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Wow girl u write beautiful...I read I dnt know from the 13th part as I had not read ur ss since den, but seriously it was so beautiful...Manik's care, concern, his love...Him helping her to overcome her fears so carefully yet so beautifully...n his assuring her to be wid her forever...just outstanding...n abt d romance I think it was beautifully romantic n decent n der feelings do the portrayal of the best emotions for each other...awesome work girl...cont soon👏😊
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Chapter 16 A


Sun rays from the window sneaked in room disturbed Manik's sleep. He lazily opened his eyes and saw Nandini still sleeping. Manik once again was caught in her beauty. He started stroking her hair. She moved a little in her sleep and hide her face in crook of his neck,he again smiled and check the time it was 12 of morning. Once again Manik's wild desires started curling up in his heart he gently lifted Nandini's head and started kissing her pouty lips,pinning her under him. At first Nandini wasn't responding then slowly she kissed him back. All her senses awaken when she felt her desperate husband kissing her senseless she replied with equal favor. After sometime Manik broke the kiss because he knew if he didn't move back then there will no way out and he can't stress Nandini due his impatience. He rested his forehead on Nandini's,breathing heavily. Nandini slowly put her arms around his neck. Manik looked in her eyes. Her eyes fill with love..!! Love which was only for him..!!


"Nandini..!!" Manik whispered still looking in her eyes.


"Hmmm..?" Nandini said running her fingers in his hair.


"What you have done to me..?" Manik nuzzled his face in her hair. "I can't control myself..!!"


"Then don't..!!" Nandini giggled and whispered in his ear. Manik laughed out loud and took her in his embrace. Suddenly Nandini felt something in her finger.She looked at her finger it was a ring.


"Manik? Ya ring kahan say aye? You gave me?" Nandini said a little surprised.

Manik adjusted himself, rested his head on his hand, looked at her.He smiled and held her hand.


"Yes I gave it to you..!! Last night when you were asleep..!! You liked it?" Manik asked lovingly and kissing her hand.


"I love it...!! It's beautiful..!! But what is written on it? Te..!! Te..!!" Nandini tried to read the words on the ring.


"Te Amo..!!" Before Nandini,Manik completed her words,smilingly. Nandini become confused.


"Te Amo? What does that mean?" Nandini asked confusingly,pouting her lips. Making Manik again crazy in his feelings.


"What? You don't know what does Te Amo stands for?" Manik asked surprisingly.Nandni shook her head and Manik laughed on her cuteness.


"What's so funny Mr.Malhotra?" Nandini said with a frown on her face.


"Ok Ok..! Nothing is funny actually I am surprised that you don't know the meaning of Te Amo..!!" Manik said touching her nose with his finger.


"Manik tell me na?" Nandini said impatiently.


"Acha..!! These are Spanish words..!!" Manik said leaning closer to her "And it means..!!" Manik came on top of her,entwining his fingers with her and whispered in her ear seductively,Nandini closed her eyes.


"It means..!!" Nandini whispered.


"It means I LOVE YOU..!!" Manik said and kissed her neck. Nandini tighten her grip of their hands.


"Manik..!!" Nandini moaned,hardly audible. Manik rested his head in her hair. Inhaling her scent. They stayed there for sometime.


"Nandini I think we should freshen up and leave..!" Manik said getting up. Nandini held his hand.


"Manik..!! I don't want these moments to end..!!" Nandini hugged him. Manik smiled and hugged her back.

"Nandini it's not the last time we are together..!!There are more to come..!!" Manik said assuringly.


"Will you promise me something Manik..?" Nandini said still hugging him.


"Anything Nandini..!!" Manik said kissing her head.


"Promise me..!! Promise me that you will keep loving me like this..! And never leave me alone?" Nandini said as she still had doubts that her destiny will deceive her.


