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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow awesome can't wait for romance part he is so into her and what will he do to her for purposely pouring dal on him

Continue soon


yes haha :P
next part updated :D enjoy reading
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatema-Cutlery

Awsome loved it continues soon👏👏



thanku :D
nd yes next chap is updated :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: samaman22jan

hi really nice

ab help kam hogi or kuch jayada ho ga


haha :P uske liye next chap padna padega :P
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update.
Can i post your story on my fb page with ur name. If u give ur fb link then i also tag u evry part of your ff. Please reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update
It is just amazing
Read all the parts in one go
It was just superb dear
And do accept my buddy request
Do pm me if possible and continue soon
Plz dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc... very romantic...
Plz accept my buddy request and do pm me...
Lots of love...
Aarohi...
Edited by angel98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-24 (a)
manik nandani look at each other.. they both ar luking
shocked.. (as any moment some one might cum into
room nd caught them red handed) nandani- grabs a
towel.. nd throw it on manik face..
manik- hold it nd leaves from there. .. he didn't luk at
her face for once.. nandani sensed it.. nd decide to
ignore it.. he cums out from washroom.. drying
himself.. when again sum one knocks at door.. he opens
it.. it was cabir nd alvira.. she was laughing on cabir
joke.. cabir alvira luk at him from head to toe.. cabir-
jokingly- yr manik tujhe kapdre saaf krne bheja tha tu to
nahane lg gya.. he laughs loud.. manik angrily glare at
him.. cabir- achha chup hona hai mai chup ho jata hu..
alvira- trying to look inside nandani room-
alvira- arey nandani kaha hai wo to tumhare sath ayi
thi na..
manik- wo then hear foot steps.. nandani is coming
out.. she has changed her clothes
she is in her pyjamas nd top. her waist is visible in it..
cabir- thought ek k kapdre gile dusre k change chakkar
kya hai.. pta krna padega..
cabir- tum dono andr aisa kya kr rhe the ki nandani
tumko kapdre change krne pad gye
nandani was embarrassed at his question..
her cheeks turn red
both alvira nd cabir notice this..
cabir- smirked ..
while alvira was thinking nandani or blush yeh kb hua
manik - angrily luking at cabir
manik- cabir what do u mean by that.. mai to clean kr
ra tha I don't knw abt her when she cum inside
nandani luk at him..
alvira- but yeh to nandani ka room hai..
nandani- aloo ho gye tere question ans start.. jaga
jasoos.. maine use bs direction btai Thi I don't knw wo
mere room mai ajayga..rhi clothes ki baat wo sleeping
tym na to I change it
cabir- in mind manik or excuses kbse
alvira- in mind nandani or excuses kbse
they ar nt agree in there excuses but pretend that they
ar agree..
manik- to cabir- ab chale ya or kuch puchna hai..
cabir - no no chal chale..
nandani- wait I'm also coming..
cabir mummrs in alvira ears inko Jane do.. I want to
talk to u..alvira nods
manik nandani leave from there manik is totally ignoring
nandani.. he is nt,luking at her.. neither listening to
her.. nd here nandani is trying to talk to him.. she is
confused nd hurt with his behaviour..
nd there cabir alvira discussing abt manan
cabir-alvira did u notice manik nandani strange
behaviour..
alvira yes
cabir- tum bhi wohi,soch ri ho jo mai soch ra hu..
alvira- ha dono hum log ko dekh kr awkward feel kr rhe
the-
cabir- kuch to chl ra hai dono k beach
alvira- yeah I notice it too.. the way the both luk at
each other. aisa lgta hai koi or exist he ni krta..
cabir - pr pta kaise kare
alvira- yup mission kuch to hai,is on
cabir- kuch to hai?? what is this
alvira- Abe gadhe unke beach kuch to hai? ab samjha
cabir- haa tu bhi apni bhen say kam ni hai
alvira- laughs ok ajse jb hum in dono k bare mai baat
krenge code word mai baat karenge.. tu tango mai
charlie samjha..
cabir-yes boss they exchange there no..
cabir- nd hum un dono ko subject keh k bulayge ok
alvira- ok ab chal
by the tym nandani manik cums down they saw
everyone is laughing nd happily. talking with each
other.nandani smiles luking at them manik notice smile
at her lips.. he too unknowingly smiles he thought(lyf
seems very beautiful when she smiles.. wait a minute
what I said.. manik u have gone mad.. just stay away
from her ur nt good for her.. for her betterment u have
to stay away from her.. he luk at her face again.. nd
thought how?? how to stay away from her I always
found lost myself in her eyes) (manik lg gya problem ka
pta tujhe bs uski ankho mai ni dekhna ok understood)
nandani was luking at him again nd again.. but manik
straighten his face he start talking with vikram ..
nandani has tears in her eyes.. by the tym cabir alvira
cums down stairs.. nandani just ran upstairs from
there.. cabir alvira saw her going.. they luk at each
other.. nd thumbs up.. cabir with eyes told alvira
mission is own..
manik was sad as nandani was nt there..
he then bid bye to nandani family along with fab 5 nd
navya nd leave from there

