Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 12

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FrizzAngie thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Who all have not got the pms i am very srry but my posts are finished

Love

Angela
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
My pleasure...😊

Oh wow..!!! Ur update is fantastic...


Seriously we are always protected from strangers but dont protect from our own ones...!!

N

Guardian angel n Lover monster...awesome combination..!! 😳

waiting for next part..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome dude I am glad that the truth is in front of manik
Bring manan together again but let manik do some more work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guardian angel n Lover monster...!!!! wow what an amazing couple...!!!
loving this story a lot dear...
finally the confusions r cleared...
u penned so beautifully
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the love and care from u all i will try to update regularly

CHAPTER 17

Nandini went home and changed into a short and shirt she went to a room which had the same picture of her and maniks parents

I kept my promise and saved him from the danger ma he saved alive and breathing i hope he learns to live without me i can't love him u only had once told love makes us weak but don't know why i feel this that if i am in love with him i protect him more strongly looks like manik is getting on my head told nandini and smiled as she wiped away her tears

Good night ma pa aunty uncle and MANIK told nandini as she roamed her hand around and touched maniks face and went to sleep

MALHOTRA MANSION

Cabir dhruv how are u asked manik worriedly

We are fine how is nandini asked they both in unison

Hearing her name a smile appeared on his lips

Manik smile kya de raha he nandini kaisi he yeh toh bata?? Asked cabir

Manik narrated them the whole story as tears fell from his eyes

I told u mene bola tha nandini aisa kar hi nahi sakti kyuki mene bhi uske ankho me wohi dukh dekha he jo yeri ankho me rehta he manik told cabir and patted maniks back

I will do that thing jo mene kabhi kisi ke liye nahi kiya told manik and removed a photo of his and nandini as children and nandini kissing maniks cheeks

I miss u my nandu told manik as he stared at the photo

Suddenly mukti snatched the photo from maniks hands and told hawww?? U both are looking just soo cute u know like made for each other told mukti

soon cabir mukti and dhruv to were seeing that photo but manik snatched the photo away from them

Woh sirf meri he aur yeh photo bhi told manik with a smirk

Aur humari bhabhi he told dhruv and pulled maniks cheeks for which manik blushed like a small child

Awww!! Manik malhotra blush kar raha he told aliya and mukti and cabir giggled

Stop it guys now ghar jao mujhe sona told manik and pushed them out

Ha...hah...tujhe nandini ke sapno me jo khona he told cabir and ran towards his car yo be at a safe distance

Manik went to his room and slept thinking about his love

SPACE COLLEGE

Nandini yeh tumne apna kya hall bana rakha he told navya not believing her eyes at what she was seeing

Nandini was in a of shoulder red blouse and black shorts with knee boots and a black jacket over her to cover her shoulders and her waidt totally exposed with hair open and mascarr over her eyes making her look like a seductress

Every boy in the college was ogling at nandini or dreaming about her

Manik and fab-5 entered but maniks jaw fell open as soon as he saw nandini but composed himself

He came and went over the stage while navni were busy in thier talks

This song is dedicated to some one very special who i would never ever share with anyone told manik and saw nandini

<font size="3">aaa hay humnava
Mujhe apna banaley sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga de</font>

(Manik saw in nandinis eyes and sang but nandini kept her gaze away thou she wanted to go and hugg manik )

Hu akela zara hath bada de
Sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhigade
Kab se me dar-dar fir raha musafir dil ko panah de tu awargi ko meri aaj thehradeee

(Nandini at last saw into maniks eyes which reflected the love he had for her)

Ho sake toh thoda pyar jata de
Sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhega de
Aaas dehreeeaaa

(Manik could see at last nandini lift her gaze ro him and he could see her eyes reflecting pain,hurt and loneliness which yearned for his love)

Murjhai si shokh he dil ki
Phul khilye he kyu
Bate dilo ki zikr mehek ka acha lagta he kyu
Un rango se tumhne milaya jin rango se me mil na paya dil karta he tera shukriya phirse bahar tu lade

(Nandini felt tears brimming in her eyes threatening to come out as his every word pierced her heart)

Dil ka sunna banjar mehkade sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga le
Hmm hu akela zara hath bada de
Sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhigade

(At last they came out as nandini could not keep it in for more as it reminded her about all the things that she lost ,found and sacrificed)

Waise toh mosum guzre hai zindagi mekai par aab najaane kyu mujhe woh lag rahe hehaseen tere aane jaana mene kahi na kahi zinda jeene laga hu yeh fizaee chehre ko chuti hawaee

