FF_MANAN_MADLY_IN_LOVE {index-page-13} - Page 18

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Manik and Nandini both are jealous.😆

And it was a nice update.

Looking forward to know what happens

Cont soon

updated read it nd do tell mee hwz it as I'm going to try sumthing New :P

God how much they fight

Hahaahahaaa... cnvrsatn of manan is awsm ... good job . ..keep updatng.. 😉

Read 5 parts in a go! Wow!!!
The story is going so well :)
Congratulations!!
Loved every bit of it !!
You are turning out be such a good writer !!
Awesome job..
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Superb fantastic loved it too cute continue soon

Loved the jealousy part manik was so cute he just can't bear any one getting close to his girl as he has started thinking about her as his only

Can't wait update asap

Wow..that was intense..manik just can't bear anyone near his nandini..and manan convo is passionate he says he is obsessed with her and can't see her with anyone and nandini also said the same she was angry seeing him with soha..guess will take time to realise the obsession is nothing but love..though I dint like him hurting both the girls in his anger..the pushing and pulling is fine as long as it doesn't hurt the other person..another amazing chapter from you..loved the possessive side of manan especially posessive manik is quite interesting..waiting to read more of the story please continue soon :)

PART-31 (a)
manik to walk behind her with sad face.. nandani stand
next to her family..namrata nd Chachi start asking her
where was she.. nandani told them she went to
washroom to clean her saree..manik cum there nd
stand next to her.. nandani I really need to talk to u..
he restlessly said this.. nandani luk at him with blank
expression.. what happen beta Chachi asked manik..
before he culd ans.. nandani- Chachi nothing serious..
she then luk at manik
nandani- (annoyed) manik we ar in party we will talk
abt it later
namrata- bete baat krle usse kuch important kaam hoga
manik- yes Aunty
nandani- unbelievable.. she away from.there to parking
manik- ran behind her.. nd hold her hand..
nandani- luk at his face nd then at hand.. she jerk her
hand..
nandani(annoyed) what do u think u were doing inside
manik- what I was doing
nandani-kya soch re honge sb andr..
manik- God nandani u think too much this is ur
problem..
nandani-(angry) no Mr manik malhotra my problem is
u.. she pointed her finger on him.. do u get that
manik- to Mann jao na what I'm saying to u
nandani- kya mann jau mai bolo
manik- to be in a relationship
nandani- complete his sentence- for a mnth?
manik-yes
nandani- (frustrate)stupid idea aise ideas ate kaha say
hai tumhare dimag mai ..
manik- jaise ane chahiye waise he ate hai he said with
a smirk..
nandani-(angry) - if any one came to knw abt this what
will they think abt us.. forget u.. abt mee.. logo ko pta
chla to kya sochenge mere bare.mai
manik - why u cared abt ppl when I'm with u.. ur nt
understanding why I'm saying this to u..
nandani- why bolo..
manik-( quite for a moment) bcz I don't want to loose
u..i don't believe in relationships.. seriously.. but agr
isse tum agr tum mere sath hamesha reh sakti ho.. then
I'm ready to do it..
nandani-was speechless -
nandani- manik u need rest go home nd sleep.. hum
subh baat karenge..r8t nw u don't knw tum kya bol re
ho isliye go home..
manik- no I'm.nt going anywhere..
nandani yelled at him ok fine u don't go.. but I'm
going.. nd ur nt coming behind mee..
manik try to stop her but she didn't hear anything nd
drove away from there in her car.
manik bang his hand on his car..
manik- ur going to say yes anyhow..
nd then he also leave from there

NANDANI HOME
nandani reached home she was looking super annoyed
talking to herself idiot monkey ullu pagal.. manik.. she
direct went to her room.. drop herself on bed.. holding a
pillow.. she close her eyes.. then she hear sum noises
cuming from her balcony.. she went there.. nd saw
some ghost lyk figures standing there luking at her..
she stood there lyk a statue there for a sec then ran
from there shouting. screaming bhoot bhoot bhoot
bhago bhago..
she ran downstairs nd bang into her badepapa
she hid her face in.her hands.. badepapa asked her
what happen.. she without looking back.. pointed her
finger..at stairs..
everyone luk at luks at stairs
chacha - waha kya hai nandani
nandani-(stammers) bhoottt..
chachi- arey waha kuch nhi hai nandu..
nandani- Maine khud dekha upper bhoot..
veer - kuch nhi hai waha tu bekar mai Dar ri hai..
nandani-ok aplog ko merepe believe ni na chalo mere
sath mai dekhati hu..
she start walking but stops nd hid behind badimummy
as she saw ghost lyk figures standing on staircase..
nandani- see wo bhoot waha hai
everyone suppressed in laughter..
nandani thought everyone is gone mad she cum out
from behind to check why ar they laughing. nd
was,shocked looking at view.. infront of her eyes.
her di's nd jiju's standing in front of her.. nd were
laughing
nandani stood there lyk statue.. her di's nd jiju's ran to
her and pulled her into hug..
nd shouts together in union "SURPRISEEE"
nandani was crying..
Nandani- u guys ar so bad.. u always do this to mee..
I'm nt going to talk anyone of u huh
then she sat on sofa.. folding a cushion in her hands..
nd making sum angry faces ..
everyone is looking at eachother faces . .
to be continued...

Originally posted by: asangel

Hahaahahaaa... cnvrsatn of manan is awsm ... good job . ..keep updatng.. 😉

thanku :)

Originally posted by: zaroge

God how much they fight

Nice update

Contu soon

I guess they ar going to fight till the end of story :P

Originally posted by: manya_189

Read 5 parts in a go! Wow!!!
The story is going so well :)
Congratulations!!
Loved every bit of it !!
You are turning out be such a good writer !!
Awesome job..
Pm if u can :)

thanku yr.. u really think so I'm improving?? :D
I tried to pm u but ur inbox was full :3