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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Amazing update...

Well finally a better update...

well I think it's actually a game on...

luking forward for d updates...

Plzz continue soon...

'll b waiting...

Plz start ur sequal of shadows of darkness...plzzz if u hve started plz pm me or snd d link plzzz.

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n3gn

@n3gn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Nice update we have faith in u and plz update the next part soon and also pm me

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#673

amazing update .
u penned it very well .
dj 30 days u will realize ur wrong manik malhotra .
feeling bad nandani.
cont soon

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Shanaya1996

@Shanaya1996

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#674

U give such an amazing updates
Want a strong nandini ... Ignoring manik...
N she should move on...
U just penned down the emotions so nicely ...
Plzzz update fast 😳
Waitin waitin

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#675

loving the way u shaping up the story...
manik is keeping his ego above his heart feelings...slowly he will realize his mistakes...and his true love ...
DJ was superb...in this part...loved her scenes a lot...
poor nandu...her condition is so bad...
u penned brilliantly...eagerly waiting to read more...
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm...

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#676

😭 manik k mind mai kya hai??? Ufff!! My long hair is falling very badly cuz i scratch my head like hell.. Nd i felt my chick is wet cuz of tears... I wish nandini never forgive him.. If she forgives thn nt dat easily... Pl pl pl update soon... Very soon.. I don't wanna spend my tears more...

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haritha2108

@haritha2108

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#677

awsommeee
u have penned emotions very beautifully
manik love his stranger
but ego has won
nandini is not week i guess
morning will be a new beginning for her
shell fight back i guess
waiting to knw what will happen next

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#678

LOVE you DJ
totally love this update
DJ is right nandu is not in ur mins that's niyonikas place she is in ur heart residing there as soul
u cannot take her out of there.
30 days u r gone maink malothra
please do continue
loved this story more and more
bye sumi

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Arunima

@jesse93

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#679

So Manik was actually taking revenge . But what about his stranger with whome he had found some connection and eventually had fallen in love with her and all this was before Nandu's arrival at space .
Even he now has acknowledged his stranger . I can't believe that he is actually doing all this .
Update the next part soon dear and take care .

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Tammy18

@Tammy18

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#680

I cnt believe u showed d same thing which I hated in ol othr stories..

I used to b loyal fan of ur stories..

Bt u kinda ruined this 1 fr me.. (sry)

Evn aftr manik's horrendous deed.. Dj wants nandu to b wid him??!!? N started planning fr it..

Plz u cld show dat he ws blackmailed by harshad or something.. N if u r planning to shw otherwise.. sry im nt gonna read it.. N it wld b a really wrong msg

Is nandu so dumb or helpless dat she cnt live widout him?? who had humiliated her in public.. N still nt remorseful of his doing..??

If this ws on his mind.. den he nvr lovd her..

N nandu shld definitely mov on wid som othr guy..

Y in evry story.. guy cn do watevr he wants.. hav relations wid many.. stil at end get a unconditional lovr who is untouched n ws waiting fr him.. its absurd..

Im sry if in watevr sense u found it offensive.. its jst dat i truly lovd ur story.. N I wont read if u r doin d same thing lyk othr.. I found urs really unique bt i guess its nt..

D brave nandu who gave tit fr tat will nw b cry baby.. N wil forgive him aftr his one plead.. sry I cnt c dat..