Manan SS:- Are U Mine Forever? CHAPTER 23 updated 06/9 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha
Ur wish now fullfill
1st it's interesting
2nd um amazing
3rd awesome
4th feel sad for nadu


5th happy I mean 7th sky reading ur last line
Don't worry about ur ff u can restict for forms members na so
Last I 1nly 1 word say that I love ur ff n u also sweetpie
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. But u also make ur chapter size a little lamba it was so small
Continue soon and make manan together and show their romance again which they left 😉 he he
Waiting...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg😲... U r caring d hell out of me... Please let d truth out soon n please don't let manik n nandini be broken n let den be Manan... Please post d next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww fab update
nandini was broken completely
who was the person manik loves more than him self waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u for the pm nice update yaar try to update the next part soon and also reveal the secret soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Plz update the next part tomorrow and reveal the secret
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg...suspense..!! Angela i am loving ur ff so much...!!
And what the..?? Ur classmate is copying ur stories...!! U can slap her..lol anyway please update asap..!! Plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
You were just awesome dude
Lot more secrets to open ...
waiting eagerly please post next CH.
as fast as you can
Can't wait to see who is that one to kidnap nandini and please make manan together again waiting for the romance again
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for the pm angela...
loving the story so much...👏
suspense suspense...
really waiting for the next update to know the secret...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I did what u told aashu i first talked sweetly but then she told me with attitude u just do the update thing so in anger i just slaped her hard on her face and she went away in anger
Thnks for the idea 😉

CHAPTER 16

But i still don't believe this that how could u do this to him just leave him alone he has nothing to do with this he so does not even know whats happening in his life plss i request u just let him go told nandini with tears rolling down her eyes

U are just like your dad courageous and bold but yours body is just like your mom whom i would like to savour he told eyeing her lustly

Do whatever u want to do with me just leave manik i beg use me throw me or kill me i don't care but let manik go he has nothing to do with all this told nandini

He has HE HAS! HE IS RELATED TO EVERY THING IF HE DOES NOT DIE THEN ALL THE PROPERTY WILL GO TO MANIK U UNDERSTOOD THATS WHY HE NEEDS TO DIE!! Screamed that man

NO HE WON'T DIE I WILL RIPE YOUR SKIN OFF YOUR BODY IF U EVEN TOUCH HIM screamed nandini

NANDINI!! manik screamed calling for her trying to her hear a voice

So your bf is here the man evily

MANIK DON'T COME HERE GO AWAY PLSS U ALSO WILL BE KILLED JUST GO AWAY MANIK GO SAVE YOUR LIFE U ARE IMPORTANT SO GO!! screamed nandini trying to warn manik of the lurking danger on him

Nandini heard nandini a hoarse whisper

She saw up to see manik standing there and staring at her observing all the wounds over her body

Cuts which were bleeding adorned her legs her arms had marks which had turned black and blue her lips had traces of water dirt and bleeding lips her forehead had a deep cut which was bleeding and her ankles and wrists had swelling because of the sharps wires which kept her attached to the chair piercing her skin whenever she moved

Manik go plss go i won't be able to save u go away u will die plss go away told nandini and put her head down and sobbing like a small kid

And what if u will die? asked manik lovingly

Don't forget that i am the killer of your parents u should not care for me so go away u should not care if i die u should be happy told nandini trying to make manik go away from here

MANIK!! they both heard a voice

A man came out of the darkness he was a bit bald from the top and had worn a suit

Uncle Blot what are u doing here ?? Asked manik and hugged him

I had come to your home but u were not there so i tracked u and came here he replied in a worrying tone

Nandini!! Nandini a silent whisper took her attention behind

Who is it asked nandini in a whisper

Nandini its me Dave i have come to help
Replied the whisper

Dave plss help i don't want your dad to kill manik plss he is my only love of life told nandini and tears fell down her eyes and cheeks

My dad is evil nandini but my mom was not he killed her and i could not do anything now i don't want 1 innocent life to go because i did not raise my voice i request u go kill him or give him to the police plss i want my revenge plss nandini told dave as silent tears rolled down his eyes

Plss open me dave plss i beg told nandini and dave opened the wires he saw all the cuts as tears brimmes in his eyes

Go take your ,manik and my parents revenge from that Devil nandini told dave

U rush off to your home and call the police here told nandini and dave nodded and sneaked away while manik and Bolt were chatting

Come on manik lets go out frok here told Bolt

No uncle a man has kidnapped her so i am just waiting for him told manik as he stared at nandini angrily

I loved u manik and u not trusted me even a bit looks like in this path of my life i am not fated to love thought nandini and tears fell from her eyes

Come on manik girls come and girls go they are just commodities which we can use throw or dump them in a corner they are just Sl*ts told Bolt and tried to dragg manik away from there

No uncle and girls are no commodities i just can't believe u are telling this u have a wife and 16yr old son dave

