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Posted: 10 years ago
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Broken trust

"Manik how could you do that to me?you did not even think of me? You thought Dhruv loves me sp let me hand over nandhini to dhruv!" Nanidini said cryingly before storming off . Sitting on a broken trunk Nandi cried her heart out. Her tears rushed more quickly when Manik joined her.Manik wiped her tears.He was about. To say something. To her but Navya came to them meaning the plan was over. The three of them went back to his car. Arriving. At the girls hostel Navya get off the car. Nadini tried to open the door but stopped by Manik. Manik quickly locked it. Nandini just. Wanted to be alone away from him for a while. Manik could not let go of her just like that so he took pocession of her hands."Manik leave my hand!" She ordered. Being stubborn he did not let go of her but being Nandini she always Had an escape. She pinches his hand and freed herself. As she got out of the car tears threatened to flow but she held it. Manik could Not see her hurt anymore so he went away.

After reaching home as usual Yonika did not care about him so he went to his room. But soon returned to the gate of the hostel. After being advised by the watchman he called Nandini but the latter was still too hurt to listen to him.On the other hand Naya was getting on Nandini's nerve by saying horrible things on Manik.She scolded. Navya to stop and ordered her to sleep. But she was soon preoccupied by what happened in her life recently. She somehow knew that Manik was at the gate and that he would not go till he sees her.So she played her smart mind she threw her shawl by the window and run to fetch it.After seeing her Man was finally satisfied and went back home.

The next morning he tried to talk to Nadini but the latter was still angry so he tricked her to enter the music room where he has decorated the walls with thousands of sorries. Nandini was touched but was not going to give in so easily. She went to meet the rest of the fab 5 to tell them about Harshad's plan of hurting Manik and after listening to that they all planned to reveal Harshad's true face on that day itself.

The plan was now on. Alya was with his brother that is Harshad and Dhruv already cut the wires of the machine. The balls also was replaced and Manik was ready to act.

As planned Manik turned on the tennis machine and put on his fake skin with glasses and fake blood.He laid on the floor and send the code for Nadini to bring Navya.After a while Harshad arrived and revealed all the horrible things he did to Mukti Cabir and the other Fab 5.Hearing that Navya's lost her temper and slapped Harshad and called the police to arrest him for attempt of murder.

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So this is the first chapter. I took events from the tv soap itself because I love these scenes. ...hope u like it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great...looking forward to see where you take this..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 2-Forgiveness

Harshad was under arrest and was expelled from S.P.A.C.E while Dhruv was consoling Alya.Manik was still trying to get his Nandini back but in vain.Cabir being back to his old self could not let those two split apart but he had to be careful knowing Dhruv's feeling for her.He was ready to do anything to appeal Nandini but he only needed that Dhruv moved on.Cabir the mastermind used his supermind to hold back Nandini and makes Manik knows the feeling of Dhruv.He set ip the Never have I ever game.

The game is played and Nandini says that she has never cheated in an exam while everyone else drinks the drink meaning that they have. Nandini is surprised and Cabir says that how else did we get to college. Dhruv says that he has never made a girl cry and when Manik is about to drink Nandini says to him that you should eat the whole bowl. Manik's turn comes and he says that I have never taken a no for an answer. The rest of them drink from the bowl when Muktii's turns comes. Muktii says that she has never done it and Nandini asks of what it is.Cabir says its way too much for you to hear lets take it step by step. Cabir's tuurn and he confessed that he has never reached first base.Nandini again question what's this.

Cabir says that we should explain this to Nandini and Muktii says that never have I kissed before. Manik and Nandini drink from the bowl and Cabir asks her who it was. Nandini says that it is none of your business.Nandini checked the time and says that she really should leave now but before she leaves Cabir stopped her and says that he needed to talk to her. Sitting on rhe edge of the pool Cabir asked Nandini why she did not forgive Manik.In reply she says that he has hurt me, he played with my feelings. He did not even think once about me he did what he wanted as always.Cabir sight in relief knowing that Nandini will surely forgive Manik but only if he ask her in a very delicate way.

Manik was dancing madly in his room. He was beyond happy to know that Dhruv finally decided to move on. After his happy dance he made up a plan to make his Nandini accept him again.

The next day on her way to school Nadini got dragged into a car by Manik who took her to his farm house.Being mad at Manik for kidnapping her , Nandini locked herself in a room. On the Other hand Manik turned the living room into a romantic dinner hall with candles and flowers. After his preparations he went to the room where Nandini had locked herself and got in through the window. However seeing the love of his life crying uncontrollably he swept her tears and managed to get her out of that room.

Nandini was shocked seeing the awsome decorations and petals falling on her as she moves.Manik held her from the back and whispered that he was really sorry and that he would never repeat the same mistake ever again then he showed her a container containing fireflies."you freed them that night now I give them back to you" he whispered nuzzling her ears before freeing them in the room and switching of the lights.

Hope you guys like it plz do comment your views
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i just loveit
it was sooo good
plzzz do upload soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@fireroad99 thxx yes buddy me for pms
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys im sorry but I'm not going to post my story on IF anymore..if U want to read the rest of the story it's on wattpad
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fabulous update
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sofiacutegurl

Hey guys im sorry but I'm not going to post my story on IF anymore..if U want to read the rest of the story it's on wattpad


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