"I promise Nandini..!! You are my life..!! I will keep loving you till my last breath..!!" Manik said tightening the hug. After a lot of convincing session Nandini let Manik go. Manik went to the bathroom and Nandini again lay down on the bed,thinking about the previous night. She never ever felt so good. She felt like she was dreaming..!! She will open her eyes and everything will be vanish..!! But no it wasn't a dream it was all real..!! The ring in her finger was evidence of all this..!! Manik's words..!! His care..!! His Love..!! Everything is real..!! She blushed thinking about the previous night. How much loving her husband was..!! She was thinking all this when Manik came out of bathroom wearing a plane shirt and simple jeans. He stood in front of mirror and combed his hair. Nandini was just admiring him.


"Manik..!!"Nandini called him and Manik looked towards her through mirror."Thank you..!!" Nandini said lovingly. Manik place the hair brush on the table and looked at her confusingly.


"Thank you? For what honey?" Saying that Manik walked towards the bed and sit beside her.Nandini got up and side hugged him.


"For everything..!!" Nandini said playing with his fingers.


"No need..!! Han if you are really thankful to me na then always keep smiling for me..!!" Manik cupped her face and kissed her forehead. "Ok I am going to get something eat..!! Are you hungry..??" To which Nandini nodded like a kid. Manik laughed and asked her to get fresh as there will be clothes in cupboard. He himself left. Because he didn't want Nandini to feel uncomfortable. Nandini went in to bathroom taking her clothes,it was a beautiful saree Manik's second favorite color "yellow".


Manik prepared some coffee for himself and Nandini. Toasted some bread and cooked cheese omelet that's all he knew to cook. He placed everything in the tray and walked towards the bedroom. He entered the bedroom Nandini was standing near the window dressed in his second favorite color putting all her hair on one side. He put the tray on the table and walked towards her hugged her from back,placing his chin on her shoulder. Nandini's lips curved in a smile.


"Kya soch rahi ho..!!" Manik asked inhaling her hair scent which were still damped. She arched her neck to give him more access.


"Nothing..!!" Nandini said holding his hands on her waist by one hand and with other she ruffled his hair lovingly. They kept quiet for few moments.Manik kept nuzzling in her hair. Suddenly he saw Nandini's skin it had many red marks. He felt guilty and backed from the hug with a jerk. Nandini became surprised on his sudden act she turned and saw Manik standing a little away lowering his head.


"Manik..!! What happened?" Nandini asked worriedly and moved closer to him but Manik moved away from her. She become more worried tears welled up in her eyes. "Manik? Tell me please? What's wrong? Koi galti ho gai hai mjh say?" She said crying. Manik looked towards her she was crying. "Tears..!!Shit..!" He moved towards her and cupped her cheeks.


"Nandini..!! Shhh please..!! No tears honey..!" Manik said peadingly and wiped her tears.


"Then tell me? Why are you moving away..?" Nandini said sobbingly.

"Nandini..!!It's because I hurt you..!!" Manik said and showed her the red marks on her skin."I am so sorry..!!" He was too much embarrassed to even look in her eyes. Nandini was like is he a human? How much he cares about me..!!


"Manik..?" She cupped his cheeks. "Look at me? Please..!!" Nandini pleaded and made him look in her eyes. "You didn't hurt me Manik..!! I am all yours..!! It's your right you are my husband..!! And it's not hurting..!!" She said smilingly.


"Are you sure?" Manik still had doubt. Which Nandini cleared by kissing him passionately. After sometime they broke up now Manik was relax.


"Acha what we have for breakfast? Asked Nandini to lighten up the mood and walked towards the table.


"That's all I know..!! I mean that's all I can cook..!!" Manik said a little embarrassed which Nandini felt clearly. She again smiled.


"It's lovely Manik..!! You don't know how much I love cheese omelet..!!" Nandini said eating the omelet. Manik become happy and joined her. After eating breakfast Manik stood up.

"

Chalo Nandini let's go..!!" Manik said holding her hand.


Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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Chapter 16 B


"Manik? Ghar jana zarori hai..!!" Nandini said sadly. "I want to be with you..!!Can't you give me just one day?" Nandini said pouting her lips.


