: aye aye captain

Suddenly they heard the creaking of door

All became silent

When boys entered the paint bucket fell over them

They ran in front but the buckets were arranged in a line so the paint kept falling on the

Ch: purple! Blue! Red! Yellow! Orange! Green! White!

The boys stopped when paint was not falling immediately cabir and manik came and threw the white feathers over them

And dhruv threw the red ones

Immediately the children shouted

Ch: rainbow roosters cucckkdookooo!!

Everyone in canteen started laughing over the boys

The navya came and threw cake over thier faces

They immediately ran away

M: look the chickens are running away cuckdoko!

And all laughed when suddenly navya hugged nandini

Na: thanks humare birthday ko special banae ke liye

N:( parting away ) are abhi toh party shuru hui he and brought out a cake which had navyas photo and in top HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAVYA and below in brackets ( MADHUBALA)

Na: Cabir !

C: hehehe... Happy birthday madhubala ji urrff Navya

And navya cut the cake and fed everyone ...


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I hope i could write like Angela aur ha agar spelling mistakes he toh plss ignore snd criticism allowed

Love

Frizz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hehehehe lol Fantabulous

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loving it very much
Srry 4 choutu com

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Posted: 9 years ago
mindblowing update...i jus loved it
tnqu sooo much for such a wonderful n lovely story...
u penned it so well dea...
its very funny...hahahaha
i jus laughing till the end of this part...i jus cant describe it in words...m speechless...its jus wow dea
as always manan scene is pure bliss...plsss update aoon
cant wait more...desperately waiting for ur update...
ur such a amazing writer ...hats off 2 u
plsss tc of angela...love uu n utoo tc
LOTS OF LOVE
KEEP WRITING AND SMILING
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks very much dear i hope u would love it more and yeah angela is fine i hope she adjusts with dad ( obivo not with me )

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