Who he killed them brutally she was so sweet u just killed her because she questioned u on u cheating her u took away daves mother for your desires u took away the mother of a child who was so small that he for 14 yrs thought that she was at her mothers home u know what i have come here for revenge for everything that u took away from me,dave and manik told nandini and stood up from that chair and walked towards Bolt angrily

What rubbish nandini he only was the one who took care of me when your sick parents took away mine there was nobody was for me he was the one told manik defending his uncle

I didn't tell anything because that time u wwre small and needed love and care so i postponed his death but now is the time i do it and no one can save him no one not even u understood told nandini and pushed away manik to the ground

Why u killed them what did they do that u killed them told nandini as she punched him and kept kicking him until he bleed

Suddenly someone came a d threw nandini to the ground

BE AWAY FROM HIM IF U WANT TO KILL HIM THEN KILL ME FIRST screamed manik

But nandini pushed him near a pole and handcuffed him with it she kept the key just some meters away

I can reach to it told manik with attitude

Try it told nandini and walked off

He tried and tried but could not reach the key which was just mere meters away from him

Nandini came with a rod and hit him hard kept on hitting him


Stop...stopp..plss ...stop ..i..will..tell...i will,,..confess he told bleeding from every where nandini threw the rod away and dragged him by his collar near manik

Speak up or die and i want the truth told nandini angrily

I...i...i...KILLED MAAN AND KHUSHI MALHOTRA
THEY WERE RESEARCHING ON A BACTERIAFROM WHICH ALL THE OIL REFINERIES OIL COULD GET SPOILED IF MIXED WITH A SAMPLE
I ASKED THEM FOR IT BUT THEY REFUSED TELLING THIS THAT THEY WILL FIRST GIVE IT TO THE GOVERNMENT AND I CAN TAKE THIER PERMISSION AND THEN USE IT
I WENT AND EXPLAINED ALL THE PLAN TO POONAM BUT SHE TOLD ME ITS NOT GOOD TO ASSINATE THEM AND IF I DO SO SHE WILL COMPLAIN TO THE OPLICE I TOLD I AND SOMEHOW CONSOLED HER THAT I WON'T DO IT THEN SHE CAME TO KNOW THAT USE TO CHEAT HER SO SHE TOLD SHE WILL COMPLAIN NOW AND IN FIT OF ANGER I KILLED HER
BOTH THE MALHOTRAS HAD GUARDS I DID NOT KNOW THAT SO WHEN THEY WERE ON THIER WAY TO SUBMIT THE BACTERIA I PLACED A BOMB IN THIER CAR
BUT THE GUARDS CAME TO KNOW AND THEY PUSHED THE MALHOTRAS OUT AND DIED AS THE CAR BLASTED I SAW THAT THEY BOTH WERE ALIVE AND WENT THERE THEY SAW ME AND ASKED HELP I ASKED FOR THE BACTERIA BUT THEY REPLIED THAT IT BURNED AWAY SO I SHOT THEM DEAD AND THREW THEIR BODIES IN THE FIRE AND BLAMED ALL THE NAME ON THE GUARDS
he told and stsrted sobbing hard

HANDS UP U ARE UNDERARREST MR BOLT SHARAVIL WE HAVE HEARD YOUR CONFESSION AND SHE HAS RECORDED IT NOW COME WITH US TO THE LOCK UP
told the police as nandini handed over them his confession video

Manik was numb he just could not believe his ears his uncle did this the one who he loved so much who he gave the respect of father had broken his trust completely

Because of him he doubted his love what not fid he tell nandini who was just trying to protect him who cared for him mpre than her life

Suddenly manik saw nandini remove a bottle and handed over to the police

Now its in right hands told nandini and came towards him with a first-aid box and started cleaning his wounds

U ate also hurt uttered manik looking towards nandini

They are minor told nandini and bandaged the last wound and got up but manik held her hand and told

Srry nan..

But nandini shushed him by keeping her fingers over his lips

No need to review the past memories told nandini to manik

So u have forgiven me?? asked manik to nandini

No i can't forgive u i also loved u manik told nandini and maniks face lit up like a 1000 watts bulb

But the way u insulted me on my dignity and my parents for thier sacrifice i can never forgive u i loved u and thought of telling it to u all yruth but i not expected that kind of reaction when u come to know i am thier daughter and before i could explain u hurted me and my trust so forget that i ever fell in love with u I JUST YOUR BODY GUARD ONLY A GIRL WHO PROTECTS U AND U ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO FALL IN LOVE WITH ME BECAUSE I AM JUST AMENDING MY PROMISE THAT MY MOM AND YOUR AUNTY HAD GIVEN ME told nandini in a cold voice and went away leaving a heart broken manik

say whatever u want to say but u are mine and will be mine forever and i will win back my love which u have hidden for now but don't worry if u are my GUARDIAN ANGEL then even i am your LOVER MONSTER told manik with a smirk and walked off ...

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Abhi thoda toh ma ik ko nandini ko manana chahiye na itna hurt kiya he na usse so next update saturday ko srry for spelling mistakes

Bohot bada update he toh likes aur comment bhi bohot sare

Love

Angela

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