"Ohhh drama queen...!! Who said that we are going home? We are going for shopping..!!" Manik tried to cheer her up. "Aj ka din tmhary naam..!!" That was it for Nandini she started jumping with joy and clapped out loud. Manik was mesmirised with her childish behavior.


"Yupieee...!!!!Shopping..!" Nandini said excitedly and hugged Manik tightly


"Thank you Manik I love you so much..!!" Nandini exclaimed.


"I love you too..!!" Manik said hugging her back.


After sometime Manik was driving the car and Nandini was excitedly looking out of the window here and there. Manik was smiling on her excitement.


"Nandini..!! Why are you so excited? Pehli baar ja rahi ho kya shopping pay?" Manik said laughingly.


"Ni..!! But it's first time with you..!!" Nandini said smiling.


"Haan..!! Point to be noted...!!" Manik nodded his head and Nandini again looked out of the window.


"Manik..!! Stop the car..!!" Suddenly Nandini screamed and Manik panickly stopped the car.


"Nandini? What happened? Theek ho tum?" Manik asked worriedly holding her hand.


"Ufffooo Manik I am ok..!! See goal gappy..!! I want to eat..!!" Nandini said excitedly. Manik sighed seeing a goal gappa vendor on other side of road.


"Ohhh God..!! Nandini are you insane? Dar gya tha main..!!" Manik said angrily and Nandini giggled.


"Stop laughing..!! And no you are not going to eat that unhygienic food..!! I can't risk your health..!! And you just had your breakfast how much you will eat?"Manik said stubbornly.


"Manik..!!" Nandini said in disbelief. "Tum meri baat ni maano gay?" Nandini tried to emotional blackmail him which Manik understood.


"No..!!" Manik said determinedly.


"Please..!!" Nandini pleaded.


"No..!!" Manik again said.


"Please for me please...!!" Nandini again said making a cutest face ever leaving no choice for Manik.


"Fine..!" Manik said angrily. Nandini again jumped with excitement. "Don't get down I will open the door for you traffic is very heavy..!!" Manik said.


"Manik you are the best husband in this whole world...!!" Nandini said excitedly.


"Stop buttering..!!"Manik said still angry on her to which Nandini again laughed he got down of the car first himself. Then he opened the door for Nandini. He held her hand and crossed the road. They reached to the goal gappa vendor.


"Bhaiya g..!! Goal gappa..!! With extra spice..!!" Nandini said excitedly. Manik kept quiet and listened to her blabbering which she was doing with the vendor. Manik had never thought that his destiny will be so merciful on him that it will give him world's cutest doll ever. Nandini was eating making cute faces. After eating to her full Nandini looked at him.


"Ho gya?" Manik said smilingly. Nandini nodded cutely. Manik took out his wallet to pay the vendor. Suddenly a beggar came to towards them. Manik was busy in paying the vendor Nandini noticed him. He was giving the couple his blessings. Nandini smiled on it,Manik turned after paying and was about to put back the wallet in his pocket but Nandini held his hand,took the wallet from his hand. Manik gave her a confusing look and Nandini opened his wallet took a hundred rupee note and gave it to the bagger. Bagger after getting the money left,again giving them blessings and Nandini again smiled brightly. Manik was just admiring her all the time. Nandini looked at Manik and put the wallet back into his pocket.


"What was that?" Manik asked lovingly tucking her hair behind her ear.


"Manik meri na Mama kehti the whenever a bagger gives you blessings always reward him..!! God will be pleased with you and will accept his prayers..!! And you heard na he was praying for us to be always together..!!" Nandini explained lovingly and Manik was in a awe. How cute..!!


"Acha..!! Let's go..!!" Manik said and again held her hand to cross the road. After sometime they reached a shopping mall. They both shopped for about 2 hours and in whole 2 hours Nandini bought a lots of things just for Manik in spite of his objections Nandini didn't stopped.


"Nandini..!! Bus..! We are here to shop for you honey..!!" Manik held her hand when she was about to enter in another men dress shop.


"Manik..!! Please let me do it na..!!" Nandini said cutely.


