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Chapter 24 A


"Nandini.!! Please open your eyes..!! Please jaan open your eyes..!!" Manik brought her out of the pool and placed her on a sofa nearby. Now he was rubbing her hands which were ice cold.


"I think she is dead..!!" Someone in the crowd said mockingly and Manik immediately realized that who was he "Harshad". He fumed with anger asking Mukti and Alya to take care of Nandini he rushed towards Harshad.


"You bloody jerk...!! How dare you say stuff like that?" Saying that Manik grabbed his collar. No one dared to interrupt them.


"Wohooo Chill Manik..!! Your wife is so naive..! Bechari I just held her hand she slipped in the pool chi chi..!!" Harshad said mockingly and Manik felt like tear him into pieces. Manik started punching and slapping him hard.


"How dare you to touch my wife..!!" Manik yelled and punched him again on his face. Manik kept beating him. Until Alya came and tried to free them.


"Alya get out of my way..! Don't support your brother..!!" Manik yelled.


"Manik I am not supporting my brother I just want you to go to Nandini..!!" Alya shouted and Manik immediately realized that Nandini was unconscious. He ran towards her. Mukti was sitting with Nandini. Manik kneeled down in front of Nandini and suddenly Nandini started coughing. She opened her eyes slowly and Manik felt like his world came back to him.


"Manik..!!" Nandini said Manik took her in a hug. Nandini was coughing and Manik kept rubbing her back. Soon she was normal Manik broke the hug and looked at her. She gave him a weak smile and Manik felt like crying.


"You are ok na?" Manik asked cupping her cheeks she nodded and Manik kissed her forehead. "You scared me..!" Manik said sadly and Nandini held her ears to say sorry. Everyone there was admiring the couple. Meanwhile Cabir's Mom came there.


"Manik Nandini you both are drenched come I'll give you something to change..!!" She said and MaNan nodded. Nandini was about to get up when Manik swooped her in his arms.


"Manik..! What are you doing? Sub daikh rahy hain..!!" Nandini said panicking and Manik frowned.


"So what? You think I care? And nobody has any problem..!!" Manik said and turned towards the crowd. "Do you guys have any problem if I pick MY WIFE in my arms?" Manik asked giving everyone a deadly glare and everyone shook their head in no. "See I told ya..!!" Manik said calmly looking towards Nandini. And walked behind Cabir's Mom. Nandini heard everyone's laughter she blushed and she hide her face in crook of Manik's neck. He was the man who was her everything. He was the man whose protective embrace made her feel at home. He was the man whose magical eyes made her forget the world. He was her first he was her last. Nandini felt content in his arms and she closed her eyes in relief.

Soon they reached a room and Cabir's Mom gave them towel and clothes. The clothes which she gave Nandini was a knee length red skirt. Nandini frowned and look towards aunty.


"Aunty?? From where did you get this stuff? I mean you wear Saree's na? I thought you will give me a saree..!!" Nandini asked while Manik made her stand on the bed.


"Ohoo beta..!! It's not the question..!! You want it? Or else I'll take it with me?" Aunty said angrily and Nandini nodded. Soon she left leaving a worried Nandini and smirking Manik behind.

...


"Hello Nyo..!! Haan kaam ho gya..!! Hahahaha you are very naughty..!!"Cabir's Mom called Nayonika and Nayonika laughed on the other side.


"I am it's fun yaar..! Nandini's always dress in casual and it will be fun for both..!!" Nayonika was laughing out loud.


"Tera kuch nahi ho skta Nyo..!!" Cabir's Mom too joined her and they kept talking about MaNan.

...

Nandini was standing on the bed hell confused how will she wear this short dress. Manik was enjoying her state standing in front of her on the floor.


"What happened Nandini?" Manik asked innocently and Nandini being Nandini didn't understand his taunt.


"Look na Manik..!! How will I wear this dress..!! You know na I can't wear these kind of dresses..!!"She said innocently.


"Ohhh My princess..!! It will look good on you...!! And I'll be there na to protect you..!! Then why are you so tensed..!!" Manik said lovingly and Nandini nodded her head. Manik asked her to go to washroom and he himself changed in the room. Soon he heard the click of the door and Nandini came out of the bathroom trying to pull the dress more in order to cover her legs. Manik was dumbstruck on his place he for the first time was watching her in a short dress. Nandini walked towards him and lowered her head in shyness feeling his intense gaze on her.


"Wow..!!Someone is looking hot..!!" Manik complimented her and she hugged Manik in shyness to which Manik laughed and held her close. "Nandini..!! Don't be shy..!! Be confident..!!" Manik said kissing her head. Nandini broke the hug and tiptoed on her feet to match his height. She slowly placed her lips on his Manik responded her lovingly holding her waist. Manik slowly broke the kiss and started kissing her neck. Nandini arched her neck to give him more access.


