Manan SS: Tum Mile Chp24A,B&C/Page141 - Page 40

wow lovely update

u r doing gr8 mawra..👍🏼.keep up girl...🤗

Wow..

Wow, Very Nice.
U r Awesome Writer.
Loved it.
Waiting for next part

Outstanding...

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Outstanding...

U r truely a great writer...

U penned it so beautifully...

Good going girl...

Continue soon...

Loving your work...

Finally I got surely a nice competitor to me...LOL..

Love u sweety...

Stay blessed

Describing parents death is a though job... Thinking of getting parents hurt send shivers to me.. Emotions were deeply written...

Song sequence was awesome.. M happy you took the dialogue from series.. Replace bad memories with good memories..

Who said u r bad at romance.. The kiss was just the way it should be.. Pure manan,.

Nandini's pillow is the world's best pillow...
Manik's care knew no bounds..

Teddy seq- mere naam le lena haha nice one..

Step 1&2 completed..
Waiting for a high voltage romance *winks*

Love ur double dose.. Update soon

Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic

Describing parents death is a though job... Thinking of getting parents hurt send shivers to me.. Emotions were deeply written...

Song sequence was awesome.. M happy you took the dialogue from series.. Replace bad memories with good memories..

Who said u r bad at romance.. The kiss was just the way it should be.. Pure manan,.

Nandini's pillow is the world's best pillow...
Manik's care knew no bounds..

Teddy seq- mere naam le lena haha nice one..

Step 1&2 completed..
Waiting for a high voltage romance *winks*

Love ur double dose.. Update soon

This was a beautiful update!!
The kiss wasn't crappy! It was romantic!! :')
Loved it !!

Its awesome