Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT

PLEASE NANDINI KI KOI ARMY BALA FREND LAKE MANIK KO JEALOUS FEEL KARWO MERI YEH BOHOT TIME SE WISH HAI TUM NE PURI TOH NEHI KI I THOUGHT BATA DETI HU AB PURI KAR DENA

CONTINUE SOON

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Srry srry really very srry for the late update but my exams were running and i had to concentrate in it so plss forgive me and even my mom expired due to which i was a little depressed but i am fine now

CHAPTER 18

Manik just hugged nandini tightly and pulled her more closer to himself

N: Manik leave me na baby i need to go plss Navya might be searching for me

M: No!! ( told manik and bobbed his head like a child ) i don't care for that Navya but i am not leaving u ( told manik and winked at her)

N: go away i have to play KBC with Navya not u upon that she just asks to many Qs ( told nandini and ran out)

M: I know u have changed a lot in these years but i still know that u desire to do all those girly thinga like all normal girls do shopping, make up,wearing girly clothes and looking good but at a small age u were handed with guns in your hand just because of me , just to protect me i promise this that i will bring back that nandini who i lost ( thought manik to himself)

C: Yehhh kya hua?? Kaise hua?? Kab huaaa? Jab hua!! Tabh hua?? Abh chodo yeh na puchooo hmmm hmmm yehhh kya huaaa? Sang Cabir and eyed manik and giggled

M: kya hua Cabir??( asked manik frustratingly)

C: toh wohi puch raha hu yyeh kya hua?? Kaise hua?? Kab hua ?? Chalo chodo

M: shut up yaar told manik

C: by the way nandini parking me tera wait kar rahi he

M: par woh waha kya kar rahi he mene toh usse kuch nahi bola

C: kyuki mene usse bola ab tu ja raha he ya me tujhe laat marke bahar bheju

M: ja raha hu bye aur ha thanxs champ

C: senti na ban warna me bhi aa jaunga tum logo ke sath

M: koi zarurat nahi he
(Saying this manik rushed off)

PARKING

N: UFFF yeh ladka kaha he me bore ho rahi hu

M: nandu mujhe miss kiya

N: nahi kiya badi jaldi aye ho tum itni badi toh tange he jaldi bhaagne ko nahi hua kya !!

M: srry chalo car me baitho

(They both sat in when suddenly .)

N: manik me gadi chala sakti hu kya plsss plss mujhe chalane de do

M: no nahi never

N: moron

M: idiot

N: stupid

M: mad

N: chapadganju

M: what??

N: hahahaha...

M: whatever

Suddenly maniks phone rang

M: nandini mera phone dedo na me drive kar raha hu na

N: ha abhi uthati hu

N: hello!! Kon he?
S:hello baby how are u mujhe bohot bore ho raha he kaha ho tum??
N: kon ho tum??
S: baby me soha mujhe bhul gaye kya? Aur yeh tumhari awaz ko kya ho gaya he
N: kuch nahi darling tumse baat kar raha hu na issliye gusse me mera gala baith gaya he
S: toh woh khada kab hoga??
N: mujhe kya machine samajh kar rakha he
S: baby mujhe na uss nandini pe gussa aa raha he ussne mujhe kitna irritate kar rakha he
N: Soha u know what
Babuji kaihte he ghar chod do,
Ma kehti he gao chod do,
Bhagwan kehte he ki jeena chod do,
Aur mera man aur dil kehte he ki tum mujhe chod do
(Saying this nandini cut the call)

M: kon tha nandu

N: teri magnet

M: huh?

N: soha! Aree gadi kyu rok di?