"Manik..!!" Nandini hardly whispered.


"Hmmm..!!" Manik hummed still digging his face in her wet hair.


"I think we should rejoin the party..!!" Nandini said ruffling his hair.


"Hmm..!!" Manik again hummed.


"Manik hmmm kya hota h..!! Let's go na..!!" Nandini said patting his head. Manik stood straight. They were about to step out of the room when Nandini held Manik's hand Manik gave her a what look? Nandini without saying anything dragged him again in the room and made him stand on near the bed. She herself climbed the bed with towel in her hand and started rubbing it on Manik's hair. Manik smiled on her care. After sometime she stopped and smiled at him. Manik took the towel from her hand and he too dried her hair. Soon they rejoin the party.


Manik again got busy with his friends but he kept glancing on Nandini time to time. Nandini was too much uncomfortable in that dress. Wearing it in front of Manik was a different thing he was her husband but wearing it in front of so many people was different. She was sitting on the bar counter and continuously blabbering. She felt like everyone was staring but indeed it was just her mind who was assuming things. She wanted to go Manik but she didn't because he was busy with his friends.


"Mam..!! You are looking tensed..!!" The Bar man asked her when he heard blaber. Nandini looked at him and she felt him her well wisher. She wanted to talk someone.


"Yeah..!! Actually I am little tensed..!! Bhaiya g..! I am not used to these I kind of parties..!!" Nandini said sadly. The bar man was also a crack person he was overwhelmed that Nandini called him bhaiya.


"Behna..!! Don't be tensed drink this..!! You will feel better..!!" He said sadly and handed over her a vine glass as he didn't knew that Nandini don't drink. Nandini was too much tensed that she didn't bothered what drink it was. She drank the whole shot and made a face. She liked the taste of that "juice".


"Give me more..!! It taste so good..!!" Nandini said happily and bar man gave her more. Manik was too much busy with his friends that he didn noticed what she drank. He was unaware that he was doing the biggest mistake of the day for not keeping an eye on Nandini because she was going to trouble Manik a lot.

Soon Nandini was knocked over with continuous shots and was talking to bar man and laughing.


"You know bahiya g..!! My husband is a very good singer..!! And a businessman too..!!" Now she was blabbering about Manik.


"Then why don't you sing for him today..!!" Barman who was Nandini's so cold well wisher gave her idea. Hearing the idea Nandini's eyes sparkled.


"Wow great idea..!!" Nandini exclaimed and clapped her hands started laughing again.

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 24 B


Manik was busy with his friends when he again looked towards bar counter for Nandini but too his shock Nandini wasn't there.


"Kahan chali gai..!! Abhi tou yahen bethi the..!!" Manik murmured and then suddenly the slow music which was playing in the background stopped. What Manik saw next was enough to spin his head. He saw Nandini and soon she started singing the song.


Hmm..La..La..La..
La..La..Laa... (Rururururu..)

(Nandini started the song and everyone looked towards her Manik rushed towards her)


Zara sa jhoom loon

(Nandini sang looking towards Manik and twirled around)


Arey na re na re na

(Manik sang and tired to stop her)


Zaraa sa ghoom lu main

(Nandini sang and tried to run from there)


Arey na re na re na

(Manik sang and held her hand)


Aa tujhe choom lu main

(Nandini sang and tried to kiss Manik)


Arey na re baba na

(Manik sang and placed his palm on her lips)


Main chali.. banke hawa..

(Nandini pushed him away and run from there singing)


Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

(Manik sang and run behind her. He was sure that she was drunk)


Mausam yeh beimaan
Masti ka yeh sama..

(Nandini sang and run towards Fab4 who were continuously smiling on her cuteness)


Roko o logon zameen pe
Girne laga aasmaan

(Nandini sang pointing towards Fab4 and was almost about to fall Manik held her from behind but she pushed him away)


Thumak, thumak ke jhulungi
Mein udke gagan ko chhoo lungi

(Nandini sang Alya and Mukti joined her and they do thumka dance step together Manik was standing there helpless)


Main chali.. banke hawa.

(Nandini again sang and run hiding behind tree)


Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

(Manik sang and again run behind her)

Zara sa jhoom loon

(Nandini sang and peeped behind the tree Manik was standing there)


Arey na re na re na

(Manik sang and tried to pull her from the tree)


Zaraa sa ghoom lu main

(Nandini sang as if really asking)


Arey na re na re na

(Manik sang and again tried to pull her)


Aa tujhe choom lu main

(Nandini sang and kissed his cheek)


Arey na re baba na

(Manik sang helplessly)


Thandi thandi pawan
Jalta hai yeh badan

(Nandini sang seductively and held Manik's collar. Manik look here and there in embarrassment everyone was looking at them)


Ji chaahta hai bana loon
Tujhko apna sajan

(Nandini sang still holding his collar and then hugged him)


Hua nahin yeh pehle kabhi
Meri chaal
Badal gayi abhi, abhi

(Nandini again sang and started jumping on her place)


Main chali.. banke hawa..

