A LONG YEAR- MaNan ff ch5 pg15 - Page 6

Originally posted by: blah_blah13

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You spoil us dude...whenever I read other stories I keep hoping for them to have as much depth and insight as your updates...and then I obviously suffer disappointment when they don't

Loved the conversation and Manik's reactions...on one hand he wants to be around her and on the other hand he knows he'll mess up everything if he is...so he wants to keep her at arm's length

Originally posted by: apps33

woaah i loved ua update

it was heart touching

specially her description of the accident

n best thng was dat he was unintentionally was getting affectionate towards her wich was totally out of his so called perfect life plans

i absolutely loved the way uh described each n evry minute detail

uh r just amazing

cont soon

will be waiting

Originally posted by: Endurance

U have the power to make someone cry with ur words.

Vihaa this was exceptional , this was...Ahhh I don't know I am just not finding the words...

When *How to fall in Love * ended ,I thought that was ur best work but I was wrong this ff is no less than that .. I think this will cross that benchmark..

Ur words have the power to emotionally capture someone and once u start feeling the emotion thats just it . U actually start living that write up..

Vihaa never ever stop writing because it's a gift from God to u .. U are born writer. ..

Ur words are so captivating ... Each minute detail makes it so dynamic ...

U are an eloquent storyteller who can paint a picture with ur words..

Update soon. .

Originally posted by: aliyaangel

woooww.. that was awesome.. truly..
very well written.. nandini is something.. shez very smart and sweetheart.. manik is totally opp to her.. they belong to two diffrnt world with diffrnt beliefs n thinking.. bt looks lyk shez already changing things in his planned lyf..
that would be so intersting to read..
the way you described the accident.. its jus wow..
n manik is surely related to music.. lets see how she vll change his planned future..
ur last few lines always leaves me thinking abt wats next.. u r a very talented writer.. must say.. update soon ... :) cnt wait..

Originally posted by: zooni.shah

Ohh god !! I want to kiss those hands ,,, d writer s hand..

This comment is from my friend Beth to uh as she doesn't have a forum id she asked me to pass it on to uh vihaa

Originally posted by: mirage101

God how do you write so well man.I was a bit late as usual read both the chapters just now.wen Nandini collided with Manik i was like y is she so clumsy all the time now she'll be scolded for such a small thing. N then next moment when I read she's blind i felt sad for her and that is weird i nvr feel sad for anyone well except me of course.back to the story liked their conversation abt future let me quote Ranbir Kapoor frm Yeh Jawaani Hai Deewani "tu galat nhi hai bas mujhse alag hai" just like ur previous story im impressed by ur choice of words. Looking forward to the nxt chapters eagerly. Love Meghna(mentioning my name first time remember me im d one who hates chetan bhagat.)Toodles 😊

Originally posted by: ananya0908n

oh my god!

you seriously write like a damn professional writer!!

how can someone write so damn beautifully???

your ff is just unbelievable... it is so damn alluring!!

your ff has intensity and a particular depth in it which makes it more attractive and heart-touching and ofcourse the credit goes all to you

I wish I could write the way you write and I could have the same writing skills you have

you have got some incredible writing skills

I am speechless after reading your ff

I have no doubt saying that you are one of the best writers in this forum

I am totally dumbfounded and shocked reading your ff

I am still thinking is this ff really written by you???

yeah ofcourse its written by you but seriously the way you write you made me and many other people think of you being a professional writer

and that's the best compliment a writer can win from his readers and you have won that complement because you are a true writer by heart and you don't write by your mind, you write by your heart

just waiting for your next update

I have sent you a buddy request so please accept it and send me a pm when you update next

waiting eagerly

continue soon

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Originally posted by: -shenz-

I am clueless where to start from.. but one thing that's for sure and that is you have a fabulous way to deal with words and portray the emotions into smooth transitions just like the flow of water. So damn good.

I would really thank Angel, aka Endurance for having suggested me your works, though the other one is still pending for me to read.. but I will get there, soon.

About this one. The top most thing that is highlighted is the intriguing concept. The very first attractive part about this story. I am usually not concerned about the end.. or the genre of any particular work until and unless it's been written and handled well enough. And this one has it.

This one is the first write-up that I would have touched on this forum, KYY forum.. and thankfully it's worth every bit of time invested. You mold words and in-corporate emotions into the story really well, such a thing is hardly been com across.

The write-up, by far, is really, really, really Beautiful.

Just keep writing. :)

Originally posted by: pagolmeye

O My God I am clearly bowled out. no words to describe my feelings. You do have a way with yours words which is simply MESMERIZING. Your last one was a BANG ONN!!! Thankgod you started this new one with Manik's pov. I loved it to the core. I am so in love with NANDINI. She is pure, she is love in one word. Cant wait to witness their lovestory , their togetherness.

The concept is something which attracts me the most and truly your concepts are so unique, so pure, so enthralling. Sorry I am unable to find appropiate word for it.

Many concepts are nice but theiir way of potration doesnt connect the reader. I am connected with your NANDINI and MANIK in every possible ways and their emotions are being flown through me.

On word for this ff is, BEAUTIFUL 😊 😊

UPDATE SOON...