M: aage traffic he

N: ooo uff kitne garmi he ( telling this nandini opened her hair and started removing the zip zip of her jacket)

M: this girl uff why does she have to look so hot i will kill myself one day i am going to have a tough time controlling myself upon that imy groin has became hard urrgghhh!!(to himself)

Nandinis zip went down and maniks eyes and mouth became wide

N: kya hua (told nandini as she removed her jacket and threw it behind )

M: i am going to suicide now ! What is this god aisa bhi koi karta he kya ? Bhikari ke samne kahana rakte ho aur khane bhi nahi dete uff she is just so hot!(to himself)

N: uff yeh traffic aage kab bade ga

M: nandini

Suddenly manik pulled nandini by her waist and rammed his lips with her

His cold lips met her warm and soft ones manik strated kissing her passionately nibbling and sucking her lips as nandini digged her fingers in his hair pulling manik towards her manik soon parted her lips and plunged his tongue in licking and tasting every corner of her mouth

They both were breathless as they parted but manik again started placing wet kisses on her neck making her moan out in pleasure

N:MANIK!!

M: huh?

N: what the hell where were u lost i am calling u for the tenth time come on drive people are honking behind us the traffic has moved!

M: what the hell was this dream ! If it would have happened in real then no i won't be able to control my self uff i am dead why did u do this cabir i will kill u (to himself)

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Heheh.. so how was the update i hope it was nice i am sure u all might be angry for updating so late srry once again
Jo marna he maro juta,chapal,tamatar,anda par maafi de do

Do like read and comment and tell me about your favourite part

Love,

Angela

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Posted: 10 years ago
When u make nandin girly type
I'm loving her tomboys attitude
But when manik see her dis avatar his eyes poo out
So funny cabri
Haha dream wobhi din may
.nans n soha cov good n funny
N how s n u
I hope u well
TC
Tnx for pm Amzzzing Fab Best Nice Superb Fantastic
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heheheheheee
So u r asking best part
Toh
My
Best
Part
Is

Dat dream sequence

Hahahahaaa
Naughty mind

Waise nandu girly girly kb banegu

I think dat
Wat will happen wen manik
See nandini in saree...

Hahahaaa\
Kuch jyada hi soch liya maine
Kou nai
Keep it up n update soon
Byyyeee
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...what an amazing update...
loved it a lot...manik's romantic dream...nandu and soha funny phone convo and cabir ...
a complete package...u penned beautifully
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care


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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a hilarious update...
loved few dialogues...
1st kbc one that nandini would then play kbc with navya... lol...
then chparganju...😆
then she said that dialogue to soha...🤣
uff how do you write such things...
kaisi kar leti ho😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Soha n Nandini convo was funn poor manik dreaming of Nandini even though she is sitting beside him.
Continue soon
Edited by baani9 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I am back with a boom so guys i hope u might be enjoying all the chapters by now but the success of this story are u people who encouraged me to write so i would like to say THANKS to all of u


CHAPTER 19

N: what the hell manik where have u brought me i am not going in there

M: nandini tum gun se nahi daarti,gundo se nahi daarti par tum ek disco se daar rahi ho

N: kya aisa mujhpe kahi nahi likha he
Ki me nahi daar sakti hu?

M: come on jaldi chalo par usse pehle tum yeh jacket pehnlo

N: me nahi ja rahi hu waha no,not,never!

M: kyu tum waha kyu nahi jaana chahti?

N: kyuki jo pichli baar hua tha woh firse ho gaya toh??

M: matlab tum pehle bhi yaha aa chuki ho huh?

N: manik cut this crap ! Par me waha nahi ja rahi hu and thats final woh drunk people,drug addicts aur sl*ts ewww!

M: tumhe insse problem he toh unke paas mat jao dur raho

N: ooo really PURA PUB UNSSE HI TOH BHARA HE!!

M: plss na nandu aao na plss!!

N: dekho manik agar me waha jaungi toh jo bhi hoga uske zimedar tum hoge?

M: done ( zyada se zyada kya karegi yeh thought manik to himself) chalo abhi utro

( they both entered the pub )

You know it...
So sing it...
Now throw hands up and say...
Disco Deewane..
Aahaa...Aahaa...
Disco Deewane...
Aahaa...Aahaa...

N: uff kitna loud music he yeh mere toh kaan hi fat rahe he upar se yeh gadhe ne mujhe yaha akela chod diya

N: abh kaha dhundu me isse yaha toh sabhi bewde hi lag rahe he mujhe usski tarah

M: hey hottie whats your name?