(She sang and again run)


Rabba mere.. menu bacha..

(Manik too run behind her this time determined to catch her)


Manik finally caught her and lifted her on his shoulder. Manik walked towards his friends Nandini was continuously shaking her legs and arms.


"Guys I think we should leave...!!" Manik said and all his friends nodded. Manik walked towards the exit door.


"Bye guys..!!" Nandini shouted and wave her hand to Manik's friends. Everyone smiled and waved to her excitedly. Soon they reached to Manik's car and Manik fastly drived towards home. Because Nandini's condition was out of control. Soon they reached home and Manik picked her up in his arms.


"Zara sa jhoom loon main..!!" Nandini was again singing and waving her arms Manik sighed. Manik reached to the bedroom. He placed Nandini on the bed and Nandini stood up on the bed.


"Hello everyone..!! I am Nandini Manik Malhotra..!!" Nandini shouted and announced.


"Nandini...!! Bus bohat ho gya..!! Get down..!!" Manik tried to get her down but Nandini wasn't ready.


"No..!! I'll not..!! Attention everyone I am Nandini Manik ki jaan..!!" Nandini again shouted happily and this time Manik smiled. "Right Manik? Tell everyone na that I am your jaan..!!" Nandini insisted. Manik had no other option rather than obey her.


"Yes everyone Nandini is my jaan..!!" Manik said and smiled. Nandini clapped her hands.


"Yupiee...!! I love you Manik..!!" Nandini started jumping on the bed and then she jumped on Manik. Manik lifted her in his arms.


"I love you too..!!" Manik whispered and kissed her forehead. Then he made her

lay on the bed and tried to get up but Nandini held his collars.


"Don't leave me..!!" Nandini said sadly. Manik smiled and started kissing her lips slowly and gently pouring all his love in that one kiss. Nandini pull him over her and Manik lay down next to celebrate their love

...


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Chapter 24 C


Next morning Nandini woke up. It was becoming very difficult for her to open her eyes. It took her a moment to recognize the surrounding which was very familiar to her. Strong pair of arms holding her tightly. She smiled seeing his angelic face. She felt her head very heavy.Manik also opened his eyes and look towards her.


"Good Morning jaan..!!" Manik said lovingly stroking her hair. She smiled.


"Good morning..!!" She said sunggeld herself more in Manik and closed her eyes Manik also hide his face in her hair. Suddenly Nandini's eyes shoot open in surprise.


"Manik..! How did I landed up here..!! As far as I remember I was talking to that bar man and was sipping that tasty juice..!! Then?" She looked confusingly towards Manik and Manik laughed.


"It wasn't juice Nandini..!! It was vine honey..!!" Manik said naughtily touching her nose and Nandini felt like drowning in water of embarrassment.


"Hawww..! Aiyappa..!! I drank vine? Manik aiyappa will be very angry with me..!!" Nandini was on the verge of crying. When Manik again took her in his arms.


"Shhh Nandini..!! Your aiyappa will not be angry with you..!! It wasn't your fault..!!" Manik consoled her and rubbed her back. Nandini hide her face in Manik's neck.


"My head is aching Manik..!!" Nandini complained cutely.


"Itne ziada piyo ge tou headache tou ho ga na..!!" Manik said lovingly and started pressing her forehead. Nandini was too much tired that on Manik's soothing touch she again drifted to sleep. Manik kept pressing her forehead when he noticed that she was again asleep. Manik smiled and kissed her forehead. He wanted to get up but he remembered what happened last time when Manik left the bed to talk to Cabir she woke up this time he didn't want this. She was too much stressed out he want her to take rest properly. He picked up his cell phone and texted Cabir.


"What about the Disneyland trip..!!" Manik texted.


"Yo Bro..!! All preparations are done..!!" Cabir replied.


"Oh thank you so much buddy..!!" Manik texted again.


"No need..!! Ok get ready your flight to California is tonight 3 am..!!" Cabir replied.


"What? Tonight?" Manik texted with a worried emo.


"Oye..!! Don't get worried..!! Tyari kar..!!" Cabir texted.


"Ok..!!" Manik texted.


"How's Nandini? Last night hahahahaha..!!" Cabir texted.


"Yeah last night..!! But she is ok..!!" Manik texted.


