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Posted: 10 years ago
awww finally they have a little peace after
the food battle
hope they get together soon
masoomii thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Nyc update...yaar I am just confuse wid so many relatives...its really difficult to remember all so here's a request u can just give a little bit intro of new characters & there relation wid nandini before dere dialog as it will b easy to understand...otherwise gud job 😊


this is the reason.. I was confuse to bring them or not to bring them..but don't worry.. they ar cuming for few more chapters.. just to bring manan closure.. actually.. I want to show manik bonding with nandani family.. the love he carved for.. now Will get from nandani family..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-29
LAUNCH PARTY DAY..
everyone was getting ready.. nandani look at wall clock
only one hour left.. nd I'm.still nt ready.. there was a
knock on her room .. she. checked it .. it was tanu
standing near door wearing.. blue colour anarkali
suit..tanu look at her..
tanu- what is this nandani ur still nt ready.. we are
getting late..
nandani- just give mee 20 minutes..
tanu- no we ar already late.. u knw na bade papa is so
punctual abt tym.. I don't want to get scold.. bcz of u..
nandani- tog
tanu- u get ready.. we ar leaving.. i Send sumone to
pick u up..ok
nandani- ar u mad.. who will cum at this tym.. can't u
wait for sumtym..
tanu- I knw sumone who is available at this tym.. but u
get ready.. I will call him..
ok now u don't have any problem na
nandani- no..
tanu- ok then she leave from there.. nd informed
everyone that nandani will be late.. she will direct cum
at venue.. everyone said ok then leave from there..
PARTY VENUE-
manik along with fab 5 nd navya was already present
there.. they were waiting for nandani family... but manik
was restlessly waiting for nandani.. he was again nd
again looking at gate.. cabir notice his restlessness.. so
he went near him.. and asked him if he is ok..
manik answer him yes while looking at gate..
then he notice nandani family entering inside hotel... he
tried to look for nandani but al in vain.. nandani was
not with them.. they al greeted them.. then manik left
for bar counter.. mean while a girl cum near him.. she
put her hand on his shoulder-nd tried to get cozy with
him..
girl- hey hottie I'm soha khurana..
manik- shook her hand away from his shoulder..
but she again try..
soha- I really lyk u.. she tried to kiss him.. but manik in
anger push her away..
on the same tym nandani enter inside hotel.. manik look
at her his face expression change after seeing her.. she
was wearing black colour low waist Saree.. her both
arms were full with bangles.. black colour jhumkas were
kissing her cheeks.. he just mesmerized by seeing her in
that avtar.. so he fail notice her angry expressions
which appeared on her face.. when she saw a girl trying
to kiss him..
her gaze is fix on them.. manik then notice a guy
holding her from back.. he bcm furious.. all possessive
emotions start developing in him..
he took a glass of vodka and drank in one go.. then
hold soha from her waist nd went near nandani
nandani gets super angry seeing him holding sumone
else waist.. she twisted her lips in anger..
manik- hello nandani meet soha.. he pull soha close to
himself..look at soha.. soha she is nandani say hello to
her..
nandani- rauby chalo yaha say.. she hold his arm and
walk away from there.. without looking back.. nd stand
near with her family..
she look at manik from corner of her eyes.. who was
still standing there holding soha waist.. "May be she is
her girlfriend.. shit nandani u don't knw anything abt
him.. and u let him get close to u.
.. the way he is standing with her look lyk she is his
girlfriend.. the thought manik already had a girl friend
made her sad) nd here manik saw that boy what was
his name rauby... is quite comfortable with her family..
May be he is her boyfriend.. or fiance.. shit manik did u
check her hand.. is she wearing engagement ring.. shit
u didn't nt check.. no no he can't be her fiancee.. May
be he is her just friend.. ha. relax he is her friends.. .
but what if he is her boyfriend.. word boyfriend.. gave
him small heartattack.. his chain of thoughts broke
when hear announcement for dance.. only couples ar
alloweded.. he saw nandani was already present there
at dance floor with that boy rauby.. nd he is still holding
her waist.. he gets furious nd hold soha hand and drag
her to dance floor..
precap- ROMANCE :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: HTA111

Awesome update continue soon

Can't wait for the turn your story will be taking now that's why you just brought her cousin which will be interesting

Waiting for next part



yup :P just enjoy reading :P
im going to bring sum interesting twist in story
Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
Cont soon eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Manik and Nandini both are jealous.😆
And it was a nice update.
Looking forward to know what happens
Cont soon

