Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow..amazing story...jus now i read all part in 1 go...i jus loved it each and every part...
u penned it so well dea...
plsss update soon
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow so much response i am just so happy and my way of gifting is a bonus chapter

CHAPTER 22

*FLASHBACK*

Nandu went towards the gate after parking when suddenly a boy saw her and frooze where he was just staring at her she ignored and entered

As she had wore a saree for the first time she had a difficulty in walking when suddenly she tripped but balanced herself but her phone fell down so she bent down to pick it so her hairs came in front exposing her bare back

She picked her mobile and again tried walking but she could not walk like the way she in shorts as the fabric was drapped tightly around her legs

Having no option and fearing of falling she walked like a model swaying her perfect body with every step and balancing herself on those black pencil heels

All the boys were left mouth opened as for them a girl in short dress was sexy but nandini had turned this opinion flat down as they just stared at her while some just fell on the ground loosing thier senses as they could not take in so much hotness so what will happen to Manik huh? ;)

Nandini was walking through the corriders searching for navya but could not find her she thought to phone her but her phone was not working she was trying to repair it and her hairs were just falling over irritating her when suddenly someone tucked them behind her ears she turned and saw manik with cabir behind him they both were seeing from top to bottom

She passed him a smile

*END OF FLASHBACK*

When suddenly manik blacked out and fell nandini became shock she with the help of cabir took him to the medical room

The doctor checked him and told that he has went into a shock but will wake up i a few minutes and walked away

Cabir came towards nandini

C: kya manik ko mardal dene kaa irada tha kya?

N: aree woh navya ka birthday he na toh yeh uski choice ka kapda he

C: aaj toh college ke sare boys ki maut pakki he

N: kyu?

C: kyuki maate ja sab apko ghurenge toh manik angery hulk ban jaiga aur sab ko ya toh maarega ya fir maar hi dal dega

But thier conversation got interrupted when they heard manik waking up

M: ouch! Yaar kya sapna dekha mene aaj cabir nandini ek red aur black saree pehen kar aa rahi thi aur woh kitni sexy aur hot dikh rahi thi paar mera sapna tutgaya par me yaha...

His words were left incomplete bwhen he again saw nandini and before she could say anything manik again lost his senses

N: aarrgghh! Ek toh itna tayar ho kar aayi hu upar se behosh hoye ja raha he i hate him

Told nandini and went out and saw aliya and mukti

M: wow nandini tu kitni sundar,hot,beautiful aur sexy dikh rahi he

A: ya nandini tum kitni gorgeous lag rahi ho mujhe toh lagta tha ki saree me koi bhi sexy nahi lag sakta he but u changed .y point of view

M: ya same here par manik toh tumhe dekh kar behosh ho jaiga

N: ho jaiga nahi ho gaya

M&A: kya

And nandini narrated them the whole story which on hearing both girls started laughing loudly

M: cabir he na manik ke sath?

N: ha he woh

M: good chal alu hum jake navya ko wish karke aate he

A: hey! I am not alu chal aur ha nandini apna dhyan rakhna

N: sure bye

M&A: bye

Nandini was walking aimlessly when she saw navya sitting in a corner and sniffing with cake all over her

She hurried towards her and asked navya kya hua?

Na: nandini(sniff)... woh boys(sniff) ne mujh pe saara cake gira diya ( sniff)

MEDICAL ROOM

C: agya hosh tujhe saale

M: nandini ...nandini kaha he?

C: saale woh tere liye itna sajdhaj kar ayi thi par tu kam akal usko dekte hi behosh ho gaya woh bhi 1
Nahi 2-2 baar usko kitna bura lag raha hoga

M: toh uss liye hi toh puch raha hu woh kidhar he?

Suddenly they both noticed aliya and mukti coming coming towards them laughing

Mu: tu seriously behosh hogaya omg! And resumed laughing

A: manik it was mean bechari ko kitna bura laga hoga na

M: aree toh iss liye me puch raha hu woh kidhar he??

Mu&A: humne toh usse 2nd floor pe dekha tha

M: fir chalo guys waha chalte he

And they moved towards the second floor in search of nandini when they saw a crying navya with cake all over her and nandini consoling her and wiping away the cake with a tissue

They all reached there and asked navya what happened

And she narrated them clearly every detail

*FLASHBACK*

Navya was walking towards Fab-5 jam room when she saw some group of boys gattered around a specific place she was passing through them when one of them struck out his leg and navya tripped over it and fell down

R
They took that cake box and had some of it

Nilesh: oh so behenji ka birthday he iss liye chamak challo bani fir rahi he

Dev: huh in jesi ladkiyo ko toh himmat hi nahi hoti ki woh chote kapde pehne huh and droped all the cake on her and left away laughing

*END OF FLASHBACK*

N: how dare they bas bohot hogaya abb me unhe saza dilaungi In Fab-5 and nandini murthy style

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Guys i am not getting much response for my new story plss read it and tell me or then i will leave this writing of stories

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...
manik malhotra behosh..
woh bhi 1 nahi 2 times...😆😆
and bechari navya...
boys troubled her...
but dont worry our nandu is there so no fear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg manik do bar gir gaya ...
Lol ...
Very nice update ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fab update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hahahahaha
Zat was damn funny...
U just killed it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Manik behosh ho gya woh bhi 1 nahi 2-2 baar...
It was just awesome...
Will be waiting 4 next part...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update
funny manik backed out twice
can't wait for the revenge...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!! what an amazing update..
m speechless...i dont have any words to say...while reading only one word came from my mouth is jus WOW... u penned it beautifully... hats off 2 u..
the way write is just outstanding...
plsss update soon...eagerly waiting for ur next part...
keep writing...
n thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice
update soon
thanks for pm

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