"Ok bro..!! Take care of her..!! And get ready..!!" Cabir texted.


"Ok bye..!!" Manik sent a last text.


"Tonight..!! Itne sari packing karna ho ge..!! Time is very short..!!" He thought worriedly.


"Nandini..!!" Manik tried to wake her up. But she snuggled more in his chest.


"Nandini get up baby..!!" Manik again called her lovingly.


"Manik thori dare aur sony do..!!" Nandini said irritatedly. Manik smiled.


"Acha..!! Waisy I have a good news for you..!! But you wanna sleep then it's ok..!!" Manik said with a faking sadness and as expected Nandini opened her eyes and looked towards Manik.


"Good news?" She asked excitedly and Manik nodded.


"You wanna know?" Manik asked tucking her hair behind her ear.


"Of course..! She said excitedly.


"Good news is..!! Aj raat ki flight say we are going to disneyland..!!" Manik said and Nandini clapped her hand in excitement.


"Disneyland..!! Yupiee...!! Lets go Manik packing karty hain..!" Nandini said happily and Manik nodded.

...

Nayonika was helping Nandini in packing and Manik was doing some pending work.


"Manik..!! Nandini ka bohat ziada khyal rakhna..!!" Nayonika was advising Manik and he was nodding his head. Nayonika didn't let Nandini to pack any Saree. She gifted her some beautiful knee length dresses and packed her jeans and tops. After doing packing. MaNan also got ready to leave. Nyonika blessed both of them.

Both sat in the car to leave for airport.


"Ok Mrs.Manik Malhotra..!! Are you ready to rock disneyland..!!" Manik asked sitting in the car with her.


"Yup..!! Mr.Manik Malhotra..!! Disneyland here we come.!!" Nandini exclaimed and both set for disneyland.

...

Phewww..!! Here is chapter 24..!! Before I write about disneyland I must tell you guys that I have never visited Disneyland myself. So whatever I write about Disneyland will 10% of google information and 90% will be my own imagination...!! So what I am trying to say that if any of you have visited Disneyland then guys no bashing when I'll wrote something ok? Coming to the update yeah naughty Nayonika hahahaha..!! Nandini drunk hahahaha and the stupid Bar man..!! And this song Sharukh and Kajol i can't get over this song hahaha..! I hope you all will like it. And yeah a good news I am going to start a new thread yupiee...!! And it's all because of your support and love..!! Next chapter means k 25th chapter will be on new thread. Keep loving and keep supporting my FF like this..!! I love you all..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones :) And please...!! Comment Lambaaa please it's request :(

Lot's of love..


Mawara

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res 😉
UNres...
Yipee i m first...
That jerkshad he deserve many slaps and punches...
And nyonika is a true manan shipper...
MAnik dont leave a single oppurtunity of teasing nandu 😆
ANd that song part was epic... hahaha... I was laughing like insane...
And finally most awaited disenyland trip is gonna start in nxt update...
eagerly waiting for nxt...
Cont soon...

Thanx for pm..

Keep writing... stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
Edited by angel98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 😊
loved it soo much ❤️
the drunk scene was really nice ,i enjoyed it a lot 👏
Song selection was also good 👍🏼
Waiting for the disney land update
Cont soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Unres
Iss Harshad ki toh main! Ufff so irritating!
My blood boils in anger!
I swear I would've killed him right there!
And three updates! Yaaay! I literally jump in excitement when I see your PM!
Drunk Nandini was awesome!
And Manik teasing Nandu about the dress was too good!
I love the fact that you add songs in every update! And that too, a well described one!
And yaaay! Can't wait for Disneyland!
And I don't mind if you use 100000% imagination about that! Hehe
And Nyonika and Cabir's mom! So naughty! Haha
I laughing like a maniac! Thank god no one was around me! Haha
I loved it to the core!
Did I mention the perfect choice of song?
And drunk Nandu in their room was epic! And 'Manik ki jaan' was too cute!
And congratulations on the new thread! I hope there are many many many more to come!
Love you loads! :*
Continue soon!
Thanks for the PM :)
Love, Pari :)
Edited by DWJensenackles - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow dear its awesome
ur writings r alwys bliss to read
n u penned it very beautifully
so now time for Disneyland yayyy...
thnx for the pm dear
update soon
Edited by mehjaben_nahin - 10 years ago
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wow fab update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb funny yet luvly update darlin.
drunk nandu...LOL..
waitng eagerly fo disneyland.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...too gud man...
Drunk nandu... Hahaha...dat was crazy... N dat bar man... Hats off 2 hm... He really did a grt job

I just loved evry single thng abt this update totally loved it
Congrats for a new thread in advance...

N update soon

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