Edited by Roshni8 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..love the jealous duo..this will lead to their realization of love..next chapter manan romance..will be waiting for the update please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part-30
manik is on dance floor holding soha hand..
as the music started.. he put his hands on soha waist..
nd soha hands is on manik neck.. nandani was
watching this from corner of her eyes.. but manik didn't
notice this.. as his gaze was fixed on her waist.. rauby
said sumthing in her ears.. but she didn't hear anything
as she was trying to hear manik soha conversation..
manik was holding soha waist so tightly that.. she was
not able to move. nd she is telling him.. to loose his
grip.. but manik hold it more tightly as he saw.. rauby..
is doing khus phuss in nandani ears :P
nd nandani was laughing.on his stupid joke.then . he just drop soha on the floor..
nd walk near nandani.. he look at rauby manik- (in angry tone) -hey
dude if u don't mind can I dance with her. he then look
at nandani who was trying to not look at him.. rauby-
yeh sure buddy.. he put his hand on his shoulder nd
walk away from there.. manik gave him a fake smile..
nandani try to move away from him.. but manik pulled
her to him.. nd made her look into his eyes.. nandani
notice anger nd redness in his eyes.. she thought now
what made him so angry.. she failed to understand the
reason of his anger.. manik hands were al over her
waist.. he was rubbing his hands on her waist
.lyk he was trying to erase sumone else touch
from her body.. nandani try to move away from him..
but failed bcz manik again pulled her to him... and forcefully start dancing
with her..his touch was hurting her.. she again tried to move.. but manik again pulled
her to him..
nandani- (annoyed)manik leave mee ur hurting mee..
manik-(angry) when he was dancing with u didn't tell
him that he was hurting u. then why mee.. ohh ha he is
ur boyfriend na then why will u mind..
nandani-have u gone mad what ar u talking abt who is
my boyfriend..
manik- ohh now I'm mad also..do tell mee did u
enjoyed his,touch..was his touch better than mee..
nandani- had tears in her eyes- ur sick manik just leave
mee r8t now..I don't wanna dance with u..
manik-angry- kyun only he had that r8t to touch u..or to dance with u..
tell mee,is he ur boyfriend..or fiance.. he tried to check her hand.. just to check if she wearing any engagement ring
nandani- (super angry)- she pull back her hand.. why is there need to ans
ur,ans ur question..
manik(angry) bcz I asked u..but inside he is feeling lil happy as,he.didn't see any engagement ring in her hands..
nandani- no I will nt answer u.. ur no one to mee.. u
get that now just leave mee.. she pushed him and ran
away from there..
manik was hurt.. by her words.. he too ran behind her
luckily no-one hear there conversations as they were
busy in dancing..
nandani ran to washroom.. before she close it manik
enter in.
nandani- I said just leave mee alone
manik pulled her hand nd she bang in his chest..abhi
mere baat khatam nhi hui..now just tell mee who is he..
nandani- I already told u ur no-one to mee.. just leave
from here
manik-(in serious tone)mera gussa bhot KHRAB hai nandani just answer
mee who is he...
nandani-(annoyed) kaun manik.. kisike bare mai puch re ho
manik- u don't knw na.. ok.. ok. mai yaad dilata hu
I'm asking abt the guy who was dancing with u.. jiske
sath tum party mai,ayi. thi,woh
nandani- tum uske bare mai baat kr rhe the
manik- ha now ans mee
nandani- he is my friend.. my classmate
manik- lil- relax- ohk - he in mind was on cloud 9 after
hearing friend word
nandani.. -tum,use jealous the she tried to look into his
eyes for her ans
manik- tried to make sum excuse - no I'm not.. wo to
bs yuhi..
nandani- no no mr,manik malhotra u were jealous..
manik - no
nandani- no
manik- nandani
nandani- ywe
manik- just pressed his lips on her lips..then luk into her eyes,.. yes I was jealous bcz I can't share u with anyone one..
nandani was surprised with this sudden kiss.. she luk into his eyes- kyun manik
manik- leave her I don't knw.. I oonly knw I'm obsessed with u.. if anyone else try to touch u I will kill him..
nandani- was luk at the intensity of his eyes she smiles.. then she escaped
from his hold.. nd but manik was faster than her.. he
hold her saree pallu.. nandani shied.. she tried to cover
herself with her hands.. manik leave her pallu.. nd hold
her waist nd pull her from back.. nandani rested her
head on his chest.. ..
then she remember soha.. she push manik to wall.. nd hold his collar
nandani- do u have a gf
manik - are u serious no.
nandani! - gud else first i'll kill u then her..
manik- laughs- achha waise did u ever had any boyfriend??
nd then look at nandani face.. tried to notice his facial expression..
nandani- no never..
manik face enlighten up in joy lyk he get his favorite candy
manik- what wow.. why
nandani- yes_ bcz kbhi koi mila he ni
manik- can I be ur boyfriend..
nandani- what no never
manik- plz just try mee
nandani- ar u stupid ye koi game nhi hai..
manik- but we can try just give mee one chance
nandani- what u want to try
manik - this gf -bf thing
nandani- what no.. this is not joke
manik- just for one mnth we can try this
nandani- but this thing can ruin our friendship..
manik- aisa kuch nhi hoga I promise.. bs one mnth ki to baat hai plz yr mann ja
nandani - I said na no.. she TOOk her pallu from his hand put it back on right place nd leave from there..
manik was looking her from behind with sad face

PRECAP- I don't knw :P


Edited by masoomii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuushi

Awesome update..love the jealous duo..this will lead to their realization of love..next chapter manan romance..will be waiting for the update please continue soon :)


yup
.realization track is on the way :P
but before that I had sum more interesting chaps in my mind :P
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Manancrazy_95

Loved it
Cont soon eagerly waiting for next part


updated dear :P

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