"No..!! Enough..!! Lets shop for you..!!" Saying that Manik dragged her to girls stuff shop and bought things for her. After shopping they came out of the shop. They were passing from a toy shop when Nandini held Manik's hand to stop him. Manik stopped and looked towards her. But she was looking in the shop on something.


"Nandini? What happened? Ruk q gai?" Manik asked patting her shoulder.


"Manik..?? If I ask you buy something for me will you do it?" Nandini said still staring at something. And Manik was like what?


"Anything Nandini? Just ask na? I can buy this whole shopping mall for you..!! If it brings smile on your face..!!" Manik said assuringly.


"Then buy me that big wala teddy bear please..?? Pretty please..!!" Nandini said looking in his eyes.


"What? Teddy bear?" Manik's eyes widened in surprise.


"Haan na please?" Nandini said pleadingly. And Manik saw her eyes twinkling. The shine appeared in her eyes seeing that teddy was that he hadn't saw it during the whole shopping session,then how would he say no to her.


"Ok..!! Chalo..!!" Manik held her hand and entered the toy shop. Shopkeeper greeted them and asked what they want.


"We want a big wala teddy..!! Which one do you like Nandini?" Manik said smilingly. Nandini was looking to all the teddys. All of them were equally cute.


"Manik I am confused..!! All of them are so cute and lovely..!!" Nandini said cutely. And Manik laughed on it. The shopkeeper was admiring the couple,smilingly.


"Ok I have an idea..!!" Manik said in a serious tone.


"What?" Nandini asked excitedly.


"We will buy all these big walay teddys? What say..??" Manik said lovingly and Nandini was too much happy.


"Really? You will buy all these for me?" Nandini said in disbelief.


"Anything for my love..!!" Manik said naughtily and Nandini blushed due to the shopkeepers presence.


Manik looked at the shopkeeper who was watching the cute couple's love. "So..!! Is there any option that you deliver all these to my house..!! Because these all will not fit in my car..!!" Manik said thinking.


"Yes sir..!! Just tell me your address..!!" Shopkeeper said obediently. Manik got busy in talking with him and Nandini walked towards the teddy bears. She held a teddy in her hands. It was so soft..!! Just like the one she used to had when she was a kid. But those boys they torn her teddy..!! But now her Manik he was buying all of them for her..!! Her love for him was increasing with each and every passing second. She hugged the teddy and closed her eyes. Manik after fulfilling all the formalities looked towards Nandini she was hugging the teddy like a kid he smiled on her cuteness and walked towards her.


"Nandini..!!" Manik said pating her shoulders. "Let's go..!! Your teddys will be delivered to the Mansion..!" Nandini nodded and smiled. They came out of the toy shop and again Nandini started shouting that she was hungry Manik took her to a cafe in the shopping mall.


"Acha..!! What do you want to eat?" Manik asked.


"Ummm Pizza..!!" Nandini said licking her lips and Manik frowned.


"First those goal gappas and now pizza..!! Nandini you eat too much junk food..!!" Manik said angrily.


"Manik please na..!!" Nandini again made a cute face and Manik left tapping his foot to get pizza for his pagal wife. Nandini was sitting there. Gazing to the hustle and bustle of the mall,still smiling on the Teddys which Manik bought for her.


"Nandini?" Someone called her and recognizing the voice Nandini froze on her place.

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Ok g update is here..!! I hope you guys must have enjoyed It..!! Thank you sooo much for the immense love and support. And reached 77 pages wow..!! The person who called Nandini is very easy to guess for you all..!! Han g another important announcement Tomorrow I am going out of station..!! Because on Monday I have a practical exam..!! So I can't promise that when will be the next update. I hope you all will understand me..!! I love you all..!! Keep loving my story..!! Keep smiling..!! Keep shining for your love ones..!! Aur haan yaar please labma comment pretty please..!! Ok bus enough of my buk buk..!! Tata :)

Lots of love..

Mawara.

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 10 years ago
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its cute dear update soon n thnx for the pm
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wow beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
manan are just sooo cute
cont soon

all da best for da exam

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