to be continued...
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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PART 24(b)
nandani.was bitterly crying in her room..she was crying
bcz she was unable to understand manik behaviour..
she thought one min he is kissing mee nd next moment
ignoring.. next tym I won't let her kiss mee.. huh that's
it.. but that tym why I didn't stop him from kissing..
why I always lost myself in his eyes.. she again start
crying thinking manik ignores her..
suddenly her landline start ringing she check the . caller
id.. at once she wipes her tears nd thought ohh shit
iska ph..
nandani picks up the ph..nd pretends she is happy.. nd
happily start talking to the person who is on another
syd..
nandani- hey hai.. wassup itne din bad mere yaad kaise
ayi..
that person who is on another syd..
person- haww what do u mean by itne din baad.. 4days
pele to baat ki thi..
nandani- ohh god tube light it's so easy to fool u.. I
was joking..
person- ha ha very funny
nandani-offcourse.. bdw anything serious u called mee
this tym..
person- haa I tried to call u but ur nt picking up ur cell..
so I called u.. guess what?? im coming back to india..
nandani- seriously wow when how..she bcm super
happy
person- nandu relax clg mai baat chl ri hai.. mere
project hai indian market so uske liye I'm.coming india
for 3 months
nandani- wow that was such a great news.. when ar u
coming
person-I don't knw maybe next month..
nandani- ok whenever u cum ur going to stay with us..
understood..
person- ok mere maa..
they chatted for few minutes.. than hangups the ph..
she went to inform everyone.. abt that person..
nd there alvira, was chatting with cabir on whatsapp
alvira-hey tango tumhare waha ka kya scene hai..
cabir- haaal to bda bura hai subject ka sir dard hora hai
usne sbpe chilla chilla k pagl kr diya hai sbko.. or
tumhare waha
alvira- yaha to matam chaya hai sbject tbse ro ri hai..
khud ko kamre mai bndh krkr baithi hai..
cabir- charlie I told na u kuch to gadbad hai
alvira- ha but pta kaise kare.. tango
cabir- idea aya..
alvira- to bak..
cabir- charlie inko movie leke chalte hai.. waha. pta chl
jayga kya scene hai..
alvira- idea to bda acha hai tango.. sbko leke chalte
hai.. outing ki outing movie ki movie.. or jasoosi bhi ho
jaygi
cabir- mujhe pta chl gya aj ur super kanjoos
alvira- shut up movie ticket leke tum ana..
by the tym nandani informed everyone abt that person
arrival.. everyone was very happy then they al went to
sleep..
NEXT MORNING
alvira got a call from cabir.. she was sleeping.. so
picked up ph in half open eyes.. she checks the ph it
flashes tango.. she at once pick up the ph..
alvira- ha tango bol..
cabir- charlie tickets mil gyi movie ki
alvira- thats great kitne bje ki
cabir- 12 bje ki subh
alvira- what? subh? kaun dekhega movie..
cabir- naraz,kyu hori hai humsb baad mai bhr khana
khane chalege alvira- ok.. tum manik ko le ana mai
nandani or baki sbke sath augi.. cabir- ok waise bhi
mai he to Bali ka bakra hu..
alvira- what?
cabir- nothing u won't understand ur new
alvira- ur very strange
then they cut the call
MOVIE THEATER
alvira told everyone that they are going for movie.. other
just happily agreed.. expect nandani she was upset so
she refused.. but alvira didnt listen to her she just drag
nandani to theatre.. at cabir house same drama was
happening manik.. said he in interested in movie nd al
so he didn't want to go.. it took one hour cabir to
convince manik for movie
they reached theater as per plan alvira already reached
inside theater hall.. nd already took there respective
seats.. they make sure nandani is going to sit with
manik.. by the tym movie started cabir nd gang took
there respective seats now nandani is sitting with manik
(they both don't knw abt each other presence) alia
mukti dhruv tanushree on front
alvira in right syd veer in left cabir nd cabir with
navya..in back they both ar watching manan from back
as the movie started alvira start cursing cabir.. bcz it
was a horror movie
alvira- gadhe cabir yeh kya hai.. she said in low voice
bcz she don't want anyone to knw abt there mission..
cabir- sorry yr koi or ticket mili nhi to yeai leli
alvira- she mimics in his voice yeai leli.. ab yaha jo
hoga ur going to responsible for it
cabir- mtlb?
before alvira cud tell him anything.. they heared sumone
screams
it was nandani she was screaming lyk anything..
crying.. shouting.. manik was trying to calm her down
but she is not listening to him..every one is shocked in
hall.. seeing her lyk that
alvira-veer luk at each other helplessly nd tanu is
embarrassed.. she turn her face on other syd..
manik was trying to calm her down.. so he just hug
her.. nandani hide her face in his chest.. she pierced her
nail in his arms due to fear.. manik felt pain but decided
to ignore it.. he with eyes informed everyone that he is
taking her outsyd..
they came outsyd nandani is still in his arms.. other just
followed them.. nandani realises manik touch so she
push him away from herself.
nandani-I'm ok
cabir- what was that
alvira- she get scared from horror movies
veer- completing her sentence - so we never watch any
horror movie infront of her..
tanu notice marks on manik arms
tanu show his arm to everyone - this is the reason I
never watch any movie with her
nandani- made face nd hug veer
manik- saw he is sad bcz he want to hold her..
cabir - sorry yr Charlie plan flop
alvira- it's ok we will get more chance
nandani- I'm hungry
dhruv - yeah mee to
alia pass mai hotel hai waha chalte
nd they al leave for hotel
precap- food fight
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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg you have killed it awesome update continue soon how he is going to manage to stay away from her when he just can't
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha! You're story is on a roll!! Loved it!! Continue soon :D

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