(Manik came down the stage with guitar in his hands and came towards nandini his heart pierced as he saw tears falling down her eyes)

Din ki tarah do kadam toh bada le sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga deooo hu akela zara hath bada de sukhi padi dil ki iss zameen ko bhiga dee

(Manik came near nandini and wiped away her tears nandini saw towards manik pushed him and ran away from there )

Manik gave his guitar to navya and ran behind nandini

Nandini ran towards a empty classroom and started crying badly
WHY??...WHY??...ME ...WHY??... ...WHAT HAVE I DONE...THAT...THAT...I...DON'T..(sniff)...EVEN...DESERVE... LOVE...AM...I...SO..BAD...IF NO...THEN...WHY??(sniff) told nandini crying and removing alll rhe pain stired in her from so many years

Nandini i am srry plss forgive me she heard a voice she saw up and manik was standing there

NO !! I WILL NOT FORGIVE U!! U HAD EVERYTHING MANIK!! EVERYTHING WHILE I ?? I WAS LEFT LONELY AFTER THIER DEATH MANIK I WAITED FOR U TO COME BUT U NEVER CAME!! U NEVER EVEN TURNED BACK TO LOOK AT ME I WAS DUMPED IN A BLOIDY SICK ORPHANAGE WHERE I WAS MADE TO DO WORK DAY-NIGHT EVEN THEN I WAITED FOR U BUT U NEVER CAME !! U NEVER CAME I AGREE THAT EVEN U WERE IN SORROW BUT I DIDN'T KNOW THAT EVEN I HAD LOST MY PARENTS AND ALL MY RELATIVES USE TO HATE BECAUSE THEY HAD A LOVE MARRIAGE EVERY DOOR WAS SHUT FOR ME WHERE I WENT FOR HELP I USED TO WANDER ON STREETS AS I HAD RAN AWAY FROM THE ORPHANAGE I EVEN WENT AT YOUR PLACE BUT WAS PUSHED OUT AT LAST INDIAN ARMY GAVE ME SHELTER AND PLACE RO LIVE THEY KNEW MY FATHER AND MOTHER SO THEY TOOK CARE OF ME AT 6 I TOLD THEM ABOUT MY PROMISE AND THEY TRAINED ME AS THEIR OWN CHILD THEY BLESSED ME AND I STARTED SEARCHING FOR U BUT COULD NOT FIND U I WAS WALKING TOWARDS MY APARTMENT WHEN I SAW U IN THIS COLLEGE AND THE NEXT DAY I JOINED IT I DID EVERY THING FOR U BUT U ONLY BROKE MY HEART AND TRUST cried nandini out at last all her emotions of hate pain and sorrow were out

Manik was just having tears in his eyes thinking how much did she love him and he did not even care for it

Nandini fell on her knees sobbing with head down and tears continuously flowing from her eyes

Suddenly she felt one arm around her back and one around her waist she knew who it was but she was just too tired to protest any further

She cuddled in his arms while he pulled her more closer and made her sit on his lap hugging her tightly while she just kept her head on his chest listening to his heart beats which were soothing her mind and body

Nandini felt maniks one hand cup her face and she saw into his eyes fro. Which tears were flowing she wiped them away and kissed his forehead while closed his eyes to relish those 3 Seconds

Nandini saw into maniks eyes as he leaned closer and before she could tell anything else she felt his soft lips over hers

Nandinis eyes widened in shock as heart pounded loudly and butterflies danced in her stomach

He softly kissed her lips as she reponded softly but soon he turned it into a passionate kiss boths tongues fighting for dominance and love as they felt breathless they parted away

I LOVE U NANDINI AND I WILL DIE WITHOUT U told manik waiting for her response

I LOVE U TOO MANIK replied nandini as she smiled at him while he just took her into a bone crushing hug

At last they both confessed nor under pressure nor under any fear but only under the spell of true love dear
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HOPE U ALL WILL LOVE IT AS IT WAS A TOUGH TIME HEARING THE SONG AND TYPING AT THE SAME TIME

LOVE,

ANGELA
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
magical...!!!!

emotional and soul-filled update...!!!
u penned brilliantly...
finally nandu shared her pain with manik...and the confession was a pure bliss.
song sequence was beautiful and perfect song for manan
continue soon
take care

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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh God..!! Its amazing..!!
Song sequence was very nice...!!
Nandu shared her pain with Manik...it was just awesome...!!
N such a sweet confession..!!! I loved it...
Good job dear...!!
Keep it up..!
Update soon as possible...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar I just loved it plz update the next part soon and also pm me

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