A: my name is ananya khanna whats yours?

M: manik...manik malhotra . Wanna dance with me?

A: sure

( and they both started dancing with each other while ananya started to get cosy with manik but he was not comfortable

And in some other side of the pub manik was nearly killed a million times by nandini)

N: ufff hato mere raste se aage jane toh do

B: hey sexy wanna dance with me?

N: muh ke batis daath tod dungi tere saale!

B: maaf karde behna

N: nikal yaha se uff yeh ladka he kaha woh raha

Hawww! Yaha me akeli hu waha woh uss ladki ke sath chipak raha he just wait and watch now manik malhotra

She went towards the bar and asked for a stronge vodka

She had a sip and it tasted like yuck! But as soon she saw them both dancing together in anger she finished the whole bottle in just 3 Sips

N: one more blenders stronge vodka bottle plss

Same was the fate but as soon as she saw all people drunk and dancing she to started dancing

CRRAACCCK!! And nandini threw the bottle down and stood on the table where all the other bar girls where dancing and started singing


Jaam bhi hai
Haan haan kaam bhi hai
Haaye haaye chori nahi
Sareaam bhi hai
Sab ne pee hai mujhe ilzaam kyun hai
Khamakha mera naam badnaam kyun hai

And started dancing like a mad

M: yeh awaaz itni jaani pehchani kyu lag rahi he? Aur mujhe aise vibes kyu aa rahe he ki kuch bura honewala he mere sath

Dekho na logo ne
Botalon ki botalein khatam kar di to kuchh na hua,
magar, magar
Maine hothon se lagaayi to..
Hungama ho gaya..
Hungama ho gaya, hungaamaa..
Hungaama ho gaya..

And nandini unzipped the jacket and threw it away everyone started howling and dancing like mad and nandini to was among them

N: wooohhh!!

M: yeh awaz sheesh yeh kiska jacket mujh pe..
Yeh toh nandini ka he!!
Shit woh waha kya kar rahi he is she not in her senses?

" jo bhi hoga manik uske tum hi zimedar hoge !"

Shit she ia drunk now what to do
Ya i will just go and pick her up and take her away she won't be able to even beat me

As nandini was dancing she felt someone touching her she immediately turned and punched the person and threw him to the ground in anger and resumed dancing

M: no change of plans she will kill if i do that then?

kisi aur ne pilayi to
hungama ho gaya
Goron ka toofan ye kehta hai
Hamein bhi bata kyun rehta hai
Gufaaon mein.. ye dil tera
sheeshe mein kahaan band rehta hai
Zubaan pe lage aur kehta hai
is gham ko bhi pee le
Jaane kyun tu kal dohraati hai
Kaisi tadap mein tu doob jaati hai

And was dancing among the girls now

M: uff i shouldn't have brought her here now what to do ha idea i will go to her and face to face dance with her and sneak her out of here
Bus woh face to face ke chakar me mera face na bigad de

Maine hothon se lagayi to..
Hungama ho gaya aa aa aa aa..
Hungaama ho gaya hungaama ...
Hungaama ho gayaa..

Sang nandini and saw manik hu came and danced with her suddenly he lifted her and started taking her out

N: hungama hogaya(hic)...hungama hogaya(hic)...hehehehs...

Manik made her sit in the car

M: tumne kyu sharab pi?

N:Maine hothon se lagayi to..
Hungama ho gaya aa aa aa aa..
Hungaama ho gaya hungaama

M: oh god why u drank nandini??

N:Sharab Sareer Ko Khatam Krti Hai
Sharab Samaj Ko Khatam Krti Hai,
Aao Aaj Is Sharab Ko Khatam Krte Hain,
Ek Bottle Tum Khtam Kro,
Ek Bottle Hum Khatam Krte Hai. ..

M: its going to be tough to handle her when drunk looks like its going to be a long night

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How was it? I had written it yesterday but it got deleted so i had to retype it
So i hope it as a good chapter not a crap one and do tell your favourite part

Love,

Angela
Edited by angelanadar087 - 9 years ago

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